北京高考英语写作分类训练:推荐信
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1.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生Jim打算利用寒假在家锻炼身体,发来邮件向你咨询。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 推荐一款APP和推荐理由;
2. 给出运动建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华, 你的英国朋友 George 要来北京,其间他想参加中国传统文化方面的课程,来信希望你能推荐一个课程。请你给他回信,内容包括:
1.你推荐的课程;
2.该课程的内容;
3.你推荐的理由。
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3.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你校来自英国的交换生Jim发邮件请你推荐一门学校特色课程:请你用英文给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.你推荐的课程;
2.你的理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英国交换生Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想报名参加主题为“魅力中国”(Charming China)的网络短视频大赛,向你征求创意,请你给 Jim回信,内容包括:
1. 推荐拍摄内容;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,你校外籍老师Jim计划不久回国,他想从中国带回一份礼物送给妈妈,写信向你求助,请你给他回复邮件,向他推荐一份有中国文化特色的礼物。内容包括:
1. 礼物名称;
2. 推荐原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 现住在北京城区,打算本周末到郊区游览,请你写一封邮件,为他推荐一个景点,内容包括:
1.景点名称;
2.推荐理由;
3.出行方式。
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词: scenic spot 景点
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack想学习中文,你推荐他去孔子学院学习,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐的理由;2.相关课程,如中国历史,传统文化等。
词数:80左右。
参考词汇: 孔子学院Confucius Institute 中国历史Chinese history
传统文化 traditional culture 科目subject
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
LiHua
8.假设你的美国笔友Jim一直在学习中文,他想看一部中国电影,希望你能推荐一部中国影片。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.电影的背景知识,及电影的简要情节;
2.推荐这部电影的理由。
注意:1.词数不少子100词;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。因为疫情,你的外教Jim无法回国,写信向你询问寒假期间可以参加的活动。请给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐一项活动;
2. 介绍活动内容;
3. 提醒注意事项。
注意:1. 词数不少于80;
2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,你的英国笔友Jim要来北京学习和生活,他给你发来邮件,希望你能推荐一个生活中常用的APP请给他回邮件,内容包括:
1.该APP的名称;
2.其主要功能(至少两个)以及给你的学习或生活带来的便利。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1.Dear Jim,
Knowing that you plan to exercise at home during the winter vacation, I’m writing to recommend an APP called Keep. First of all, it will provide you with courses suitable for you according to your needs. What’s more, it will urge users to complete daily exercise tasks and allow users to share their exercise status.
In addition, I’d like to give you some advice on how to exercise. You can fit exercise into our busy schedule, making it a part of your daily routine. You can also do some indoor sports, such as sit-ups and push-ups. But you should be careful not to exercise too much.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Jim写一封信,给他推荐一款运动APP并给出运动建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:First of all→firstly
提供给某人某物:provide sb. with sth.→provide sth. for sb.
此外:what’s more→besides
建议:advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:But you should be careful not to exercise too much.
拓展句:But you should be careful not to exercise too much, which is harmful to your health.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you plan to exercise at home during the winter vacation, I’m writing to recommend an APP called Keep.(运用了that引导的宾语从句作Knowing的宾语)
【高分句型2】I hope my advice can help you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语,省略了that)
2.Dear George,
I am delighted to hear that you want to take a course about Chinese traditional culture. I am writing to recommend one on Beijing Opera.
This course, “Introduction to Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijing next month for two weeks, contains two sections. A lecture on the history of Beijing Opera will introduce its time-honored development, including the detailed process of how it spread. What takes the course to a new height is a theater trip. Stepping into Mei Lanfang Theatre, you’ll get a taste of the performance techniques by appreciating how the voices and motions are perfectly combined on the stage.
I heartily recommend this course to you based on the following reasons. I know you love drama so much, so you will be able to more easily understand Sheng, Dan, Jing, Mo, Chou, the five main characters of Beijing Opera. It is also an interactive course, in which you will have a chance to communicate with opera performers face to face.
I hope my introduction is helpful. Please let me know if you have further questions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友推荐一个关于中国传统文化的课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted→glad
欣赏:appreciate→enjoy
进入:step into→enter
喜爱:love→be fond of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to recommend one on Beijing Opera.
拓展句:I am writing to recommend one on Beijing Opera, which will help you understand Chinese traditional culture deeply.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am delighted to hear that you want to take a course about Chinese traditional culture.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】This course, “Introduction to Beijing Opera”, which will be held in Beijing next month for two weeks, contains two sections.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
3.Dear Jim,
How is it going? I’m writing to recommend a distinctive course to you — Chinese Kungfu.
This course is perfect for you. First, it is great for your overall health. Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible. It can also reduce your stress and keep you in a relaxed mood. What’s more, the course is interactive. During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others. I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.
Are you ready to give it a go? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向来自英因的交换生Jim发邮件推荐一门学校特色课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐:recommend→suggest/advise
此外:besides → what’s more
包括:involve→include
合作:cooperate with→ deal with/get along well with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others.
拓展句:When you are training, you can get positive feedback and learn how you can cooperate with others.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
4.Dear Jim,
I’m glad to know that you are going to take part in the short video contest “Charming China”, and I’d like to share some of my ideas with you.
Maybe you can make a video about the Shougang Big Air Venue, which now provides recreational activities for the public after the Winter Olympics. There you can experience driverless vehicles. Those cute autonomous cars, which integrate artificial intelligence, 5G and Beidou technologies, are used to transport visitors, sell and deliver goods and conduct security patrols. You will impress your audience by filming the vehicles rapidly and accurately reach users and destinations, saving manpower and time.
I’m sure your work will be absolutely eye-catching and prize-winning! Looking forward to your good news!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给想报名参加主题为“魅力中国”网络短视频大赛的英国交换生Jim,回信向他提出相关创意,推荐他拍摄什么东西。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
想要做某事:would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
迅速地:rapidly→quickly
引人注目的:eye-catching→conspicuous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There you can experience driverless vehicles.
拓展句:The Shougang Big Air Venue is a place where you can experience driverless vehicles.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Maybe you can make a video about the Shougang Big Air Venue, which now provides recreational activities for the public after the Winter Olympics. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Those cute autonomous cars, which integrate artificial intelligence, 5G and Beidou technologies, are used to transport visitors, sell and deliver goods and conduct security patrols. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.One possible version:
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you’d like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.
As is known, silk is one of China’s greatest treasures and Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication. Therefore, Chinese beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts representing China. Besides, with strong Chinese cultural characteristics, Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age. I’m sure your mother will definitely like one.
Best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍老师吉姆回复邮件,向他介绍一份有中国文化特色的礼物。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:select→choose
礼物:gift→present
著名的:famous→distinguished
代表:represent→stand for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Therefore, Chinese beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts representing China.
拓展句:Therefore, Chinese beautiful soft silk is one of the most popular handcrafts which can represent China.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you’d like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning home soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As is known, silk is one of China’s greatest treasures and Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication.(运用了as引导非限制性定语从句)
6.One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How’re you doing? I’m very glad to hear that you’re going to visit a scenic spot in the suburb. Well, I’d like to introduce you a very famous one, the Juyongguan Great Wall, in the north west of Beijing city.
First of all, it has a long history of over 700 years. You can touch the ancient brick walls when walking around there. Besides, you can also stand high and enjoy a beautiful view of the whole scenic spot, which must be a unique experience. Above all, it’s quite convenient to be there, and you can arrive there within two hours by driving or taking bus. Anyway, it’s a great place to see. Enjoy your trip then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封邮件,为他推荐一个景点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
想要做某事:would like to do sth.=want to do sth.
著名的:famous→well-known
首先:first of all=to begin with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Well, I’d like to introduce you a very famous one, the Juyongguan Great Wall, in the north west of Beijing city.
拓展句:Well, I’d like to introduce you a very famous one, which is called the Juyongguan Great Wall, in the north west of Beijing city.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I’m very glad to hear that you’re going to visit a scenic spot in the suburb.(that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
Besides, you can also stand high and enjoy a beautiful view of the whole scenic spot, which must be a unique experience.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
7.I’m more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese.I suggest that you go to Confucius Institute which is intended for those who are non-native Chinese speakers.
Confucius Institute offers various interesting subjects including Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese calligraphy.Also, it is required to communicate with your classmates in Chinese for your fluency in using the language.Besides, teachers will introduce some Chinese festivals so that you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Hope my suggestion is helpful and attractive.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给你想学习中文的美国朋友Jack写封邮件,推荐他去孔子学院学习。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:happy →pleased
和:and →as well as
此外:Moreover →Also
建议:advice = suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Also, it is required to communicate with your classmates in Chinese for your fluency in using the language.
拓展句:Also, you will need to communicate with your classmates in Chinese, which will ensure that you can speak Chinese fluently.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I suggest that you go to Confucius Institute which is intended for those who are non-native Chinese speakers.这句话运用了关系代词which和who引导的定语从句。
[高分句型2] Besides, teachers will introduce some Chinese festivals so that you can have a better understanding of Chinese culture.这句话运用了so that引导目的状语从句。
8.Dear Jim,
I'm more than glad to receive your e-mail saying you are interested in Chinese movies. Among all the movies I've watched, there's one that left a deep impression on me. I will introduce it to you in details, hoping you like it.
American Dreams in China, directed by Peter Chan, is based on the real story of Yu Minhong who is the founder of New Oriental School. The movie, focusing on friendship and dreams, mainly tells us the story of the three partners setting up the largest English training school in China after meeting lots of difficulties. Under the background of Chinese reform and opening up, the movie pays close attention to ordinary people's destiny and life.
The movie deals with the theme of dream in a very clever and interesting manner by combining friendship and love with efforts. The director pictures the changes in Chinese society with beautiful scenes and sentimental soundtrack.
American Dream in China conveys a message that we should stick to our dreams. I strongly recommend it for you because you can see a totally different China in it and experience how Chinese people realize their dreams. I do hope you will enjoy it.
I am looking forward to receiving your feedback and sharing more with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国笔友Jim写封回信,推荐一部中国影片。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.电影的背景知识,及电影的简要情节;
2.推荐这部电影的理由。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
more than glad; be interested in; leave a deep impression on; introduce; in details; be based on; founder; focus on; under the background of; pay close attention to; sentimental; convey; strongly recommend; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm more than glad to receive your e-mail saying you are interested in Chinese movies.
2. Among all the movies I've watched, there's one that left a deep impression on me.
3. I will introduce it to you in details, hoping you like it.
4. American Dreams in China, directed by Peter Chan, is based on the real story of Yu Minhong who is the founder of New Oriental School.
5. The movie, focusing on friendship and dreams, mainly tells us the story of the three partners setting up the largest English training school in China after meeting lots of difficulties.
6. Under the background of Chinese reform and opening up, the movie pays close attention to ordinary people's destiny and life.
7. The movie deals with the theme of dream in a very clever and interesting manner by combining friendship and love with efforts.
8. The director pictures the changes in Chinese society with beautiful scenes and sentimental soundtrack.
9. American Dream in China conveys a message that we should stick to our dreams.
10. I strongly recommend it for you because you can see a totally different China in it and experience how Chinese people realize their dreams.
11. I am looking forward to receiving your feedback and sharing more with you.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then, Finally(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句)(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] American Dreams in China, directed by Peter Chan, is based on the real story of Yu Minhong who is the founder of New Oriental School. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] I strongly recommend it for you because you can see a totally different China in it and experience how Chinese people realize their dreams. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
9.Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear that you can’t go back home during the winter vacation. But it doesn’t matter. You can experience the relaxing and exciting life here in China.
I suggest you visit the Forbidden City. It is a must-see attraction in Beijing. There you can experience the life of the royal family and the way they celebrated the Spring Festival. In addition, you can appreciate the beauty of the great treasures on display, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese culture. Usually the Forbidden City will be more beautifully decorated during the Spring Festival with colorful lights and delicate lanterns. You can immerse yourself in the festive atmosphere. I’m sure the Forbidden City is worth a visit.
As for the preparation, you can book the ticket online in advance. Remember to wear a mask while visiting. You can also check the official website for more information.
I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. If there is anything else I can do, please let me know. Wish you a happy holiday. (179)
Love from
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Jim回封邮件,告诉他寒假期间可以参加的活动。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 推荐一项活动;
2. 介绍活动内容;
3. 提醒注意事项。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
a must-see attraction;in addition;on display;immerse oneself in;as for;in advance; be of some help;
第三步:连词成句
1.I’m sorry to hear that you can’t go back home during the winter vacation.
2.You can experience the relaxing and exciting life here in China.
3.I suggest you visit the Forbidden City.
4.It is a must-see attraction in Beijing.
5.There you can experience the life of the royal family and the way they celebrated the Spring Festival.
6.In addition, you can appreciate the beauty of the great treasures on display, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese culture.
7.Usually the Forbidden City will be more beautifully decorated during the Spring Festival with colorful lights and delicate lanterns.
8.You can immerse yourself in the festive atmosphere. I’m sure the Forbidden City is worth a visit.
9.As for the preparation, you can book the ticket online in advance.
10.Remember to wear a mask while visiting.
11.You can also check the official website for more information.
12.I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you.
13.If there is anything else I can do, please let me know. Wish you a happy holiday.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
本文使用了表并列补充关系的衔接词:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] In addition, you can appreciate the beauty of the great treasures on display, which will offer you a great chance to explore the Chinese culture. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. (hope后是省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] If there is anything else I can do, please let me know. (if引导条件状语从句)
10.Dear Jim,
I'm glad to know that you will come to Beijing to study and live. Here I recommend you a common APP in our life—WeChat.
WeChat has become part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort. WeChat is also one of the most convenient and safest way to pay, We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all. So, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.
I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Jim写封邮件,向他推荐一个生活中常用的APP。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.该APP的名称;
2.其主要功能(至少两个)以及给你的学习或生活带来的便利。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
glad to; recommend; common; be part of; convenient; instantly; release; provide; heartfelt emotions; conditions; timely; one of; need to do; worry about; be of some help
第三步:连词成句
1. I'm glad to know that you will come to Beijing to study and live.
2. Here I recommend you a common APP in our life—WeChat.
3. WeChat has become part of our life.
4. It is very convenient for people to express their feelings instantly at any time.
5. Besides, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress.
6. By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort.
7. WeChat is also one of the most convenient and safest way to pay.
8. We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all.
9. So, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.
10. I hope my recommendation can be of some help to you.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:Besides
2.表因果关系:So
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] So, never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change. (运用了倒装句)
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