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2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

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2023年山东省济南市济阳区中考一模英语试题

第二部分写作（25分）

26．（25分）中华文化源远流长，有很多脍炙人口的谚语。某英语报社正在举办以Practice makes perfect为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

（1）你对该谚语的理解；

（2）你生活中的一个事例（运动、乐器、学习等方面）；

（3）你的打算。

注意：

（1）词数100词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

（2）内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；

（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Practice makes perfect

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2022年山东省济南市济阳区中考一模英语试题

第二部分  写作 （20分）

92. 在“双减”政策下，阳光中学的师生们都在努力探求更高效的学习方式。经过实践，一致认为小组合作学习是一种重要的课堂学习方式。请你根据以下要点提示，以“Studying in Groups”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

要点提示：

1. 学习方法的对比

2 经历与收获

3. 个人观点

要求：

1. 100词左右

2. 不出现真实姓名、校名 

提示词：“双减”政策： “Double reduction” policy

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2021年山东省济南市济阳区中考一模英语试题

十二、电子邮件

96．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Allen最近因视力减退而苦恼，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，给他提出保护视力的合理建议，要点如下：

1. 注意读写姿势；  

2. 长时间用眼后休息；

3. 少用电子产品；  

4. 做眼保健操。

注意：

1.字数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。

Dear Allen,

I’m sorry to hear that your eyesight is getting worse. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案：

2023年山东省济南市济阳区中考一模英语试题

【解答】

Practice makes pertect

    Have you heard of the saying"practice makes perfect"？It means that after you have plenty of practice in what you are doing，you will be perfect in it. （对该谚语的理解）

    I was not very good at PE. With the teacher's encouragement，I kept practicing. 【高分句型一】Now I am the commissary in charge of sports in our class. （事例）

    If you want to improve your study and work，remember that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice. 【高分句型二】For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use of your talent，practice is necessary. If you only learn grammar rules by heart and don't do enough exercises，it's certain that you can't understand the language perfectly. But if you really practise a lot，maybe you will understand it much better. In this way，you can apply what you have learned better. （感悟）

2022年山东省济南市济阳区中考一模英语试题

【答案】例文：

Studying in Groups

After China introduced the “Double reduction” policy, the teachers and the students at Sunshine Middle School are trying their best to find a more effective way of classroom learning. After practice, it is agreed that studying in groups is an important way of classroom learning.

In the traditional classroom, students follow the teachers step by step. Therefore, the students are less motivated to learn. However, when students study in groups, they become autonomous learners, which means that they have to learn all by themselves with the guidance of the teachers.

Once a time, I studied in groups to learn English during my Grade 8. I discussed problems with my classmates in my activities. I enjoyed myself. It’s with the help of my classmates that I had more confidence to study.

In my opinion, studying in groups is necessary for us to be better.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，以“小组学习”为题，按照要点提示写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称为主，第三人称为辅来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，但在叙述个人学习经历时用一般过去时。按照要点分成四段来写：第一段叙述师生们探索更高效的学习方法，经实践后，认为“小组学习”方式为佳；第二段把传统课堂教学模式和小组学习模式进行对比；第三段主要叙述作者的一次小组学习经历及收获；第四段自述观点。在进行个人经历叙述时要注意保证内容完整，条理清晰，行文流畅。

2021年山东省济南市济阳区中考一模英语试题

96．例文：

Dear Allen,

     I’m sorry to hear that your eyesight is getting worse. It’s very important for us to keep our eyes healthy. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.

     First, I often pay attention to my postures when I am reading or writing. Second, it’s also very important for me to take a rest after using my eyes for too long. Third, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or the computer too much in my free time, because the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Lastly, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.

     I hope my ways are helpful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于书信作文的写作，写作时要按邮件格式写，要求写一封电子邮件给Allen提出保护视力的建议，提示内容要写全。

2. 写作指导：本文可用第一人称进行写作，因文章大部分都是事实性的建议，时态主要采用一般现在时。第一段可以写保护视力的重要性以及中心句引出下文；第二段作为文章的主体，主要对提示的内容要点进行写作；最后一段可写总结性的祝福话语来结束文章。在写作时，除了提示的内容要点以外，还需进行自我发挥，这样既增加文章丰富度也更能达到文章字数要求；内容要点之间可用连接词（First，Second等）进行写作，这使文章层次清晰，行文连贯；最后还需注意写作要符合英文表达的习惯和规则，避免出现中式英语。