高中英语高考应用文写作分类指导(求助信)
展开高考英语应用文写作指导(求助信)【写作模板】【经典考题】假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教MsJenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[满分范文]DearMsJenkins,①I'mLiHuaandIplantotakeaparttimejobinaforeigncapitalcompanyduringthesummerholiday.②Ihavealreadyfilledintheapplicationformandhadmyresumereadyforit.③However,I'mnotsureaboutthewordsandformat.④Therefore,I'mwritingtoaskforyourhelpandprofessionaladvice.⑤Wouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreadthroughthematerialsattached?⑥Wouldyoumindfindingoutthemistakesintermsofwordsandformat?⑦Besides,I'dlikeyoutocorrectthemistakesfoundinthematerials.⑧I'dbemostgratefulifyoucoulddomeafavor.⑨I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua[阅卷评点]③表示转折关系的过渡词,把前两句看似平淡的叙述提到了一定的高度,很好地为下句做了铺垫。④therefore关系明确,因果适当,不但使上下文融会贯通,而且突出了写信目的。⑤Wouldyoupleasedo...?是请求别人帮助的句型,用得恰到好处,符合说话者的身份;过去分词attached作定语,使句子更加简练地道,增加了文章的可读性。⑥Wouldyouminddoing...?不同的句式表达了相同的意思,避免了表达形式的单一化,语气委婉。⑧这是文章提档次的句子。mostgrateful道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切和感激之情,也显示了作者较高的语言运用能力。【增分佳句】1.开头部分常用语:(1)Mynameis...I'mwritingtoyouforsomehelp.我叫……,写信的目的是向你寻求一些帮助。(2)I'mwritingalettertoyoutoaskyoutodomeafavor.我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。2.寻求帮助常用语:(1)Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforhelp.面对这么多的困难,我不得不向你求助。(2)Inthemeanwhile/Atthesametime,Ibegyouto...sothat...Also,Iwouldlikeyouto...同时,我恳求你……以便……我也想让你……(3)Iwouldlikeyoutointroducesomegoodwaystolearngrammar.我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。3.结尾部分常用语:(1)I'msurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。(2)Iwillappreciateanyofyourhelp.我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。【热点押题】假定你是李华。最近,你与父母之间关系紧张,甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信,向他求助。内容包括:1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题;2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearCharlie,Howareyougettingalong?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua参考范文:DearCharlie,Howareyougettingalong?RecentlyIhavequarreledwithmyparents,whichmakesmeveryannoyed.Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp.Youknow,myparentsdon'tallowmetogooutandplaywithmyfriendsatweekends.TheythinkIshouldmakefulluseofeveryminutetoworkonmylessons.However,IthinkIneedtoplaywithmyfriendssothatIcanrelaxmyselfafteraweek'shardworkatschoolanditisagoodwayformetokeepintouchwithmyfriends.Iknowitiswrongtoquarrelwiththem,butIdon'tknowwhattodotopersuadethemtochangetheirmindanddevelopagoodrelationshipwiththem.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadvice?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua