2023 英语新中考二轮复习热点透析 核心考点16 书面表达之观点看法类

核心考点16 书面表达之观点看法类

一、考向分析

分析全国近几年的中考真题可知，书面表达对“观点看法类”的话题考查比重仅次于“做法建议类”，也是各地市高频考查方向。此类话题，通常在背景材料中说明某种“好/坏/新ぐ“…”的现象，或以表格或图示展示不同人群的“不同或对立”的观点，由此让学生最终陈述自己的观点，并说明理由(注意理由要有理有据、条理清晰)。

二、考点详解

一、写作方法——十句作文法

第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。

第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。

第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。

三段之间的衔接要灵活运用＂启、承、转、合＂的过渡手段。

二、应急百宝箱

遇到要点不会表达怎么办？词数不达标怎么办？不要急，＂一代，五加，一扩＂帮你轻松解决问题。＂一代，五加，一扩＂具体说来就是：

    1. 以实代虚——写实

    2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等

    3. 增加例子——for example, such as

    4. 增加原因——进一步说明

    5. 加套语（词块）

    6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明

    7. 扩充建议——自主发挥，点到即可

三、注意事项

1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。

2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。

3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。

4. 通常采用一般现在时。

5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。

三、真题再现

1、（2021·山西中考真题）

在我们成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择做感兴趣的事；选择与志趣相投的人交朋友……在选择面前，如何客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。

请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇英语短文。

内容包括：

1.从以上提示中选择某个方面，谈谈你对这个选择的观点；

2.围绕以上观点，描述你曾经历过的一件事；

3.这件事带给你的思考。要求：

4.词数不少于 80 词；

5.提示词会仅供参考；

6.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

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【答案】

There is no denying that it is important for us to make a reasonable choice in life. I am a volleyball fan so I choose to join the school volleyball club, which is beneficial to my growth.

In my childhood, I fell in love with volleyball. Then when I was in Grade 8, I was eager to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to focus time and energy on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard with persistence in the club and learned what the true meaning of the teamwork was. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got a satisfying result in the test. All this showed that my choice was right.

Needless to say, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart. Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。描述一件自己感兴趣的事，是如何遵从自己内心的感受，并坚持下来的短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。描述过去的事情要用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历；第三段谈谈这件事带来的思考。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

2.（2020·宜兴外国语学校初三月考）英语课上，你们班就中学生进网吧上网现象进行讨论。假如你是李华，请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

提示：

(1) What are the advantages and disadvantages of getting online?

(2) What do you think of getting online for middle school students?

(3) How should students get online properly?

要求：

(1) 演讲稿须包括所有提示内容，并做适当发挥；

(2) 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；

(3) 词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many studentslike_______________________

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【审题指导】细读所给文字提示，提取以下信息：

1.本文要求写一篇演讲稿，因此文体为应用文；

2.文章要根据提示内容阐明上网的利弊，故时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主；

3.词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

【高分范文】

Good afternoon, class. Today let’s talk about getting online. Many students like getting online very much. They can also learn more knowledge and how to use the modern machine—computer. They can get more information. It can make them clever to play different kinds

of games easily. But some students may get lost in playing games. Some even make friends online. They often chat or send emails to each other. It takes them too much time.

So I don’t think they should get online when they are studying at school. They can do it in summer or winter holidays.

3.对于全国积极推广的“足球进校园”活动，你班的同学可能有各自不同的观点。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，并谈谈你的看法。

内容提示：

要求：①语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。

②文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。

③作文应包括上述所有相关信息并可适当发挥。

④文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Different students have different opinions for the activity “Soccer Enters School”. Some students in my class think________________________________________________________________________

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【审题指导】

1. 要求写一篇议论文。文中以关键词和短语形式给出了正反两方的观点，写作时需将正反方所有观点均涵盖，然后简单阐述自己的看法。写作时，可以使用使役动词、连词及连词词组，使文章过渡自然；
2. 写对立双方的观点，用第三人称；阐述自己的看法，用第一人称；时态用一般现在时。

【高分范文】

Different students have different opinions for the activity “Soccer Enters School”. Some students in my class think this activity is good for them. It can make them healthier and stronger. It also makes their spare time rich and colorful. Especially for some students, they may have a chance to become professional soccer players. Other students think this activity will waste their time and get in the way of their study. Sometimes it's dangerous. They may get hurt while playing soccer. What's more, it's hard to become a professional soccer player.In my opinion, I think this activity is good for us. It will make more students love soccer.

4.（2021·湖北随州市·中考真题）繁重的课业负担不利于学生的身心健康与全面发展，为树立健康第一的教育理念，你校建议学生每天课后采取适当方式放松自己。假设你是九（1）班的一名学生，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行调查。请根据以下表格提供的信息和要求，用英文写一篇短文。

写作要求∶

1. 文章必须包括表格中所有内容要点， 可适当发挥以使行文连贯；

2. 词数∶80 词左右；（文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数）

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

参考词汇∶聊天 chat

I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. ___________________________________________________________________________________

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【答案】

I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.

Different students have different ways to relax after class. Among them, twenty students like watching TV, twenty-five students often play computer games or chat online, fifteen students like reading all kinds of books, ten students often do sports and eleven students don’t have time to relax.

I think reading and doing sports are good for us， because we can improve ourselves by reading and doing sports can keep us healthy.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目要求根据表格所提供的信息介绍一下学生课后所采取的放松方式，并发表自己的观点，可适当发挥让文章更加连贯。

2.写作指导：本文应采用第一人称和第三人称来书写，时态使用一般现在时，注意主谓一致。写作时，可根据表格内容依次介绍学生进行放松的方式，最后发表自己的观点，谈谈哪种方式是好的，以及原因。

5.（2020·长沙市长郡双语实验中学初三开学考试）今年我市多所高中外迁，即将成为一名高中生的你，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“ A boarding school or a day school ”为标题，写一篇80-120词的短文，内容包括：

1.读寄宿学校的利和弊各一点；

2.读走读学校的利和弊各一点；

3.你的选择和理由（理由不得与上述两点内容重复）

注意：短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

A boarding school or a day school?

Recently several high school in our city have moved to suburban area from downtown.__________________

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【答案】

A boarding school or a day school?

Recently several high school in our city have moved to suburban area from downtown.

We are going to graduate from our middle school, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school.Both kinds of schools have their advantages and disadvantages.

If we choose a boarding school,we will save more time to study.However ,we may have less time staying with our family.If we choose a day school,parents can know more of our studies.At the same time,computer games may take a bad influnce on us.

As for me, I prefer a boarding school.We should concentrate on our study to get good grades in high school.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，开头已给出。后面的内容需要讲述读寄宿学校的利和弊各一点以及走读学校的利弊，最后还需要阐述自己的观点。

2.例文点评：本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

3.高分亮点：

短语：moved to；graduate from；make a choice；at the same time；as for；get good grades

句型：if…句型；