01 双减政策与课后延时服务 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析

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NO.1
（2022·湖北随州·中考真题）“双减”之后，为了引导学生合理利用周末时间，最近你校开展了“如何让周末生活更有意义”的征文活动。请你从体育运动、家务劳动和社会活动三方面，用英语写一篇短文投稿，提出你的建议和看法。
写作要求：1.短文必须包含以上三方面的内容，并适当发挥；
2.词数：80词左右；（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
Nwadays, we students have sme free time n weekends, but hw can we make ur weekends mre meaningful? Here are my suggestins.
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In a wrd, let’s try t plan free time well and make ur weekends mre meaningful.
【满分作文赏析】
Nwadays, we students have sme free time n weekends, but hw can we make ur weekends mre meaningful? Here are my suggestins.
Firstly, we can take part in many sprts activities. Bys can play basketball, ftball and s n. Girls can g swimming, skating, r muntain climbing. These sprts are gd fr ur health. Secndly, when we are at hme n weekends, we can help ur parents d husewrk, such as sweeping the flr, washing dishes. Finally, we can als jin in sme useful scial activities. Fr example, we can g t the nursing hme t help the ld d things and clean the park.
In a wrd, let’s try t plan free time well and make ur weekends mre meaningful.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，从体育运动、家务劳动和社会活动三方面写一篇作文关于如何让周末生活更有意义。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时行文。人称以第一人称为主。写作时可用过渡词Firstly，Secndly，Finally连接三个要点。最后确保行文连贯，语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
NO.2
（2022·山西·中考真题）有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对1267名学生进行了问卷调查，下图是相关的统计结果。
Students’ Favrite Kinds f English Hmewrk
假如你是该校的学生，请你根据以上图表信息，用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.简要说明图表内容；
2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名；
3.参考词汇仅供参考。
A pssible versin:A schl did a survey amng 1,267 students abut their favrite kinds f English hmewrk. Here are the results. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
A schl did a survey amng 1,267 students abut their favrite kinds f English hmewrk. Here are the results. 42% f the students like listening and speaking hmewrk best, and 29% enjy reading and writing. The percentage f the students wh like the hands-n prject is 22% and 7% chse ther kinds f hmewrk.
As fr me, I like the hands-n prject best because it cnnects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ag, we were asked t make an English pster abut Dragn Bat Festival. Then I cllected lts f infrmatin n the festival. Finally, nt nly did I finish the task perfectly, but als I gt a deeper understanding f ur clrful culture. In my pinin, it’s the hands-n prject that aruses my interest in English and enriches my experiences in learning.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍问卷的调查结果，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍调查结果；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的作业类型和这种作业的好处。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.3
（2022·江苏宿迁·中考真题）实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjy study, enjy life”的英语短文。
注意事项：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjy study, enjy life
Because f the “duble reductin” plicy, we have mre time t d what we like t enjy study and life.
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In a wrd, if we spend ur free time prperly, we will get a lt in bth bdy and mind.
【满分作文赏析】
Enjy study, enjy life
Because f the “duble reductin” plicy, we have mre time t d what we like t enjy study and life.
In schl, we shuld actively participate in varius activities, such as painting, dancing, ftball, etc. Thrugh these sprts, we can make ur bdies healthier and strnger. If students have difficulties, we shuld als actively help them.
At hme, we shuld live in peace with ur parents. We shuld talk abut ur dreams with them and talk abut ur trubles in time. Let parents knw everything abut us. With their supprt, we will get twice the result with half the effrt. At the same time, we shuld als help ur parents d sme husewrk and learn sme life skills. If yu are in a bad md, yu can listen t sme music r d smething yu like.
In a wrd, if we spend ur free time prperly, we will get a lt in bth bdy and mind.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Enjy study, enjy life”为题介绍如何合理安排课余生活，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍在学校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
NO.4
（2022·湖南衡阳·中考真题）随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？
请你以“Hw t Be a Happy Student”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求：(1)根据右边的图文信息，选择至少两个方面的内容行文，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等个人信息；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)词数不少于80。
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【满分作文赏析】
Hw t Be a Happy Student
Everyne wants t be happy. As a student, what can we d t be happy? Here is my advice.
It’s necessary fr us t have learning gals. The gals can make us be clear abut what t d every day and live a busy and meaningful life. T be healthy is t be happy. S remember t have gd life habits and d mre exercise. We can d sme sprts, such as running r playing basketball. Als, we shuld be ready t help thers. When we help thse in truble, we can get much happiness. Besides, the mst imprtant fr us is t stay in a gd md. If we are in gd spirits, we can study better. We shuld have a psitive attitude and be ready t help thers.
I believe if we d s, we can have a happy life.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Hw t Be a Happy Student”为题，结合图文信息进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从健康，爱好，情绪和习惯几方面进行阐述；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.5
（2022·江苏连云港·中考真题）“双减”之后，如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义？请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Happy Summer Vacatin”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。
注意：
（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Happy Summer Vacatin
The summer vacatin is cming. With mre free time, hw can we have a happy and meaningful vacatin? Here is my advice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Happy Summer Vacatin
The summer vacatin is cming. With mre free time, hw can we have a happy and meaningful vacatin? Here is my advice.
First, we can d sme sprts. We can g running every mrning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can d sme husewrk at hme. It’s necessary fr us t learn sme life skills and lk after urselves. What’s mre, we need t read sme bks. Reading helps imprve ur knwledge and pens up a whle new wrld t us. We can als jin sme clubs, such as the Singing Club r the Dancing Club. It can help us develp ur hbbies.
I hpe yu can have a clurful vacatin.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Happy Summer Vacatin”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从运动，做家务，阅读和参加俱乐部四方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.6
（2022·云南昆明·中考真题）Me after the “duble reductin” plicy
“双减”政策(the “duble reductin” plicy)实施之后，同学们有了更多可自由支配的时间。同时，大部分学校围绕文娱、体育、户外等主题开展了丰富多彩的活动，给大家的生活增添了生机与活力。某英文网站正面向全市中学生开展以”双减”为主题的征文活动，请用所给题目写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述一下”双减”后你的变化及感受。
要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
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【满分作文赏析】
Dear Editr,
I’m a middle schl student. Since the “duble reductin” plicy was released, my life has changed a lt.
I used t d my hmewrk till midnight and have n time fr my hbbies. At the same time, I always attended many training curses at weekends. S I had less time fr exercise and felt very tired all the time.
Hwever, with the supprt f the “duble reductin” plicy, thugh I g hme late, I have mre interesting activities I like. I feel very excited when I jin in these activities. Mrever, I can have mre time t cmmunicate with my parents because I have little hmewrk after schl. I have mre time t develp my hbbies.
I think the “duble reductin” plicy is very gd. I believe I can study happily and have fun at schl because f the “duble reductin” plicy.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“双减”之后自己的变化及感受等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
NO.7
（2022·湖北荆州·中考真题） “双减”政策（duble-reductin plicy）实施后，你们学校开展了丰富多彩的课外活动。假设你是李华，请给你的美国笔友Tm写一封信，谈谈你参加课外活动的情况。
内容包括：
1. 介绍你们学校开展的课外活动；
2. 叙述你的一次课外活动经历；
3. 说说你的体会。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。文中不得出现真实的学校名称和人名；
2. 词数：80 词左右（书信开头已给出, 不计入总词数）。
Dear Tm,
Hw’s it ging? Let me tell yu smething abut ur after-schl activities.
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Yur friend,
Li Hua
【满分作文赏析】
Dear Tm,
Hw’s it ging? Let me tell yu smething abut ur after-schl activities.
There are ver 20 students’ clubs in ur schl. There are art clubs, basketball clubs, calligraphy clubs, etc. I am in the basketball and chess clubs. We ften have a basketball match n Friday. Last week, ur basketball match was really exciting. All the players tried their best t scre. Finally, we wn the game nly by ne pint, but we were quite happy.
The activities nt nly build up my bdy and mind but als prvide a perfect platfrm and rich chices fr my future develpment. Besides, they als free me frm the heavy wrk f study.
Yur friend,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：在“双减”政策下，学校的课外活动日益丰富。要求给美国笔友Tm写一封信，内容包括：1. 介绍开展的活动；2. 叙述一次活动经历；3. 说说体会。
2. 写作指导：本文应使用第一人称进行写作。文章第一部分描述学校开展的活动，应使用一般现在时。第二部分应使用一般过去时来描述曾经的某次活动经历。第三部分的体会应使用一般现在时。需要注意的是，第一部分描述的活动类型应尽可能丰富，体现词汇的多样性。在第二部分在描述活动经历的过程中应使用恰当的形容词和副词。
NO.8
（2022·江苏徐州·中考真题）你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程（见下表）。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。你校英文报正在组织题为“Me and my after-class curse”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你选修的课程；
2. 你学习该课程的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【满分作文赏析】
Me and my after-class curse
In my schl, there are many kinds f after-class curses. I chse the curse f DIY. DIY literally means making things by hand.
My first assignment was t use the clred bubble mud cmmnly used by primary schl students nw, paste a clred blessing n the small bard, and then make a frame with clred wl. Because I think everyne has a different understanding f happiness. I made a wrd Fu int clr. It’s quite a test f a persn’s patience t d sme simple handicrafts, such as crss stitch, flding thusand paper crane...
Thrugh this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways. Waste beverage bttles, wl, ice cream sticks and s n can becme raw materials fr handmade. We can create ur wn satisfactry wrks thrugh ur wn imaginatin.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Me and my after-class curse”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时先从表格里选择一个课外课程，之后再根据三个要点展开叙述。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
WORD BANK
aruse interest 微发兴趣
enrich experiences 丰富经历
prmte cmpetence 提升素养
Enjy study, enjy life
校园
1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等；
2.多做运动，有益健康；
3.……（补充一点）
家庭
1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼；
2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能；
3.……（补充一点）
①运动（Sprts） ②阅读（Reading） ③手工（DIY）
④绘画（Painting） ⑤声乐（Singing） ⑥……（自拟）
Me and my after-class curseIn my schl, there are many kinds f after-class curses. I chse ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________