江苏省苏州市工业园区2020-2022年三年中考一模英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达

江苏省苏州市工业园区2020-2022年三年中考一模英语试卷分类汇编

书面表达

2022年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考英语一模试卷

九、书面表达（本大题共1小题，共25.0分）

1.     2022 年，我们被很多闪光的人物感动：有为国争光的奥运健儿，有抗击疫情的医护人员，有风雨无阻的快递小哥，有兢兢业业的社区工作人员……他们都在各自的工作岗位上奉献着光和热。五一国际劳动节来临之际，学校公众号打算以"My ideal job"为题举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
   要点：
   1.What is your ideal job？
   2.Why do you want to do such a job？（at least 2 points）
   3.How are you going to make it come true？（at least 2 points）
   注意：
   1.所写内容必须涵盖所有要点，并作适当发挥；
   2.词数 100 左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；
   3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
   
   My ideal job
   Everybody has his ideal job._________

2021年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考英语一模试卷

56. 青少年健康成长的社会关注度一直很高。请你根据图片信息和提示以“Tips for teenagers” 为主题，写一篇英文演讲稿，介绍青少年该如何健康快乐地学习和生活。

注意：

1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数90左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Tips for teenagers

Dear all,

Now, more and more people pay attention to the growth of teenagers. Here are some tips for you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope these tips can help you live a healthy life.

2020年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考英语一模试卷

56.为了孩子的成长，父母们付出很多，但越来越多的中学生却觉得与父母很难融洽相处。上周，你们班就’Can parents be friends ?’这—问题在同学中间开展了—次调查，假如你是学生会主席，就调查结果写—篇报告。

注意事项：

1. 词数：100字左右（开头已给，不计入总词数）

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并适当发挥。

Last week I surveyed my classmates about their views on whether parents can be friends. Here is the report.______________________________________________________________________

 参考答案

2022年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考英语一模试卷

My ideal job
Everybody has his ideal job. 【高分句型一】And my ideal job is to be a writer.（引出话题，我的理想工作是什么）
First of all,I am crazy about reading.Ever since I was able to read,I have read thousands of books,including classical Chinese novels and history books.I enjoy myself in the world of literature every time I read.Second,both my teacher and classmates think highly of my writing.And I have won prizes in a few writing competitions.（两点原因）
To achieve my dream,I plan to take online writing courses to improve my writing skills.Also,I keep a diary to write down my thoughts,my feelings and my dreams for the future.Through hard work,I believe I can make it.【高分句型二】（怎样实现理想）（113 words）

【解析】【高分句型一】
First of all,I am crazy about reading.首先，我对阅读很着迷。
 be crazy about 对……很着迷。
【高分句型二】
Through hard work,I believe I can make it.通过努力工作，我相信我能做到。
I believe +宾语从句，表示我相信……。
这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。写作时要结合表格内容对情况进行陈述，之后给出自己的看法和建议，看法和建议需要自主发挥。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
 

2021年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考英语一模试卷

【答案】例文

Tips for teenagers

Dear all,

Now more and more people pay attention to the growth of teenagers. Here are some tips for you.

First, be active in class. This helps to make you feel more confident and improve your ability to express yourself. Also, make sure you get enough sleep at night. Nobody can study well when they are tired.

Moreover, starting your life with good habits can help you shape your future. Get regular exercise, have a healthy diet and keep yourself clean.

Finally, keep your stress under control. You should spend time enjoying life, such as joining a sports team and reading a book. In this way, you can reduce stress.

I hope these tips can help you live a healthy life.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。以“给青少年的建议”为题，写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为五段式，第一段引出主题；第二段到第四段从积极参与课堂，保证充分休息，培养健康习惯，控制压力几个方面提出建议；最后一段表达希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

2020年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考英语一模试卷

【答案】例文

Last week I surveyed my classmates about their views on whether parents can be friends. Here is the report.

45% of the students think that it is impossible to make friends with parents. Because they are so busy with their work that they can’t spare any time for their children. Also, parents are too strict with them, especially in their study.

However, 55% of the students hold the opposite opinion. They think it is possible for their parents to be friends. Their parents often spend much time communicating with them and understand them. What’s more, if they have trouble, they can always turn to their parents for help. Parents often provide them with many valuable suggestions on both their study and their life.

As far as I am concerned, I think as parents, no matter how busy they are, they should care about their children’s study and trouble. Their children need their support and encouragement very much.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求围绕“Can parents be friends ?”这—问题在同学中间开展了—次调查，就调查结果写—篇报告。因为是上周的事情，所以用一般过去时；文章要求写明45%的同学不同意这一观点及其理由，55%的同学同意这一观点及其理由；最后还要表达自己的观点。书写时要注意文句通顺，内容完整。

2.例文点评：本例文采用四段式，结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，说下面是调查的结果；接下来第二段说明45%的同学不同意这一观点的理由；然后第三段说明了55%的同学同意这一观点的理由；最后介绍了自己的观点。文中句型运用准确，文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：be busy with；so…that…；be strict with；spend… doing；what’s more；provide…with…；care about等。

句型：1. 45% of the students think that it is impossible to make friends with parents. 2. Also, parents are too strict with them, especially in their study. 3. Their parents often spend much time communicating with them and understand them. 4. What’s more, if they have trouble, they can always turn to their parents for help.