中考英语二轮复习书面表达高分作文攻略25 方法介绍 (含答案)

25 方法介绍

相关话题作文分类示例指导

一、制作方法

范文

How to Make Tomato Juice

Tomato juice is a kind of healthy drink. It tastes very good.

To make tomato juice, we only need to follow several easy steps. First of all, try to make sure that the tomatoes are clean and fresh. Next, we should put them in the hot water for a few minutes to make the skin loosen. Then, cut them into small pieces and press the juice out of them. Finally, add the juice with a little sugar.

A glass of nice tomato juice is made. Have a drink and enjoy yourselves.

参考译文

如何制作番茄果汁

番茄果汁是一种健康的饮料。它非常好喝。

制作番茄果汁，我们只需要进行几个简单的步骤。首先，尽量确保番茄是干净和新鲜的。接下来，我们要将它们放在热水里几分钟，让番茄皮松掉。然后，将它们切成小块，将果汁挤压出来。最后，往果汁里加入少量糖。

杯好喝的番茄汁就做好了。 喝口，享受下吧。

亮点词汇

 healthy 健康的

drink 饮料 .喝

step 步骤;台阶

first of all 首先

loosen 松弛;松开

press .推;挤压

出彩句型

It tastes... 它尝起来.....

We need to follow several steps.我们需要进行几个步骤。

Try to make sure that..尽量确保.....

add.. with.. ..........

Have a drink and enjoy yourselves.喝一口，享受一下吧。

高分点评

生活化的选题是本文最大的成功之处，单是题目，就紧紧抓住了读者的眼球。文章介绍了番茄汁的制作过程，有条有理，形象生动。文章中一系列祈使句的运用，如"Try to make sure that.."“Cut them into small pieces"等，构造了一种条理感 ，读起来朗朗上口，简单易记。

二、问题解决方法

范文

How to Protect the Environment

It's very important for us to protect the environment.Good environment can make people feel happy and fit. To

improve the environment means to improve our life.

To begin with, we shouldn't cut trees down. Instead,we should plant more trees and flowers around us.Secondly, we should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air.And whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins. Never spit in public. Don't draw on public walls. We should also use shopping bags instead of plastic bags.

In a word, it's our duty to protect the environment. I hope our world will become more and more beautiful.

参考译文

文用如何保护环境

保护环境对我们来说是很重要的。好的环境可以让人们感到幸福健康。改善环境意味普改善我们的生活。

首先，我们不应该砍树。相反地，我们应该在我们周围种更多的树和花。其次，我们应该阳止工厂向河里倒废水，向空气里排放废气。无论何时我们见到地上有垃圾，我们都应该检起来，将它扔进垃圾桶。不要在公众场合吐痰。不要在公共墙上面画。我们还应该使用购物袋，而不是塑料袋。

总之，保护环境是我们的责任。我希望我们的世界可以变得越来越美丽。

亮点词汇

protect保护

fit适应 健康的

to begin with首先

instead 相反地

dustbin 垃圾箱

 in public在公众场合

出彩句型

 It's very important for us to... ....对我们来说很重要。

To improve the environment means to improve our life.改善环境意味着改善我们的生活。

We should sop... from. ....我们应该阻止......做......

Never spit in public不要在公众场合吐痰。

We can also use... instead of..我们还应该使用....而不是....

高分点评

保护环境本应是一个大问题， 涉及社会生活的方面面，但作者灵活地采用了以小见大的方法，从日常小事入手，从我们的身边生活入手，告诉人们应该如何保护环境，简非常具有现实性的文章。句型的交错使用，是文章出彩的另大原因，包括析使句的使用、首形式主语句的使用等。

三、学习方法    

对学生而言，学习方法是一个十分熟悉的话题，然而在相关主题的写作中，学生需要对一些平时的经验和做法进行总结归纳。为了完成这类习作，学生需要积累一定的语言素材和事例，来对学习方法进行说明和描述。

实践案例

Write at least 60 words on the topic“How to be good English learners".

审题

这是一篇以“如何成为好的英语学习者”为题的全命题作文，题目明确了文章的主要内容，即对如何学好英语给出一些说明和建议。在写作时，应该围绕"how to”展开，对提高英语的具体做法进行具体说明。当然，英语能力又可细分为listening、speaking、 reading 和writing等，在写作中，可选择其中的几个方面来依次进行阐述，并举例说明。

段落结构

本文可采用三段式，即“总一分总” 的写作结构:

第一段(开头):引出话题，明确想要阐述的主要内容，即学好英语的方法。

第二段(中心段):文章的中心部分，对文章的主题进行具体阐述，可以围绕两到三个方式来展开。在对某一个具体方式进行闸述时， 需要提供相对应的理由和依器，做说明更具有说服力。

第三段(结尾):文章的结尾段，对全文进行总结概括或鼓励建议，起到首尾呼应的效果。

核心语汇

improve one's spoken/ written English 提高某人的英语口语/书写

practise English listening / reading skill as much as possible尽可能多地操练英语听力和阅读

a long-term process of hard work 一个长期努力的过程

pay attention to / focus on注意/关注

put in more time and effort to do ... 投人更多的时间和努力去做

.....make great progress in ..在.....上取得较大的进步

get into/ develop a good habit of ..养成一....的好习惯

show great interest in .对...表现出很大的兴趣.

 have a better understanding of ..更好地理解.....

参考句型

The more I practice the language, the more likely I will improve my English.

我操练的越多，就越可能提高我的英语

Only in this way 1 by doing this can we improve our English.

只有通过这样，我们才能提高英语。

I can not only improve my listening skills, but also have a relaxation by doing ..

通过....我不仅能提高听力技巧，还能放松自己。

习作1

Studying English is not easy, but we can still do something to improve it.

First of all, we should read more English stories or novels. When we meet with new words, we should keep on reading and try to guess the meaning instead of stopping to look them up. This is a good way to improve our reading skills. Besides, we should write more. It is a good idea for us to keep a diary in English. In this way, we can memorize more English words and expressions easily. Above all, we should practice speaking English as much as possible. Try to speak English with your friends or even foreigners, and you'll be more confident.

Where there is a will, there is a way. If we can keep practicing, our English will soon be greatly improved

点评:

文章结构清晰，段落完整。内容上紧扣主题，分别从读、写、说三方面来进行说

明，所用的事例和论据贴合主题。用词准确，句式丰富多变，能正确使用祈使句以及状语从句、宾语从句等。

习作2

I have been studying English for a long time and I always long to be a good English learner.

It's true that "interest" is the key to success, so I often watch English TV programs and movies in my spare time to cultivate my interest. In this way, I have not only practiced my listening skills but also relaxed myself. Meanwhile, to improve my speaking and pronunciation, I read many English essays and conversations and try to recite them, using a tape recorder to record them. More importantly, I find it extremely helpful to make friends with foreigners and talk with them in English. It can improve my listening and speaking skills at the same time. It also gives me more chances to think in English, which is essential in real communication.

Learning English is a long term process and I'm sure the more I practice the language,the more likely I will be better at it.

点评:

本文结构完整，内容充实且贴切主题。正文部分层次清晰，所提的观点和建议也不落俗套，较为出彩和新颖。作者的语言运用能力较强，用词准确，语言生动，句式丰富。

相关话题变式作文

题目

Write at least 60 words on the topic "I've learned a lot from         ”

习作

As we all know, group work is one of the learning methods during our study in class. It is widely used by teachers and students, and I've learned a lot from group work.

It usually involves more than two students to do group work in class. The group is usually required to complete a task and make a report in the end. To complete it in time,the task will be divided into several parts at the beginning and each member is responsible for a certain part. During the process, the students should discuss the problems together.Everyone should take an active part and listen to others' opinions. It will be useful to write down some key points before they can make a report. While group work is an effective learning method, every participant should keep in mind that only by sharing and cooperation can we reach a satisfying conclusion.

Group work is especially helpful for me as I can learn a lot from others and learn how to contribute to the team.