中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 05 微信 (含答案)

这是一份中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 05 微信 (含答案)，共20页。
热点05 微信 微信无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：微信。【预测题目】（一）今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。学校英语校刊《英语天地》对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自己的观点。   Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement(75%)1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun 2.bring people closer, make more friendsDisagreement(25%)spend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely Your opinion1.2. 提示词：  We chat 微信    Grabbing red packets on line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。最后还要加上自己的看法。因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。 （二）针对运用微信投票越来越流行的现象，英语俱乐部就“是否愿意为别人投票选举”这一话题展开来讨论。请你根据提示，以“ I ____ (am/am not) willing to vote for others” 为题写一篇短文，向校刊投稿，选择你认同的一种观点，并阐述自己的理由。Be willing to vote for othersBe not willing to vote for others投票方式有趣，方便，免费可以用朋友圈（circle of friends）支持自己喜欢的人……投票方式不公平浪费时间，无聊…… 注意：1. 根据你认同的方式，将标题补充完整，短文包括表格中所提供的相应内容，省略号内容必须补充完整2. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名，词数：80-1003. 短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。I _____ willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on WeChat? Different people have different ideas._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I am willing to vote for othersWould you like to vote for the ones you like on We chat? Different people have different ideas. As for me, I am willing to vote for others on we chat.Voting for others on We chat is not only interesting but also free. It is convenient to do that as long as we have a mobile phone. Besides, if we use We chat, we can use the circle of friends to support people we love. What’s more, it’s a good way to let more people to get to know the people we love.In a word, I think it’s a good idea to vote for others on We chat and I would like to do that.【详解】本篇是一篇议论文，首先要要题目补充完整，说明自己的观点是赞成还是反对。文章分为三步走：第一段摆出自己的观点；接下来第二段陈述自己的观点，即说明自己的理由；最后一段对自己的观点进行总结。本篇文章观点明确，在陈述自己观点时，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很条理性和连贯性。最后In a word, I think….对自己观点进行最后总结。非常好的一篇文章。 （一）上周，你们班举行了一场“初中生使用微信的利与弊”的主题班会，同学们各抒己见。班长针对同学们的不同意见，做了以下记录。请你根据表格的内容，以“The opinion of using WeChat”为题写一篇英语短文, 说明使用微信的利弊并谈谈自己的看法。不少于80字。利：1. 提供交流的平台。1.过渡沉溺、影响学习。2. 认识更多的朋友。2.交友不憤、上当受骗3. 学习更多的东西。3.长期玩耍、影响视力。弊：1. 过渡沉溺、影响学习。2. 交友不憤、上当受骗3. 长期玩耍、影响视力。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last week, we had a discussion about using WeChat. Here are the results.Some students think WeChat(微信) is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform (平台)to communicate with their friends. Besides, they can make more friends and learn more knowledge by WeChat.However, some students think WeChat will affect (影响) their study if they spend too much time using it. And they may be tricked (欺骗) by strange net friends. Last but not least, it will also affect their eyesight to use WeChat for a long time .In my opinion, we shouldn’t use WeChat for too long and make sure that don’t use it when we are studying. In addition(另外), we shouldn’t add strangers casually (随便)or meet net friends without our parents’ permission. （二）如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。　　其优点如下：　　1.可以非常迅速地与朋友进行文字、表情等交流;　　2.可以与朋友分享图片、音乐、视频等;　　3.不仅能发送语音讯息，而且可以直接通话;　　4.使用时不受时间地点限制;　　5.使用时免费。　　词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　Nowadays, WeChat has been a part of our life. It is becoming more and more popular with young people because of the following advantages. First, we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly. Second, we can share pictures, music and videos with them. Third, we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to them directly. Besides, we can use it in any time. Last but not least, we use it for free and can save money. In my view, although WeChat has improved our lives, it should be used properly. We shouldn’t lose ourselves in it. （三）最近，老师经常把同学们的作业完成情况、考试成绩等反馈在家长微信群，同学们就此事展开了讨论。请你根据下面表格中的提示选择一个观点，写一篇短文，向校英语报投稿，阐述你的观点。赞成反对◎同学间可互相了解；◎家长及时知道学习情况；◎可及时改变学习方法。◎不尊重学生；◎不利于师生关系；◎受家长更多的惩罚。要求：（1）短文要求包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；（2）短文要求简洁，正确流畅；（3）词数：80—100，短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇：微信群WeChat group；尊重respect短文首句：My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group. I think it’s necessary. First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other. Besides, our parents may know how we study at school. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time. Last but not least, if we can’t get good grades, I think we’d better make an effort to change the way we study. It’s helpful. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应注意要承接开头，然后提出自己的观点。作者持赞成的观点。短文包括提示的三个内容：第一部分同学间可互相了解；第二部分家长及时知道学习情况；第三部分可及时改变学习方法。2. 例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称讨论内容；时态采用一般现在时，观点明确，条例清晰。3. 高分亮点；短语：in WeChat group；First of all；know…about..；each other；besides；all in all；communicate with；get good grades。句型：It’s+adj.+for sb to do sth. （四）最近，你们班级新建了一个“英语学习”的微信群。请你根据下面的内容提示，为校园广播站写一篇广播稿，介绍这个微信群，并欢迎同学们积极参与。 注意：1. 词数不少于100字；      2. 请勿提及学校和个人真实信息；      3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；      4. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：give a like 点赞； sharing friends 分享朋友圈；forward 转发Dear fellow students, Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English”_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you.                                                  Li Hua  【参考范文】Dear fellow students,Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English” will be opened in our school. It aims to help us students to communicate better and improve our English level.  We can do a lot of things in this group. First of all, we can share efficient learning experience here to promote our English study. Secondly, if you have any questions or problems, you are welcome to post it here. And possibly, you will find proper solutions to them with the help of our schoolmates. In addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion. How to join it? Please open your WeChat and follow the public “Learn English”. And every one of us is encouraged to join it. I am sure the group will be of great help to our English study. That’s all. Thank you!                                                                       Li Hua【解析】这是一篇材料作文，根据图表提示的信息向同学介绍新建的“英语学习”微信群。作文要从以下几个方面去完成，建立这个群的目的，在群内可以参与哪些活动，入群的方法，可适当加入细节，以使内容充实。注意把提示的要点写全面，注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。 It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other.I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school.Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates. I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat. You say you miss your parents very much. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school. You say you miss your parents very much. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat.Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.      （一）李文的父母都去外地打工了，把李文送去了寄宿学校。但是到了寄宿学校之后，李文面临着很多挑战。假如你是王明，请根据下列提示，给李文写一封信，提出合理的建议，帮他迅速适应新的生活。挑战建议没有朋友，感觉孤单积极参加社团，会交到新朋友作业比以前多抓紧时间写作业，不会的向老师、同学求助想念父母周末用微信和父母聊天，和同学一起做运动 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear Li Wen，I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school. Since you always feel lonely without friends，you'd better join a club to make more friends. You are good at playing basketball，so it's a good choice to join the basketball club. Maybe you used to have a little homework，but now you have more time to do homework at school. And if you have any problems, you can ask your teachers and classmates for help. You say you miss your parents very much. I strongly believe it. Why not chat with your parents on WeChat on weekends? Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates. I hope you can get used to the new life in your boarding school.                                                                                  Yours, Wang Ming【解析】题干解读：本文属于材料作文，要求学生以王明的身份给李文写一封信，注意要用信件的格式。信的内容包括到寄宿学校后，李文会面临的三个挑战以及相应的建议。例文点评：例文主要以第二人称进行描述，符合信件的形式，显得真实关切；时态采用一般现在时为主。例文严格按照信件格式，开头结尾也有适当的问候语等；内容方面把材料要求的几点挑战与建议都写清楚了，行文层次分明、逻辑严密、内容丰富。高分亮点：短语：meet challenges in；had better do；be good at；used to do；ask sb. for help；get used to。句型：that引导的宾语从句；since引导的原因状语从句；it’s + n. + to do sth.；if引导的条件状语从句；why not do sth。 （二）再过几天，中国最重要的节日——春节就要到了，请以“My small targets of this Spring Festival”  为题，根据表中所给中文提示写一篇 100 词左右介绍你这个春节小目标。  春节前1.帮助父母做事，包括大扫除、贴春联、做馒头、包饺子；2.准备好新衣服和小礼物；3.在除夕夜，与家人吃一顿丰盛的晚餐后，观看春节联欢晚会，等待新年的到来； 春节后1.通过微信，与亲戚、朋友互发祝福话语、红包；2. ……（新的一年学习目标）3.……（新的一年生活目标）要求：要点全面，补充得当，行文流畅；开头已经给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。词汇：贴春联 put up couplets； 亲戚 relatives； 祝福话语 blessings； 微信 Wechat。My small targets of this Spring FestivalThe new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】My small targets of this Spring FestivalThe new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year. Before the Spring Festival, I plan to do three things. The first, I will help my parents do things, including cleaning, pasting Spring Festival couplets, making steamed bread and making dumplings. The second, I will prepare new clothes and small gifts. The third, on New Year's Eve, after having a big dinner with my family, I am going to watch the Spring Festival Gala and wait for the arrival of the New Year. On the day of Spring Festival, I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat. After the Spring Festival,I will study hard to achieve good results. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.【解析】这是一篇材料作文。以“My small targets of this Spring Festival”为题，根据表中所给中文提示写一篇 100 词左右介绍你这个春节小目标。本文主要书写新年打算，可知主要时态是一般将来时。认真阅读表格内容，审清主题，根据表格提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系，字数要在100词以上。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：我今年春节的小目标几天后就要过春节了。现在我正在为即将到来的新年设定一些小目标。春节前，我计划做三件事。首先，我会帮助我的父母做一些事情，包括打扫，贴春联，做馒头，做饺子。第二，我会准备新衣服和小礼物。第三，在除夕夜，我和家人吃了一顿大餐后，要去看春节联欢晚会，等待新年的到来。春节那天，我会通过微信给亲朋好友发祝福词和红包。春节过后，我会努力学习，取得好成绩。我要自己去上学，不要让父母来接我。【点睛】这篇文章包含了表格中所有的内容，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。  （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。 （三）我们经常使用微信（WeChat）与同学和朋友交流，这里面可能涉及到个人隐私，假如你的父母想看你的聊天记录，你会同意吗？ 学校英语报正在就此话题进行讨论，请你整理以下讨论结果，并发表自己的看法。 理由同学观点1.每个人都有自己的隐私，微信是我们与朋友一起分享心事，倾述烦恼的理想(ideal)场所，不希望父母看到。2.父母会过度担心我们的交友，学习等。你的观点… …注意：1.词数：80左右2.包含以上各点，意思连贯、符合逻辑。Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents?With WeChat, we can communicate with friends by sending text messages, voice messages, we can share our photos or videos, share our location, we can even chat with lots of friends at the same time. More important, it is free for the users. Some think that everyone has their own privacy. WeChat is the ideal place for us to share our thoughts with friends, and we don't want our parents to see it. Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.In my opinion, we may share our ideas with our parents. They can help us solve problems.【解析】这里是一篇关于微信的，可不可以让家长来看，在短文中写出同学们的观点和自己的问题。不要遗漏要点，所写的句子要符合英语语法，要使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，短语用了一些短语和句式，用了that引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。3.检查核实，确保无误。 （四）假如你是Li Na，在一个名为“Growing Pains（成长的烦恼）”的微信群里，看到以下内容。请根据问题及写作要求，回复微信。讲述发生在你和朋友之间的一件不愉快的经历。针对这些烦恼，你又有什么建议的？要求：60词左右，开头己给出： Hello! I am Frank. I got a fight with my best friend last week. I felt very upset. Do you have the same experience? Can you give us some advice?  If we talk to others, we' ll surely feel better.   Hello! I am Li Na.                        _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Hello! I am Li Na. I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me. Never can I forgot the time when I prepared for my final exam. During those days, I had endless homework so that I couldn’t finish it. In order to deal with the problem, I decided to copy my friend’s homework. But to my surprise, she refused me and gave me no reason. I felt very angry with her. After that, I felt very sorry for that and tried my best to improve our relationship.In my view, it is best not to run away from the problems. If you are brave enough, you are halfway to being successful. You had better talk with your friends or ask your parents for help. When you share problems with your friends, you should find a chance to communicate with them.【解析】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文，主要围绕“Growing Pains（成长的烦恼）”展开讨论，直接分享自己的亲身经历，描述自己的成长的烦恼，以及自己在烦恼过程中所采取的方法，然后把这个方法或者建议和好朋友一起分享，让朋友也能从中得到一些建议。2. 例文点评：文章采取两段式，直接开篇直入主题，讲述自己与朋友之间发生的不愉快，第二段给出自己的建议，供朋友参考。文章结构完整，语句衔接较自然，语言表达准确。3. 高分亮点：短语：prepare for；deal with；feel sorry for；try one’s best to do sth；in one’s view；run away from。