Module 12 课时48Writing- 2022-2023学年九年级英语上册同步精品讲义（外研版）
展开Module 12
Writing
话题分析
本模块以“Save our world”为话题，以节约能源、保护环境为主线，让学生树立环保意识，并就目前的社会污染问题提出了解决措施。有关节约能源、保护环境的写作命题在近几年的中考中经常出现，如“低碳生活”、“绿色家园”等。所以通过本模块的学习，学生应掌握关于谈论环境和提出建议的句型。
常用表达
1. It’s our duty to save water. 节约水是我们班的责任。
2. As we know, water is very important to man. 正如我们所知，水对人类很重要。
3. We can’t live without water. 没有水我们无法生存。
4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is becoming less and less. 适合饮用的水的数量越来越少。
5. But some people don’t care about it. 但是一些人并不关心它。
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. 许多河流和湖泊受到了污染。
7. Something must be done to stop the pollution. 必须采取措施来阻止污染。
8. It’s our/everyone’s duty to protect our environment. 保护环境是我们/每个人的责任。
9. It’s very important to protect the environment around us. 保护我们周围的环境是很重要的。
10. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become more and more beautiful.
如果我们每个人都为保护环境做贡献，世界将会变得越来越美好。
实例分析
典型例题
水污染是当今世界的一个一种你问题。请你根据以下内容要点，写一篇70词左右的短文，谈谈目前的水污染状况以及应该如何保护水资源。
【内容要点】1. 一些人浪费水；2. 一些人向河流湖泊排污水、倒垃圾；3. 水被污染；4. 可供我们饮用的水越来越少；5. 应该保护水资源，重复用水……
【参考词汇】浪费水waste water；排污水pour dirty water；倒垃圾throw rubbish；被污染be polluted；越来越少less and less；保护水资源protect the water resource；再利用reuse。
【要求】1. 短文要包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥；2. 短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
思路点拨
1. 体裁：记述文；2. 人称：第一人称；3. 时态：一般现在时。
写作模板
水的重要性 | Water is very important to us. We can’t live without it. |
水污染问题 | They waste a lot of water, pour dirty water… |
发出倡议 | If everyone can do so, we are sure to save a lot of water. |
连句成篇
Water is very important to us. We can’t live without it. But some people don’t really care about this. They waste a lot of water, pour dirty water and throw rubbish into rivers or lakes. As a result, many rivers and lakes are polluted, and there is less and less water for us to drink. So we must do something to protect the water resource. We should stop the pollution and find ways to reuse water.
If everyone can do so, we are sure to save a lot of water.
随着社会的发展，环保问题逐渐提上日程。请以“My Lowcarbon Life”为题写一篇英语短文，号召大家进行低碳生活，并举出至少一项中学生能为低碳生活所做出的贡献。80～100词(题目已给出，不计入总词数)。
My Lowcarbon Life
【写作指导】
该模块的话题为“环境保护”，其常见的命题形式有两种：1.对如何保护环境表达自己的观点；2.对某一造成环境污染的事物或现象发表自己的看法。近几年中考有关节约能源、保护环境的写作越来越多，因此关于能源和环保的各种话题，都是现在以及未来命题的重要方向及热点内容。
【佳作欣赏】
My Lowcarbon Life
With the rapid development of our society，environment is faced with new challenges.① Today，I call on you to live a lowcarbon life to save home we share together.②
Riding instead of driving can be a lowcarbon way for us to protect the environment.③ Although it will spend much more time going to your place，you can have more chances to appreciate the scenery of nature and feel about the relationship between the city and yourself.④ Riding can also exercise your body.⑤
Please protect our earth and love our home.⑥ Lowcarbon life is what we need now.
【精彩点评】
①介词短语作伴随状语让人眼前一亮，“with the rapid development of our society”意为“随着社会的快速发展”，是一个万能的短语，可用于多种话题的开头。be faced with意为“面临”，此句用简洁的语言点明了环境问题日益凸显。
②该句结合了call on(号召)、live a ＋ adj.＋life(过……生活)、动词不定式表目的、定语从句等多个精彩的结构，使得文章紧凑凝练，符合号召倡议的语言特色。
③动名词作主语别具一格，让人印象深刻；使用介词短语instead of连接动名词“riding”和“driving”，既使结构对称，朗朗上口，又突出了骑单车出行的重要性。
④although引导的让步状语从句突出了骑单车出行的益处：有更多机会欣赏自然美景以及拉近城市与自己的距离。have chances to do sth.(有机会做某事)这一短语的使用提升了文章的可读性；介词短语“between… and…”作后置定语使句子充实而有生机。
⑤exercise在此处作动词，意为“锻炼”，使用得很别致。
⑥结尾观点鲜明，用祈使句再次强调“保护地球，爱护家园”的主题，很有说服力。
范文欣赏
（一）
作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该怎样做才能保护我们的环境呢？请根据下面的提示以“How to Protect Our Environment”为题，写一篇70词左右的短文。
内容提示：1. 禁止乱扔垃圾；2. 尽量以步代车或骑自行车；3. 节约用水、电，节省文具用品，杜绝浪费；4. 应该尽量使用可再利用餐具，这样就可以大大减少垃圾的产生；5. 要爱护花草树木，并且积极 参加绿化植树活动。
How to Protect Our Environment
As a student, what can we do to protect our environment? Well, we can’t throw rubbish here and there. If possible, we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a car, because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution. Don’t waste water or electricity and try to use fewer school things. Always use reusable cups, lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste. Also, we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees. I believe if everyone protects our environment, it will become better.
（二）
保护人类共同的家园——地球，是每个人的责任和义务。我们在生活中的点滴小事上也要做出自己的贡献。根据表格的内容，谈一谈你曾经为保护环境做过哪些努力，将来还打算如何去做。
要求：1. 词数不少于80；2. 意思连贯，条理清晰，适当发挥；3. 可以使用下列表格中的句子。
1. turn off the lights when you leave a room 2. turn off the shower while washing hair 3. take your own bags when shopping 4. stop riding in cars 5. ride a bike 6. recycle books and paper |
It’s our duty to protect the earth. I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. While I am washing my hair, I usually turn off the shower. Besides, I stop using papernapkins and if I want to shop, I always take my own bags instead of using plastic bags.
I have decided to do more things to protect our earth, such as stopping riding in cars and riding a bike, and recycling books and paper. I think my actions can make a difference!
（三）
“保护环境，人人有责”，请以How to Be a Greener Person 为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表你的看法。（80 词左右）
How to Be a Greener Person?
It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag instead of using plastic bags.
We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We should prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.
（四）
生活中，我们每天都在生产垃圾或废物，甚至在污染环境。那么，如何处理好各种废物，并保护我们的环境？请你以“How to Deal with the Waste”为题写一篇短文。词数80左右。
内容包括：1. 废物处理的重要性；2. 如何处理废物(至少两条建议)；3. 呼吁大家处理好废物，保护环境。
How to Deal with the Waste
The waste is everywhere around us. If we don’t deal with it, it will pollute our environment. So it is important to deal with the waste. And I have some advice about it.
First of all, if the waste can be recycled, we can collect it and sell it to the recycling centre. Besides, if the waste is some food, plants and so on, we can store them at a place in the garden. One day it will become the plants’ excellent food.
In a word, sometimes the waste can be useful to us. So in order to live a better life，everyone should deal with it properly from now on.
五
为配合你校创建“绿色健康学校”工作的全面展开，校学生会发起以“Make Our School Greener”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下信息写一篇英文短文。
要点提示：1. 爱护校园内的花草树木；2. 保持校园整洁，不乱扔废弃物；3. 节约用水，离开教室前记得关灯；4. 坚持锻炼，增强体质；5. 礼貌待人，同学间相处融洽。
注意：1. 词数80左右；文章题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 参考词汇：爱护 protect；乱扔废弃物 drop litter；坚持keep on doing。
Make Our School Greener
In order to make our school green and harmonious to live and study in, we students should do many things.
In order to make our school green and harmonious to live and study in, we students should do many things.
First of all, never destroy the flowers and trees in our school. Besides, we should keep the school environment neat and clean, thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden. Meanwhile, try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty.
What’s more, regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body. We should also be polite to others, and try our best to get on well with each other.
In short, whatever you do, please remember to lead a green and healthy life. If you understand it, you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
