专题10 书面表达-备考中考英语一模分项讲解和真题练习(江苏专用)
展开专题10 书面表达-备考中考英语一模分项讲解和真题练习(江苏专用)
写作五大步骤:
Step1: 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。主题是文章所要表达的中心,是文章的灵魂主宰。如果审不清主题,就有可能出现“下笔千言,离题万里”的情况。
Step2: 选材
材料必须为主题服务,只有平时多观察、多学习、多积累,才能保证材料充分、详实。在具备充足的材料的基础上,要学会去粗取精,去伪存真。此外,还要分清主次与详略,做到该详则详,该略则略,详略得当。
Step3: 列提纲
列提纲时不必过于详细,可以根据题目要求,考虑你的文章分几段,或者分几个层次,每段的大意是什么,
Step4: 写全文
写作时尽量做到一鼓作气,一气呵成。一定要切题,抓住要点。题目要求的内容一定要写进去,以保证内容的完整。写作时要注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。书写时要多套用句型,多用短句。可以防止汉语式英语错误的产生。在写不同题材和体裁时,所用的句式、时态及用词均有所不同。
Step5: 检查修改
好文章是改出来的。要提高英语写作水平,除了准确遣词造句、严谨布局外,文章的修改也是很重要的一步。文章写好后,要经过反复修改润色,才能措辞准确、句子流畅,结构严谨,因此修改文章是提高写作水平的有效方法。
作文正文部分句型:
Eating too much meat is bad for your health.
It is bad for us to spend too much time playing computer games.
It is a good idea to do some sports.
It is important to relax from our busy work.
If you are interested in dancing, you can join in our dancing club.
I have trouble in learning English
In order to speak English better, you'd better talk with your friends in English more often.
It is good for us to read more books.
We should stop people from cutting down trees.
It is our duty to save energy.
As we know, students should learn how to get on well with others
First of all, we should respect others.
Second, it is important to communicate with others.
Finally, we should be kind to others.
When other people are in trouble, we should offer them some help.
作文结尾部分句式:
健康类
1.It is very important for us to stay healthy.
2.All of us need such a balanced diet.
3.How important the health is!
朋友类
1.What a nice boy /girl he/she is!
2.It is my pleasure to make friends with him.
3.I will cherish our friendship forever.
学习类
1.It is very important to learn English.
2.If you are interested in learning English, you will find something funny.
3.It is not only necessary,but also interesting to learn.
社团类
1.What a funny club it is!
2.Why not join us? You will have a good time!
3.It is a good relax way for us to take part in this club.
保护环境类
1.Earth is our home, we must protect it.
2.It is important to save our Earth. It is in danger.
3.There are much pollution in our daily life, we should stop polluting.
偶像类
1.What a prefect man he is!
2.He is so excellent that we should learn from him.
3.How handsome he is!
作文中的过渡词:
表示时间顺序的:then 然后, now 现在, later 然后
表示程序、动作过程的:firstly , first of all 首先, next 接下来, at first 起初, at last 最终
表示递进的:what’s more、 besides、moreover 并且 what is worse 更糟糕的是
表示解释和说明:for example 例如, believe it or not不管你信不信, to tell you the truth 告诉你实话, that is (to say) 那就是说, according to this 根据这些
表示对比、比较:on the other hand 另一方面, on the contrary相反的
表示总结关系的:in a word, in short总而言之
总之,要做好书面表达,需要大家把握以下几个原则:细读提示,抓要点:选择句型,准表达;确定线索,巧组合;适当发挥,保完整;规范书写,争高分;细查全文,除笔误。
【一模真题详解】
【镇江市2022年中考英语一模试题】
七、书面表达(共 1 题;满分 15 分)
66. 假如你是李华。你在某英文网站看到一则招聘中国志愿者的广告。请根据该广告中所提供志愿者项目,结合你的实际情况选择其中的一个项目并给项目负责人写一份email,表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望,并阐述理由,
Project One
Place: A small village in a poor area of China Activities:
① teach children English
②visit the old people’s home
③work on the farm
Project Two
Place: A school in Japan Activities:
①set up a culture exchange center
②give Chinese lessons
③play games with Japan children
要求:
1. 邮件中必须包含招聘广告中的信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文章不少于 90 个词。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范(
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. I’m willing to go to a small village in the west of China. I know something about China. I will be glad to take part in the Project1. I have been good at English since I was a student, I’m also willing to be a teacher to teach children English. In my opinion, helping people in need is meaningful. I can help people work on the farm because both my father and my mother are farmers. I can do a lot of work on the farm. Also, I can visit the old people’s home to help the old wash clothes and clean the house and so on. It’s meaningful for me to do something for others.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一封电子邮件,主要是选择其中一个项目进行应聘志愿者。项目一的邮件中应包括:教学生英语;拜访老人的家;在农场工作。项目二应包括:建立一个文化交流中心;教汉语课;和日本孩子做游戏。不管选哪个项目,要点缺一不可。写作时还应注意承接开头和结尾。写作时以第一人称进行叙述,且注意时态为一般现在时;写作时围绕主题,思路清晰,语言流畅,表达完整。
【宜兴市树人中学2022年中考英语一模试题】
九、书面表达(本大题共20分)
85. 随着第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会在北京的胜利举行,中国再一次成为世界关注的焦点。为了让国外友人更好地了解中国,21世纪英文报开辟了 “Cities in China”的专栏,鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。假如你是张华,请你选择中国的一个城市,根据下列流程图完成一篇100词左右的征文。
注意事项:1.短文须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.括号中提供的信息为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3.词数在100个左右,短文开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China.
Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
【解析】题目要求根据提示要点,选择中国的一座城市进行介绍,包括城市的一些特色以及喜欢这个城市的原因等,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,本文应该用第二人称、第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
【扬州仪征市2022年中考英语一模试题】
B. 写作(计20分)
76. 在国家“双减”政策的引导下,不少初中生的学习生活发生了许多改变。请你根据下表中的内容要点,以“Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文,与同学们分享“双减”政策实施后,你学习生活中的变化。
内容要点:
“双减”前
学习情况
1. 作业多;
2. 锻炼时间少;
3. ……
“双减”后
学习情况
1. 课外活动增多;
2. 有时间培养爱好;
3.……
你的感受
……
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯,词数100词左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)必须包括所有要点,结构合理,字迹工整,并适当发挥;
(3)不要出现学校和学生的真实姓名。
Changes in My Life
Thanks to the Double Reduction Policy, my life has changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Changes in My Life
Thanks to the Double Reduction Policy, my life has changed a lot.
In the past, I had lots of homework to do every day and used to spend over 150 minutes on it. But now it only takes me about one hour to finish my homework. And we have more extracurricular activities, such as dancing, ball games and so on. Besides, I used to exercise only in P.E. class, but now I spend at least an hour exercising every day.
Finally, I used to be very busy even on weekends. I had to take math and physics classes. But now I have more time to develop my hobbies. In my free time, not only can I enjoy reading, but also I can play sports with my friends.
In a word, I had too much pressure in the past, but now things are completely different and my daily life is colorful and meaningful. I enjoy the changes and will study harder.
【解析】本文要求以“Changes in My Life”为题,根据所给内容要点,从“双减”前后的变化及自我的感受等方面来展开陈述。写作时以第一人称为主,时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时。文章重点描述“双减”前后的变化,描述过去的情况时用一般过去时,描述现在的变化时用一般现在时;最后表达自己的感受。注意主谓一致,要点齐全,无标点和语法错误。
【扬州市树人学校2022年中考英语一模试题】
B. 写作(计20分)
76. 本届冬奥会是科技的盛会,各种高科技频繁亮相,无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机,让外国媒体大呼惊艳,不仅如此,科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假设你是九年级一班学生王华,学校正在举办科技节,你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图用英语写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求:
1. 短文须根据思维导图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 省略号部分必须用适当信息补充完整;
3. 词数在100词左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
Hello, everyone! I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient and green.
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【解析】这是一篇演讲稿写作。要求根据所给的思维导图用英语写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及其优点。要包含所有要点,并适当发挥。本文时态为一般现在时,采用第三人称来书写。短文的开头和结尾已给出,写作时注意承接上下文,写作中内容要包含题目所给的提示内容,并在此基础上选取合适的连词、短语和句型进行串联和拓展。要做到思路清晰,层次分明,要点齐全,无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
【扬州市梅岭中学教育集团2022年中考英语一模试题】
B.写作(计20分)
76. 三年的初中生活即将结束,你一定有许多心里话想对父母、恩师、同学或者朋友说。某英文报正在举行“我想对……说”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下问题提示,用英语完成征文。
提示:
(1)Who do you want to say to?
(2)What will you say to him or her? (two points)
(3)Why do you want to say so? ( two points)
(4)What is your wish to him or her?
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(3)词数在 100 词左右;
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I want to say “I love you” to my dad
Dad, you are the best dad in the world. With your care and love, I had three happy years of my junior school life. And today I just want to say “I love you” to you.
Dad, you are always taking so good care of me that I grow up happily without getting hurt. Whenever I need your help, you will be there. Moreover, you always encourages me in time so that I can regain confidence. Above all, you are a good listener. Thank you for letting me be me. It is your help, encouragement and listening that make a great difference to me.
I hope that one day, just like you, when I have children of my own I can be the rock on which they stand.
【解析】这个题目要求学生们为某英文报写一篇征文,主题为“我想对……说”。首先学生们应将这个题目补充完整,对谁说,说什么;然后在文章中具体叙述你为什么要对他/她说这句话,并对他/她表示祝福。题目中用了四个问题给学生们做了提示,学生们可以此为提纲,组织语言,并用正确的英语表达出来。这篇短文应以一般现在时态、第二人称为主叙述。写作时应注意题目要求,文中必须包括提示中的所有信息,可以进行适当发挥;注意英语句式结构的特点和表达习惯,以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他句式,提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接,使文意连贯、表达流畅。
【盐城市盐城中学中校区2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达(共1题,计20分)
76. 水滴石穿,绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情,成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing”为题,根据提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿,参加毕业典礼的心得分享活动。
﹡What do you always keep doing ?
﹡Why do you keep doing that?
...
注意:
1.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for your listening!
【答案】
One thing I keep doing
Good afternoon! It’s my great honor to give the speech! It is known to all that knowledge may be acquired through many ways, and the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology, reading deserves to be paid attention to. So I keep reading every day.
To begin with, it is the most flexible way of getting information. Many people think it not only helps them better understand society as well as nature, but also broadens their horizon. Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement. It can also enrich our life and bring people pleasure. What’s more, reading is also regarded by many as a means of better survival.
Personally, I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society. Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines, I find my comprehension ability stably improved.
Thanks for your listening!
【解析】本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“One thing I keep doing”为题,根据提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题,讲述自己坚持做的事是阅读;第二段介绍为什么一直坚持阅读;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
【盐城市亭湖区2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达(共1 题,计20 分)
96. 人要有目标、有理想,并坚定地追求自己的梦想。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My dream”的征文活动。请根据提示,写一篇短文参赛。
注意事项:
(1)词数:100 词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My dream
If dreams die, life is like a broken-winged bird that can never fly.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My dream
If dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly. I have a dream that one day I will become a teacher.
I am outgoing and I like kids very much. If I am a teacher, I will help my students gain knowledge and skills, and grow up to be useful to the society. Children are the future of the nation. Education is a basic human right and it’s important in the development of children, communities, and countries.
To achieve my dream, first I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about education and other subjects. I will also learn to communicate with others, because communicating skills are important for a teacher.
I am sure my dream will come true one day.
【解析】这是一篇给定材料的作文。要求根据提示,以“My dream”为题写一篇短文参赛。要包含所有要点,并适当发挥。本文时态为一般将来时,以第一人称来书写。写作时可分为四段式:第一段总述自己的梦想是什么;第二段具体写拥有此梦想的原因是什么;第三段介绍为了实现梦想应该怎样做;最后总结。在写作时应该注意符合题意,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
【盐城市射阳县2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达 (共1题, 计20分)
76. 6月6日为全国爱眼日,学校将举行“未来之光护眼行动”为主题的征文比赛,请以“Protecting Our Eyesight”为题,根据提示,写一篇短文参赛。
1. What causes our poor eyesight?
2. What can we do to protect our eyesight?
注意事项:
(1) 词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2) 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3) 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Protecting Our Eyesight
Eyes are the window to the soul. However, most of us have poor eyesight. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Protecting Our Eyesight
Eyes are the window to the soul. However, most of us have poor eyesight. We often read in bed or keep our eyes too close to the book. Moreover, some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV. These bad habits of using eyes cause the problem. So I’d like to share some ways to protect our eyes.
First, we should keep the book a foot away from us while reading or writing. Second, it’s necessary to use less electronic products. After working for an hour, we’d better have a rest. Besides, remember to do eye exercises every day, which helps us keep good eyesight.
In a word, let’s take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future.
【解析】本题为话题作文,主题为“Protecting Our Eyesight”,即“保护视力”,要求按照所给问题提示,展开思路进行写作。写作时人称第一人称,时态应用现在时。根据所给问题提示,文章大致可分成两个部分,即引起近视的原因以及预防近视的方法。在此基础上,学生可适当进行拓展。分点论述时,可使用“First、Second、Besides”来连接上下文,使文章衔接过渡自然、语言流畅。
【盐城市建湖县2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达(共1题,计20分)
76. “劳动是创造幸福的源泉。”劳动,有助于我们增长技能,创造美好生活。
某英文网正在开展以“劳动最光荣”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在平时都参与哪些劳动,有哪些收获。
提示词语:labor(劳动);glorious(光荣的);chores;help;life skills
提示问题:
●What kind of labor do you often do?
●What have you learned from doing so?
Labor is a very important part in our life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Labor is a very important part in our lives. I think it is very glorious for everyone to take part in labor.
At home I often do some chores, such as cleaning the floor, washing the dishes, making the bed, cooking meals and so on. At school, I often help teachers or other classmates do some cleaning. Besides these, I still take an active part in some garbage sorting activities in the community.
By doing so, I can not only keep my body strong but also get a lot of new knowledge. The most important thing is that I improve my life skills for my future. Labor makes me feel very happy.
【解析】题目要求根据提示词语和问题,写出自己做家务的情况以及从中学到了什么,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,用第一人称来写作,时态以一般现在时为主,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
【盐城市滨海县2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达(计20分)
76. 2022年北京冬奥会在开、闭幕式中贯穿多种中国元素,让全世界的人都感受到了中国文化的魅力,也让我们意识到了文化强国的重要性。你校英语校刊“Tell the World about China”发起了以中国传统节日为话题的征文。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Traditional Festival”为题,选择一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日,写一篇短文参赛。
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2. 词数100词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My Favorite Chinese Traditional Festival
With the success of the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, more and more foreigners become interested in Chinese traditional culture, especially Chinese traditional festivals._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Favorite Chinese Traditional Festival
With the success of the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, more and more foreigners become interested in Chinese traditional culture, especially Chinese traditional festivals. There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite one is Spring Festival.
During this festival, family members get together and have a big meal. And dumplings are the most traditional food. After dinner, people watch Spring Gala on TV till midnight. In most places, people like to let off fireworks to celebrate it. The reason why I like Spring Festival best is that I needn’t go to school. Besides, I can eat a lot of delicious food and get some red packets.
To make more people know about rich Chinese culture, I will make a homepage to spread it. Moreover, I’m going to study Chinese traditional culture hard.
【解析】该题目是材料作文。题目要求根据所给提示内容,描述自己最喜欢的中国传统节日。本文应该用第一人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时为主;描述细节时,细节应符合文章要求,不可随意减少,可以有适当的补充;描述时应注意逻辑,保证思路清晰。
【盐城市2022年中考英语一模试题】
五、书面表达(共1题, 计20分)
76. 假如你是李华,以下是你的好友Simon发给你的邮件,请根据该邮件内容进行回复。
From: Simon To: Li Hua
Subject: Sweet memories in the school
Hi, Li Hua,
How time flies! We are graduating soon. I had a wonderful school life and learn much knowledge. I also made lots of friends. What about you?
What’s your school life like? Who has helped you and how? What impresses you most?
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Simon
注意事项:
1 词数100左右 (文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息;
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。
Dear Simon,
I’m glad that we both have a wonderful school life these years. I want to tell you about my school life as well.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tell me if there’s anything else you want to know. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Simon,
I’m glad that we both have a wonderful school life these years. I want to tell you about my school life as well.
My school lies in Shenyang which is small but beautiful. All my teachers and classmates are patient and helpful. Last winter holiday, we had to study online because of COVID-19.
However, my family couldn’t afford to buy a computer. On hearing about it, my English teacher sent me a laptop so that I could have access to complete my online course. I really appreciate her who gives me a lot of help and all she did that leaves me the deepest impression.
As Lao Tzu said, “A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.” I will make a continuous effort to my study.
Tell me if there’s anything else you want to know. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】该题目属于记叙文写作,但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头;内容是根据Simon的邮件内容,进行回复。本文应该用第一人称来叙述邮件内容;时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主;首先要承接短文开头;其次介绍我的学校生活以及老师对我的帮助和给我留下的印象;第三段引用老子的一段名言,丰富了作文内容;最后是期待。
【盐城东台市2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达(共1题,计20分)
76. 近期,新冠状病毒(novel coronavirus)又一次在我国许多城市爆发并传播,疫情防控形势(epidemic situation)非常严峻。作为一名中学生,为了使自己和家人远离新冠状病毒,我们在日常生活中应该怎样保持健康呢?请以“How to keep ourselves healthy”为题,根据提供的信息和要求写一篇短文。内容要点如下:
1.了解预防新冠状病毒的知识,不害怕新冠状病毒;保持充足睡眠,多锻炼;非必要不出门,如需外出,戴好口罩,保持1米距离(the distance of...)。
2.卫生:勤洗手,注意室内干净,经常开窗通风;在公共场所,不随地吐痰或打喷嚏,不乱扔垃圾。
3.饮食:多喝水,多吃新鲜水果和蔬菜,不吃……
4.小心感冒,如果发烧(have a fever)、咳嗽,……
要求:1.词数100左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;
2.短文须包括以上要点,但不要逐字翻译,适当发挥使短文连贯、通顺。
3.短文不得出现真实的人名或校名等相关信息。
How to keep ourselves healthy
Recently, the novel coronavirus, also called COVID—19, has broken out in many cities in China. It influences our daily life and health. What’s more, it can make people lose their lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If we do like that, we’ll have a happy and healthy life.
【答案】
How to keep ourselves healthy
Recently, the novel coronavirus, also called COVID-19, has broken out in many cities in China. It influences our daily life and health. What’s more, it can make people lose their lives. What can we do to keep ourselves healthy?
First, we can learn some knowledge about preventing novel coronavirus instead of being afraid of it. We should have enough sleep and take more exercise. We should stay at home. Don’t go out unless necessary. If we have to go out, we wear masks and keep the distance of one metre.
Second, we should keep our home clean every day and open the window often. We must wash our hands often. In public, we shouldn’t spit or sneeze everywhere. We shouldn’t throw the litter, either.
Third, we need to drink more water. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat too much meat or junk food.
Finally, be careful not to catch a cold. If we have a fever or a cough, we must go to the doctor as soon as possible.
If we do like that, we’ll have a happy and healthy life.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求以“How to keep ourselves healthy”为题,根据提供的信息和要求写一篇短文。短文必须包含所提示的四个要点,可适当发挥使短文连贯、通顺。
2.写作指导:本文围绕“我们如何保持健康”进行写作,人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。写作时,可先写新冠状病毒的危害,从而引出我们如何保持健康,接着从提示的四个要点进行详细写,可用First,Second,Third,Finally引出提示的各个要点。最后点明主旨,突出主题。不要有语法和单词拼写错误。
【徐州市睢宁县2022年中考英语一模试题】
七、书面表达
71. 体育运动是中学生的共同爱好。请你根据下列提示写一篇题为“What We Get from Sports”的短文,词数80词左右。短文应包含以下要点:
1. 多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己;
2. 男孩们参加各项体育活动,希望运动能使自己更强壮;女孩们喜欢运动,保持苗条;
3. 你对运动的观点。
参考短语:lose weight, keep slim保持苗条。
What We Get from Sports
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.
Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, to be slim and pretty by doing sports.
In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.
【解析】题目属于提纲类作文写作,写作时需要包含题目要求所有要点,第一段总述不同的人有不同的观点,第二段详细描述要点,第三段表达自己观点。本文应采用一般现在时,主要使用第三人称和第一人称,可适当补充要点,要求叙述完整,保证条理清晰。
【徐州市树人初级中学2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达(计20分)
71. 假如你是中国学生李梅。你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣,希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。而你对于经典故事《司马光砸缸》(Sima Guang hit the tank)非常熟悉, 请你给Tom写一封英文电子邮件,向他讲述这一经典故事,并告知其寓意。
要求:
1. 内容须包括故事梗概,可以适当发挥, 使全文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息;
3. 90词左右, 邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese traditional stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “Sima Guang hit the tank”. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Mei
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese traditional stories. Well, let me tell you a famous one with the name “Sima Guang hit the tank”.
Once Sima Guang was playing hide-and-seek with several children in the backyard. There was a large water tank in the yard. It was full of water. When the kids were playing, one child accidentally fell into the tank. Other children were so frightened that they started to run, crying for help.
However, Sima Guang was different. He thought it over and then had an idea. He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank. “Bang! ” The tank broke and the water ran out. The kid was saved. From the story, we know Sima Guang was brave and clever. When meeting danger, we should calm down and try to find ways.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Mei
【解析】本文是一篇书信作文写作,要求给美国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件,介绍中国的经典故事《司马光砸缸》,内容上须要包含故事梗概。本文人称上采用第三人称,时态上使用一般过去时。内容上应涵盖“司马光砸缸”故事梗概以及从中所获得的感悟。结构上可以采用三段式结构,注意段与段之间的衔接,保证文章的逻辑性。
【徐州邳州市2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达(满分20分)
71. 人无精神不立,国无精神不强。今年3月5日是我国第59个“学雷锋纪念日”,为传承和弘扬雷锋精神,我市开展了形式多样志愿者服务活动,作为新时代的青少年,你也参加了多项志愿者服务活动,请根据下表内容提示写一篇发言稿,在班会上分享你的经历和感受。
local community
help sort waste
I think/feel…
a nursing home
talk with…
…
city square
charity sale, sell old books to raise…
…
…
…
…
要求:1.内容完整,省略号部分应适当发挥,语言准确,语句通顺,语意连贯。
2.90词左右。开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等。
Dear classmates,
Good morning, everyone. I am happy to share my experience of working as a volunteer with you.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【答案】
Dear classmates,
Good morning, everyone. I am happy to share my experience of working as a volunteer with you. I have taken part in many voluntary activities these days and I have learned a lot.
First of all, I helped sort out waste in our community in the winter holiday. I think it is meaningful because it can make our environment cleaner and better. Besides, I went to a nursing home with my friends every Sunday afternoon. Talking with the old can make them happy. It’s our duty to care more about the elderly.
What’s more, I volunteered to organize a charity sale in the city square last month. We sold some old books to raise money for the people in poor areas. Last week, I volunteered to work in the school dining hall. This experience made me feel the workers’ hard work and our better life.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【解析】本文是一篇应用文写作,要求按照表格,介绍自己的多项志愿活动,需要适当发挥。介绍多个时间时,注意时态和上下文的连贯尤其重要。本文以第一人称书写,时态是一般过去时和一般现在时。全文可分成三段,第一段引出主题,第二段介绍具体时间,第三段结束语。分条介绍是Fist of all、Besides、What’s more等短语开头,使条理清晰。适当应用固定句型、状语从句,为文章增彩。
【无锡市锡山高级中学实验学校2022年中考英语一模试题】
九、书面表达(本大题共20分)
65. 本届冬奥会是科技的盛会,各种高科技频繁亮相,无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机,让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此,科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假设你是九年级一班学生王华,学校正在举办科技节,你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。
请你根据以下思维导图用英语写一篇短文,介绍身边的科技及其优点。
注意事项:1.短文须根据思维导图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.省略号部分必须用适当信息补充完整;
3.词数在100个左右,短文开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
5.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient and green.
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【解析】审题可知,这是一篇演讲稿写作;要求根据所给的思维导图介绍身边的科技,谈谈其对生活的影响及其优点,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。本文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来描述。短文的开头可结尾已给出,写作时注意承接上文,写作中内容要包含题目所给的提示内容,并在此基础上选用合适的连词,短语和句型来进行串联和拓展;注意做到思路清晰,层次分明,要点齐全;行文要语句通顺,符合逻辑关系;无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
【无锡市滨湖区2022年中考英语一模试题】
八、书面表达(本大题共20分)
65. 阳光中学为培养学生个性,拓展学生技能,开展了选修课。假如你是阳光中学九年级学生李华,请你用英文向七年级新生写一篇推荐信,推荐一门你最喜欢的选修课。以下信息为非限定性内容,仅供参考。
DIY Course
Travelling Course
…
Things to do
·traditional Chinese arts:
paper-cutting, clay figurine(泥塑)…
·birthday presents…
·share DIY stories
·watch videos to enjoy natural beauty, such as…
·share travelling experiences
…
Reasons to recommend
·What do you think of it?
·What can you learn from it? (at least 2 points)
注意事项:
1.推荐信须自拟,要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意:
2.词数在100个左右,推荐信开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
3.推荐信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息:
4.推荐信内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear schoolmates,
I’m glad to hear that our school will offer you some optional courses.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear schoolmates,
I’m glad to hear that our school will offer you some optional courses. I want to recommend the DIY Course to you.
You can make traditional Chinese arts in DIY courses, such as paper-cutting and clay figurine. You can not only experience the process of creation, but also learn about our colorful Chinese culture. You can also make unique birthday presents for your family members and friends by yourselves. They will be surprised and keep the presents forever. You can share your DIY stories with others. It is a good topic.
I like DIY Course very much and I recommend it to all of you. I learn about strong practical ability and creation ability during the courses. I learn how to cooperate with others, too. I hope you will have a good time in DIY Course.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇书信作文。要求向七年级新生推荐一门你最喜欢的选修课。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍可以在喜欢的选修课上做什么;第三段介绍自己对选修课的看法以及自己学到了什么。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
【泰州兴化市2022年中考英语一模试题】
九、书面表达。(共1题;计20分)
108. 你校English Corner将以“绿色生活,从我做起”为主题,组织全校英语征文比赛。请你以How to live a green life为题,从低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境等方面写一篇英语作文。
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2.写作要点齐全,并做适当发挥;
3.文章不得出现人名、校名或地名,否则不得分;
4.词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to live a green life
Everyone can make small changes in their lifestyle and help reduce pollution and waste. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
How to live a green life
Everyone can make small changes in their lifestyle and help reduce pollution and waste.
First, we can ride bikes or walk to school rather than going by car, as this can help reduce air pollution. Second, we should turn off the lights when going out as well as turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. Besides, we shouldn’t use plastic bags when we go shopping, because plastic is harmful to the environment. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment greener.
If we keep doing this, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s do everything we can to live a green life and protect our planet.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求以How to live a green life为题进行写作,文章开头已给出,写作时注意衔接,写作内容不仅要包含写作要点,还要做到适当发挥。本文主要用第一人称进行写作,时态主要采用一般现在时。可分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段根据低碳生活、节约资源、保护环境三个写作要点,提出自己的意见,并做适当发挥;第三段提出倡议。写作时要保持主谓一致,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
【泰州泰兴市2022年中考英语一模试题】
八、书面表达(20分)
78. Sunshine School为了倡导青少年有梦想、有行动,成为对社会有用之人,学校英文校刊开展了主题为“Be a strong Chinese teenager”的征稿活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下提示和要点,展开合理想象,写一篇英文短文,参加征稿活动。
注意:1.语意连贯,层次清楚,书写规范。
2.表达中请勿提及真实的姓名与校名。
3.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Be a strong Chinese teenager
With the fast development of science and technology, China has become one of the most powerful countries in the world. A strong China needs strong teenagers, so it’s our duty to improve ourselves. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Be a strong Chinese teenager
With the fast development of science and technology, China has become one of the most powerful countries in the world. A strong China needs strong teenagers, so it’s our duty to improve ourselves.
I think we have lots of things to do. First, we should learn to be honest and thankful. We are supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second, we should take interest in our study and we must work hard. At the same time, we should have good study methods, such as listening carefully in class, going over what we have learned in time. Third, it’s helpful to be in good health. We’d better have enough healthy food instead of junk food, And we should spend at least an hour doing sports every day. Last but not least, we can spend our weekends doing some voluntary work at our community center or in the old People’s Home. It’s meaningful for us to do something for others.
If we follow these, we will be strong enough to realize our dreams.
【解析】本文主要是以“Be a strong Chinese teenager”为题并结合图片提示进行写作,可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出;第二段分别从学习、梦想、健康和志愿活动等几个方面描述如何提升自己;最后一段进行总结。介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
【苏州张家港市2022年中考英语一模试题】
八、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)
61. “双减”政策实施以后,学⽣有了更多的周末空余时间。那么,他们在周末都在做些什么呢?你在阳光中学做了一项“关于学生双休日活动的问卷调查”,请根据下列图表中的调查数据,以“Weekend Activities Report” 为题,写一篇英语调查报告,简单介绍调查情况并发表你自己的看法(至少两点)。
注意:词数 100 左右,短文开头已给出,不计总词数。
Weekend Activities Report
Since the “double reduction (双减)” policy was launched, students now have more free time on weekends.
So I did a survey about how the students spend their weekends in Sunshine Middle School.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Weekend Activities Report
Since the “double reduction (双减)” policy was launched, students now have more free time on weekends.
So I did a survey about how the students spend their weekends in Sunshine Middle School. I find that almost half of the students study by themselves at home. About 25% of them prefer to watch TV or listen to music. 20% of them like to chat online or play computer games, while 10% of them help their parents do housework. Only a small number of them go in for sports or travelling.
In my opinion, all of us students should have a proper plan for our weekends. We should make good use of our time, learning more knowledge, developing our interests. We should also learn to relax, but I don’t think it’s a good idea to spend too much time watching TV, chatting online or playing computer games.
【解析】该题目要求根据所提供的调查数据,写一篇学生周末活动的报告。短文开头和结尾已给出,我们只写正文就可以。人称以第三人称为主,时态主要采用一般现在时。写作时,先根据图表所示内容,介绍学生周末所从事的活动,最后发表自己的观点,至少2点。注意作适当扩展,并保证条理清晰。
【苏州市平江中学2022年中考英语一模试题】
第八部分 书面表达(共1题,满分25分)
61. 2022年4月16日,“太空出差三人组”返回地球啦!女航天员王亚平完成了与女儿的“摘星之约”——女儿负责照顾好自己,妈妈去太空给女儿“摘星星”。在你的生活中,也一定有过与家人,老师或者朋友的约定吧。请以“A promise”为题,说说你们的约定是什么?它实现了吗?你为此做了什么(或者正在做、将要做)?
注意: 1. 词数:100左右;2. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。
A promise
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A Promise
Promise has brought trust and progress to my study and daily life.
My friend Margaret and I always wanted to study in the same school. Therefore, we made a promise to enter the middle school together. But I failed to meet the target score, and we didn’t succeed in getting into the same school. In these three years of my junior school, I keep working hard and always remind myself of the promise we made. I hope I can spend my high school time with Margaret after my hard work.
For me, friendship is not only a warm relationship, but also a positive guide. I wish we would meet in the high school this September.
【解析】本文是一篇话题作文。以“一个承诺”为题写一篇短文。本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段讲述自己曾经和朋友之间的一个约定;最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
【南通市通州区2022年中考英语一模试题】
八、书面表达(本题满分20分)
81. “俭,德之共也;侈,恶之大也。” 古往今来,“勤俭节约”体现了中华民族的价值取向和道德风尚。习总书记一直提倡“厉行节约、反对浪费”的社会风尚,请你从以下几个方面谈谈作为一名中学生,你在日常生活中如何节约、杜绝浪费的。
要求:
1.要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
2.词数:90词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.参考词汇:厉行节约,反对浪费practise strict economy and combats waste
Nowadays, our country practices strict economy and combats waste. As middle school students, we should start with the things around us.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Everyone can try his best to play a role in creating a better society.
【答案】
Nowadays, our country practices strict economy and combats waste. As middle school students, we should start with the things around us.
First of all, it’s a good idea to develop healthy eating habits and value food. I don’t order too much food unless I can finish it all when I eat at restaurants.
Second, it’s important to save water because we cannot live without it. I often save water by taking shorter showers. Besides, I turn off the tap when brushing teeth.
Third, saving energy matters a lot. When I leave the room, I always remember to turn off all the lights. Also, I take my own bag to the supermarket and use both sides of the paper.
Last but not least, I also pay attention to saving money. I don’t spend money on what I don’t need. Instead, I save my pocket money for my further education.
Everyone can try his best to play a role in creating a better society.
【解析】该题目属于材料类书面表达,写作时注意围绕主题“如何节约”展开叙述。文章已给出开头和结尾,重点写节约的具体做法,注意运用参考词汇。本文主要使用第一人称,时态主要使用一般现在时;文章可分为三部分:第一部分点明主题,第二部分叙述具体做法,第三部分总结;保证内容完整,行文连贯,无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
【南京市联合体2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达(满分15分)
76. 假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter将要来南京旅游,请根据Peter来信内容,进行回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m planning to visit Nanjing. Could you give me some advice on what places of interest to visit? Why do you recommend these places? What is the best time to visit Nanjing?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Peter
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your letter. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Thank you for your letter. I’m willing to tell you something about the tourist attractions in Nanjing.
If you are interested in the history of our city, there is no better place to visit than Nanjing Museum. In it, you can have a deeper understanding of the city through enjoying different works of art. Climbing Purple Mountain is also a good choice. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains.
In different seasons, you can enjoy different scenes in our city. So you can visit it any time you like.
I’m looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据Peter的来信进行回复,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。写作时要以第二人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍南京有什么名胜,为什么推荐这些地方以及参观南京的最佳时间。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
专题09 完成句子&句型转换-备考中考英语一模分项讲解和真题练习(江苏专用): 这是一份专题09 完成句子&句型转换-备考中考英语一模分项讲解和真题练习(江苏专用),共24页。试卷主要包含了原来是/证明是/结果是, 没有人知道她已离开家乡3年了等内容,欢迎下载使用。
专题07 短文填空&首字母填空-备考中考英语一模分项讲解和真题练习(江苏专用): 这是一份专题07 短文填空&首字母填空-备考中考英语一模分项讲解和真题练习(江苏专用),共53页。
专题06 单词拼写&动词适当形式填空-备考中考英语一模分项讲解和真题练习(江苏专用): 这是一份专题06 单词拼写&动词适当形式填空-备考中考英语一模分项讲解和真题练习(江苏专用),共48页。试卷主要包含了 be后面可以填三种形式, 介词后可以填, 主谓一致等内容,欢迎下载使用。