专题12 家乡变化 中考英语作文话题写作范文大全（通用版）

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专题12 家乡相关类作文（精选五篇）1．    每个人都对自己的家乡怀有深深的感情, 也许是因为家乡有引以为豪的历史, 也许是因为家乡有享誉全国的特产, 也许是因为家乡有淳朴善良的民风, 也许是因为家乡有令人垂涎的美食, 也许是因为家乡有日新月异的变化......请你选择一个或几个角度, 描述一下你的家乡, 表达你对家乡的热爱之情。要求：1. 词数100左右; 2. 语言流畅, 书写规范, 卷面整洁; 3. 文中不能出现真实的校名或人名。I'm proud of my hometown_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．你喜欢你的家乡吗？你为家乡的变化而高兴吗？请以 “The Changes of My Hometown ”为题，根据所给汉语提示，用英文写一段话，不少于80个单词。内容必须包括以下提示中的三项要点：1. 家乡以前的状况   2. 家乡现在的变化     3. 你的感受。注：文中不得出现真实的人名、地点。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  3．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My hometown in ten years”.  (以“十年后的家乡”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60词，标点符号不占格。)     提示：十年后，你希望家乡会有哪些变化？是希望她的交通更为便捷，还是希望她成为一个山清水净的现代化田园？请展开你的想象，围绕一个中心简单描述一下。                                                                                                                                                                                             4．    人人都说自己家乡好。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍家乡的著名景点、天气特征和传统节日。词数：80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．    最近，网络上正在进行“最美家乡”评选活动，请你在朋友圈中为自己的家乡打call。要求：（1）必须介绍你家乡的地理位置、天气、特色美食、著名景点及最佳游览时间，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；（3）不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入规定词数，请续写。Dear everyone, would you please be kind enough to vote for my home town?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案1．例文：I'm proud of my hometownI am very proud of my hometown, Shanghai, one of the biggest cities in China. Shanghai is in the east of China. The Oriental pearl TV tower is the symbol of Shanghai. They are famous all over the world. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. Many tall buildings have been built in the center of Shanghai. Roads also are widened. The change project demonstrates the wisdom of the people of Shanghai. The world expo was held in Shanghai in 2010. People here are friendly to the visitors. I think it will become more and more beautiful. I love Shanghai forever.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头介绍我以我的家乡上海为傲；接下来介绍上海的发展和变化；最后我认为上海会越来越美丽。2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和现在完成时，介绍上海的变化和发展，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：短语：be proud of；all over the world；take place；be friendly to。句型：主系表结构的句子Roads also are widened；宾语从句it will become more and more beautiful。2．略【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己家乡的短文。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，注意文后要适当表达自己的感想。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要是一般现在及过去时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。考点：提纲类作文点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改。3．My hometown in ten years The world is changing rapidly every day. My hometown will become more and more beautiful in ten years. People will plant more trees instead of cutting. The mountains will be covered with green trees .All the animals will live a happy life there. Factories will stop pouring waste water into the rivers, and rivers in my hometown will be clearer. Fish will swim freely in them. There will be less traffic and the air will be fresher. We will be able to enjoy the blue sky and white cloud. There will be more parks with green trees and various kinds of flowers. Birds will sing for us and butterflies will dance among the flowers. Green mountains are mountains of gold and silver .We will live a better life in my hometown in ten years【分析】本篇为话题作文，要求以一个话题为中心描述10年后你想象的家乡。【详解】1.题干解读：本篇话题作文要求选择“交通更为便捷”、“一个山清水净的现代化田园”其中的一个话题，以第一人称描述10年后的家乡，时态用一般将来时。书写时要注意文句通顺，内容完整。 2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。以“My hometown will become more and more beautiful in ten years.10年后的家乡将会更加美丽 ”开篇，紧扣主题；正文部分详细地描写家乡在10后的变化，青山、绿水、蓝天、白云；动物愉快地生活、鸟儿歌唱、蝴蝶飞舞等一派山青水净的好风光；结尾以Green mountains are mountains of gold and silver .We will live a better life in my hometown in ten years总结全文。 文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。 3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、句式多样。文中多处应用比较级become more and more beautiful be clearer ；be less traffic；be fresher；be more parks live a better life 来描述10后的家乡比现在更好；用短语instead of ； live a happy life ；stop pouring  waste wate；伴随状语with green trees and various kinds of flowers ；被动语态be covered with 来描写10年后家乡的景色；用live a better life总结全文，文句精彩，行文通畅。【点睛】本篇话题作文书写前要认真审题，确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般将来时）；关注题材的格式（记叙文），注意文章的篇章结构；书写时要紧扣主题，做到中心突出，内容完整、连贯；成文后要检查人称、时态是否一致、单词的拼写是否正确、短语和句式的使用是否得当。4．例文 My hometown is Zhengzhou. It's a beautiful place. Now let me introduce my hometown!Zhengzhou, located in Central China, is the capital of Henan province. It has four distinct seasons, which bring us beautiful natural scenery and rich agricultural produce, such as garlic and watermelons. As an ancient capital city, Zhengzhou has a long history, making it full of historical scenic spots, Shaolin Temple, for example. It is well-known around the world for its Kung Fu and Buddhism. Yanhuang Cultural Tourism Festival and Roseflower are our traditional festivals. A large number of tourists come to Zhengzhou every year.Welcome to my city and enjoy the special local produce. I believe you'll love it.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所提供的材料信息，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍家乡的著名景点、天气特征和传统节日。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称为主。第一段开篇点题，我的家乡是郑州。第二段介绍了家乡的著名景点、天气特征和传统节日。第三段是邀请来家乡旅游。3.高分亮点：短语：located in；the capital of；bring us；a large number of；come to；welcome to。句型：1. It has four distinct seasons, which bring us beautiful natural scenery and rich agricultural produce, such as garlic and watermelons.它有四个不同的季节，这些季节带给我们美丽的自然风光和丰富的农产品，如大蒜和西瓜。这是一个which引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词which指代上一句提到的内容。2. Yanhuang Cultural Tourism Festival and Roseflower are our traditional festivals. 炎黄文化旅游节和月季花会是我们的传统节日。Yanhuang Cultural Tourism Festival 和 Roseflower是郑州的特色节日。5．例文Dear everyone, would you please be kind enough to vote for my home town? My home town Jiangshan is in the west of Zhejiang Province. It is on the east of Jiangxi Province. It has a population of about 0.6 million. The people here are very friendly. It's hot in summer and cold in winter. There are a lot of places of interest here, such as Jianglang Mountain and Shigu Canyon. Every year, lots of visitors come here in spring. They enjoy themselves a lot in my home town. Also, you can taste much delicious food, such as Zongzi and rice cake. If you have a chance to visit my home town, I'm sure you'll have a good time.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡，包括地理位置、天气、特色美食、著名景点及最佳游览时间。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时以第二、三人称为主，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段引出话题；第二段从地理位置、天气、特色美食、著名景点及最佳游览时间等方面详细介绍。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。