专题 04 话题分类+个人情感和情绪（人与自我）--2023年新高考读后续写指导之话题分类背诵

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专题 04 话题分类+个人情感和情绪
（人与自我）

目录：
1. 精选名校最新2022年12月-2023年1月名校联考、模拟试题
2. 读后续写话题分类背诵模板
3. 读后续写话题分类写作步骤
4. 读后续写话题分类写作热词
5. 读后续写话题分类高分佳句


   1.（2022年黄冈中学校联考模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Cody always knew his family was different. While other kids went to the beach for summer vacation, he and his mom visited the world’s largest basket, or the world’s largest baseball bat, or the world’s largest fork. These are real things. And Cody’s mom had photos of them during those trips hanging on the wall.
As a little kid, Cody thought these vacations were the best ever. But with time going by, he started to feel embarrassed. When his classmates would ask where he’d gone for vacation, he’d say, “No place special.”
On a Sunday morning, his mom said, “I was reading this article about the world’s largest gathering of people dressed as turkeys. It was in Texas, and it was only 661 people! Five times as many people live in our town. I want to hold a similar event here around Thanksgiving Day, which is a few weeks away.”
“Mom,” Cody said. “No.”
“Yes!” Mom said. “I just called the newspaper. The announcement runs tomorrow. The day after Thanksgiving, everyone will meet in the town square — dressed as turkeys!”
A few days before Thanksgiving, Cody and his mom sat down for dinner. Cody set down his fork. “Do you have any idea what the kids at school think about the turkey dress-up?”
“No,” Mom said.
“Well, they have a lot to say.”
Mom looked down at her fingernails, then looked at Cody. “I’m afraid it’s too late to call it off, sweetie.”
At last, it was the day of the great turkey dress-up. But instead of bouncing around the house as she’d been all week, Mom was sitting on the living-room floor, shoulders slumped (耷拉着). “I can’t believe the DJ is sick,” she said. “What am I going to do? Music is what makes a festivity festive! I don’t know how to work all this stuff.”
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mom sighed and leaned back against the couch.
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With the happy memories brought back by the photos on the wall, Cody said, “I’ll do it.”
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【答案】
Mom sighed and leaned back against the couch. With no music, the turkey dress-up might actually have to be canceled, which meant there would be no more embarrassment. Cody realized this was his chance. Before his blurting out what was in his mind, his eyes fell on the framed photos from their vacations over the years which hung on the wall above the couch. Cody looked at the first one. He was about five when they went to Kentucky to see the world’s largest baseball bat. His smile was almost as big as the bat while his mom’s smile was even bigger. Suddenly, Cody changed his mind.
With the happy memories brought back by the photos on the wall, Cody said, “I’ll do it.” “Do what?” asked Mom, sitting up. “I’ll be the DJ. I can figure out the equipment.” She gave him a big hug. “Cody, you’re a lifesaver!” Cody had the music set up, and the town square was full of people dressed as turkeys. Cody’s mom was decked out in extra-long feathers. They all appeared to be having fun. Best of all, his mom was having a blast. He realized he and his mom had always been there for each other, trying to make each other smile.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了科迪和其妈妈的故事。科迪一直都知道他的家庭与众不同，一开始他还觉得这是好事，但是他逐渐觉得很尴尬。他妈妈决定举办一次活动，遇到了困难。后来他在旅游照片的启发下，帮助妈妈解决了困难，举办了活动。与其同时，他也意识到他和他妈妈一直都在身边，努力让彼此微笑，是最重要的事情。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈叹了口气，靠在沙发上。”可知，第一段可描写科迪妈妈面对此次困难做出的行动以及科迪的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“带着墙上的照片勾起的美好回忆，科迪说“我会做的。””可知，第二段可描写科迪和其妈妈采取的措施以及活动的举办情况。
第二步：续写线索：
科迪态度变化——妈妈计划举办活动——DJ生病——科迪受启发——帮助妈妈
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①意识到：realize/aware of/recognize
②改变：change /convert/alter
③使……回忆起：bring back /recall/recollect
【情绪类】
①尴尬：embarrassment /awkwardness
②积极：have fun /enjoy oneself/have a good time
【点睛】
[高分句型1] With no music, the turkey dress-up might actually have to be canceled, which meant there would be no more embarrassment.（由连接词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] He was about five when they went to Kentucky to see the world’s largest baseball bat.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3] He realized he and his mom had always been there for each other, trying to make each other smile.（由省略that引导的宾语从句及现在分词作状语）

2. （2022年江苏省高三上学期一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“What a crabby-looking lady (怨妇),” the cashier at my local convenience store whispered to her coworker. I was grabbing something off the shelf. I had a half dozen kids waiting for me outside in the van, and here’s the thing: they were all my own children. No time for polite. No casual conversation with the checkout lady, no nod of approval toward the stock boy, no breathing. Just get the toilet paper, two gallons of milk and some Frosted Flakes and get back to my children!
But my interest was aroused by the crabby-looking lady. Which one was she? Taking a family pack of toilet paper under my arm, I scanned the tiny store for the crabby lady. Let’s see, there’s a middle-aged guy checking on pork, an older gentleman at the checkout purchasing an egg salad sandwich and a coffee, and... just then I saw her, the crabby-looking lady.
Her eyes were small; her brown hair was pulled back in a ponytail so tight that it looked like her forehead would drop. Her mouth was shut serious. This lady looked like she had smelled something really bad. Then, I turned away from my own reflection in the convex security mirror (安全反射镜) at the back of the store. The crabby-looking lady... was me!
That night, I cried. I was the crabby-looking lady! Me! The girl once voted nicest smile by her high school class! Things must get changed! Right then and there I resolved to do one thing over the next year. One simple resolution: to smile. I didn’t need to wait for January 1st — I would start right now.
I resolved to smile at anyone and anything, even though they would let me down. And I also resolved to make a conscious effort to smile, at least ten times a day.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The first day of “Mission Smile” I practiced smiling as planned.
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After practicing a month, unexpectedly, something different happened.
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【答案】
The first day of “Mission Smile” I practiced smiling as planned. I smiled at a strange dog who peed on my daughter’s new school shoes while she was in them, the salesman to the door, three of my six children, a librarian who asked me if I was aware of the global overpopulation problem, and my bathtub. I even smiled at my husband over the phone when he called to say he’d be late from work. And I smiled at myself in the mirror twice, just to remind myself what a smile looked like.
After practicing a month, unexpectedly, something different happened. I didn’t even try to find things to smile at and I’d still notice smile take over my face. When my daughter loaded the dishwasher with her socks, I smiled. When we were really late for church, I smiled. One day I was meeting a couple of friends at a local coffee shop. I overheard the cashier remark to her co-worker, “What a happy-looking lady!" And I didn’t even have to look around to know who she was talking about. It was me!
【导语】本文以人物线索展开，讲述了作者在超市匆忙买东西时无意间听到收银员们评论一位女士脾气暴躁，作者想知道这名女士到底是谁，结果从安全镜中发现竟然是自己，晚上作者伤心地哭了，当下决定要做一件事情：学会微笑。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘使命微笑’的第一天，我按计划练习微笑。”可知，第一段可描写作者在具体不同的场景下开始练习微笑。
②由第二段首句内容“练习了一个月后，出乎意料的是，不同的事情发生了。”可知，本段应该写练习微笑一个月给作者带来的影响和变化。
第二步：续写线索：
计划练习微笑——在不同场景下学会微笑——练习微笑一个月后的变化——收银员对作者的新评价
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①练习：practice/train
②穿：be in/wear/put on
③意识到：be aware of/be conscious of
【情绪类】
①出乎意料地：unexpectedly/ surprisingly
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I smiled at a strange dog who peed on my daughter’s new school shoes while she was in them, the salesman to the door, three of my six children, a librarian who asked me if I was aware of the global overpopulation problem, and my bathtub. （运用了who引导的限制性定语从句、while引导的时间状语从句和if引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. And I smiled at myself in the mirror twice, just to remind myself what a smile looked like.（运用了不定式短语作目的状语和what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型3]. And I didn’t even have to look around to know who she was talking about.（运用了who引导的宾语从句）
3.（2022年浙江绍兴·统考二模）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a break time at the village school. The bell had rung, and the children had run out into the bright sunshine, wild with laughter and fun. They chased after each other and played heartily, with giggles lingering in the relaxing atmosphere.
All but poor Davy. He came out last and very slowly, but he did not laugh. He was in trouble, and the bright, golden sunlight did not make him glad.
He walked across the yard, and sat down on a stone behind the old maple. A little bird on the highest branch sang just to make him laugh.
But Davy did not notice it. He was thinking of the cruel words that had been said about his ragged clothes. The tears stole out of his eyes, and ran down his cheeks. He closed his eyes to hold back his tears and bit his lips tight.
Poor Davy had no father, and his mother had to work hard to keep him at school. The bell finally rang, indicating it’s time to come home.
At four o'clock that afternoon, he went home by the path that led across the fields and through the woods. He still felt sad. Davy did not wish to trouble his mother; so he wandered a while among the trees, and at last threw himself on the green moss (苔藓) under them.
Just then his teacher came along. She saw who it was, and stopped, saying kindly, “What is the matter, Davy?”
He drooped his head and did not utter a word, but the tears began again to well up.
“Won’t you tell me? Perhaps I can help you.”
Deeply encouraged by her warmth and sincerity, he poured out all his trouble he came across. When he ended, she was lost in deep thought and for a while she came up, gave Davy a consoling pat and said, cheerily, “I have a plan, Davy, that I think will help you.”
“Oh, what is it?” he said, sitting up with a look of hope, while a tear fell upon a blue violet (紫罗兰).
“Well, how would you like to be a little flower merchant?”
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
“And earn money?” said Davy.“But where shall I get my flowers?”
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Paragraph 2:
So, with the plan in mind, Davy hunted the woods for the prettiest flowers.
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【答案】
Paral: “And earn money?” said Davy. “But where shall I get my flowers?” “Right in these woods, and in the fields.” said his teacher, pointing to the colorful flowers swaying gracefully in the breeze. Clusters of lovely blue violets adhered to the trees, white ones adorned the backs of the river, and among the rocks were ferns and mosses. They looked like an angel, unfolding in the wind and under the sun. For the first time Davy was really arrested by the scene. His teacher narrated her plan that Davy picked some flowers and brought them all to her house. Then, they arranged flowers beautifully together for a purchase. Struck by the amazing idea, Davy nodded his head firm and held his teacher’s hand as his smile grew.
Para2: So, with the plan in mind. Davy hunted the woods for the prettiest flowers. Excited and cautious, he placed them in the basket, and trotted all his way to his teacher’s house. Subsequently, they would be sorted out discreetly, trimmed for a better look and wrapped in paper of different colors. Everything done, Davy took them to the city that was near, and sold them. The first move was a hit and customers were totally impressed by the flowers. A little flower merchant was popular in the city. He soon earned enough money to buy new clothes. Now the sunshine and the bird’s songs made him glad.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了课间休息时间，孩子们跑到明亮的阳光下，笑得很开心。他们互相追逐嬉戏，笑声在轻松的气氛中萦绕。但戴维一个人坐在石头上，显得很不高兴，因为他想起其他人对他的破衣服说过的那些刻薄的话。放学回家时，他的老师发现了他，他向老师倾诉了他所遇到的所有困难。听完后老师想了一个办法帮助他。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但是我在哪里可以买到我的花呢？”可知，第一段可详细介绍在哪里买花的计划。
②由第二段首句内容“有了这个计划，戴维在树林里搜寻最漂亮的花。”可知，第二段可描述找到花之后，如何通过卖花挣钱。
第二步：续写线索：
计划——采花——卖花——挣钱
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①.挣钱：earn money/make money
②.吸引：arrested /attracted/appealed
③.极好的：amazing /wonderful/fantastic
【情绪类】
①.谨慎的：cautious /careful/ prudent
②.高兴的：glad/happy/pleased
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. His teacher narrated her plan that Davy picked some flowers and brought them all to her house.（用that引导同位语从句）
[高分句型2]. Excited and cautious, he placed them in the basket, and trotted all his way to his teacher’s house.（用形容词excited and cautious做伴随状语）
4.（2022年山东泰安·统考模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a rainy night in March 2013, my husband Reece went out to get a box that he had forgotten in his car. On his way back inside, he noticed a small shadow moving on the driveway. He walked towards it quietly, and found it was a small hedgehog(刺猬), all wet in the grass, eating mud. Reece quickly removed his jacket and picked it up. The hedgehog was very weak and unable to move about quickly. But he did not seem to be frightened; nor did he resist being scooped up (抱起).
Once he was inside, Reece called out to me, saying that he had something that would make my heart melt, and he was right! We named the hedgehog Alf, because, just like the TV show character of the‘'80s, he came out of nowhere. And, like Alf the alien, this little hedgehog was amazingly intelligent. Not only did he learn to eat his dinner and drink water from his bowls, but he also learnt to wait for us inside his little indoor cubby house and hop into his pet carrier whenever we took him out with us.
Alf knows us very well and recognizes both our voices. He does not roll into a ball or put his spines up. Every day he allows us to pat him. He loves playing with paper and towels and will bite and tug on the bed sheets if given a chance. Like all pets, Alf loves his treats, in particular small pieces of sugar-coated biscuits.
Unfortunately, in April 2014, I was in a car accident and had to spend two months in the hospital. And boy, did I miss Alf! Reece told me that Alf would search around the house for me, checking in places where I'd normally be, such as my desk, my favorite seat in front of the TV and even my side of the bed.
注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One evening, Reece set up a video call for me from my hospital bed.
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I cannot describe the feeling when I arrived home and saw his little face again.
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【答案】
One evening, Reece set up a video call for me from my hospital bed. When the video phone was connected, I saw Reece holding Alf in his arms and Alf was staring at the phone screen. Alf seemed shocked when it saw me at the other end of video. It kept scratching the phone screen with its claws, which made me so excited that tears filled my eyes. At this moment, I knew she also missed me very much. How I wanted to run back to it and pat it. Then we could play with each other.
I cannot describe the feeling when I arrived home and saw his little face again. As Alf saw me again, it rubbed my trousers with its little face, and then grabbed my pants tightly with its claws as if I would disappear. When Reece saw us like this, he said he thought Alf had regarded me as his mother. I looked at him with great excitement and said," I also think of it as my own child." People can cultivate feelings with each other, while people and animals can also cultivate such affection. And then we would live happily with Alf.
【分析】本文以动物为线索展开， 讲述了作者的丈夫捡回来的一只小刺猬， 他们给小刺猬起名叫Alf，并且像养宠物一样，让Alf学会吃饭和用碗喝水，在和Alf的相处中，Alf也和作者一家相处的非常快乐。 但不幸的是， 作者出了车祸， 需要在医院呆两个月，作者非常想念Alf，Alf也非常想念作者，它们通过视频互相表达想念，最后作者终于康复回到家，再次见到Alf的经历。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天晚上，里斯给在病床上的我打了一个视频电话。”可知，第一段可描写作者和Alf通过视频电话表达想念。
②由第二段首句内容“当我回到家，再次看到他的小脸时，我的感觉难以形容。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家再一次见到Alf的感受。
第二步：续写线索：
接通电话——盯着看——想念——回家——见面——激动快乐
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①接通电话：connect/get through/put through
②盯着看：stare at/gaze at
③想念：miss/ long to see again
④认为：regard as/think of
【情绪类】
①激动的：showing one’s excitement/excited/ excitedly
②快乐地：happily/joyfully
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. It kept scratching the phone screen with its claws, which made me so excited that tears filled my eyes.（由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] As Alf saw me again, it rubbed my trousers with its little face, and then grabbed my pants tightly with its claws as if I would disappear.（由as引导的时间状语从句和as if引导的方式状语从句）
5.（2023年河北廊坊·高三廊坊市一中期末）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Like every boy there ever was, what Kyle Hrenwood most wanted in this world was a dog. Unfortunately for Kyle, his mom didn’t think he was responsible enough.
The day before Kyle’s thirteenth birthday, he went to the park and found a woman sobbing. He was immediately worried. Was the woman hurt?
He bent over and said “Miss, Are you OK? Do you want me to call anyone?” The woman shook her head and said, “My husband died two weeks ago, and I feel alone. We’d been together for thirty years. I can’t stand the silence inside that house. I’m Deidre. What’s your name?”
Kyle introduced himself and they talked for a long time. Kyle’s encounter with Deidre left him very sad, and he decided to go home. “Mom,” he said. “I don’t want to get married.” “Why not?” asked Kyle’s mom. “What if you spend thirty or forty years with someone,” Kyle said. “And then he is dead, and you’re alone?” Mom said, “Then you’ll miss out on love. You see, if you protect yourself from feeling pain, you’re cutting yourself off from happiness. You may discover those thirty years alone are not worth living.”
The next day, he had one of the biggest surprises and greatest joys of his life—a puppy! That was when he remembered Deidre was alone in her huge house.
A few hours later, Kyle knocked on Deidre’s door holding the puppy. He said, “Today is my birthday, and my parents gave me this puppy. You need this puppy more than I do.” “Give my heart to an animal just so it can die in a few years’ time?” Deidre asked bitterly. “I don’t think so. I don’t need any more pain in my life!”
“My mom said that if you protect yourself from feeling pain, you’re cutting yourself off from happiness. too,” Kyle said.
“You’re right, Kyle!” Deidre said. “I do need this puppy. Maybe you can visit us both; I’ve never had a dog before and may need some advice!”
Over the next few years, Kyle and Deidre, and Max (that was the dog’s name) became great friends. Then Kyle’s dad was offered a job in another state, and the family moved away.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Kyle grew up and fell in love, and his wedding was drawing near.
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“This is Gemma, Max’s daughter,” Deidre said.
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【答案】
  Kyle grew up and fell in love, and his wedding was drawing near. He found his happiness, a girl he loved very much. He remembered something his mother once said to him: “If you protect yourself from feeling pain, you are cutting yourself off from happiness”. So for so many years, he has allowed himself to treat the people around him with a loving heart, until he found the most beloved girl. Then he thought of his old friend Deidre, whom he wanted to invite to his wedding. So he sent Deidre an invitation. Finally, on the wedding day, Deidre showed up with a dog.
“This is Gemma, Max’s daughter,” Deidre said. Kyle was shocked at first, but soon he realized what Deidre had said. Deidre told him that Max had died a few years ago. After Kyle moved away, Max had found his true love, a lovely dog. They also have their own puppies. “Unbelievable”, Kyle said to Dietrich. Since then, Kyle has learned more about the true meaning of trying to find happiness.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公凯尔在一次去公园的路上，看到一个叫黛德丽女人在抽泣，后来他上去主动询问情况，得知女人是因为失去丈夫而难过，以及通过后来的交谈和发生的事情，最终让作者明白了一个道理，要努力去寻找自己的幸福。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“凯尔长大了，恋爱了，他的婚礼也快到了。”可知，第一段可描写凯尔想起了他的老朋友黛德丽，并邀请她参加自己的婚礼的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“这是杰玛，马克斯的女儿，”黛德丽说。”可知，第二段可描写黛德丽告诉凯尔关于马克斯之后发生的事情以及凯尔的心理状态。
第二步：续写线索：
凯尔婚礼快到了——想到邀请黛德丽参加他的婚礼——黛德丽出席凯尔婚礼——凯尔看到的情形——黛德丽告诉凯尔——感悟
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①找到：find/seek out/
②.出现：showed up /turned up
③.理解：realized /knew/understood
【情绪类】
①.震惊的：shocked /surprised
②.无法相信的：Unbelievable /Incredible
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Then he thought of his old friend Deidre, whom he wanted to invite to his wedding.（运用了whom引导的非限制性定语从句。）
[高分句型2]. So for so many years, he has allowed himself to treat the people around him with a loving heart, until he found the most beloved girl.（运用了until引导的时间状语从句。）
6. （2023年山东枣庄·统考一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My parents grew up poor. But as a family, we were comfortable, though we didn’t have much what would be considered luxuries. One year, my father went on a trip to Italy and brought my mother an opal ring. It was her favorite stone, and she cherished that ring. It represented Dad’s love for her.
Dad died at the age of 53 in 1980 after a grueling battle with cancer. Mom was working at Burlington Coat Factory Department store. She usually wore the ring to work. Over the years, the ring became impossible for my Mom to wear because of her swollen knuckles (指关节). I had the ring fitted with a clasp so that Mom could wear it again. She took great pride in the frequent compliments as she got on that ring.
One day during her shift, the ring slipped off. She didn’t realize it until the following day. Mom was sad. The ring did not have a high monetary value, but it meant as much to her as life itself. I decided to go and look for it.
I encountered Chloe, one of my Mom’s co-workers at my Mom’s workplace. She led me to the store where Mom worked, and then left. It was packed with clothes, racks and tables. I started row by row crawling on the floor to see if I could find the ring underneath all the clothes. When I got to the last row and hadn’t found the ring, the thought occurred to me that it might have fallen into the pocket of a coat as my Mom was hanging or rearranging the clothes. I started feeling around in the pockets of some of the coats, but quickly abandoned. There were at least 20,000 pieces of clothing in that department. The attempt seemed useless.
注意：续写的词数应为150左右;
I stood by a small table in disappointment when Chloe came in.
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I called my Mom and now I was choking back tears.
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【答案】
I stood by a small table in disappointment when Chloe came in. “Have you found the ring?” she asked curiously. “No, I have already got to the last row but in vain. Maybe I should search all the coats here.” Looking at over 20,000 pieces clothing, Chloe lent a helping hand, “It’s not an easy task.” We opened one pocket after another, going to the second room, and then the third. We two were sweating heavily with red faces. Suddenly, I burst out screaming, “Yes! That’s it!” Chole ran to me quickly. She patted my arm gently, “tell your mom, dear.”
I called my Mom and now I was choking back tears. “Mom, good news!” I could tell how happy my Mom was by her laughter. After all, it meant a lot. I thanked Chole and went home. The moment I stepped out the store, the night sky was lit up by flashes of light quietly. Tring as it was, the recovery of this precious ring bought greater pleasure.
【导语】本文以故事发展为线索展开，讲述了作者从小家庭并不富裕，父亲从意大利带给了母亲一枚戒指，虽然不是很昂贵，母亲却最看重这枚戒指。父亲去世后，母亲总是戴着戒指。上年纪的母亲因为关节肿胀无法再戴戒指，作者还特意上加了一个搭扣。母亲甚是满意。但是有一天，母亲换班时戒指丢了。第二天母亲才知道，非常焦急。于是作者去母亲工作的店里找，在母亲同事的帮助下，费劲千辛万苦终于找到了戒指。虽然很辛苦，但是失而复得的宝贝带给了他们更大的快乐。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Chole进来时，我失望地站在一张小桌子旁。”可知，第一段可描写两人的对话，一起努力找戒指的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“我给妈妈打了电话，此时我忍不住流下了眼泪。”可知，第二段可描写告诉妈妈找到戒指的情形和宝贝失而复得的喜悦。
第二步：续写线索：
父亲送母亲戒指——母亲长期佩戴——为戒指增加搭扣——母亲总是开心炫耀戒指——戒指丢失——寻找戒指——失而复得——开心
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①.帮忙：lent a helping hand /offered help
②.突然尖叫：burst out screaming/ burst into scream
【情绪类】
①.好奇地：curiously/out of curiosity
②.开心：pleasure/happiness
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I could tell how happy my Mom was by her laughter.（由连接副词how引导的宾语从句作tell的宾语）
[高分句型2]. Tring as it was, the recovery of this precious ring bought greater pleasure.（由连词as引导让步状语从句）
7.（2022年重庆·高三重庆八中校考阶段练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My mom only had one eye. I hated her! She was such an embarrassment. She cooked for students and teachers to support the family. There was one day during elementary school when my mom came to say hello to me. I was so embarrassed. How could she do this to me? I ignored her, threw her a hateful look and ran out.
The next day at school one of my classmates said, “Your mom only has one eye!” I wanted to bury myself. I also wanted my mom to just disappear. I confronted her that day and said, “If you’re only going to make me a laughing stock, why don’t you just die?” My mom did not respond. I didn’t even stop to think for a second about what I had said, because I was full of anger, totally unaware of her feelings.
I wanted to get out of that house, and have nothing to do with her. So I studied real hard, and finally got a chance to go abroad for further study. Then, I got married with a local man. I bought a house of my own. I had kids of my own. I was happy with my life, my kids and the comforts.
Years passed, and I didn’t hear from my mom ever since I had left home. Sometimes I would think of her but every time thinking of the embarrassment brought by her embarrassingly one-eyed look, I still hoped that life would stay the same way and she would never appear in my life again.
Then one day, my mom came to visit me. She hadn’t seen me in years and she didn’t even meet her grandchildren. When she stood by the door, my children was scared to cry and ran to me. I calmed them down and asked my husband to lead them into the house.
I turned to her, looking at her weary face with more wrinkles and her gray hair. Obviously she was older and life surely didn’t treat her well. However, the uninvited visit still made me angry.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I asked her why she showed up at our front door uninvited.
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I was saddened by the news she just shared, but what truly astonished me was what she told me next about her eye.
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【答案】
I asked her why she showed up at our front door uninvited. A disappointed and bitter smile flashing through her face, she finally gathered her strength and courage to tell me the reason for her appearance. “I’ve been sorry for the embarrassment I have brought to you because of my one-eye look.” she said, “But even with one eye, I still see no one but you as the whole world to me.” Somehow, a sense of guilty began to rise in my heart. She continued, “I came today because I got cancer. With the remaining time, I’d like to know my grandchildren and, more importantly, my daughter is doing well.”
I was saddened by the news she just shared, but what truly astonished me was what she told me next about her eve. She paused for a while so as to catch her breath. Then she revealed the secret of that lost eye. “When you were two years old, an accident happened and you lost the eyesight of your one eye. Unable to bear the fact that my baby would be living in a half-dark world, I volunteered to donate my one eye to you.” I was totally petrified on hearing the truth, tears of regret pouring down my face. “Don’t cry my baby, because you will see this beautiful world for me even when I am no longer there”. Rushing to her, I hugged her so tightly that I told myself I would never leave her again.
【导语】本文为记叙文，文章以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者的母音只有一只眼睛，作者觉得这样的母亲让她很尴尬，一天母亲去学校找她，第二天自己就被同学们取笑了，所以作者下定决心要离开这个家。她非常努力的学习，去海外留学，定居，结婚，生子。忽然有一天，多年未曾联系的母亲出现在了家门口。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我问她为什么不请自来地出现在我们家的前门。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈忽然拜访多年不见女儿的原因。
②由第二段首句“我为她刚才分享的侏儒感到难过，但真正让我惊讶的是她接下来告诉我的关于她的眼睛。”可知，第二段可描写母亲变成只有一只眼睛的真相。
第二步：续写线索：
解释原因——吃惊——说明真相——冰释前嫌
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①出现：show up→appear/come forth
②聚集：gather→ assemble/ collect/ aggregate
③继续：continue→go on/ keep on
【情绪类】
①抱歉：sorry→regret/feel apologetic
②吃惊：astonish→surprise/ amaze/ startle/shock
【点睛】
【高分句型1】A disappointed and bitter smile flashing through her face, she finally gathered her strength and courage to tell me the reason for her appearance. (运用了独立主格结构作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】Unable to bear the fact that my baby would be living in a half-dark world, I volunteered to donate my one eye to you.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
8.（2022年浙江省高三模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。
It was just the three of us-my parents and me. I always felt it a pity that I would never have a chance to know what grandparents’ “spoiling” love would be like.
My dad is a truck driver, and when I was little, he was gone most of the time, delivering wire and other supplies around the Midwest. My mom is a devoted teacher, always busy switching between looking after her only child and her many students.
We lived in a small house in Brighton, Colorado, in a neighborhood of 1970s old houses. We moved there on my third birthday. My first memory is our neighbor Arlene handing me strawberries from her garden through a hole in the chain-link fence. She and her husband, Bill, lived next door.
Arlene spent a lot of time working in the garden, and I was always talking to her from our yard. I think what drew me to Arlene and Bill is that they never got tired of listening to me. I also think Arlene saw a lot of herself in me-we were both lonely, anxious-and that may be why she always took the time to listen to me. Bill too. It was a wonderful connection.
One day, my parents asked Bill and Arlene whether they’d watch me while they went out. This worked well for everyone, so it became a somewhat frequent occurrence. Arlene and Bill didn’t have kids. They had a spare room in their house, which became “my” room. I had boxes of toys and books in that room. Arlene and I would do crafts together. Bill taught me how to ride a bike and later how to fly a kite. It was his company that made father’s constant absence not so unbearable.
When I was about five, I had an idea. My parents were watching TV when I spat it out, “what if I adopted Bill and Arlene as my grandparents?”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My parents said I could ask them tomorrow.
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From the day I adopted them, I called Bill and Arlene Grandpa and Grandma.
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【答案】
My parents said I could ask them tomorrow. The next day, heart pounding in my chest, I knocked on Bill and Arlene’s door, sat down in their living room and stammered out my question tentatively, “Will you guys care to be my grandparents?” At these words, they were petrified with surprise and the room fell into an awkward silence. “Maybe they are not so fond of me as I thought.” I murmured to myself, doubts crowding in on me. I was about to sneak out when my friends reached out their arms and embraced me tightly. “Of course!” they responded enthusiastically, tears of joy brimming in their eyes.
From the day I adopted them, I called Bill and Arlene Grandpa and Grandma. They even went to great lengths to print out an adoption certificate, and it hung on their living room wall proudly. Over the years, my dear grandparents supported me in all my gloomy days, encouraged me to pursue dreams regardless of numerous obstacles, and imparted their invaluable wisdom to me selflessly. I could find no words to express how grateful and fortunate I felt for their presence in my life. However, it was when they told me in their last days that how much joy and comfort I had brought into their otherwise tedious life that I truly became the luckiest grandson in the world.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者父亲是卡车司机，妈妈是老师，在作者三岁的时候，作者和父母搬到科罗拉多州布莱顿，在这里他们遇到了新邻居——一对夫妇，作者和他们关系很好，有时候作者的爸爸忙碌时，也会把作者放到邻居家让他们帮忙照顾。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我父母说我可以明天问他们。”可知，第一段可描写作者去问Bill和Arlene，自己能否认他们做自己的爷爷奶奶，Bill和Arlene高兴地同意了。
②由第二段首句内容“从我认他们当爷爷奶奶开始的那天起，我就称呼他们为爷爷奶奶。”可知，第二段可描写作者认Bill和Arlene当爷爷奶奶后，他们对自己很好，作者对此很感激。
第二步：续写线索：
问Bill和Arlene——作者紧张地等待回复——Bill和Arlene同意——称呼Bill和Arlene为爷爷奶奶——Bill和Arlene对作者很好——感激
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①低语：murmur/whisper
②拥抱：embrace/hug
③回复：respond/reply
【情绪类】
①热情地：enthusiastically /zealously
②感谢的：grateful/thankful
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The next day, heart pounding in my chest, I knocked on Bill and Arlene’s door, sat down in their living room and stammered out my question tentatively, “Will you guys care to be my grandparents?”(运用了独立主格结构)
[高分句型2] I was about to sneak out when my friends reached out their arms and embraced me tightly.(运用了when引导的状语从句)
[高分句型3] However, it was when they told me in their last days that how much joy and comfort I had brought into their otherwise tedious life that I truly became the luckiest grandson in the world.(运用了强调句)
9.（2022年浙江绍兴·统考二模）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
In the back of my closet is a small box that has followed me to every new address. It’s the first thing I find a place for as the moving truck pulls away. The only remaining contents in it are dozens of notes in my mother’s tidy writing.
My mother, who put her business degree to use running a small company with my father, while raising me, was always prepared and always gave me abundant love. By day she made marketing slogans and distribution strategies. By night: bubble baths and bedtime stories. She and I had the same February birthday. Each year my parents arranged wonderful parties.
When I was 3, she learned she had advanced breast cancer and immediately began to prepare by researching every available treatment. Each day, she would sit for hours at our dining table, her straight dark hair tied back, surrounded by piles of paper, studying, technical paragraphs.
When I was 7, the materials on the dining table began to change. Wrapping (包装) paper and ribbons took the place of her highlighted pages. Scissors swished through gift wrap. Paper creased (折) under her fingers. Ribbon cut to length with one snip. Knots came together with a tiny creak. Swish, crease, snip, creak. She had begun assembling (装配) a gift box for me.
Inside, she packed presents and letters for the milestones of my life she would miss —graduation, wedding, and every birthday until the age of 30. My mother died 10 days before our shared birthday. That morning, when I turned 12 and she would have turned 49, I woke up early and opened the box as my mother had shown me.
Neat rows of brightly wrapped presents glowed like the spring tulips (郁金香) that were just coming up in the front yard. In the package marked “12th Birthday”, I found a little ring with an amethyst (紫水晶) at its center. A white card curling around the present read: “I always wanted a birthstone ring when I was a little girl. I hope you like it, too. Happy birthday, darling girl! Love, your Mommy.”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph one:
On the morning of my high school graduation, I walked to the box.
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Paragraph two:
Today I hit 31, and I sat in my room, holding the nearly empty box.
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【答案】
On the morning of my high school graduation, I walked to the box. The box sat quietly at the foot of my bed, as if waiting for me. I opened it, found out the package labeled “graduation” and unwrapped it. A strand of pearls made a sound like a maraca as I drew them from the box. Her note read, “There seemed to be a tradition in my family that when girls graduated from high school, they received a string of pearls. You must be shiny at the ceremony.” As I read, I wanted to fall through the white, lightly textured page and into her arms. Wearing the pearls that afternoon, I accepted my diploma.
Paragraph two:
Today I hit 31, and I sat in my room, holding the nearly empty box. For 20 years I have pulled mothering from the box. When I was a child, opening the next package felt like a treasure hunt. As I grew older, it began to feel like something far more fundamental, her messages meeting me like guideposts in a dark forest. There is no gifts left in the box now, but these letters are a constant reminder that I have already been given what every child, what every human, needs. I have been fiercely, extravagantly, wildly loved. The love is powerful enough to help me carve my life in the next 20 years, and my whole life.
【导语】本文讲述了一个关于母爱的故事。作者的母亲很爱作者，每年都会为作者庆祝生日。在作者3岁时，母亲得了癌症，在作者七岁时，母亲开始为作者准备毕业、婚礼，以及30岁之前的每个生日的礼物和信件。作者的母亲去世后，在作者12岁生日时，她打开了母亲送给她的12岁生日礼物，看着母亲精心准备的礼物，作者感受到了母亲的爱。
第一步：段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“高中毕业那天早上，我走到盒子前。”可知，第一段可描写作者的母亲为作者高中毕业准备了什么礼物及作者的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“今天我31岁了，我坐在房间里，手里拿着一个几乎空了的盒子。”可知，第二段可描写作者回想着母亲送自己的礼物，感受到了母爱的力量。
第二步：续写线索：
打开盒子——看到高中毕业礼物——感受到母爱——回想过去的礼物——礼物对作者的意义——母爱的力量
第三步：词汇激活
【行为类】
①打开：unwrap/unpack
②收到：receive/get
③拥抱某人：fall into one’s arms /hold sb. in one’s arms
【情绪类】
①.不断的提醒：constant reminder/continuous reminder
②.被强烈地爱着：be fiercely loved/be strongly loved
【点睛】
[高分句型1] A strand of pearls made a sound like a maraca as I drew them from the box. (由as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] When I was a child, opening the next package felt like a treasure hunt. (由when引导的时间状语从句)