专题39应用文写作之邀请信和建议信-2023年高考英语一轮复习 精讲与精练资料（教师版）

这是一份专题39应用文写作之邀请信和建议信-2023年高考英语一轮复习 精讲与精练资料（教师版），共13页。

考点导航
邀请信必背好句
1．It's my pleasure/a great hnur fr me t invite yu t jin us.
非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。
2．I wnder if I/we have the hnur t invite yu t the party.
我想知道我/我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。
3．I'd like t invite yu t jin us fr a visit t the nearby nursing hme next Saturday fr the Duble Ninth Festival.
我想邀请您下周六重阳节一起去探访附近的养老院。
4．We are having/planning ... n ... (date) and we feel it wuld be a great idea if yu can jin us.
我们定于……(日期)……(活动)，如果你能来参加就太好了。
5．The fllwing are sme details abut are sme details abut details abut ... are as fllws.
……的细节如下。
6．T begin with, we will ... Besides, there will be a number f/varius activities such as ... which will ...
首先，我们将……。此外，将会有许多活动，例如……这将……
7．I d hpe yu will accept ur/my invitatin if it is cnvenient t yu.
我真心希望你方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。
8．We/I wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnfirm yur participatin at yur early/earliest cnvenience.
如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们/我将不胜感激。
建议信常用词汇
1.gve/ffer sb. sme advice(n)给某人提建议
2.ask sb. fr advice向某人征求意见
3.as fllws如下
4.in my pinin/in my view/frm my pint f view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in...参加
7.fllw/take/adpt ne's advice采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. int accunt/cnsideratin 把……考虑在内
9.with regard t关于；就
10. put frward提出
11.in this regard/in this respect在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb.与某人分享某事
13.with time ging n 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with面临
15.take sth. seriusly重视；认真对待
建议信常用句型
. I'm srry t hear that yu are having truble ...很遗憾听说你在...有困难。
2. Such prblems are quite nrmal. Perhaps the fllwing suggestins are helpful.这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
3. I have received yur letter saying yu plan t...我已经收到了你的来信。信上说。。。
4. Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t hw t learn Chinese , and I will try t make sme suggestins here.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t ..很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何。。。。
6. I'm very glad t have received yur e-mail. Nw I'm writing t give yu sme advice n hw t ...很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在。。。，我写信给你一些建议。
7. I hpe these suggestins will be f use t yu.
8.Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
9. I wuld be mre than happy t see imprvement.
10. I believe that yu will take my suggestins int serius accunt. Whatever yu decide t d, gd luck with yur studies/wrk！
11. Here are a few suggestins.
【题型分析】
1．假如你是李华，现在有两张京剧《贵妃醉酒》（Drunken Cncubine）的演出门票，想邀请你们班上的英国留学生Jean观看。请你给她写一封英文的邀请信。
写作要点：
1.京剧的简介；
2.提出邀请。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Jean，
I knw yu are interested in Peking pera, a traditinal art frm, which has a histry f mre than 200 years. I am sure yu wuld like t see a shw, Drunken Cncubine, perfrmed in the natinal grand theatre n February 10. It is a famus drama in Peking pera and is ppular with peple. Luckily I have tw tickets and I'd like t invite yu t watch the shw with me. I firmly believe that it is well wrth seeing and it can aruse yur interest in traditinal Chinese culture. I'm lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs，
Lihua
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生Jean写一封信，邀请她观看京剧《贵妃醉酒》（Drunken Cncubine）。
【写作步骤】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.京剧的简介；
2.提出邀请。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in; have a histry f; mre than; wuld like t; be ppular with; invite sb. t d; be wrth ding; aruse ne’s interest in; lk frward t
第三步：连词成句
1. I knw yu are interested in Peking pera, a traditinal art frm, which has a histry f mre than 200 years.
2. I am sure yu wuld like t see a shw, Drunken Cncubine, perfrmed in the natinal grand theatre n February 10.
3. It is a famus drama in Peking pera and is ppular with peple.
4. Luckily I have tw tickets and I'd like t invite yu t watch the shw with me.
5. I firmly believe that it is well wrth seeing and it can aruse yur interest in traditinal Chinese culture.
6. I'm lking frward t yur early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is mre, Besides, Mrever, Furthermre, In additin As well as, nt nly…but (als), including,
3.表转折对比关系：Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh +clause(从句), In spite f +n/ding, On the ne hand…,On the ther hand… Sme…,while thers…,as fr, s…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【写作点评】
[高分句型1] I knw yu are interested in Peking pera, a traditinal art frm, which has a histry f mre than 200 years.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] I am sure yu wuld like t see a shw, Drunken Cncubine, perfrmed in the natinal grand theatre n February 10. 这句话运用了过去分词作定语。
[高分句型3] I firmly believe that it is well wrth seeing and it can aruse yur interest in traditinal Chinese culture. 这句话运用了宾语从句。
假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（frmat）。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文品读】
Dear MS Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua. I plan t take a part-time jb in a freign cmpany during the summer hliday. I have already filled in the applicatin frm and had my resume ready fr it. Hwever, I am nt sure abut the wrds and frmat. Therefre, I am writing t ask fr yur help and prfessinal advice.
Wuld yu please spare sme time t read thrugh the materials attached? Wuld yu mind finding ut the mistakes in terms f wrds and frmat? Besides, I’d like yu t crrect the mistakes fund in the materials and frmat.
I wuld much appreciate it if yu culd d me a favr. I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【提分词汇】
take a part-time jb 做兼职工作
fill in the applicatin frm 填写申请表
have my resume ready 把简历准备好
prfessinal advice 专业建议
【亮点句型】
Therefre, I am writing t ask fr yur help and prfessinal advice. 因此，我写信向您寻求帮助和专业建议。
Wuld yu please spare sme time t read thrugh the materials attached? 您能抽出点时间阅读一下附件中的材料吗
Besides, I’d like yu t crrect the mistakes fund in the materials and frmat.另外，我希望你能纠正我在材料和格式上发现的错误。
I wuld much appreciate it if yu culd d me a favr.如果你能帮我一个忙，我将不胜感激。
检测训练
1．假定你是李华，你校打算成立Fans英语俱乐部，想邀请外教Smith参加，请你给Smith写封邀请函，内容包括：
1.成立俱乐部的目的；
2.活动时间、地点及安排；
3.邀请加入。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Smith,
I'm Li Hua,a student in Class 1 Grade 3.T aruse ur interest in English learning and prvide a platfrm fr us t practice English,ur grade has decided t set up Fans English Club.
We'll gather in the meeting rm after schl every Friday afternn,when varius activities will be rganized and perfrmed,like singing English sngs and having debates in English.
I'm very hnred t invite yu t jin us representing ur grade.I hld the firm belief that yur appearance in ur club will certainly inspire us all t becme mre interested in English and therefre wrk harder at English.
Hping t see yu every Friday afternn.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作分析】 本文要求给外教Smith老师写封邀请函，邀请他参加你校打算成立的Fans英语俱乐部。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。完整说明题干中给的内容，适当扩展。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目要求我们在邀请信中写出的内容以及我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：介绍自己以及成立俱乐部的目的（激发英语学习的兴趣，提供练习英语的平台）；第二段：活动时间、地点及安排（让被邀请人清楚的了解活动的基本信息。）；第三段：邀请Smith老师加入（您的出现能激励我们更努力的学习英语）。
【写作点评】
1.使用高级句型：非限制性定语从句和将来时的被动语态We'll gather in the meeting rm after schl every Friday afternn, when varius activities will be rganized and perfrmed…；同位语从句的使用I hld the firm belief that yur appearance in ur club will certainly inspire us.……。2.使用了过渡词语：therefre 等。3.使用了重要短语：set up建立；be hnred t感到很荣幸；becme interested in对…感兴趣。
2、假设你是李华，你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑难以控制。请你给他回一封信，告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、损害家庭关系等问题，并提出一些建议。
参考词汇：沉溺于be/becme addicted t 网瘾：Internet addictin。
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【范文】
Dear Mike,
I am glad t hear frm yu. As yur clse friend, I’d like t talk abut the harm f Internet addictin t yu as I feel wrried t knw that yu have wasted lts f valuable time playing the Internet games.
As we knw, the Internet is a cnvenient tl t imprve ur knwledge and skills. Hwever, ur life will be greatly affected if we are addicted t it. Fr example yur grades may g dwn and yur health will be ging frm bad t wrse. T make things wrse, it can als damage the relatinship with yur family. S I think it is high time that yu gt rid f the bad habit. It is a gd idea fr yu t read sme meaningful bks and d sme physical exercise.
I am lking frward t hearing yur gd news sn．
Yurs,
Li Hua
3．你校校长李建想邀请你校交换生Peter的父亲Smith作为颁奖嘉宾参加你校新学期的开学典礼，现请你代他写一封邀请信，主要内容包括：
1．发出邀请；
2．活动安排；
3．你的看法；
4．联系方式：fgvert. schl@yah. Org/010-34532225。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Mr Smith
I’m hnred t invite yu t attend the pening ceremny f the new term, which is t be held at 8 n the mrning f Sept. 1 (next Mnday) in ur schl meeting hall. And we expect yu t wrk as a guest wh presents awards t students. While being there, yu can nt nly get invlved in ur educatinal activities but als witness the grwth f yur child. I firmly believe it’s a gd pprtunity t strengthen the relatinship between ur schl and parents.
Wuld yu be s kind as t tell me whether yu culd cme in advance? Fr mre infrmatin, please send email t fgvert. schl@yah. rg r call at 010-35432225.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Jian
【写作分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：
1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。
2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如Fr mre infrmatin使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。
3.注意语气，此文是写邀请信的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较诚恳，不应该出现过多的强硬语气的词语。
4.此作文要分四个部分写，每个部分要更完整，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如I’m hnred t invite yu t attend the pening ceremny f the new term, which is t be held at 8 n the mrning f Sept. 1 (next Mnday) in ur schl meeting hall.
5.多采用一些高级句型，如we’d better wear masks when we g utside，It’s ne f the mst dangerus weather cnditins，同时使用一些词组如nt als ， be hnred t，held at，between and等。
【范文亮点】
提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如文中“I’m hnred t invite yu t attend the pening ceremny f the new term, which is t be held at 8 n the mrning f Sept. 1 (next Mnday) in ur schl meeting hall. ”使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如文中nt als ， be hnred t，held at，between and等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语使衔接自然。
4．假定你是李华，是某国际学校学生会生活部长。近期同学们反映学校的餐厅有较多问题，请你给餐厅负责人Mr. White写一封投诉信。内容包括:
1. 写信目的；
2. 投诉的具体问题；
3. 希望问题早日解决。
注意:
1. 词数80词左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Mr. White,
I’m Li Hua, head f the life department f the Students’ Unin. On behalf f the students, I’m writing t express ur dissatisfactin with the schl cafeteria.
First, it has a limited number f dishes and the daily specials are the same each week. Secndly, there is a lack f healthy fd, such as salads r fish n the menu. Anther thing is that we have t stand in line fr a lng time befre we can get the meal.
We wuld much appreciate it if yu culd attend t this matter as sn as pssible.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作分析】
本文是一篇应用文，就食堂最近出现的问题给餐厅负责人Mr. White写一封投诉信。
【写作步骤】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 写信目的；
2. 投诉的具体问题；
3. 希望问题早日解决。
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
n behalf f; limited; a lack f; appreciate等
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf f the students, I’m writing t express ur dissatisfactin with the schl cafeteria.
2. First, it has a limited number f dishes and the daily specials are the same each week.
3. Secndly, there is a lack f healthy fd, such as salads r fish n the menu.
4. We wuld much appreciate it if yu culd attend t this matter as sn as pssible.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is mre, Besides, Mrever, Furthermre, In additin As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系：Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh+ clause(从句), In spite f+ n/ding
4.表因果关系：Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【写作点评】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Anther thing is that we have t stand in line fr a lng time befre we can get the meal.这句话用到了that引导的表语从句和befre引导的时间状语从句。此外We wuld much appreciate it if yu culd attend t this matter as sn as pssible.这句话则使用if所引导的条件状语从句。此外文章还使用了一些高级表达，如n behalf f; limited; a lack f; appreciate等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。