2022中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范热点 热点03 微信

热点03 微信

微信无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：微信。

【预测题目】
（一）
微信在我们的生活中越来越普及，不管是年轻人还是老年人都喜欢使用微信，请你谈论一下微信给我们生活带来了什么样的改变，它有什么样的优缺点？
Wechat in our life
要点：1、微信已成为我们生活中的一部分。无论是年轻人还是老年人都在使用微信。
2、微信有什么好处呢？例如：快速发送信息；可以立刻和朋友分享音乐、照片、视频等；可以直接发送语音信息；可以当成地图使用；可以快速付款等等。
3、但是无论年轻人还是老年人，使用微信太久，对眼睛有害；微信占据了人们大量地时间，人们很少进行户外运动或者和家人一起运动游玩，对身体无益。
4、正确使用微信，让它使我们的生活更美好。
参考词汇：voice message(语音信息) take up（占据）
要求：包含要点，适当加入自己的观点。
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【参考范文】
Wechat gradually comes into our life and Whether the young or the old, we use WeChat.Wechat is a mobile phone software of chatting , which can through the Internet send voice messages, video, images and text,We can make new friends from the wechat. We can communicate with our friends, which can help us get short messages, pictures and so on .We can use it as a map and help us pay the bill.Every coin has two sides, Wechat has brought us both convenience and troubles. We may often lose ourselves in the wechat, and controlled by wechat in some degree, So we seldom have time to exercise with our family.It is bad for our eyes if we use it for a long time.There are countless people walk or drive with head down, then leaded to a disaster. We should use it correctly in order to make our life better.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，谈论一下微信给我们生活带来了什么样的改变，它有什么样的优缺点？结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：WeChat.Wechat is……，We can……，Wechat has……，It is bad for……，There are……，We should……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，接下来介绍微信的优点和缺点，最后指出我们应正确使用微信，让它使我们的生活更美好。此处make friends, communicate with, help sb do sth, and so on, in some degree, be bad for, lead to, in order to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

（二）
根据要求完成下列短文写作。词数：60—80词左右
科技的进步让我们的生活发生了巨大变化，人与人之间的交流方式也日新月异。现在有很多同学的日常生活离不开微信（Wechat），请结合自己的感受谈谈微信的好处和害处。
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【参考范文】
In recent years, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Many people express themselves, exchange ideas and deliver information by Wechat. There are a number of reasons for Wechat to be known. To begin with, Wechat is a relative cheap way of communication, which cuts down a great deal of the cost of making a phone call. Next, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly. Furthermore, convenience also accounts for its popularity. It is available everywhere and at any time.
【解析】
这篇作文主要写科技的进步让我们的生活发生了巨大变化，人与人之间的交流方式也日新月异。现在有很多同学的日常生活离不开微信（Wechat），请结合自己的感受谈谈微信的好处和害处。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。


（一）
微信已经成为我们生活的沟通交流的平台之一。相信很多同学也在微信上加了很多朋友，你和这些朋友交流的情况怎么样？请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
1. 你有多少个微信朋友呢？平时有经常交流的又有多少？都是谁？
2. 你在微信上和朋友通常都聊些什么？
3. 你认为什么才是真正的朋友？
作文要求：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。
It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.






【参考范文】
It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends. As for me, I have nearly 200 WeChat friends. The number of persons I often talk with is less than 20. Most of them are my classmates and families.
I like to look through my friends’ WeChat Moments to know more about them. Sometimes I give comments or likes to their posts. We even set up a certain chatting group to talk about things happening around us and share some interesting things in life. Besides, we also talk about studies.
As a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. I think true friends may not talk with you on WeChat most. However, when you need them, they will be there.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要按议论文的格式写。在写作时开头介绍用微信和朋友交流很容易；第二段介绍我们在微信上和朋友交流的内容；第三段介绍真正的朋友是什么样的。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来介绍用微信和朋友交流；时态采用一般现在时，介绍朋友用微信交流的内容，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用连词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：less than，like to，look through，set up，in need，talk with。
句型：句型It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.定语从句As a saying goes, 宾语从句true friends may not talk with you on WeChat most。

（二）
请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。
（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；
（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；
（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；
（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；
（5）你觉得……
参考词汇：社区 community 身份证 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group
失主 owner
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。
（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Lingling
Last week____________________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
The Story of Lingling
Last Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good deed.We should learn from her.
【解析】
本文是一篇给材料作文。根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

（三）
最近，你们班级新建了一个“英语学习”的微信群。请你根据下面的内容提示，为校园广播站写一篇广播稿，介绍这个微信群，并欢迎同学们积极参与。


注意：1. 词数不少于100字；
2. 请勿提及学校和个人真实信息；
3. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
4. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：give a like 点赞； sharing friends 分享朋友圈；forward 转发
Dear fellow students,
Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English”_____________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you.
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear fellow students,
Good news for you! A WeChat group called “Learning English” will be opened in our school. It aims to help us students to communicate better and improve our English level.
We can do a lot of things in this group. First of all, we can share efficient learning experience here to promote our English study. Secondly, if you have any questions or problems, you are welcome to post it here. And possibly, you will find proper solutions to them with the help of our schoolmates. In addition, attracted by interesting topics, we are free to take part in the weekly discussion.
How to join it? Please open your WeChat and follow the public “Learn English”. And every one of us is encouraged to join it.
I am sure the group will be of great help to our English study.
That’s all. Thank you!
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文，根据图表提示的信息向同学介绍新建的“英语学习”微信群。作文要从以下几个方面去完成，建立这个群的目的，在群内可以参与哪些活动，入群的方法，可适当加入细节，以使内容充实。注意把提示的要点写全面，注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。

（四）
最近，老师经常把同学们的作业完成情况、考试成绩等反馈在家长微信群，同学们就此事展开了讨论。请你根据下面表格中的提示选择一个观点，写一篇短文，向校英语报投稿，阐述你的观点。
赞成
反对
◎同学间可互相了解；
◎家长及时知道学习情况；
◎可及时改变学习方法。
◎不尊重学生；
◎不利于师生关系；
◎受家长更多的惩罚。
要求：（1）短文要求包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2） 短文要求简洁，正确流畅；
（3）词数：80—100，短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：微信群WeChat group；尊重respect
短文首句：My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group.
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【参考范文】
My classmates have had a heated discussion about that the teachers always share their homework and marks in WeChat group. I think it’s necessary. First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other. Besides, our parents may know how we study at school. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time. Last but not least, if we can’t get good grades, I think we’d better make an effort to change the way we study. It’s helpful. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应注意要承接开头，然后提出自己的观点。作者持赞成的观点。短文包括提示的三个内容：第一部分同学间可互相了解；第二部分家长及时知道学习情况；第三部分可及时改变学习方法。
2. 例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称讨论内容；时态采用一般现在时，观点明确，条例清晰。
3. 高分亮点；短语：in WeChat group；First of all；know…about..；each other；besides；all in all；communicate with；get good grades。句型：It’s+adj.+for sb to do sth.


1. It is easy to use WeChat to communicate with our friends.
2. I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me.
3. If we don’t behave well, they can communicate with us in time.
4. All in all, it’s convenient for our teachers to do so, and it’s an effective way for our parents to know more about us.
5. First of all, we can know more about our classmates by comparing with each other.
6. I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school.
7. Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates.
8. I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat.
9. You say you miss your parents very much.
10. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
11. I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school.
12. You say you miss your parents very much.
13. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
14. I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat.
15. Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.

The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. 
Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .












（一）
李文的父母都去外地打工了，把李文送去了寄宿学校。但是到了寄宿学校之后，李文面临着很多挑战。假如你是王明，请根据下列提示，给李文写一封信，提出合理的建议，帮他迅速适应新的生活。
挑战
建议
没有朋友，感觉孤单
积极参加社团，会交到新朋友
作业比以前多
抓紧时间写作业，不会的向老师、同学求助
想念父母
周末用微信和父母聊天，和同学一起做运动

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【参考范文】
Dear Li Wen，
I'm sorry to hear that you meet many challenges in the boarding school. Since you always feel lonely without friends，you'd better join a club to make more friends. You are good at playing basketball，so it's a good choice to join the basketball club. Maybe you used to have a little homework，but now you have more time to do homework at school. And if you have any problems, you can ask your teachers and classmates for help. You say you miss your parents very much. I strongly believe it. Why not chat with your parents on WeChat on weekends? Besides, you can also play sports with your classmates.
I hope you can get used to the new life in your boarding school.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【解析】
题干解读：本文属于材料作文，要求学生以王明的身份给李文写一封信，注意要用信件的格式。信的内容包括到寄宿学校后，李文会面临的三个挑战以及相应的建议。
例文点评：例文主要以第二人称进行描述，符合信件的形式，显得真实关切；时态采用一般现在时为主。例文严格按照信件格式，开头结尾也有适当的问候语等；内容方面把材料要求的几点挑战与建议都写清楚了，行文层次分明、逻辑严密、内容丰富。
高分亮点：短语：meet challenges in；had better do；be good at；used to do；ask sb. for help；get used to。
句型：that引导的宾语从句；since引导的原因状语从句；it’s + n. + to do sth.；if引导的条件状语从句；why not do sth。

（二）
再过几天，中国最重要的节日——春节就要到了，请以“My small targets of this Spring Festival” 为题，根据表中所给中文提示写一篇 100 词左右介绍你这个春节小目标。


春节前
1.帮助父母做事，包括大扫除、贴春联、做馒头、包饺子；
2.准备好新衣服和小礼物；
3.在除夕夜，与家人吃一顿丰盛的晚餐后，观看春节联欢晚会，等待新年的到来；

春节后
1.通过微信，与亲戚、朋友互发祝福话语、红包；
2. ……（新的一年学习目标）
3.……（新的一年生活目标）
要求：要点全面，补充得当，行文流畅；开头已经给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
词汇：贴春联 put up couplets； 亲戚 relatives； 祝福话语 blessings； 微信 Wechat。
My small targets of this Spring Festival
The new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year.
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【参考范文】
My small targets of this Spring Festival
The new Spring Festival is coming in a few days. Now I am setting some small targets of the coming new year. Before the Spring Festival, I plan to do three things. The first, I will help my parents do things, including cleaning, pasting Spring Festival couplets, making steamed bread and making dumplings. The second, I will prepare new clothes and small gifts. The third, on New Year's Eve, after having a big dinner with my family, I am going to watch the Spring Festival Gala and wait for the arrival of the New Year. On the day of Spring Festival, I will send blessing words and red envelopes to my relatives and friends through Wechat. After the Spring Festival,I will study hard to achieve good results. I will go to school by myself and not let my parents pick me up.
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文。以“My small targets of this Spring Festival”为题，根据表中所给中文提示写一篇 100 词左右介绍你这个春节小目标。本文主要书写新年打算，可知主要时态是一般将来时。认真阅读表格内容，审清主题，根据表格提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系，字数要在100词以上。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
我今年春节的小目标
几天后就要过春节了。现在我正在为即将到来的新年设定一些小目标。春节前，我计划做三件事。首先，我会帮助我的父母做一些事情，包括打扫，贴春联，做馒头，做饺子。第二，我会准备新衣服和小礼物。第三，在除夕夜，我和家人吃了一顿大餐后，要去看春节联欢晚会，等待新年的到来。春节那天，我会通过微信给亲朋好友发祝福词和红包。春节过后，我会努力学习，取得好成绩。我要自己去上学，不要让父母来接我。
【点睛】
这篇文章包含了表格中所有的内容，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，是一篇不错的文章。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

（三）
我们经常使用微信（WeChat）与同学和朋友交流，这里面可能涉及到个人隐私，假如你的父母想看你的聊天记录，你会同意吗？ 学校英语报正在就此话题进行讨论，请你整理以下讨论结果，并发表自己的看法。

理由
同学观点
1.每个人都有自己的隐私，微信是我们与朋友一起分享心事，倾述烦恼的理想(ideal)场所，不希望父母看到。
2.父母会过度担心我们的交友，学习等。
你的观点
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注意：
1.词数：80左右
2.包含以上各点，意思连贯、符合逻辑。
Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents?_______________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Talking on mobile WeChat has become more and more popular now. But will you share everything on your WeChat with your parents?
With WeChat, we can communicate with friends by sending text messages, voice messages, we can share our photos or videos, share our location, we can even chat with lots of friends at the same time. More important, it is free for the users. Some think that everyone has their own privacy. WeChat is the ideal place for us to share our thoughts with friends, and we don't want our parents to see it. Sometimes parents are worried about their children’s friendship and studies.
In my opinion, we may share our ideas with our parents. They can help us solve problems.
【解析】
这里是一篇关于微信的，可不可以让家长来看，在短文中写出同学们的观点和自己的问题。不要遗漏要点，所写的句子要符合英语语法，要使用自己熟悉的单词和句式，短语用了一些短语和句式，用了that引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。
【点睛】
1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。
2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。
此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。
3.检查核实，确保无误。

（四）
假如你是Li Na，在一个名为“Growing Pains（成长的烦恼）”的微信群里，看到以下内容。请根据问题及写作要求，回复微信。讲述发生在你和朋友之间的一件不愉快的经历。针对这些烦恼，你又有什么建议的？
要求：60词左右，开头己给出：


Hello! I am Frank. I got a fight with my best friend last week. I felt very upset. Do you have the same experience? Can you give us some advice? If we talk to others, we' ll surely feel better.



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【参考范文】
Hello! I am Li Na. I will share wish you about my unhappy experience between my friends and me. Never can I forgot the time when I prepared for my final exam. During those days, I had endless homework so that I couldn’t finish it. In order to deal with the problem, I decided to copy my friend’s homework. But to my surprise, she refused me and gave me no reason. I felt very angry with her. After that, I felt very sorry for that and tried my best to improve our relationship.
In my view, it is best not to run away from the problems. If you are brave enough, you are halfway to being successful. You had better talk with your friends or ask your parents for help. When you share problems with your friends, you should find a chance to communicate with them.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文，主要围绕“Growing Pains（成长的烦恼）”展开讨论，直接分享自己的亲身经历，描述自己的成长的烦恼，以及自己在烦恼过程中所采取的方法，然后把这个方法或者建议和好朋友一起分享，让朋友也能从中得到一些建议。
2. 例文点评：文章采取两段式，直接开篇直入主题，讲述自己与朋友之间发生的不愉快，第二段给出自己的建议，供朋友参考。文章结构完整，语句衔接较自然，语言表达准确。
3. 高分亮点：短语：prepare for；deal with；feel sorry for；try one’s best to do sth；in one’s view；run away from。