上海市杨浦区2021-2023年中考英语三模试题分类汇编：书面表达

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2021-2023年中考英语三模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年上海市杨浦区中考三模英语试题

X. Writing (作文)(共20分)

84. 随着校园里出现的流浪猫(stray cat)越来越多, 有同学提议要在学校建立一个“流浪猫小屋(stray cat hut)”, 为这些小动物提供安全的进食、休息的场所。你是否同意这样的建议呢?请写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 发表你的看法。

写作要求：

1)阐明你是否同意这个建议；

2)从“流浪猫”和“学生”这两个角度陈述理由；

3)写作内容中不得出现真实姓名与校名。

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2022年上海市杨浦区中考三模英语试题

十三、电子邮件

64．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据所给情景，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

假设你是李平，最近收到加拿大朋友Jack的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。

注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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2021年上海市杨浦区中考三模英语试题

十七、话题作文

80．    Write at least 60 words on the given situation(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

Michael  Morpurgo 认为当小学老师是他一生最快乐的时光之一。每个人的成长过程中都会有一些快乐时光，或长或短。请以“The happiest days of my life” 为题，分享你的经历和感受。

（注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分）2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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2023年上海市杨浦区中考三模英语试题

64．例文：

   There are more and more stray cats in our school now. Some students advise to build a stray cat hut to provide food and restroom for them. In my opinion, I disagree with that.

   Firstly, we had better send the stray cats to specific places, like animal shelters. Because they could be better taken care of in such places. Secondly, stray cats may carry some bacteria or germs, which may do harm to students’ health. Thirdly, some students are allergic to cat hair, a stray cat hut may attract more cats there, it probably causes healthy problem.

   All in all, I don’t think it is a good idea.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“流浪猫”展开；

②时态：一般现在时；

③提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍背景，表明自己的观点是同意抑或反对；

第二步，按照要点提示，从“流浪猫”和“学生”的角度展开理由，说明自己同意或者不同意的观点，如健康，环境，学习，爱心，品质等方面的理由展开；

第三步，结尾总结，强调自己的观点。

[亮点词汇]

①more and more越来越多

②advise to do sth建议做某事

③be advise to sth对某事过敏

④all in all总的来说

[高分句型]

① Secondly, stray cats may carry some bacteria or germs, which may do harm to students’ health.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

②Firstly, we had better send the stray cats to specific places, like animal shelters.（had better do sth表示“最好做某事”）

2022年上海市杨浦区中考三模英语试题

64．Dear Jack,

I’ve read your E-mail. Now let me tell you a little bit about how I use computers myself.

     First, I spent about two hours on the computer yesterday. I mainly looked up some information on the Internet and watched some videos. And I don’t think it’s right to spend too much time online every day. Because it hurts our eyes and affects our study. So we should use computers properly.

Yours,

Li Ping

【详解】1.题干解读：本文一篇电子邮件，根据Jack的电子邮件内容给他回复一封邮件。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍昨天的事情应用一般过去时，表达自己的观点时应用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时要根据邮件中的问题来回复。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

2021年上海市杨浦区中考三模英语试题

80．例文：

                                    The happiest days of my life

    In my opinion, being a student is the happiest days of my life. I remember when I was in junior high school, I learned every subject well, but my favorite subject was English. Every time I had an English class, the teacher always gives me the small task of distributing homework and test papers. Every time I did these things, I felt very proud. Not only English teachers, but also other teachers paid special attention to me because of my serious attitude.

    I miss junior high school life very much now, and thank the teachers for their concern, which makes me grow up in happiness.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“The happiest days of my life” 为题，写一篇短文，叙述一下成长过程中的一些快乐时光，分享你的经历和感受。短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。

2.写作指导：文章要求叙述成长过程中的快乐时光，是对过去的叙述，所以时态上以一般过去时为主，人称上以第一人称为主。对过去的叙述，注意动词过去式的变化。最后表达一下自己的感受。