上海青浦区2022-2020年英语中考一模试题-作文

上海青浦区2022-2020年英语中考一模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2022·上海青浦·统考一模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The best ________ I have ever met”（请以“最美的遇见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。

一场美丽的相遇是生命的恩赐， 是缘分的开始。最美的遇见可以是雨后的彩虹，可以是陪伴的挚友，亦可是成长的鼓励等。请选择一个方面，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。

注意：1.补全作文题目；

2.抄袭试卷中内容不得分；

3.文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息。

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2．（2020·上海青浦·统考一模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Life in 2050”（请以 “2050 年的生活”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

提示：到2050年，我们的生活会是什么样的？请选择下图中(或自拟)1"~2个方面展开描述。

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二、材料作文

3．（2021·上海青浦·统考一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Good Will”（请以“善举”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。）在学习与生活中, 我们会去帮助他人, 也会接受他人的善待。有时候一个善意的举动, 自己也会受益匪浅。请结合你的经历或所见所闻, 谈谈你的感受。

注意：

抄袭试卷中内容不得分。

文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息。

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参考答案：

1．范文：

The best encouragement I have ever met

Life is full of difficulties, so we need to gain encouragement from others.

 Once I made a speech in the school. I tried hard to say out every word clearly. Unfortunately, I was so nervous that I forgot one part of my speech. I wanted to give up. “You are great.” Someone shouted. I suddenly became powerful and completed the speech perfectly. From that time, I have realized that we need encouragement from others.

This is the best encouragement I have ever met.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时首先要补全作文题目，然后根据题目要求，叙述自己的亲身经历——遇见的最好的鼓励，并写出自己的感受。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述故事内容，时态采用一般过去时为主。在描述故事时，场景应描写细致，并且故事发生的起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

2．例文

Life in 2050

Life has changed a lot in 2050. The environment will be better and better. The air is fresher and the water is clearer. In 2050, people will no longer eat traditional food. People will eat a special kind of food in order to stay full for a long time. Science and technology will be highly developed and robots will take the place of human beings. Flying machines will replace today's cars. People won't have to go to school to study. They will study at home through computers.

【详解】1、题干解读：文章要求对2050年的生活的影响，因此时态应用一般将来时态；人称应以第三人称\第一人称为主。

2、写作指导：例文先是一句话点题；然后分开介绍了环境、食物、科技、交通和上学情况。语言流畅，无语法错误。

3．例文

A Good Will

In this world, everyone has a seed of kindness in his heart. If you meet someone who is in trouble, be generous with your kindness and help others.

I remember when I was in Grade Seven, I went on a trip to Qingdao with my parents. While I was swimming in the sea, my parents were playing on the beach. Suddenly, a wave came and I lost my balance. I was washed in the sea. I began to shout for help. Just then, a young man swam towards me. He grabbed me and started pulling me toward the shore. I was saved, but I never knew his name.

Now, if I see a disabled person on the road, I can help him cross the road. If I meet someone who doesn't know the way, I can show him the way. If he or she asks me questions, I should be kind to answer them. That's my little kindness to others, but it is very important to people in need.

Kindness can be passed on. Be kind to others, and they will be kind to you.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“A Good Will”为题，根据所给出的提示内容，结合自己的经历或所见所闻，写一篇短文，谈谈自己的感受。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。