中考英语二轮复习书面表达高分作文攻略45 说明利弊 (含答案)

45 说明利弊 

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文体解读

在进行利弊型议论文写作时，我们可以分为四部分进行:

1.描述某一 现象或事物。在文章的开头首先要指出我们评论的对象或事件，为下文我们指出该事件或事物的利弊做好铺垫。

2.分析缺点。针对所指出的事物分析其缺点或不足之处。可以是本身的不足，也可以是其给社会带来的不良影响，或者是对环境造成的伤害等。

3.指出其优点。要客观看待事物，在分析缺点的同时还要指出该事件或对象的优点或可取之处，可以说给人们生活带来了方便，或者有利于社会的稳定等。缺点和优点的顺序可以互换。

4.作者看法。客观对事物进行了分析之后，作者要提出自己的观点，是怎么看待该现象或事物的，是利大于弊还是弊大于利，是应该提倡还是禁止。

说明利弊型议论文写作模板

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）

１． 说明事物现状，

２． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）

３． 你对现状（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(Ａ的优点之一). Besides -------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects over weigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．)

相关话题必备词汇、短语、句型

必备词汇

描述现象或事物

be popular with..受到....的欢迎

be familiar with sth.很熟悉某物

raise a heated discussion引起热议

表示优点

advantage优点

benefit益处

be beneficial to .对.....有益

do good to .....有好处

be of great benefits有很大的益处;有很大作用

be of great help帮助很大;有很大帮助

have a positive effect on ......有积极影响

exert a positive influence on ......生积极影响

表示缺点

disadvantage缺点

side effect副作用

do harm to .....有害

useless无用的

be of no help没有用

defect缺陷

have a negative effect on对..生消极作用

必备句型

描述现象或事物

(1) There is a heated discussion about...关....讨论很激烈。

(2) ..has brought us much convenience along with much inconvenience.....给我们带来了方便的同时，还带来了不便。

(3) ..has raised hot discussion. ....已经引起了人们的热议。

( 4) ..has its advantages and disadvantages, just like everything does.

和所有东西一样，...也有它的优点和缺点。

说明事物优点

(1) There are three advantages in/of... (某事物/现象)有三个优点。

(2) The first advantage of.. is that... (某事物/现象的)第一个优点.....

(3) ... provide convenience for us in life. (莱物)能为我们的生活提供便利。

( 4) With the help of.... our life can be much better and more convenient.

....帮助下，我们的生活可以更加幸福和便利。

(5) In spite of the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.

尽管有缺点，它还是有对应的优点。

(6) Nothing can be compared with... in terms of..在(某方面)，很少有东西能...媲美。.

(7).. has a positive impact on people's life ..人们的生活起到一种积极的作用。

(8) sth. exerts a favorable influence on people' s life.某物对人们的生活产生了有利的影响。

(9) .. is playing an increasingly important role in people' s lives.

....在人们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用。

说明事物缺点

(1) However, ... its negative side as well.但是，..也有其不好的一 面。

(2) On the contrary, its disadvantages can not be ignored, either.相反，它的缺点也是不能被忽视的。

(3) Nevertheless, it still has some drawbacks.但是它还是有一些缺陷的。

( 4) Just like everything has two sides, .a.. has many disadvantages.正如每个事物都有两面性一样，..也有很多缺点。

(5) However, by doing so, we may cause some problems.然而，这么做的话，我们可能会引发一些问题。

(6) Nonetheless, it's sometimes blamed for its obvious defects.但是，它有时候会因一些明显的缺陷而受到指责。

(7) As the proverb goes that every coin has is two sides... is no exception.

俗话说硬币都是有两面的，......也不例外。

(8) However is negative aspects are also evident. To begin with ...To make matters worse,...Wort of all,....

然而，它的不足之处也是很明显的。首先，..... 更糟的是，......

(9) The side effects...have exerted on human beings can be seen as follows. Firstly...Secondly, . In addition, .

....对人类产生的副作用如下所示。其一，.....其.二,.. ....此外......

表明个人观点

(1) From where I stand, I think its advantages carry more weight than its disadvantages.从我的立场来看，我认为它的优点大于它的缺点。

(2) Anyway, I still believe.. more advantages than disadvantages.

不管怎样，，我们....的优点比缺点多。

(3) But for me, 1 think it has more positive sides than its negative sides.

对我来说，我认为它的积极面比消极面更多。

( 4 ) From the comparison between these positive and negative effects, we should take it reasonably.

通过这些积极面和消极面的对比，我们要理智地对待它。

(5 ) Therefore, we should take it seriously. 因此我们应该要认真对待它。

( 6) In my view, we should make full use of its advantages and reduce its side effects.在我看来，我们要充分利用它的优点，降低它的副作用。

相关话题满分作文解析

现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此，不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。

要求：

1. 80－100 词。（开头的首句已给出，不计算在词数内）

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则，不予评分。

参考词汇：convenient方便的，便利的  pretend to do...假装做……   think independently独立思考

Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think _____________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【写作思路】

这篇作文要求我们对介绍不同人对“作业帮”这个应用软件的看法，并联系实际，发表自己的观点。题目中利用表格的形式，列出了写作的主要内容，审题可知，短文应包括以下几个部分：作业帮的优点、缺点以及个人观点。可以分为三段分别进行叙述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈现，学生们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。最后一部分内容则需要学生们联系自己的实际生活，发挥想象力，自己来补充适当的内容。文章应以一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在作文中，不能遗漏要点。可以根据表达需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实、完整，但需要注意合理性，要紧贴题目要求和文章主旨。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译表格内容，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复合结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。

【参考范文】

Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them.

They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of time.

I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad.

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀是作文，短文作者根据题目要求，把人们对“作业帮”这个应用软件的不同看法进行了介绍，并在最后发表了自己的观点。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容之间层次清晰，叙述有条理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句子结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。除简单句结构外，短文里还使用了and连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句等复合句，以及动词不定式、动名词等非谓语动词结构。短文中较好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等。

相关话题满分作文必背 

网购已不再是一个新鲜的社会现象。但它与实体店购物的比较依然是人们热衷的话题。
随着社会的发展，网上购物成为一种新型的购物方式。请根据下表提示，谈谈网上购物的利与弊。
要求：1.语句流畅，书写规范。2.包含提示内容，并可适当发挥。3.词数80左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。4.文中不能出现人名、地名等真实信息。

Advantages:方便（convenient）；24小时营业；不用排队
Disadvantages:看不见物品；容易受到欺骗（be cheated）；不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣

参考范文：

   Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day. However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.
  In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.