广东省深圳市坪山区2021-2023年中考二模英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达

广东省深圳市坪山区

2021-2023年中考二模英语试卷分类汇编

书面表达

2023年广东省深圳市坪山区中考二模英语试题

VI. 书面表达(15分)

46. 假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Tony 即将在暑假来深圳研学旅行。请你根据以下提示 给他写一封邮件, 帮助他适应在深圳的生活。

内容提示：

(1)欢迎他来深研学旅行；

(2)你的建议：学习一些中国习俗, 如使用筷子等；购物时可以使用移动支付； ……

(3)你对他的祝福。

要求：

(1)80词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数内；

(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

(3)可适当增加细节, 以使条理清楚、行文连贯；

(4)标点正确, 书面整洁。

参考词汇：研学旅行study trip 移动支付 mobile payment

Dear Tony,

I am so glad that       

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

Li Hua

2022年广东省深圳市坪山区中考二模英语试题

六、材料作文

46．当下，在线学习已然成为一种新的学习方式。假如你是李华，你所在的山河中学将举行以“Be smart online learners”为题的演讲比赛，请根据以下的提示，写一份演讲稿。

要求：

1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

3.根据要点提示适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；

4.标点正确，书面整洁。

参考词汇：study platform学习平台

Dear students,

Nowadays, online learning is becoming more and more popular.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for listening!

2021年广东省深圳市坪山区中考二模英语试题

六、材料作文

46．假如你是鹏城中学的李华，外教Mr. white想了解学校最近推行的“课后服务”情况，请你根据以下表格信息回一封邮件。

要求：

1.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；

4.标点正确，书面整洁。

Dear Mr. White,

The after-school activities are well liked in our school.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Have a nice day!

Yours,

Li Hua

答案：

2023年广东省深圳市坪山区中考二模英语试题

46．(One possible version)

Dear Tony,

I am so glad that you are going to have a study trip in Shenzhen this summer holiday. To help you live a happy and safe life here, I have some advice for you.

First, you can learn some Chinese customs, such as how to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on. Second, when you shop, you can pay with mobile payment. Besides, the traffic rules are different from those in the UK. The drivers drive on the right side of the road, so when you cross the road, you should look left.

I hope that you can have a good time in Shenzhen. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并结合要点进行适当的发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开篇点题，欢迎他来深圳进行研学旅行；

第二步，具体介绍给他的一些建议；

第三步，表达对他的祝福。

[亮点词汇]

① and so on 等等

② be different from 与……不同

③ have a good time 玩得开心

④ look forward to 期盼

[高分句型]

① To help you live a happy and safe life here, I have some advice for you.（不定式作目的状语）

② First, you can learn some Chinese customs, such as how to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on.（疑问词+不定式）

2022年广东省深圳市坪山区中考二模英语试题

46．例文：

Dear students,

Nowadays, online learning is becoming more and more popular. Compared with traditional face-to-face classes, online learning has many advantages. First, there are different kinds of learning resources and study platforms online. We may have choices to get learning materials suitable for our level and interest. Second, studying at home offers us a great opportunity to manage our time by ourselves. We are able to study whenever we want. Third, online learning provides us with more time to read the books we like.

However, online learning also has its disadvantages. For example, it’s difficult for us to keep focusing for a long time. Some students will copy down answers from the Internet which will have a bad effect on their study. What’s more, too much screen time can do harm to students’ eyes.

In order to be successful online learners, we should develop good learning habits, take notes to go over what we have learned and be active and independent!

Thanks for listening!

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时应承接短文开头，然后介绍线上学习的优劣势，最后介绍你对线上学习的建议，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文应该以第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍线上学习的优劣势和建议时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

2021年广东省深圳市坪山区中考二模英语试题

46．One possible version:

Dear Mr. White,

The after-school activities are well liked in our school. We can have kinds of activities from 16:30 to 18:00 between Monday and Friday.

First, we are supposed to do the homework by ourselves and the teachers will help us with it. After finishing homework at school, we are able to do what we like doing. Second, further reading and a variety of clubs are also offered in our school. In this way, we can develop the interests and hobbies. Finally, it is good for us to do sports because it makes us stronger and healthier.

All in all, the after-school activities are popular in our school and I believe we will have a more meaningful and colourful school life.

Have a nice day!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：该题是一篇材料作文，主要围绕课后服务这一话题，向外教讲述学校课后服务的时间，内容和体会，内容可以适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；讲述课后服务的内容时，注意条理性，可以使用相应的顺序连词或介词短语；描述课后服务的体会时，可以使用原因状语从句；叙述要完整，且保证条理清晰。