13 社会正能量与志愿者招募 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析

这是一份13 社会正能量与志愿者招募 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析，共10页。试卷主要包含了 80-120词；， ……，词数等内容，欢迎下载使用。

NO.1
（2022·重庆·中考真题）
科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。
要求：
1. 80-120词；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 起因，经过；
2. 结果，感悟；
3. ……
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【满分作文赏析】
A study shws that happiness can make peple healthier in mind and mental. Our psitive md has an influence n thers. I want t share my experience with yu.
I have a gd friend and her name is Lucy. She was s shrt that ther classmates always laughed at her. She was very upset. At that time I always tld her sme funny stries t cheer her up. And t becme tall and strng, I als taught her t keep a healthy diet and d sme exercise. Little by little, she became cnfident.
Frm this experience, I learn that happiness is imprtant and it can bring us a lt like a mre sunny mindset.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
NO.2
（2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。
（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。
（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。
（4）人们过来帮忙。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：被吹倒be blwn dwn 挡住blck 树枝branch 树干trunk
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I’d like t share a stry with yu.
Last Friday, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
D yu have a stry t tell? Hpe t hear frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【满分作文赏析】
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I’d like t share a stry with yu.
Last Friday, n Wang Hng’s way hme, she saw a big tree was blwn dwn by wind and it blcked the way. After Wang Hng saw it, she picked up the branches n the grund and then mved the trunk again. But the trunk was s heavy that she culdn’t mve it by herself. When ther peple saw what she was ding, they were mved by her and came t help her. Finally, they succeeded in mving the trunk away.
I think she is a very kind persn. And frm this stry, I learn that we shuld ffer t help when smene needs help. It nt nly helps thers, but als makes urselves happy.
D yu have a stry t tell? Hpe t hear frm yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
NO.3
（2022·陕西·中考真题）学校是个大家庭，这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以 “Schl Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求，从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。
参考词汇：
be patient (with), care abut, encurage, share, help, understand, lve, have fun, ...
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Gd afternn, everyne!
I am glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Schl Is a Big Family”.
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Thank yu fr yur time!
【满分作文赏析】
Gd afternn, everyne!
I am glad t be here t give a speech. My tpic is “Schl Is a Big Family”.
First, my math teacher is patient with me. She helps me t study math better. Secnd, my classmates help me a lt. I’m nt gd at sprts. My friend Li Yun helped me with running and I ran faster. Als, I care abut my teachers and classmates. One day my English teacher had a cld and I tld her t drink mre ht water. She felt warm and thanked me.
I believe if we understand and help each ther, ur schl will be a better place.
Thank yu fr yur time!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Schl Is a Big Family”为题，并结合提示内容写一篇演讲稿，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段重点描述同学和老师对我的帮助，以及我对他人的帮助；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
NO.4
（2022·福建·中考真题）假定你是李华，近日你校开展了以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题的实践活动。请你结合以下图示，用英语给笔友Jhn写一封信，分享活动过程和感受。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Jhn,
Hw is everything ging?
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【满分作文赏析】
Dear Jhn,
Hw is everything ging? I’m glad t tell yu my ne-day experience in rice fields.
On June 18, my classmates and I went t the cmmunity farm. When we arrived, we visited the farm and watched vides n farming. Then we wrked tgether with farmers. Sme learnt t harvest rice. Sme helped t carry rice while thers picked ears f rice frm the fields. Thrugh the activity, I’ve gt the pleasure f hard wrk and learnt t value each grain.
Have yu had any experience f this kind?
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据图示内容，以“热爱劳动，珍爱粮食”为主题写一篇作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时需涵盖要点，包括日期、地点、活动和感受，可适当发挥使行文连贯，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
NO.5
（2022·山东泰安·中考真题）让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动，对其成长具有重要意义，可以帮助他们学习新技能，增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至，请根据下面表格中的内容提示，以 “My Vlunteer Wrk Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划，并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。
要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目，也可自拟活动项目；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数80-100；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。My Vlunteer Wrk Plan
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【满分作文赏析】
My Vlunteer Wrk Plan
The summer hliday is cming. I am ging t d sme vlunteer wrk. I will help t clean up the city park. Of curse, I will ask mre peple t jin me. I will call up my friends and ask them t cme. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and ther waste things. I hpe ur city will be mre beautiful. Besides, I am ging t visit sick kids in hspital. I lve children and enjy getting alng with them. I will sing fr the kids at the city hspital t cheer them up. I hpe they can be better sn.
Nt nly d I feel gd abut helping ther peple, but als I get t spend time ding what I lve t d. All in all, I will enjy myself in the summer hliday.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情；第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
NO.6
（2022·四川眉山·中考真题）本周日上午，一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观，现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括：
1. 自荐目的：成为志愿者；
2. 个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），本周日上午有空；
3. 个人优势：擅长英语，……；
4. 表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。
注意：
1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇：三苏祠Sansu Temple
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad t see yur ntice Vlunteers Wanted. Sme freign students…______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【满分作文赏析】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad t see yur ntice Vlunteers Wanted. Sme freign students will visit Sansu Temple this Sunday mrning. I’m willing t be a vlunteer.
Let me intrduce myself t yu. I’m a middle schl student aged 15. I’m an utging girl/by wh can always get n well with thers. As fr the time, I will be available this Sunday mrning. My ral English is s excellent that I have n difficulty cmmunicating with freign friends. Mre imprtantly, I knw a lt abut Sansu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding f it.
I believe I can manage it if yu give me a chance. Please reply t me by Friday!（103 wrds）
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，写封邮件自荐成为三苏祠的志愿者，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍自荐的目的，自己的信息和优势，以及自己的期望。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
Vlunteer Wrk
◎Help in the city library ◎Clean up the city parks
◎Hld a charity bazaar（义卖） ◎D vlunteer wrk in a hspital
◎Visit the ld peple’s hme ◎…