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这是一份04 知识与技能、技巧与方法 2022年中考英语满分作文赏析，共13页。试卷主要包含了 一个科目名称；， 此科目的学习方法；， 此科目的学习感受或期望， 词数80左右等内容，欢迎下载使用。
NO.1
（2022·广西·中考真题）在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现校刊英文专栏以 “Learning t learn”为主题征稿。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：
1. 一个科目名称；
2. 此科目的学习方法（至少两个）；
3. 此科目的学习感受或期望。
写作要求：
1. 将标题和首句补充完整；
2. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息；
4. 词数80左右。
Methds f learning ________
Here are my methds f learning ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Methds f learning English
Here are my methds f learning English. First, I usually watch English mvies and listen t English sngs. I think it’s a relaxing way t learn the crrect prnunciatin and prper expressins. Secnd, reading passages n the same tpic helps a lt in learning new wrds. In this way, the new wrds can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s mre, it’s a gd habit t keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and imprve my writing skills as well.
English is a bridge which cnnects the wrld and us. It’s interesting t learn it. I hpe I can make greater prgress in the future.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学会学习”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段先介绍自己学习英语的方法；第二段表达学习英语的感受或期望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误 。
NO.2
（2022·广西贺州·中考真题）假如你是李华，在过去的三年，英语老师教会了你很多英语知识和技能，开拓了你的视野。你感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。请你结合以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is Ms. Zhang. She is a tall and utging lady wh is very patient with all f us.
Ms. Zhang has taught me English fr 3 years. I like her interesting classes. Learning English helps me becme mre pen-minded. Nw I can talk with thers in English fluently and read sme English bks. I can als tell sme stries in English. Besides, enjying English sngs and mvies has becme ne f my hbbies.
Ms. Zhang is an excellent teacher, t whm I want t say thanks. I decide t learn mre English in the future, and try my best t tell the stry f China in English t the wrld.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示，介绍下你的英语老师，描述你所学会的东西，以及感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。叙述时可适当运用短语句型或从句，使文章出彩有亮点。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
NO.3
（2022·河南·中考真题）阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面图示信息，以“Hw reading imprves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：imprve 提高
Hw reading imprves my English
Reading plays an imprtant rle in my English learning. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Hw reading imprves my English
Reading plays an imprtant rle in my English learning.
Firstly, I find that my spken English has greatly imprved thrugh reading. It gives me cnfidence when I talk in English. Secndly, reading helps make writing easier fr me. When I d English reading, it reminds me hw wrds are spelled crrectly. S I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develps my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me pen-minded and enables me t think mre. What’s mre, reading helps me develp a gd habit f learning English.
In a wrd, reading brings me nt nly much jy but als great interest in English learning.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Hw reading imprves my English”为题，结合提示内容介绍自己是如何提高英语的，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从口语、写作和思维能力等方面介绍自己是如何提高英语的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.4
（2022·云南·中考真题）I Learned Hw t ________
提示：人生是一个不断学习、进步的过程。通过学习，你掌握了某种技能，明白了某些道理……请以“I Learned Hw t ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你的一次学习经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
I Learned Hw t Learn English Well
At the beginning f middle schl, I always gt bad grades in English. I was very upset and didn’t knw hw t learn it well.
One day, my English teacher talked t me and understd my prblem. She gave me sme advice like speaking mre. Frm that day, I made an English study plan. First, I listened t English sngs r watched English mvies. Secnd, I listened t teacher in class carefully and tk ntes. Thirdly, I tk part in the English crner. I cmmunicated with thers as much as pssible in English. Finally, I have great prgress in English.
Frm this experience, I knw that when yu face sme difficulties, dn’t give up easily. Yu shuld find sme ways t deal with them. Yu will success ne day.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我学会了如何学好英语”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己在学习英语的经历；最后一段介绍自己从这次经历得到了什么感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
NO.5
（2022·四川南充·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点：
（1）给出你的建议；
（2）谈谈学习汉语的重要性；
（3）结合自身经历，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。
要求：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【满分作文赏析】
Dear Tracy,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. Knwing yu have an interest in Chinese, I suggest yu chse the Chinese curse. With the develpment f China, Chinese is becming mre and mre ppular. Learning Chinese is nt nly a way t cmmunicate, but als a chance t admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese fr many years. I have much experience t share with yu. In my pinin, there are many ways t learn Chinese. It’s useful t read Chinese bks and listen t Chinese sngs. What’s mre, yu are suppsed t jin a Chinese club t practice yur spken Chinese. Learning is a lifelng jurney. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring smething new.
I hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Tracy是否选修汉语给出建议，谈谈学习汉语的重要性并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性；第二段结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.6
（2022·浙江嘉兴·中考真题）假如你是李华，为营造更好的校园英语氛围，你班决定以学校花园为载体，开展“Create Our Outdr Classrm”项目式学习（COOC Prject），经过分组讨论，你们形成了Plan A与Plan B 两个实施方案（见下表）。请你选择其中一个方案，用英语写一篇短文，代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所选方案的内容和优势进行回报。
注意：(1)短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息，并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数：80~100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m very prud t share ur plan with yu tday. The plan we chse is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank yu!
【满分作文赏析】
Plan A
Dear classmates,
I’m very prud t share ur plan with yu tday. The plan we chse is naming the plants in English.
There are mainly tw steps. We’ll first d a survey t find infrmatin abut the plants. We can surf the Internet, r ask ur teachers fr help if we meet with difficulties. The secnd step is t design name cards. We’ll describe each kind f plants in English. T make the cards lk prettier, a pht f the plant will be included in each card.
We believe this plan will make ur schl garden a better place t learn abut nature and imprve ur English. I can’t wait t see it cme int practice.
That’s all. Thank yu!
Plan B
Dear classmates,
I’m very prud t share ur plan with yu tday. The plan we chse is creating an English crner.
The first thing we’ll d is t chse an area fr it. As yu see in the map, the grassland makes a gd chice. We’ll decrate it with several tables and chairs, s that we can have cmfrtable talks. A shelf f English bks and magazines will als be put there. Then we’re ging t make sme rules. Fr example, we need t take care f things, and f curse, speak English nly.
I’m sure this crner will becme a ppular place fr us t imprve ur spken English, and make mre friends as well.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Create Our Outdr Classrm”为主题，结合提示内容，选择一个方案进行介绍。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：以Plan A为例，写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍具体要怎么做；第三段介绍该计划预期的成果；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.7
（2022·北京·中考真题）某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的，取得了什么效果。
提示词语：plan, task, attentin, make use f, prgress
提示问题：· Hw d yu increase yur efficiency(效率)?
· What have yu achieved?
【满分作文赏析】
High efficiency is imprtant fr a busy student. It is necessary fr everyne t learn hw t increase efficiency.
I have tried many ways t increase my efficiency since I was a middle schl student. Befre the beginning f a day, I always think abut my gals and make a list f things I need t d. Then, I rganize my t-d list t make an effective plan fr the day. I always spend time ding imprtant tasks first and make gd use f the rest f the time.
By managing my time well, I have made prgress. I usually finish my hmewrk n time and still have time t relax myself. High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in varius areas f my life.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“提升效率”为主题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己是如何提高效率的以及取得了什么成就；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.8
（2022·湖北鄂州·中考真题）《义务教育英语课程标准》（2011年版）要求初中毕业生英语课外阅读量应累计达到15万词以上。请你就“Hw t Read Widely”（如何广泛阅读）为题，谈谈你的看法。
写作要点：
1. Why is reading widely useful t yu?
2. Hw d yu usually read?
3. What’s yur advice?
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名。
2. 文章必须包括所有写作要点。
3. 词数80左右。（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
Hw t Read Widely
It’s useful fr us t read widely. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Hw t Read Widely
It’s useful fr us t read widely. It helps us have a wide knwledge f different subjects and it als develps ur lgical thinking and pens up a new wrld fr us.
I ften chse what I am interested in t read, such as histry bks, stry bks and n s. I ften brrw bks frm the library. And if I lve the bk very much, I will buy it and read it again and again.
S I think we can chse the bks that we are interested in and spare sme time every day t read. I believe it will benefit us.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Hw t Read Widely”为题，根据题干中提示的问题进行写作，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段主要讲述广泛阅读的好处；第二段讲述自己是如何阅读的；第三段讲述自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
你的英语老师
1.外貌 2.性格……
你学会了
1.唱英文歌，欣赏英文电影 2.用英语讲小故事 3.用英语进行简单交流……
感恩和决心
1.感恩老师的教导 2.继续努力学习英语 3. 用英语向世界讲述中国故事……
High efficiency is imprtant fr a busy student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
NO.1
（2022·广西·中考真题）在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现校刊英文专栏以 “Learning t learn”为主题征稿。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：
1. 一个科目名称；
2. 此科目的学习方法（至少两个）；
3. 此科目的学习感受或期望。
写作要求：
1. 将标题和首句补充完整；
2. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息；
4. 词数80左右。
Methds f learning ________
Here are my methds f learning ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Methds f learning English
Here are my methds f learning English. First, I usually watch English mvies and listen t English sngs. I think it’s a relaxing way t learn the crrect prnunciatin and prper expressins. Secnd, reading passages n the same tpic helps a lt in learning new wrds. In this way, the new wrds can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s mre, it’s a gd habit t keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and imprve my writing skills as well.
English is a bridge which cnnects the wrld and us. It’s interesting t learn it. I hpe I can make greater prgress in the future.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学会学习”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段先介绍自己学习英语的方法；第二段表达学习英语的感受或期望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误 。
NO.2
（2022·广西贺州·中考真题）假如你是李华，在过去的三年，英语老师教会了你很多英语知识和技能，开拓了你的视野。你感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。请你结合以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is Ms. Zhang. She is a tall and utging lady wh is very patient with all f us.
Ms. Zhang has taught me English fr 3 years. I like her interesting classes. Learning English helps me becme mre pen-minded. Nw I can talk with thers in English fluently and read sme English bks. I can als tell sme stries in English. Besides, enjying English sngs and mvies has becme ne f my hbbies.
Ms. Zhang is an excellent teacher, t whm I want t say thanks. I decide t learn mre English in the future, and try my best t tell the stry f China in English t the wrld.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示，介绍下你的英语老师，描述你所学会的东西，以及感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。叙述时可适当运用短语句型或从句，使文章出彩有亮点。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
NO.3
（2022·河南·中考真题）阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请你结合下面图示信息，以“Hw reading imprves my English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向学校校刊的英语专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1)文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3)词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：imprve 提高
Hw reading imprves my English
Reading plays an imprtant rle in my English learning. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Hw reading imprves my English
Reading plays an imprtant rle in my English learning.
Firstly, I find that my spken English has greatly imprved thrugh reading. It gives me cnfidence when I talk in English. Secndly, reading helps make writing easier fr me. When I d English reading, it reminds me hw wrds are spelled crrectly. S I make fewer and fewer mistakes in my English writing. Thirdly, reading develps my thinking ability. What I’ve read makes me pen-minded and enables me t think mre. What’s mre, reading helps me develp a gd habit f learning English.
In a wrd, reading brings me nt nly much jy but als great interest in English learning.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Hw reading imprves my English”为题，结合提示内容介绍自己是如何提高英语的，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从口语、写作和思维能力等方面介绍自己是如何提高英语的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.4
（2022·云南·中考真题）I Learned Hw t ________
提示：人生是一个不断学习、进步的过程。通过学习，你掌握了某种技能，明白了某些道理……请以“I Learned Hw t ________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你的一次学习经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【满分作文赏析】
I Learned Hw t Learn English Well
At the beginning f middle schl, I always gt bad grades in English. I was very upset and didn’t knw hw t learn it well.
One day, my English teacher talked t me and understd my prblem. She gave me sme advice like speaking mre. Frm that day, I made an English study plan. First, I listened t English sngs r watched English mvies. Secnd, I listened t teacher in class carefully and tk ntes. Thirdly, I tk part in the English crner. I cmmunicated with thers as much as pssible in English. Finally, I have great prgress in English.
Frm this experience, I knw that when yu face sme difficulties, dn’t give up easily. Yu shuld find sme ways t deal with them. Yu will success ne day.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我学会了如何学好英语”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己在学习英语的经历；最后一段介绍自己从这次经历得到了什么感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
NO.5
（2022·四川南充·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点：
（1）给出你的建议；
（2）谈谈学习汉语的重要性；
（3）结合自身经历，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。
要求：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【满分作文赏析】
Dear Tracy,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. Knwing yu have an interest in Chinese, I suggest yu chse the Chinese curse. With the develpment f China, Chinese is becming mre and mre ppular. Learning Chinese is nt nly a way t cmmunicate, but als a chance t admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese fr many years. I have much experience t share with yu. In my pinin, there are many ways t learn Chinese. It’s useful t read Chinese bks and listen t Chinese sngs. What’s mre, yu are suppsed t jin a Chinese club t practice yur spken Chinese. Learning is a lifelng jurney. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring smething new.
I hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Tracy是否选修汉语给出建议，谈谈学习汉语的重要性并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性；第二段结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.6
（2022·浙江嘉兴·中考真题）假如你是李华，为营造更好的校园英语氛围，你班决定以学校花园为载体，开展“Create Our Outdr Classrm”项目式学习（COOC Prject），经过分组讨论，你们形成了Plan A与Plan B 两个实施方案（见下表）。请你选择其中一个方案，用英语写一篇短文，代表小组在英语拓展课上就你们所选方案的内容和优势进行回报。
注意：(1)短文必须包含表中你所选方案的所有信息，并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数：80~100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m very prud t share ur plan with yu tday. The plan we chse is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank yu!
【满分作文赏析】
Plan A
Dear classmates,
I’m very prud t share ur plan with yu tday. The plan we chse is naming the plants in English.
There are mainly tw steps. We’ll first d a survey t find infrmatin abut the plants. We can surf the Internet, r ask ur teachers fr help if we meet with difficulties. The secnd step is t design name cards. We’ll describe each kind f plants in English. T make the cards lk prettier, a pht f the plant will be included in each card.
We believe this plan will make ur schl garden a better place t learn abut nature and imprve ur English. I can’t wait t see it cme int practice.
That’s all. Thank yu!
Plan B
Dear classmates,
I’m very prud t share ur plan with yu tday. The plan we chse is creating an English crner.
The first thing we’ll d is t chse an area fr it. As yu see in the map, the grassland makes a gd chice. We’ll decrate it with several tables and chairs, s that we can have cmfrtable talks. A shelf f English bks and magazines will als be put there. Then we’re ging t make sme rules. Fr example, we need t take care f things, and f curse, speak English nly.
I’m sure this crner will becme a ppular place fr us t imprve ur spken English, and make mre friends as well.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Create Our Outdr Classrm”为主题，结合提示内容，选择一个方案进行介绍。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：以Plan A为例，写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍具体要怎么做；第三段介绍该计划预期的成果；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.7
（2022·北京·中考真题）某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的，取得了什么效果。
提示词语：plan, task, attentin, make use f, prgress
提示问题：· Hw d yu increase yur efficiency(效率)?
· What have yu achieved?
【满分作文赏析】
High efficiency is imprtant fr a busy student. It is necessary fr everyne t learn hw t increase efficiency.
I have tried many ways t increase my efficiency since I was a middle schl student. Befre the beginning f a day, I always think abut my gals and make a list f things I need t d. Then, I rganize my t-d list t make an effective plan fr the day. I always spend time ding imprtant tasks first and make gd use f the rest f the time.
By managing my time well, I have made prgress. I usually finish my hmewrk n time and still have time t relax myself. High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in varius areas f my life.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“提升效率”为主题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己是如何提高效率的以及取得了什么成就；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.8
（2022·湖北鄂州·中考真题）《义务教育英语课程标准》（2011年版）要求初中毕业生英语课外阅读量应累计达到15万词以上。请你就“Hw t Read Widely”（如何广泛阅读）为题，谈谈你的看法。
写作要点：
1. Why is reading widely useful t yu?
2. Hw d yu usually read?
3. What’s yur advice?
写作要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名。
2. 文章必须包括所有写作要点。
3. 词数80左右。（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
Hw t Read Widely
It’s useful fr us t read widely. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文赏析】
Hw t Read Widely
It’s useful fr us t read widely. It helps us have a wide knwledge f different subjects and it als develps ur lgical thinking and pens up a new wrld fr us.
I ften chse what I am interested in t read, such as histry bks, stry bks and n s. I ften brrw bks frm the library. And if I lve the bk very much, I will buy it and read it again and again.
S I think we can chse the bks that we are interested in and spare sme time every day t read. I believe it will benefit us.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Hw t Read Widely”为题，根据题干中提示的问题进行写作，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段主要讲述广泛阅读的好处；第二段讲述自己是如何阅读的；第三段讲述自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
你的英语老师
1.外貌 2.性格……
你学会了
1.唱英文歌，欣赏英文电影 2.用英语讲小故事 3.用英语进行简单交流……
感恩和决心
1.感恩老师的教导 2.继续努力学习英语 3. 用英语向世界讲述中国故事……
High efficiency is imprtant fr a busy student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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