山东高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．学校新建图书馆前的空地即将绿化，现征求学生的建议。假如你是李华，请给校英语报Colorful Campus编辑Martin写封邮件，内容包括：

1.绿化布局；

2.设计理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Martin,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，为迎接4月22日世界地球日，请代表学生会为校英文报写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们从自身做起，共同创建“绿色”校园。内容包括：

1.建设绿色校园的必要性；

2.如何建设绿色校园。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80词左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear fellow students,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The Student Union

3．假定你是李华，为迎接高考，学校英语社团将举办“我为学习献计策”的征文比赛活动，请你以How to keep positive under pressure为题写一篇短文参赛。内容如下：

1. 背景介绍；2. 提出建议；3. 鼓励前行。

注意：1. 词数应为100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

How to keep positive under pressure

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4．假定你是李华，你班的美国留学生Bill无法适应这里的学习与生活，感到十分苦闷，因此写信向你求助。请你用英文给他写一封回信，内容如下：

1．表示同情;

2．提出建议(至少三条);

3．给出理由。

注意：1．词数80左右;

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Bill，

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

5．假如你是李华，最近收到你的美国笔友Tina的来信，信中说弟弟总是泄露自己的秘密，为此感到很苦恼，你打算给她写封回信。内容包括：

1 .给予安慰；

2 .提出建议；

3 .表达希望。

注意:1.写作词数为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Tina,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Tom给你写信，咨询如何在班级创设浓厚的汉语学习氛围，提高学生学习汉语兴趣。请你根据提示给他写一封英文回信。内容包括：

1. 宣传标语(slogan)用英汉双语； 2. 开设汉语角； 3. 邀请汉语老师来学校上课。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I’m glad to hear from you. From your letter，

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Alex 想要学习中国书法，向你咨询有关信息。请你根据下面提示，给他写一封回信。内容包括：

1. 简要介绍中国书法;

2. 学习书法的建议;

3. 表达美好祝愿。

注意：

1. 开头和结尾已经给出;

2. 词数 80 左右;

3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Alex,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

8．假如你是李华，现在小冬在英语学习上遇到困难向你求助，请你用英语给他写一封80词左右的回信，给他提出一些建议和意见。

1.英语单词很重要，要为英语学习制定计划

2.上课时要做笔记，有良好的学习策略

3.学会向老师求助

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9．假定你是李华，在今年的暑假期间，你的好友Tom迷上了网络新闻，请你帮他分析一下网络新闻的利弊，用英文给他一封建议信。

内容包括：

1.获取最新新闻；减少纸的使用等；

2.存在虚假信息；易误导大众；

3.建议。

参考词汇：网络新闻 Internet news

注意：

1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.注意书写，保持卷面干净整洁。

Dear fellow students,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

10．假设你是李华。你收到了笔友 Mike 的来信，他在信中谈到他最近的烦恼： 与母亲吵架，因为母亲不允许他上网。他认为母亲不理解他，他不能做自己喜欢的事情。针对 Mike 的烦恼，请你给他回一封信，提供一些建议。

注意：1.回信必须包含上述所有内容；2.可适当增加过渡性语言，使文章更加连贯。词数：80 词左右。

Dear Mike，

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Yours，

Li Hua

1．One possible version:

Dear Martin,

Hearing our school is to green the empty space in front of the new library, I would like to share my suggestions.

Colorful flowers can be planted in the east part where students will enjoy the beauty of nature. Trees and benches can be arranged in the west section providing students with a place to study and relax. Besides, the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there, reflecting the culture of our school.

Thank you for considering my opinion. I hope our school will become more beautiful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语报Colorful Campus编辑Martin写封邮件，对于学校新建图书馆前的空地如何进行绿化提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

为某人提供某物：provide sb with sth→offer sb sth

此外：besides→what’s more

看法：opinion→idea

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Trees and benches can be arranged in the west section providing students with a place to study and relax.

拓展句：Trees and benches can be arranged in the west section which can provide students with a place to study and relax.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Colorful flowers can be planted in the east part where students will enjoy the beauty of nature.（运用了where引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】Besides, the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there, reflecting the culture of our school.（运用了with的复合结构）

2．范文

Dear fellow students,

Generally speaking, the environment of our school is quite clean and tidy with green trees and fragrant flowers. Yet there still exist some aspects that need to get improved.

As to how to create a green campus, I’d like to put forward some suggestions as follows. On the one hand, students’ awareness of environmental protection should be further promoted. They are required to save energy on day-to-day basis by turning off the tap and electricity when necessary. On the other hand, garbage classification is of great significance. Not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but also more energy will be saved.

I firmly believe that every small single action can make a big difference. With the joint effort of every individual, our campus can become a greener home.

The Student Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，假定你是李华，为迎接4月22日世界地球日，请代表学生会为校英文报写一封倡议书，呼吁同学们从自身做起，共同创建“绿色”校园。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重要性：significance→importance

提出：put forward→raise

建议：suggest→advice

处理：cope with→deal with

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：With the joint effort of every individual, our campus can become a greener home.

同义句：If every individual makes great effort, our campus can become a greener home.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Yet there still exist some aspects that need to get improved. (运用了that引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2] Not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but also more energy will be saved. (运用了not only放句首的部分倒装句)

3．范文

How to keep positive under pressure

With the college entrance exam approaching, some senior 3 students are loaded with extra pressure. How to keep positive is crucial to improving learning efficiency. Here are some tips for that.

First of all, be confident in yourself. No matter what arises, believe you have the ability to deal with it. Second, focus your attention on performing the task at hand instead of worries, fears and doubts. What’s more, set short term goals and reward yourself when you have achieved each one, which will make you feel motivated to keep up with the good work. Keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise also matters in reducing pressure.

No pressure, no diamonds. So please choose to be positive even if you are facing pressure.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，为迎接高考，学校英语社团将举办“我为学习献计策”的征文比赛活动，请你以How to keep positive under pressure为题写一篇短文参赛。

【详解】1.词汇积累

首先：first of all→to begin with

集中：focus on→concentrate on

实现：achieve→realize

处理：deal with→handle

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise also matters in reducing pressure.

拓展句：It is keeping a healthy lifestyle such as balanced diets or regular exercise that matters in reducing pressure.

【点睛】[高分句型1] How to keep positive is crucial to improving learning efficiency. (运用了“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构)

[高分句型2] What’s more, set short term goals and reward yourself when you have achieved each one, which will make you feel motivated to keep up with the good work. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)

4．Dear Bill，

I am sorry to know you are having trouble with your life and study here. However, the situation is easy to change. Now, I’d like to give you some advice.

Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends. Secondly, comminate with people who have the same interest with you. Maybe it can help you get rid of your loneliness. Thirdly, do some outdoor activities and they can make you relaxed. By doing all these things, you can get used to your school life and live happily.

I hope my advice will help you.

Yours

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国留学生Bill写一封信，对他现在的生活和学习状况表示同情，同时给他提几点建议，帮他尽快适应现在的学习和生活。

【详解】1.词汇积累

伤心的：sorry →sad

简单的：easy →simple

建议：advice →suggestion

习惯于：get used to →get accustomed to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Now, I’d like to give you some advice.

拓展句：Now, I’d like to give you some advice, which I hope can help you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, join some school clubs, where you can make some friends.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Secondly, comminate with people who have the same interest with you.（运用了who引导定语从句）

5．Dear Tina,

I am very glad to hear from you. Thank you for your trust and telling me your trouble.

Now I have known your problem clearly. I do think that the best way to stop it is to make a friendly talk with your brother as soon as possible. As a teenager, we have the right to keep something secret by ourselves. So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother. I am sure he will keep your secret and you will be happy again.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tina写一封回信，为她弟弟总是泄露她的秘密而感到很苦恼给予安慰并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad →delighted

收到来信：hear from →receive a letter from

即使：even though→even if

问题：trouble→problem

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother.

拓展句：What you should do is to tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret again, even though he is your brother.

【点睛】【高分句型1】So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother.（运用了even though引导的让步状语从句以及that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】I am sure he will keep your secret and you will be happy again.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）

6．范文

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I’m glad to hear from you. From your letter, I know that your class wants to develop the students’ interest in Chinese learning. Now I’d like to share some advice with you.

To begin with, all the signs and slogans in your class should be written both in Chinese and English, which can create an atmosphere to learn Chinese. Secondly, you should set up the Chinese Corner in your class, where you can practice your spoken Chinese. Last but not least, you should invite some Chinese teachers who have a good command of Chinese to come to your school to communicate with students face to face.

I do hope my suggestions can be helpful to you. I’m looking forward to getting your good news soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tom就如何在班级创设浓厚的汉语学习氛围，提高学生学习汉语兴趣这个问题写一封建议信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

培养：develop→ cultivate

建议：advice→ suggestion

精通：have a good command of→ master

有帮助：be helpful→ be of help

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Secondly, you should set up the Chinese Corner in your class, where you can practice your spoken Chinese.    

拓展句：Secondly, you are supposed to set up the Chinese Corner in your class, where you can practice your spoken Chinese.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, all the signs and slogans in your class should be written both in Chinese and English, which can create an atmosphere to learn Chinese.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，动词不定式作状语）

【高分句型2】I’m looking forward to getting your good news soon. （运用了动名词作宾语）

7．Dear Alex,

I am glad that you are interested in Chinese Calligraphy. Chinese Calligraphy is an essential part of Chinese traditional culture. For Chinese, calligraphy serves the purpose of conveying thoughts and showing the beauty of the lines. Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.

If you want to be a good user of the writing brush, first you have to be patient. Second, you have to keep practising since practice makes perfect. Lastly, you should pay attention to the use of calligraphy models. Just be confident and practise hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy.

I would appreciate it if my advice can be of great help for you.

Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hua

【导语】假定考生是李华，你的美国朋友 Alex 想要学习中国书法，向你咨询有关信息。请你根据下面提示，给他写一封回信。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

帮助：help→ assist

建议：advice→ suggestion

传统的： traditional→ conventional

想要做某事：want to do sth→ mean to do sth

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Lastly, you should pay attention to the use of calligraphy models.

拓展句：Lastly, what you should pay attention to is the use of calligraphy models.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only is it a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.（部分倒装和which引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] If you want to be a good user of the writing brush, first you have to be patient.（if引导的条件状语从句）

8．Dear XiaoDong,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in learning English. I’m writing to give you some suggestions on how to learn English.

At first, since English words are very important, you should make some plans on how to recite words. Besides, you should take notes in class and make some learning strategies on how to review the knowledge that you have written on your notebook. What’s more, it is important to learn to ask your teacher for help.

I hope these suggestions will be helpful.

                                                                                                                                                                                Yours,

                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给小冬写一封回信，就他在英语学习上遇到的困难提出建议和意见，内容包括：英语单词很重要，要为英语学习制定计划；上课时要做笔记，有良好的学习策略；学会向老师求助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestions→advice

此外：Besides→In addition

方法：strategies→ways

有帮助的：helpful→of help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：What’s more, it is important to learn to ask your teacher for help.

拓展句：What’s more, what you should do is to learn to ask your teacher for help, which is very important.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in learning English. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2] Besides, you should take notes in class and make some learning strategies on how to review the knowledge that you have written on your notebook. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)

9．Dear Tom,

I’m writing to tell you that the Internet news has both advantages and disadvantages.

With the help of the Internet, we can use our mobile phones or other devices to get the latest information in a short time. In addition, by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, which is beneficial to the environment. However, the Internet news is also flooded with false information, which misleads people easily. With all of that information, the critical-thinking skill is necessary so that you are not tricked.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Tom写一封建议信，帮他分析一下网络新闻的利弊。

【详解】1.词汇积累

优点：strength→advantage

缺点：weakness→disadvantage

另外：besides→in addition

然而：yet→however

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m writing to tell you that the Internet news has both advantages and disadvantages.

拓展句：I’m writing to tell you that the Internet news has both advantages and disadvantages, which you must know.

【点睛】【高分句型1】In addition, by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, which is beneficial to the environment. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】With all of that information, the critical-thinking skill is necessary so that you are not tricked. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句)

10．Dear Mike,

I am very glad to hear from you. I am sorry to know you argued with your mother about whether you should surf the Internet or not. Here are my views about your problem.

As is known to all, surfing the Internet, which is a good way to relax ourselves, can increase our knowledge. In order to keep informed, we are supposed to surf the Internet sometimes.

However, it will affect our study and do harm to our eyes if we use the Internet too much. Therefore, I hope you are supposed to chat with your mother. Our parents expect us to do well in study.

I sincerely hope you will be happy as before and hear from you soon.

Yours，

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华。你收到了笔友 Mike 的来信，他在信中谈到他最近的烦恼： 与母亲吵架，因为母亲不允许他上网。他认为母亲不理解他，他不能做自己喜欢的事情。针对 Mike 的烦恼，请你给他回一封信，提供一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

应该：be supposed to→should

观点：view→opinion

高兴的：glad→delighted

为了：in order to→so as to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In order to keep informed, we are supposed to surf the Internet sometimes.

拓展句：We are supposed to surf the Internet sometimes so that we can keep ourselves informed.

【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sorry to know you argued with your mother about whether you should surf the Internet or not. (运用了whether…or not句型)

[高分句型2] In order to keep informed, we are supposed to surf the Internet sometimes. (运用了不定式作目的状语)