译林版高中英语选择性必修第三册UNIT2表达作文巧升格课件+学案
展开写一篇关于外星人的故事
本单元要求写一篇关于外星人的故事，属于故事类的写作范畴。
[基本框架]
开头(the beginning)——引出故事
主体(the body)——具体过程
结尾(the ending)——自我感受
[常用词块]
1．put on many performances上演了许多表演
2．focus on the environment protection注重环境保护
3．raise our awareness of protecting the Earth
提高了我们保护地球的意识
4．make our society a harmonious world
使我们的社会成为一个和谐的世界
5．have a heated discussion about...
对……进行了热烈讨论
6．contribute a lot to our project
对我们的项目有很多贡献
[常用语句]
★精彩开头
1．On the morning of ...，China successfully sent up ...
2．Many countries around the world sent their congratulations.
★正文佳句
1．Upon their arrival，Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed，and respectfully，they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.
2．When it was time for the volunteers to leave，the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.
★余味结尾
1．It is high time that the authorities should take proper steps to solve...
2．I believe we can certainly overcome the disaster with the public and the government working together.
假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示写一篇英语短文，介绍你遇到外星人的一次经历。
1．发现UFO，两个外星人走出来，他们有着绿色皮肤和绿色的眼睛。不到一米高。
2．他们挖土装进袋子，回到飞碟飞走了。
3．你的感受。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
[学生习作]
One day, I was walking in the field when I saw a UFO flying in the sky. It landed in the field and two aliens walked out of it, who had green skin and green eyes. They were no more than one meter tall. The two aliens began to dig some soil and put it into a bag. Then they went back to the UFO and went away. How unforgettable an experience it was. | 点评： 1.该篇习作符合故事类短文的写作要求，对整个过程描写完整，而且最后给出自己的感受。 2.文章能够使用be doing...when, 定语从句等高级句式，使得文章表达更加连贯。 3.但是高级词汇使用较少，可以适当增添一些高级词汇和短语，增添文章的语言色彩。 |
[升格作文]
One day, I was walking in the field when I heard a strange noise from the sky. It was a UFO!
It began to land in the field, two aliens just came out. They had green skin and green eyes. They were not more than one meter tall. I was so frightened that I could do nothing but try to hide behind a tree.
The two aliens dug some soil and put it into a bag. After that they came back to the UFO and flew away.
What an unforgettable experience I had!
请你根据下列提示写一篇关于遇到外星人的经历。
1．在学校后面的山上玩，发现了一个飞碟。
2．外星人非常矮，没有头发，有两只长耳朵。
3．外星人看见我们非常吃惊，我们对他们微笑，并做了一个拥抱的动作。
注意：词数80左右。
【参考范文】
I，together with my classmate，went to the hill behind our school after class yesterday.To our surprise, we found a UFO.Two aliens stood beside. Different from our imagination, aliens were really short. They didn't have hair but two long ears. Their puppy eyes made them look cute and kind. They seemed shocked, but we were not scared. We smiled at them and tried to hug them. They smiled back.
Though we don't understand their language，I think we still could communicate with them.
