上海浦东新区2022-2020年英语中考一模试题-作文

上海浦东新区2022-2020年英语中考一模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2020·上海浦东新·统考一模）Writing（作文）

Write at least 60 words on the topic "Learn from Yesterday"

回首过往, 在十几年的人生中, 你学习、运动、旅游、交友、玩耍...... 其中你有收获、有遗憾, 会欣喜、会难过....... 请结合发生在你身上的一个事例, 谈谈你从中得到的启示。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息。）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2．（2021·上海浦东新·统考一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My     choice”.（请以“我  的选择”为题，写一篇不少于 60 字的短文。）

人生即是选择。你在生活中一定做过无数次选择，或许是明智的，亦或许是错误的；或许是难忘的，亦或许是遗憾的……请结合你以往的一次选择，谈谈它对你的影响或你的感悟。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名其它相关信息。）

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3．（2022·上海浦东新·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文， 标点符号不占格）

在我们的日常学习生活中，我们会遇到各种各样的问题。当你遇到问题的时候，你会寻求谁的帮助?你一般会用怎样的方式解决遇到的问题? 请结合学习生活中遇到的真实问题，以“My way of solving a problem” 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文

（注意：1. 文章中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

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4．（2022·上海浦东新·统考一模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My choice”. (写一篇关于“我的选择”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格)。

亲爱的同学，在你成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择与志趣相投的同学交朋友；选择做感兴趣的事情；选择做自己从未尝试过的事情……在选择面前，如何做到客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。请你结合自己曾经历过的一件事，谈谈你做了什么选择？为什么做了这个选择？以及这个选择带给你的思考。

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二、书信作文

5．（2022·上海浦东新·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。

假定你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊最近和妈妈发生了争吵，好几天不说话了。为此她非常烦恼，想让你给出出主意。请你根据下面的提示写一封建议信。

1.认真思考争吵的原因；

2.主动和妈妈沟通，说出自己真实的想法，并了解妈妈的真实想法；

3.和妈妈一起寻找解决问题的方法。

注意：

1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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参考答案：

1．例文

Learn from Yesterday

A good student should adopt a positive attitude towards life. In the past, I had a lot of trouble in learning English. I tried many ways to improve it, but I was still poor in my English. I asked my English teacher for help. She said that my hard work would be useful. After a few months, I made great progress in my English. So I know that I should learn from yesterday, I can get useful lessons from my experience. If I learn from the past, I should be positive to life and study.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，写作时要按议论文格式写。在写作时开头介绍好学生应该积极地对待生活；接下来介绍我学习英语的经历；最后介绍我从自己过去的经历中学到的东西。

2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，描述故事时，故事发生的背景、起因和过程等叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

3.高分亮点：

短语：have a lot of trouble in doing sth；be poor in；ask sb for help；make great progress；learn from。

句型：宾语从句that my hard work would be useful；结果状语从句So I know that I should learn from yesterday；条件状语从句If I learn from the past。

2．例文:

My best choice

Everyone has to make different choices in the life. Five years ago, I also made my choice. When I played with my little brother, I broke my mother’s favourite vase. I knew she would be angry. I wanted to lie at first. But soon I changed my idea. I told my mother the truth. To my surprise, my mother praised me instead.

Honesty is valuable. If it is our mistake, we should accept it and then we can correct it. Thus, we can make progress in our life.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于夹叙夹议的文章写作，要通过自己的一段经历，谈谈自己所做的选择对自己的影响或获得的感悟。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自己的一段经历，说明自己做了如何的选择，时态用一般过去时；最后要谈自己的感悟，可以用一般现在时。注意叙述时的完整性，并保证条理清晰。

3．例文

My way of solving a problem

In our daily life, we may meet different kinds of problems. When I meet a problem, I always ask my father for help.

When I was young, I argued with my mother. My father told me to keep calm first. Never say some words to others when you are angry. Then think of a way to solve this problem. My father gave me a meaningful lesson. So if I meet some problems now, I always remember the words that my father told me.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“我解决问题的方式”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时。结合自己的经历，来介绍自己解决问题的方法是什么，写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

4．例文

My choice

Life is full of choices. Last term, my choice was to join a great soccer team or go on my schoolwork.

It’s my dream to play soccer. If I join the team, I will become a great soccer player. And I will become famous and rich. But my caring parents advised me to get an education first. In their opinion, if I join the team right now, I will never go to college.

Thinking about my strengths and weaknesses, I will keep studying at school. In my free time, I will practice soccer as hard as possible.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“My choice”为题，谈谈做了什么选择？为什么做了这个选择？以及这个选择带给你的思考。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段分析两个选择的利弊；第三段介绍自己做了什么选择以及原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

5．例文

Dear Su Shan,

    I’m sorry to hear that you have such problem. It’s common to have different opinions with our parents. First you should think about the reason why you argue with your mom. Then you should apologize to her, because we should respect the old. What’s more, you should face-to-face communicate with your mom. Tell her your feelings and ask her feelings. You can find out the key to solve this problem with your mom. I think your mom will understand you.

    I think my suggestions can help you. Look forward to you reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对好朋友苏珊和妈妈的问题提出针对性的建议。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。根据提示内容，从思考争吵的原因，主动和妈妈沟通，寻找解决问题的方法等方面提出建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。