江西省卷三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编-05作文

江西省卷三年（2020-2022）中考英语真题分题型分层汇编

05作文

一、材料作文

1．书面表达

失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解B部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验，采取有效行动，失败为成功。

写作要点：

1 What have you learned from Apple’s story?

2 Have you ever experienced a failure? What was it?

3 What will you do to turn it into a success?

要求：

1短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3词数不少于80。

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2．（2020·江西）为了帮助学生迎接中考，在中考前几个月，老师一般都会进行复习教学。一家英语教学研究中心(English Teaching Research Center)正在对中考英语复习教学现状进行调查。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，向他们介绍你们班的英语复习课的情况，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法，并提出建议。

写作要点：

1. Your feelings about your English revision classes.

2. Class activities: a. What did your English teacher usually do in class?

b. What did you usually do in class?

3. Your advice on English revision classes to your English teacher.

要求：

1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3.词数不少于80，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I think my English revision classes were ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

二、讲稿

3．（2022·江西）学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲活动，请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个人信息，再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质（personality），最后说说你打算如何向她学习。

要求：

1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；

2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；

3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!

参考答案

1．例文

Failure can lead to success. We should study it and learn why we make mistakes, then find ways to solve our problems. Also, we should never give up!

I once tried out for a speech competition. I practiced it many times. Unexpectedly, I failed. I’ve never spoken in front of the public ever since.

Apple’s story is quite an inspiration for me. What can I do to make it? First, be confident and try to speak in public places. Second, ask my teachers or friends for some advice and improve my language skills. Finally, be persistent and practice speeches over and over again.

I’m sure I will succeed some day.

【解析】

【分析】

（1）.题干解读：本文要求根据阅读理解B部分文章，谈谈如何借鉴Apple的成功经验，结合所给写作要点写一篇文章。内容包括从Apple的故事中学习到了什么，你的失败经历，要如何将失败变为成功。

（2）.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。第一部分介绍从Apple的成功中学习到了什么，时态为一般现在时；第二部分描写自己的失败经历，时态为一般过去时；第三部分为如何把失败变为成功，时态为一般现在时。写作时要行文连贯，条理清晰，语言准确。

2．例文：

I think my English revision classes were useful but tiring. In class, my English teacher organized different kinds of activities to help us review what we had learnt. Sometimes she explained how to use the key words and sentence patterns. We took notes and made sentences. With the teacher's help, we practiced listening, reading and writing in class. But we often did exercises and had exams, which made me stressed out.

I hope English revision classes can be more enjoyable. We can play games and role—play conversations. It’s a good idea to have discussions with my partners in English. What’s more, I like teachers who are always with a smile.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料类作文，要求写一篇关于中考英语复习教学现状的文章，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法、复习课上老师及同学开展的一些活动、个人对于英语复习课的一些建议，以上写作要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态以为一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题。

2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全。首段介绍了自己对英语复习课的感受以及老师在课堂上的教学活动和学生的学习情况；第二段介绍了个人对英语复习课的改进意见。文章使用了正确的人称和时态，符合表达的需要。

3.高分亮点：

短语：take notes；make sentences；practice doing sth；stressed out；what’s more。

句型：疑问词+动词不定式；which引导的定语从句；it作形式主语。

3．例文：

Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to introduce an astronaut hero — Wang Yaping. Wang is a 2-year-old woman born in a small village in Shandong Province. She likes playing sports very much.

Wang Yaping is the first female astronaut who performed spacewalk by Shenzhou XIII. She deserves our highest respect for her persistence in hard training. She loves her work and never gives up.

To learn from Wang Yaping, I am going to reflect on our weak points and work hard to do better. I’m going to overcome the difficulties I meet just as Wang did. Hard work can pay off.

Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：题目要求介绍王亚平的个人信息并结合本卷完形填空B篇中的内容谈谈她的优秀品质，在最后讲打算如何向她学习。

2.写作指导：写作时要结合一、三人称，时态结合一般现在时与一般将来时。演讲稿可分为四段式：第一段介绍王亚平的个人信息；第二段谈其优秀品质；第三段讲自己的计划；最后一段收尾，感谢大家的聆听。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。