14 旅游话题 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析

这是一份14 旅游话题 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析，共7页。试卷主要包含了 6月30日下午2， 酒店已预订好，直接前往；， 第二天观看升旗仪式；， 游长城，吃北京烤鸭；等内容，欢迎下载使用。

NO.1
（2022·湖北武汉·中考真题）假如你是李欣，你与Bb叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。请你给Bb叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。
内容要点如下：
1. 6月30日下午2:00机场见；
2. 酒店已预订好，直接前往；
3. 第二天观看升旗仪式；
4. 游长城，吃北京烤鸭；
5. 补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或想法。
注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数60—80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：bk v. 预订 directly adv. 直接地 flag-raising ceremny 升旗仪式
【满分作文赏析】
Dear Uncle Bb,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu abut visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan. We’ll meet at the airprt at 2 p.m. n June 30th. We can g t the htel directly t have a rest as I’ve already bked the rms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremny at Tian’anmen Square early in the mrning. It must be amazing! What abut the Great Wall? It’s wrth visiting and yu’ll be impressed. As fr dinner, we’ll have the delicius fd, Beijing duck. Hnestly, I am getting excited abut the trip.
Lk frward t meeting all f yu in Beijing.
Li Xin
【解析】
1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容要点及参考词汇给Bb叔叔回一封邮件，告知Bb叔叔自己对旅行的安排。
2.写作指导：邮件的开头和结尾已给出，写作时要补全正文内容，要以第一人称为主，时态多用一般将来时。邮件可分为两段式：第一段介绍具体的计划；第二段表达自己的期待。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
NO.2
（2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题）假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。
注意：
（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的建议至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavir；编辑editr
Dear editr,I was shcked t see sme uncivilized behavirs when I tk a trip t a village last weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Liu Jun
【满分作文赏析】
Dear editr,
I was shcked t see sme uncivilized behavirs when I tk a trip t a village last weekend. Sme visitrs threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying arund. Sme picked flwers withut permissin t take phts s that they culd shw ff nline. And sme climbed trees fr fun, which might result in serius accidents.
I think it wrng t enjy neself at the cst f thers. Visitrs are suppsed t prtect the envirnment, like putting rubbish int prper bins. And they shuld be careful nt t cause truble t the lcals and keep away frm danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and mre civilized new village will be there fr us all t enjy.
Yurs sincerely
Liu Jun
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为；第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
NO.3
（2022·内蒙古包头·中考真题）假定你是李华，下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩，并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。
Make a list
（T-shirts, sunglasses…）
Place small bags inside big bags…
Places f interest
（the Palace Museum, the Great Wall…）
Pstcards, bks…
参考词汇：pack v. 打包 suvenir n. 纪念品
注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Hi Alan,I’m s happy t get yur email saying that yu’re cming t visit us next week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t meeting yu!
Li Hua
【满分作文赏析】
Hi Alan,
I’m s happy t get yur email saying that yu’re cming t visit us next week. Since yu are ging n a lng flight, I suggest yu make a list f things yu take. It is a bit ht in summer here. S yu can take T-shirts and sunglasses with yu. D yu hate that feeling when yu can’t find what yu’re lking fr in yur bag? Me t! Placing small bags inside big bags is the best slutin.
I think it’s a gd idea t g t sme places f interest tgether, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. Yu will learn a lt abut Chinese culture and histry. As fr the suvenir, I like cllecting pstcards and bks frm different places. D yu have any pstcards f Twer Bridge? That wuld suit me fine. Thanks!
I’m lking frward t meeting yu!
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述去北京游玩需要携带的东西，打包的方式，可以参观的地方以及建议带的纪念品。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主，讲述旅行需要携带的东西，打包的建议，在北京可以参观的地方，从英国带到中国的纪念品，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
Uncivilized behavirs
Suggestins
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flwers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish int bins
● …
Hi, Next week I’ll be with yu in Beijing. I can’t wait! We culd d lts f exciting things tgether. And nw I need t pack fr my trip. What shuld I bring with me?
I always take lts f things in my bag and can’t find what I really want! Please tell me hw I culd pack.
Since I am interested in histry and culture f China, I want t knw where we will g.
I’d like t get yu sme suvenirs frm where I live. What wuld yu like me t get yu?
I’m s excited abut the trip! See yu sn.
Alan