高中英语高考Unit 5 Launching Your Career 课件

Unit 5　Launching Your Career主题语境：人与自我(职业规划)【话题词汇】1.appoint v. 任命，委任2.dismiss v. 解雇3.hire vt. 雇用；租用4.recommend vt. 推荐5.promote v. 晋升；促进6.undertake vt. 承担；从事7.train vt. 培训；训练8.easy­going adj. 随和的9. well­paid adj. 薪水高的10.vacant adj. 空缺的11.skilled adj. 熟练的；有技能的12.certificate n. 证书13.outspoken adj. 直言的，坦诚的14.part­time adj. 兼职的15.competent adj. 能胜任的16.diligent adj. 勤奋的17.awarding adj. 有回报的18.considerate adj. 考虑周到的19.responsibility n. 责任，负责20.welfare n. 幸福；福利21.salary n. 工资；薪水22.income n. 收入；所得23.unemployment n. 失业【话题短语】1.apply for 申请2.voluntary work 志愿者工作3.devote a bit of one's time to... 为……抽出一点时间4.show kindness 表达善意5.working experience 工作经验6.be qualified/fit for 适合，胜任7.take on 雇用；承担8.graduate from 毕业于9.get/be promoted 获得晋升10.have a talent for... 有……才能11.have a good command of 精通；通晓12.organisational ability 组织能力13.communication skills 交流技能14.have an advantage over... 比……有优势15.make preparations for... 为……做准备16.get along well with... 与……相处得好【话题佳句】1.And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.我写信是为了申请成为我们学校英语协会的志愿者。2.I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through my resume and make necessary changes.如果你能拿出一些时间仔细检查我的简历并做必要的修改，我将不胜感激。3.I have written my application letter and my resume, which are enclosed in the attachment.我已经写了申请信和简历，并附在了附件里。【话题练习】1.Anyone who wants to apply for the job must meet the following requirements.任何想申请这份工作的人必须满足以下要求。2.I'd appreciate it if you would offer me the golden opportunity I'm always longing for. I'm looking forward to your early reply.如果你给我机会，我会感激不尽。盼望你早日答复。基础回顾课堂讲解随堂练习话题与高考写作基础回顾Ⅰ.重点单词1．________ n. 天资；天赋2．________ n. 律师3．________ vt. 组装；装配vt.&vi. 收集；聚集；集合4．________ vt.&vi. 弹起；上下晃动n. 弹性；弹跳；活力5．________ n. 胸部；乳房6．_________ n. 手腕；腕关节7．____________ n. 新郎8．________ n. 债务；欠债9．________ n. 简介；概述；侧面轮廓vt. 扼要介绍；概述；写简介aptitudelawyerassemblebouncebreastwristbridegroomdebtprofile10．________ n. 侦探；警探11．________ n. 庄园；住宅区；工业区12．________ n. 密探；间谍vi. 从事间谍活动vt. 突然看见；发现13．________ n. 公平；公正；合理14．________ vt. 控告；控诉；谴责15．________ adj. 贪婪的；贪心的16．________ n. 社会主义者17．________ vt. 把……奉献给18．_____________ n. 书法；书写；笔记detectiveestatespyjusticeaccusegreedysocialistdedicatehandwriting19．____________________ vt.&vi. 缝制；缝；做针线活20．________ n. 油炸食品vt.&vi. 油炸；油炒；油煎21．________ n. 优先事项；首要的事；优先22．________ n. 资金；财政；金融vt. 提供资金23．________ n. 合格证书；证明24．________ n. 沙漠；荒漠vt. 遗弃；舍弃；放弃25．________ vt. 获得；购得sew (sewed—sewed/sewn)frypriorityfinancecertificatedesertacquireⅡ.拓展单词1．law n．法律；法学；诉讼→________ n．律师→________ adj.法律许可的；合法的2．participate vi.参加；参与→________ n. 参与者；参加者→____________ n．参加；参与 3．orient vt.使适应；使面对→________ adj.东方的；光彩夺目的→________ adj.东方的；东方人的→________ n．方向；定向；适应；情况介绍4．account vt.&vi.解释；导致；报账→________ n．会计师5．just adj.公正的；公平的→________ n．公平；正义；司法→________ vt.&vi.为……辩护；证明合法lawyerlawfulparticipantparticipationorientorientalorientationaccountantjusticejustify6．accuse vt.控告；控诉；谴责→________ n．控告；控诉→________ n．被告→________ n．原告7．greed n．贪婪→________ adj.贪婪的，贪心的→________ adv.贪婪地 ，贪心地→________ n．贪心；贪婪8．receive vt & vi收到；接收；接待→________ n．收据；接收→________ n．接待；接收；招待会；→___________ n. 接待员；传达员9．society n．社会；社团→________ adj.社会的；社交的→________ n．社会主义者；adj.社会主义的→________ n．社会主义10．dedicate vt.把……奉献给→________ adj. 专注的；献身的→________ n．奉献；现身11．finance n．财政，财政学；金融 ; vt.&vi.负担经费，供给……经费；筹集资金→________ adj. 财政的；金融的；________ adv. 财政上；金融上12．acquire vt.获得；购得→________ adj. 后天的；已获得的；已成习惯的→________ n．习得；获得；收购accusationaccusedaccusegreedygreedilygreedinessreceiptreceptionreceptionistsocialsocialistsocialismdedicateddedicationfinancialfinanciallyacquiredacquisition联想拓展-­ant表示职业，意为“……人；……者”①participant n. 参与者②accountant n. 会计③assistant n. 助手④applicant n. 申请者⑤contestant n. 参赛选手⑥immigrant n. 移民 -­fy表示动词，意为“使……”①justify vt.&vi. 为……辩护；证明合法②beautify vt. 美化③clarify vt. 澄清；阐明④identify vt. 确定；鉴别⑤classify vt. 分类⑥simplify vt. 简化Ⅲ.核心短语1．________________ 跳来跳去；蹦来蹦去2．_________________ 起步前的优势3．_________________ 抽屉柜4．________________ 房地产经纪人5．________________ 得出结论6．________________ 关怀；照料；处理7．________________ 灭蚤颈圈8.__________________ 职业能力测试bounce aroundhead starta chest of drawer(real) estate agentcome to a conclusionattend toflee collarcareer aptitude tests9．_________________ 各种各样的10．_________________ 对……热爱 _________________ 对……热爱11．________________ 坐落于……12．________________ 在……方面有经验13．________________ 热衷于做某事14．________________ 为……而准备15．_________________ 适合做某事a variety ofbe passionate abouthave a passion forbe located inhave experience inbe keen to do sth.be meant forbe suited to do sth.联想拓展be＋adj.＋about 短语小结①be passionate about 对……热爱②be enthusiastic about 对……热爱③be curious about 对……好奇④be positive about 对……积极⑤be anxious about 对……焦虑⑥be particular about 对……挑剔 “come to” 短语荟萃①come to a conclusion 得出结论②come to an agreement 达成一致③come to life 苏醒过来④come to light 真相大白⑤come to sb's rescue 营救某人⑥when it comes to... 当提及……Ⅳ.重点句型1．This is because... 这是因为……。________________ (这是因为)your career is a very important part of who you are.2．one way to do sth is to do sth. 一种做……事情的方法是去……________________________________________________________________________ (一个最有效的知晓潜在职业道路的方式是完成) a “career aptitude test”. 3．wish 后的宾语从句要用虚拟语气I wish I ________________ (曾经想过) more about what I really wanted to be. This is becauseOne of the most effective way to get some insight on a possible career path is to completehad thought课堂讲解高频考点探究Ⅰ.核心词汇1．debt n．债务；借款【典型例句】The company announced a series of measures to raise cash and reduce debt.这家公司宣布了一系列筹措现金、减少债务的措施。(1)be in heavy debt 负债累累(2)get out of debt 摆脱债务(3)get into debt 负债(4)pay off one's debts 还清某人的债务【拓展延伸】“in＋n.”短语大聚会①in disguise　　伪装②in shock 震惊③in debt 负债，欠账④in sight 能看到，在视线之内⑤in surprise 吃惊地⑥in danger 处于危险当中⑦in trouble 处于困境中【练透考点】完成句子①Most of his adult life has been a losing struggle against ________ (债务) and misfortune.②With the problem worsening，it is going to be a tough test for EU to help Greece __________ (摆脱债务)．③What made him happy was that after all these years he at last ________________.(偿还清所有债务)debtout of debtpaid off all his debts2．participant n．参与者；参加者【教材原句】One popular test asks the participants to grade their preferences for a variety of work tasks. 一个很流行的测试是让参与者给各种各样的工作任务按照偏爱程度打分。(1)participate vi. 参加；参与participate with sb. in sth. 同某人一起参与某事participate in (doing) sth. 参与做某事take part injoin in 参加……(2)participation n. 参与；分担；共享【词汇升级】低频表达：I am going to join in the English speech contest to be held in July this year.高频表达：I am going to participate in the English speech contest to be held in July this year.【练透考点】单句语法填空①Any student who is interested in this activity is welcome ________________ (participate)．②We encouraged anyone to participate in the singing competition and the ________ who wins will be given a gift as prize for the ________.(participate)③That was the first time that I ________________ (participate) in the exchange study programme，which not only broaden my horizon but also improve my confidence.to participate　participantparticipationhad participated【佳句背诵】As far as I'm concerned，it will also help you fit in with your classmates if you participate in a variety of after­school activities.我认为，如果你能参加各种各样的课外活动，这有助于你融入你的同学之中。3．dedicate vt.把……奉献给【典型例句】Teachers are so concerned with achievement and “teaching to the test” that they have little time to dedicate to “exploratory learning”， the report said. 该报告指出，由于教师过分看重成绩和“应试教育”，他们极少会投入精力致力于“探究性学习”的教学。(1)dedicate...to... 把……奉献给； 把……专注于dedicate oneself/one's life to 致力于；献身于(2)dedicated adj. 专注的；献身的be dedicated to 专心于；致力于(3)dedication n. 献身；奉献【拓展延伸】表示 “专心于；致力于” 的短语还有：put one's heart into sth. be devoted to sth.be lost/buried in sth.be absorbed in sth.focus/concentrate one's attention on sth.【练透考点】单句语法填空①He ________ (dedicate) his whole life to helping the poor and sheltering the homeless.②The old teacher devoted all his life to educating his students and he was admired for his _________ (dedicate) to the education cause.③You will never gain success unless you are fully dedicated ________ your work.【佳句背诵】As young people search for meaning in their lives, their minds are often open to all possible choices about what to believe, how to live, and what, if anything, to dedicate themselves to. 当年轻人探索他们的生命意义时，他们的心灵往往向一切可能的选择敞开，像是关于信仰什么，如何生活，以及——如果一定要这样说的话——为了什么而献身。dedicateddedicationto4．accuse vt.控告；控诉；谴责【教材原句】There was a huge debate about whether the reporter should be accused of spying on the star couple.对于是否要控告这名记者监视这对明星夫妇有一场激烈争论。(1)accuse sb.of (doing) sth.＝charge sb.with (doing) sth. 因(做)某事指控某人(2)the accused/accuser 被告/原告(3)accusation n. 控告；控诉；指控【拓展延伸】“v.＋sb.＋of＋sth.”结构大集合①inform sb. of sth. 告知某人某事②warn sb. of sth. 警告某人某事③cure sb. of sth. 治好某人某病④remind sb. of sth. 提醒某人某事⑤suspect sb. of sth. 怀疑某人……⑥rob sb. of sth. 抢劫某人某物⑦convince sb. of sth. 使某人相信……⑧accuse sb. of sth. 指控某人……【练透考点】单句语法填空①A footballer ________ (accuse) of taking money for deliberately not scoring goals so as to let the other team win.②For lack of enough evidence, the ________ (accuse) was allowed to go free.③A piece of bad news has been spread that the rich man has been accused ________ doing good things only to achieve a good reputation.【佳句背诵】Have you ever had a case where someone accused your journalists of getting the wrong end of the stick?你们有没有过这样的情况： 别人控告你们的记者， 说他/她们的报道失实呢？was accusedaccusedof5．attend vt.出席；参加；照顾；护理 ；vi.专心；留意【教材原句】We are building a team of keen young people to help us attend to hundreds of students from all over the world.我们正在组建一个由热情的年轻人组成的团队来照料数百名来自全球各地的学生。(1)attend a meeting/lecture/wedding/class　　参加会议/听讲座/参加婚礼/上课(2)attend on/upon sb. 伺候某人；照顾某人attend to 处理；倾听；专心于；照顾(3)attendant n. 服务员；随员，陪从attendee n. 出席者；在场者(4)attendance n. 出席；到场；考勤【练透考点】①单句语法填空I ________ (attend) Mary's wedding last Saturday，where I ran into one of my university classmates.②能力提升——句式升级普通表达：[2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达]I have an important class meeting to attend，so I can't accompany you to the book store.高级表达： _________________________________，I can't accompany you to the book store.(with 复合结构)attendedWith an important class meeting to attend③一词多义　写出下列句中attend的含义a．Devoted to her work，she had no time to attend her children.________b．You know，my uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting.________c．I can't go out with you tonight because I have an urgent thing to attend to.________【佳句背诵】Knowing that you show great interest in Chinese culture，I'd like to invite you to attend the exhibition with me.知道您对中国文化感兴趣，我想邀请您与我一起参加展览。照顾；护理出席；参加处理Ⅱ.核心短语6．come to a conclusion 得出结论【教材原句】So I come to a conclusion that if you want a great career, you need to commit yourself to something meaningful.所以我得出了一个结论，如果你想有一份伟大的事业，你就必须要投身于有意义的事情。(1)arrive at/come to/draw/reach a conclusion得出结论(2)in conclusion 最后；总之(3)to conclude 总之【思维拓展】“总之” 结构大集合in conclusion　to sum up　in summary　to summarizeall in all　in generalon the whole　generally speaking【练透考点】单句语法填空①________ conclusion，everyone should make contributions to protecting the environment.②It was ________ that he didn't tell us the truth. I also came to the ________ that he lied.(conclude)③When the group discussion is nearing its end，make sure ________ (conclude) it with important points.Inconcludedconclusionto conclude【佳句背诵】In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage，protect the present water resources and explore potential (潜在的) ones scientifically.总之，全世界的人们应该意识到水资源短缺的现状，保护现有的水资源并科学地开发潜在资源。7．be meant for为……而准备【教材原句】However, it is important to remember that they are only meant for guidance.但是，请记住，它们仅仅是用作指导，这很重要。be meant/designed/prepared for sth. 为……而准备mean to do sth. 打算做某事mean doing... 意味着……by this means 通过这种方法by means of 用……办法；借助……by all means 一定，务必；当然可以by no means 决不，一点也不(位于句首时，句子用部分倒装)a means of communication 一种通讯/交流工具【练透考点】单句语法填空①Some researchers point out that daydreaming is a ________ (mean) of relaxation.②________ no means is punishment a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.③He said mildly to me that he didn't mean ________ (upset) me.meansByto upsetⅢ.典型句式精析8．because引导表语从句【教材原句】This is because your career is a very important part of who you are.(P50)这是因为你的职业是你很重要的一部分。【句式分析】because 除了可以引导原因状语从句以外，还可以引导表语从句，主句中系动词要用be动词，用于强调原因，一般译为“这是……的原因”【误区释疑】三个句型做好区分：This is because... 这是因为……(强调原因)The reason why...is that... ……的原因是……This is why... 这就是……的原因(强调结果)【练透考点】单句语法填空①That is the reason ________ he didn't come to my birthday party yesterday.②Tom was absent­minded in class. This is ________ he stayed up late last night to watch the final game of the World Cup.③The reason ________ he explained to me for his absence was that he caught a bad cold.whybecausethat/which一句多译她越来越胖的原因是吃太多的垃圾食品。④She is becoming fatter and fatter. This is ________ she eats too much junk food.⑤She eats too much junk food. That's ________ she is becoming fatter and fatter.⑥________________________________________________________________________ she eats too much junk food.becausewhyThe reason why she is becoming fatter and fatter is that9．wish 的宾语从句【教材原句】I wish I had thought more about what I really wanted to be. (课本P50)我真希望我当初能想想我到底想干什么啊。【句式分析】wish后面的宾语从句一般用虚拟语气，表示一种不可能实现的愿望，其谓语动词构成形式如下表：I wish (that)I were a bird and could fly freely in the sky.我希望我是只小鸟，能在天空自由飞翔。When you phoned me, I was having a meeting；how I wish I had answered your call.当你给我打电话的时候，我正在开会。我多么希望当时能接电话啊。【思维拓展】虚拟语气中表示“希望”的句型(1)if型虚拟语气，如果……，就……Secondly, if I were you, I would take a walk in the evening with my friends.第二，如果我是你，我会在傍晚和朋友一起散步。If I were you，I would certainly make good use of the time to improve my performance at school and prepare myself well for the future.要是我是你，我肯定会充分利用时间来提高成绩，为未来做好充分准备。(2)wish型虚拟语气，希望……I wish (that) I had met that film star yesterday.我多希望昨天见到了那个影星。(3)if only型虚拟语气，要是……就好了；但愿……If only I could go back and reset my goals.要是我能够回到过去重订目标该有多好。【语境速测】单句语法填空①I wish there ________________ (be) too many students in a class, so that everyone could have a chance to voice their opinion.②I wish that you could ________ (抓住) this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.③If only the whole family could ________ (unit) during the Spring Festival this year!④If I ________ (be) her staff，I really wouldn't tolerate being scolded by her every day.wouldn't begraspbe unitedwere随堂练习Ⅰ.高考能力同步化——单句语法填空1．[2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]95 undergraduate women were individually invited into a lab to ostensibly (表面上) participate ________ a study about movie viewership.2．[2020·江苏高考]I began a second ________ (draw) for more general discoveries: new cave system discovered with dozens of nameless species，four hundred species of bacteria found in the human stomach.3．[2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]After high school, Jennifer ________ (attend) a local technical college, working to pay her tuition (学费), because there was no extra money set aside for a college education.4．[2019·全国卷Ⅰ]Above 4,000 meters is the highland ________ (沙漠): gravel (砾石)，stones and rocks.5．[2019·全国卷Ⅰ]And when your ________ (employ) begin adding smiling emojis to their business communication, you'll know you have succeeded in improving your work culture. indrawerattendeddesertemployees6．Chris was a true hero in his ________ (dedicate) and commitment to bringing the important news and the stories of those less fortunate to us all from far off places.7．Is learning a foreign language a question of learning new skills or a question of ________ (acquire) new knowledge? 8．Once upon a time, in a beautiful mountain inn, there was a ________ (greed) old innkeeper who was always thinking about money. 9．There is a good social life in the village，and I wish I ____________ (have) a second chance to become more involved.10．On display are most of our products, such as silk, ________ (wool) knitwear, cotton piece goods, and garments. dedicationacquiringgreedyhadwoolenⅡ.必备知识试题化——完成句子1．There is no doubt that the best prize in life is the opportunity ___________________________________.毫无疑问，生命最好的奖品就是有机会从事值得奉献的事业。2．By analyzing the data of the experiment, the author ________________ students' attitude to English has a change and their English scores can be improved in the cooperative learning class. 通过数据的分析，作者最后得出结论，即学生对英语的学习态度通过合作学习有了很大改变，并且他们的成绩有了很大提高。to dedicate to a cause worthy of dedicationdrew a conclusion that3．I wish ________________________________， but that's for you to decide. 我希望你和我们一起回华盛顿，但由你自己决定。4．Most people say they are happy, but perhaps ________________ they are expected to be. 大多数人声称自己幸福，或许只是因为他们希望如此而已。5．I think _____________________________ is to read English novels. 我认为扩大词汇量的最好方法是读英文小说。you would come back to Washington with usthat is becausethe best way to enlarge your vocabularyⅢ.教材语篇高考化——语法填空阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Your career plays a vital role in your life and defines who you are, so it is worthwhile to take time to think about it.You'd better start 1.________________ (consider) your future career when you are still at school. 2.________， this is not always easy, for you may just have a few ideas 3.________ (bounce) around in your head. considering/to considerHoweverbouncingOne of the best way to get some insight 4.________ an possible career path is to complete a “career aptitude test”， the result of 5.________ will tell you about your advantages and interests and give you advice on the career you may be 6.________ (suit) to. There are a large number of different kinds of career aptitude tests, some for your personal attitudes and interests, 7.________ others focusing on asking you to rate different kinds of work scenarios. After finishing the test, you may get a list of career 8.________ (suggest). However useful career aptitude tests may be, you need to remember that they are only meant for 9.________ (guide). So what's the secret to a good career? The answer is finding something that you are 10.________ (true) passionate about!onwhichsuitedwhilesuggestionsguidancetruly话题与高考写作[2021·山东省实验中学高三期中考试]阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。A long time ago, when I had long brown hair and fewer wrinkles—actually so long ago that I nearly had no wrinkles—I got my first job in a television station. You have to remember, that was in 1975.I had struggled into the local newsroom, but there were not many women on TV at that time, and I had gently reminded the management of that. I had no experience on television, but with a sigh, the news director admitted he might be able to make me, a 25­year­old young woman, into a TV reporter.And what if he couldn't? No big deal. I had no contract, and my salary was $8000 a year. If anyone who desperately needed a mentor (导师), it was me. I had no idea how to report, write or shoot a story for television news. And just as scary as that, no one seemed eager to teach me. As a result, I now admit, every night for two weeks or so, I went home sobbing. Terrified and overwhelmed, I had no idea what I was supposed to do, let alone how to be successful at it. It looked pretty unpromising for my TV career.Then one day, I was assigned a story on health care. I thought that would certainly be the end of it. Not only did I know nothing about TV, but also I knew nothing about the new health care law. There was no way this was going to work. I felt lost and confused. But then I knew I got assigned to work with an experienced photographer named Walt. He'd been around since he became a professional.Stand here. Say this. Call this guy. Ask this question. Here's how to hold the microphone. Here's how to use your hands. Here's how to control your voice. Here's how to look into the camera. For maybe three weeks, he taught me at every moment. And soon after, I realized, “Hey, I love this. And I can do it well.” And I've been a TV reporter ever since. Without my mentor, I couldn't have made it. I promised myself that I would pass it along.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。One day, a newcomer, Linda, arrived at my TV station.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Two years later, Linda became an excellent editor in our TV station, and she may provide valuable advice for my new book.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step 1　品读语篇　抓住要点Who：____________________________________________________What：___________________________________________________Where: ________________________________________________________When: ____________________________________________________________人称： ________ ; 时态： ________ ；何种细节描写为主：心理□ ；动作□；语言□；表情□；环境□；外貌□Mr. Walt; the author; LindaMr. Walt, like a mentor, taught the author how to be a qualified reporter.the local newsroomLinda was new in the newsroom第一人称一般过去时Step 2　审题构思　研读首句Para. 1: One day, a newcomer, Linda, arrived at my TV station.1．据第一段开头关键词和原文可知，本段应该描写 ________________________________________。Para. 2: Two years later, Linda became an excellent editor in our TV station, and she may provide valuable advice for my new book.2．据第二段开头关键词可知，本段应该描写_________________________________________________。作者如同当年Author 帮助她一般帮助了新人LindaLinda如何帮助作者编辑新书Step 3　斟酌打磨　丰富句式1．精挑细选——核心词汇想周全①________________　　　　热情②___________________________ 给……留下深刻印象③________________ 熟悉④________________ 取得巨大进步⑤___________________ 表达感谢passionleave a deep impression on sb.be accustomed tomake great progressexpress my appreciation2．闪耀登场——句式升级是亮点句式翻译：①我决定成为她的导师，就像当年Walt先生做的一样，许诺要不遗余力地帮助她指导她成为一个优秀的编辑。I decided to be her mentor just like Walt did to me，and promised to spare no effort to help her and instruct her to be an excellent editor.(用非谓语作伴随状语)→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I decided to be her mentor just like Walt did to me, promising to spare no effort to help her and instruct her to be an excellent editor. ②尽管琳达没有经验，但是她进步很大也展示出对工作的热情。Although Linda was unexperienced, she made great progress and showed her dedication to her job.(用倒装句)→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Unexperienced as Linda was, she made great progress and showed her dedication to her job.Step 4　逻辑衔接　连句成文参考范文：One day, a newcomer, Linda, arrived at my TV station.The instant I saw her, her passion and confidence left a deep impression on me. Confused and lost, at first, she was quiet not accustomed to the job as an editor and failed to make a head start. So I decided to be her mentor just like Walt did to me, promising to spare no effort to help her and instruct her to be an excellent editor. Unexperienced as Linda was, she made great progress under my guidance and showed her dedication to her job. Once in a while, it reminded me of the time I spent with Walt, which inspired me to write a book about my career and my fellow colleagues.Two years later, Linda became an excellent editor in our TV station, and she might provide valuable advice for my new book.It was a book about my life in the TV station, aimed at expressing my appreciation to Mr. Walt as well as inspiring all those young women who worked hard and wanted to make a difference to the world. Deeply moved by it, Linda tried her best to polish the language. On the day the book came out, I thanked Linda with gratitude, but Linda told me that she would never forget my help and would like to pass it along.读后续写专题之七　润色文采　完美亮卷读后续写多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。因为该题型具有一定的开放性，不仅要发挥想象力、创造性思维构思情节，注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等，还要对文章进行润色，尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用修辞手法，以增加文章的亮点。一、词汇1．注意区分同义词、近义词的细微差异。a little boy小男孩(侧重年龄小) a small boy小男孩(侧重体型小)rest room 厕所(不是休息室)What a shame! 多可惜，真遗憾！(不是真可耻)2．恰当使用限定词用词准确，从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度，这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词，以避免观点的绝对化，从而提高说服力和可信度；或根据需要加以强调，增强感染力。He is the top student in our class.→He is one of the top students in our class.He is the teacher who knows French in our school.→He is the only one of the teachers who knows French in our school.3．使用较正式的书面语，避开口语化的表达。This is the best hotel you can find here.You can't find a better hotel here.或Nowhere else can you find a better hotel.二、句式1．恰当运用连词和句型，变简单句为并列句或复合句。Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.→It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future，though it is unlikely to be true.2．借用关键词汇(介词，不定式等)压缩句子长度，提升句子品位。The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom，a bathroom，and a kitchen in it.The flat has an area of 25 square metres with a bedroom，a bathroom and a kitchen.3．转换语态，主动变被动。Someone saw him studying hard in his study.→He was seen studying hard in his study.4．运用倒装，调整语序。The scholar didn't write a single paper the whole term.→Not a single paper did the scholar write the whole term.The rain came down and the umbrellas went up.→Down came the rain and up went the umbrellas. 5．巧妙强调，增强震撼力。He didn't realize his mistake until the whole case came to light.→It was not until the whole case came to light that he realized his mistake.You must write to me when you get there.→Do remember to write to me when you get there.6．感叹、省略，精炼有力。Time flies like an arrow.→How time flies!Look out for cars when you are crossing the street.→Look out for cars when crossing the street.7．虚拟语气，娓娓道来。You didn't take my advice，so you failed in the exam.→If you had taken my advice，you wouldn't have failed in the exam.8．非谓语动词，提升品位。They sang and laughed as they went back to school.→Singing and laughing，they went back to school.9．运用插入语，活泼跳脱。I think the book is well worth reading.→The book，in my opinion，is well worth reading.10．格言警句，入情入理。(1)Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。(2)No pains, no gains.没有付出就没有收获。(3)Constant dripping wears away a stone.水滴石穿，绳锯木断。(4)Care and diligence bring luck.谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。(5)Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.天才不过是勤奋而已。(6)Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。(7)Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母。(8)No rose without a thorn.没有不带刺的玫瑰。(9)There is no royal road to learning.书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。(10) Success belongs to the persevering.坚持就是胜利。三、修辞手法1．比喻(like, as, as...as, as if, of, compared to, be similar to等)The scenery along the journey is just like a breath－taking landscape painting.沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。The smile on her face was as vibrant as the sun on a summer day.她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。Her hair grew greyer and greyer, as if (it were) covered with snow and frost.他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。2．拟人Fear seized/swallowed him.恐惧把他吞噬了。The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. 微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。Birds on the tree are singing a beautiful song.树上的小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。3．夸张I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。My heart broke in about a million pieces.我的心成了碎片。I almost laughed my head off.我都快笑死了。正是这些语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性，让故事更加立体饱满。考生在写作练习中要多次修改，精益求精，使得续写段落在各个语言层次的表达风格上和原文保持一致，达到水乳交融的效果。多积累、勤练习，定会收到满意的效果。四、学以致用阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。[2020年浙江卷读后续写改写]“I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy，” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪) get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it，” he said. “I'll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn't.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up” asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy，” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let's get a little dog for Poppy.”It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．续写部分分为两段， 每段的开头语已为你写好。Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写的部分写作片段：1．初写①Poppy was fascinated by the adorable puppy.②She stared at him feverishly. ③Then she bounced around with energy on the soft pads.润色：Fascinated by the adorable puppy, Poppy stared at him feverishly, bouncing around with energy on the soft pads.2．初写①Poppy Spotted the puppy. ②She was overjoyed.③Her eyes became mellow and affectionate. 润色：Spotting the puppy, Poppy was overjoyed, with her eyes becoming mellow and affectionate. 3．初写：Poppy stared at the little dog. The little dog also stared at her, too. The poppy shared her dinner and her favorite toy with the little dog.润色：Poppy stared at the little dog in curiosity, wagging her tail in a cheerful spirit to show her welcome. The little dog also stared at her cautiously with his crystal­blue eyes which were so adorable and then let out a soft bark as if to greet Poppy. After a brief sniffing, the two dogs seemed to enjoy each other's company, barking, chasing each other around the living room happily. Poppy even shared her dinner and her favorite toy with the little dog.4．翻译：令父母开心的是这只大眼睛小狗的到来成功地为这个一直闷闷不乐的Poppy 带来了欢乐。初写：To the parents' delight, the arrival of the puppy brought happiness to Poppy.润色：To the parents' delight, the arrival of the puppy with big eyes successfully brought happiness to Poppy who had been unhappy for a long time.5．润色之后的读后续写Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppy stared at the little dog in curiosity, wagging her tail in a cheerful spirit to show her welcome. The little dog also stared at her cautiously with his crystal­blue eyes which were so adorable and then let out a soft bark as if to greet Poppy. After a brief sniffing, the two dogs seemed to enjoy each other's company, barking, chasing each other around the living room happily. Poppy even shared her dinner and her favorite toy with the little dog. To the parents' delight, the arrival of the puppy with big eyes successfully brought happiness to Poppy who had been unhappy for a long time.A few weeks later，the boy arrived home from university. For several weeks he had been picturing Poppy's lonely and miserable life and exhilarated eyes upon seeing him. Entering the house, however, he was surprised to find playing so cheerfully on the floor were just his Poppy and another dog, completely absorbed in their happy world. Then he felt a gentle pat on his shoulder. It was mom with a smile, “Amazing they get along so well and the once energetic Poppy came back again.” Instantly, moments of loneliness in the university flashed across his mind. “I should also learn to get along with others and adapt to new environment, just like them，” he murmured.