贵州高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假定你是李华，高一(一)班的学生，你发现美国交换生John经常半夜在宿舍外吸烟，并且他的学习成绩明显下降，你很担心这个朋友。请你给John写一封电子邮件进行劝告，内容包括：

1.劝他戒烟；2.说明理由；3.希望他能采纳你的建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear John,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Chris打算寒假来中国旅游，发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.预订酒店；

2.租用车辆；

3.雇佣导游。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Chris,

Welcome to China in the coming winter vacation,

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Yours,

Li Hua

3．假设你是李华，在一个英语论坛里看到高一学生王乐关于“如何选科”的求助帖子，请你回复该帖子，内容包括：

1. 表示理解并给予安慰；

2. 提出具体建议。(如：考虑自己的兴趣、职业前景……)

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

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4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom给你发邮件说，自上高中以来，他和他最好的朋友关系逐渐疏远了，为此他感到很苦恼。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 给予安慰;

2. 提出建议。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：drift apart疏远

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

5．假如你是李华，一个刚进入高三的学生。请按照以下要点给校报英语角写一封读者来信，希望学校开设生涯规划课程。

1. 必要性；

2. 课程内容，如设定目标、自我分析等；

3. 课程开设的形式。

注意：

1. 词数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

4. 参考词汇：生涯规划career planning   课程course

Dear editor,

I write this letter to you hoping our school to hold a course about career planning.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim对短视频在中国的流行很感兴趣，写信向你了解并询问如何制作小视频。就此请你给他回一封电子邮件，主要内容如下：

1. 基本情况；

2. 制作建议；

3. 表达期望。

注意：1. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jim,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

7．假如你是李华，你的笔友John上周来信抱怨音乐课很无聊，没意义。请你写信跟他谈谈，以使其不要对音乐失去兴趣。内容包括：

1. 音乐种类繁多；2. 音乐的意义；3. 参与到音乐中，比如唱歌，创作等。

注意：

1.字数80左右，可适当增加细节以使其连贯；

2.不要求写称呼和落款。

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8．假设你叫李华，你的朋友John沉迷于B站（Bilibili）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他写一封建议信。

内容包括：1. 表示理解和关心；

2. 沉迷B站的影响；

3. 提出具体建议。

要求：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

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Yours,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的好朋友Andy今年刚上高一，因为性格腼腆，认识的新朋友很少，所以感觉很孤单。为此，他给你写了一封信以寻求建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 你的建议及理由；

2. 你的祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Andy,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，你计划把一个科幻故事改编为一部英语戏剧作为新年晚会节目之一。请你写一封邮件给外教Smith，内容包括：

1. 寻求建议；

2. 简述科幻故事的内容；

3. 表示感谢。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

1．Dear John,

I am worried and sad to see that you often go out to smoke at midnight. And the fact that your grades have been going down lately encourages me to write this letter.

What I want to say is that you should get rid of smoking and focus your attention on your study. Firstly, there is no doubt that smoking is harmful to your health. What’s more, if you continue to be addicted to smoking, your study will be affected. Finally, what you are doing breaks the school rules, which will cause you to be caught and punished.

I wish you to consider my suggestions and devote yourself to your study.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给交换生John写一封信，劝其戒烟，并说明理由，表达期待。

【详解】1.词汇积累

担忧的：worried→ concerned

近来：lately → recently

戒烟：get rid of smoking → give up/quit smoking

此外：what’s more→ in addition

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I wish you to consider my suggestions and devote yourself to your study.

拓展句：I hope that you can consider my suggestions and devote yourself to your study.

【点睛】【高分句型1】What I want to say is that you should get rid of smoking and focus your attention on your study.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）

【高分句型2】Finally, what you are doing breaks the school rules, which will cause you to be caught and punished.（运用了what引导的主语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

2．Dear Chris,

   Welcome to China in the coming winter vacation. In order for you to have a better sightseeing, I have the following suggestions.

   First of all, you should book the hotel in advance, because winter vacation is the peak season of travel. What’s more, you’d better rent a car, so that you can have a better tour according to your plan without being at the mercy of public transport. Finally, I advise you to hire a guide. The tour guide knows China very well and can introduce Chinese culture and scenic spots to you.

   I hope you will enjoy your stay in China.

                                                                                                                                                 Yours,

                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Chris回封邮件，给他一些在中国旅游的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

预订：book→reserve

最后：finally→at last

首先：first of all→in the first place

另外：what’s more→in addition

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Finally, I advise you to hire a guide. The tour guide knows China very well and can introduce Chinese culture and scenic spots to you.

拓展句：Finally, I advise you to hire a guide who knows China very well and can introduce Chinese culture and scenic spots to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, you should book the hotel in advance, because winter vacation is the peak season of travel. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)

[高分句型2] What’s more, you’d better rent a car, so that you can have a better tour according to your plan without being at the mercy of public transport. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)

3．Hey, I’m Li Hua, a Senior 1 student. I’m sorry to hear you are having difficulty in choosing subjects. Actually, many senior 1 students have the same anxiety and problems as you. If we deal with them rationally, there is nothing to worry about.

    When it comes to subject selection, what subject you choose now will surely influence your future career, so I strongly recommend that you should take your own interests and strengths into consideration before making a decision. Besides, rather than following others blindly, you might as well seek opinions from your teachers or those who have previous experience. Finally, whichever you choose, please keep in mind that only by working hard can you live up to your expectation and choice.

Hopefully, my suggestions could be helpful to you.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在英语论坛给高一学生王乐回帖，就“如何选科”这个问题给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

做……有困难：have difficulty in doing→have problems in doing

此外：besides→what’s more

考虑：take…into consideration→take…into account

实际上：actually→as a matter of fact

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Finally, whichever you choose, please keep in mind that only by working hard can you live up to your expectation and choice.

拓展句：Finally, no matter which you choose, please keep in mind that only by working hard can you live up to your expectation and choice.

【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to subject selection, what subject you choose now will surely influence your future career, so I strongly recommend that you should take your own interests and strengths into consideration before making a decision. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句，what引导的主语从句，that引导的宾语从句，动名词作宾语)

【高分句型2】Finally, whichever you choose, please keep in mind that only by working hard can you live up to your expectation and choice. (运用了whichever引导的让步状语从句，only引导的倒装句，that引导的宾语从句)

4．参考范文：

Dear Tom,

I am sorry to hear that you and your best friend have been drifting apart since you entered senior high school. But take it easy. To help you save your friendship, here is my advice.

Firstly, if you can’t make it to meet each other face to face frequently like before, it might be a good idea for you to keep in touch by texting regularly. Moreover, it is equally important to make time for you to have a meal together or simply do something fun with him.

I hope the suggestions above will work for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Tom给你发邮件说，自上高中以来，他和他最好的朋友关系逐渐疏远了，为此他感到很苦恼。要求考生写一封邮件给予安慰和建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

听说、得知：hear →learn

建议：advice →suggestion

首先：firstly →at first / first of all

保持联系：keep in touch → stay in touch / keep contact

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：Moreover, it is equally important to make time for you to have a meal together or simply do something fun with him.

拓展句：What’s more, it is of great importance that you should make time to have a meal together or simply do something fun with him.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you and your best friend have been drifting apart since you entered senior high school.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和since引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】Firstly, if you can’t make it to meet each other face to face frequently like before, it might be a good idea for you to keep in touch by texting regularly.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句和it形式主语结构)

5．Dear editor,

I write this letter to you hoping our school to hold a course about career planning. We’ll be very busy in senior three, but many of us still feel puzzled and don’t know what we’re doing for, so we urgently need guidance. It is necessary to plan our career.

In my opinion, the content of this course contains setting a goal, time management, self - analyzing, the ways of making up the weak subjects, how to evaluate our progress, and so on. This will make us more positive about the future. The forms of it would be lectures from the specialists or experienced schoolmates from our school, arranging time to talking with teachers we need, etc.

I do think career planning courses will help us a lot in senior three and achieve our goals.

All the best!

Yours

Li Hua

【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给校报英语角写一封读者来信，希望学校开设生涯规划课程。

【详解】1.词汇积累

困惑的：puzzled→confused

在我看来：In my opinion→in my view

方法：way→method

实现：achieve→realize

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In my opinion, the content of this course contains setting a goal, time management, self - analyzing, the ways of making up the weak subjects, how to evaluate our progress, and so on. This will make us more positive about the future.

拓展句：In my opinion, the content of this course contains setting a goal, time management, self - analyzing, the ways of making up the weak subjects, how to evaluate our progress, and so on, which will make us more positive about the future.

【点睛】【高分句型1】We’ll be very busy in senior three, but many of us still feel puzzled and don’t know what we’re doing for, so we urgently need guidance.（由what引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】I do think career planning courses will help us a lot in senior three and achieve our goals.（运用了省略that引导的宾语从句）

6．Dear Jim,

I’m glad to hear that you are interested in short videos. Recently, short videos are exactly becoming more and more popular. Many people like to use them to show their lives. Here I will give you some advice on how to make a fantastic one.

Making short videos requires no professional skills. Any smartphone user can make one. They are easy and fun to make. As its name suggests, most short videos are less than 5 minutes. Some shorter ones only last for a few seconds. Besides, choose something positive and healthy to record. Because they are also a good way to spread news and knowledge. What’s more, after recording, you can add music to them to make short videos attractive. They’re like a stage where everyone can have a voice.

Hope my advice will be helpful to you and I’m looking forward to watching your short videos.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Jim回一封电子邮件，介绍短视频在中国的流行及如何制作小视频。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

最近：recently→lately

建议：advice→suggestion

另外：besides→moreover

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I’m glad to hear that you are interested in short videos. Recently, short videos are exactly becoming more and more popular.

拓展句：I’m glad to hear that you are interested in short videos, which are exactly becoming more and more popular recently.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to hear that you are interested in short videos. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] They’re like a stage where everyone can have a voice. (运用了where引导的定语从句)

7．Dear John,

I’m surprised to hear that you’ve lost interest in music class and think it boring and meaningless.

Actually, I suggest you should look at it in another way. First of all, there are many different kinds of music and you just haven’t found your favorite. In addition, learning music is meaningful, which will not only relax ourselves but also enrich our daily life. So, my suggestion is that you should get yourself involved in music activities, such as singing and composing. In the way, you will find music class interesting.

I really hope my words will provide some help.

Yours,

Li Hua.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于普通书信。笔友John上周来信抱怨音乐课很无聊，没意义，要求考生写信跟他谈谈，以使其不要对音乐失去兴趣。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感到惊讶的：surprised → astonished

无聊的：boring → dull

建议：suggest → advice

首先：first of all → firstly

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Actually, I suggest you should look at it in another way.

拓展句：Actually, my suggest is that you should look at it in another way.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m surprised to hear that you’ve lost interest in music class and think it boring and meaningless. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] So, my suggestion is that you should get yourself involved in music activities, such as singing and composing. (运用了that引导表语从句)

8．Dear John,

 Glad to receive your letter. I hear that you have been obsessed with Bilibili recently, and I am sorry for that.

First of all, I can understand your mood. Bilibili is the hottest short video platform at the moment. There are many interesting video records on it, and many people are using it. But on the other hand, the dangers of indulging in Bilibili for a long time are obvious. If you don’t contain yourself and plan your time unreasonably, you will inevitably waste a lot of your time and make it difficult to concentrate and your learning will also be greatly affected.

 I suggest you balance your study and entertainment, and plan your time in a reasonable and balanced manner. Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of short videos without affecting our study and life.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生你的朋友John写一封信，给沉迷于B站（Bilibili）而不能自拔的他提供帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

沉迷于：be obsessed with →be addicted to

明显的：obvious →evident

不可避免地：inevitably →undeniably

影响：affect →influence

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First of all, I can understand your mood. Bilibili is the hottest short video platform at the moment.

拓展句：First of all, I can understand your mood, because Bilibili is the hottest short video platform at the moment.

【点睛】[高分句型1]If you don’t contain yourself and plan your time unreasonably, you will inevitably waste a lot of your time and make it difficult to concentrate and your learn will also be greatly affected.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)

[高分句型2]Only in this way can we enjoy the fun of short videos without affecting our study and life.(运用了部分倒装结构)

9．One possible version:

Dear Andy,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble making new friends because of your shyness. So you often feel lonely.

In my opinion, you can try to be out-going gradually. Say hello to others when you meet them and you are sure to get a smile in return. Also you can choose to take part in more sports clubs. In this way, you can make friends who share the same interests with you. The most important thing is that you should try your best to help others in need. Then you can have more true friends.

I hope these suggestions will be useful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好朋友Andy写一封回信，给予因为他认识朋友少，感到孤单以建议，并陈述理由和祝愿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

有困难做某事：have difficulty doing →have trouble doing

在我看来：as far as I’m concerned →In my opinion

参加：join in →take part in

建议：advice →suggestion

2.句式拓展

句式转化

原句：I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble making new friends because of your shyness.

拓展句：I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble making new friends because you are so shy.

【点睛】[高分句型1] In this way, you can make friends who share the same interests with you.（运用了who引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2] The most important thing is that you should try your best to help others in need. （运用了that引导的表语从句）

10．Dear Smith,

How are you doing these days? I am writing to ask for your advice on my first play, which is adapted from a science fiction story. I’m going to put on the play with my classmates at the New Year party next week.

The science fiction story is about an intelligent robot helping a woman, who is not satisfied with her make-up and home decoration. Therefore, the robot, which looks almost like a human being, does a lot of things for her to bring her confidence back.

How can I make the play perfect for everyone? I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor. Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是应用文。要求考生给外教Smith写一封信，想寻求一些关于把科幻故事改编为一部英语戏剧作为新年晚会节目的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：advice→suggestion

满意：be satisfied with→be content with

因此：Therefore→so

帮助：do me a favor→help me

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m going to put on the play with my classmates at the New Year party next week.

拓展句：I’m going to put on the play with my classmates who are also interested in it at the New Year party next week.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to ask for your advice on my first play, which is adapted from a science fiction story.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】The science fiction story is about an intelligent robot helping a woman, who is not satisfied with her make-up and home decoration.（由who引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型3】Therefore, the robot, which looks almost like a human being, does a lot of things for her to bring her confidence back.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型4】I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor.（由if引导的条件状语从句）