专题09 旅行经历 中考英语作文话题写作范文大全（通用版）

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专题09 旅行相关类作文（精选六篇）1．    假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。请根据上述材料，以An Exciting Trip为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅。要求表达准确，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥，词数在80左右。An Exciting Trip__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．    旅游可以让人放松身心, 增长见识……初中毕业在即，很多同学想利用暑假去旅游。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇短文，通过你校英语论坛，向大家推荐一个好去处，并给出旅行建议。内容提示：1. 暑假去旅行是一个好主意。It's a good idea to go traveling...2. 我认为最好的地方是故宫。...the best place to visit is...3. 故宫又叫紫禁城，因它悠久的历史而闻名。be known as; be famous for4. 有很多古代建筑，包括宫殿、庙宇、塔楼等。a lot of ancient buildings including5. 如果要去故宫， 我们应该注意安全，跟朋友或家人一起去。 pay attention to; had better go with要求：1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；3. 词数80—100。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．    旅行是一件让人放松和快乐的事。我们经常会和家人一起旅游，去了解不同地方的风土人情，开拓我们的视野。假如你叫张磊，请记述你和家人经历的最有趣的一次旅行，并谈谈你对旅行这种放松方式的看法。要求：1) 80词左右；2) 层次清晰，行文连贯；3) 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。4．    你班打算组织一次为期两天的旅游。给旅行社写封信，按照你们的预算，提出食、住、行、游等方面的具体要求，请旅行社予以安排。（信的开头和结尾已给出）Dear Sir/Madam,We are students of East Senior High School. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Yao Hua 5．    迤逦的风光，沧桑的古迹，熏陶了我们的心灵，愉悦了我们的精神，这便是旅游。在“走遍世界”英语主题班会上，老师要求同学们用英语介绍自己的一次旅游，共同分享旅游的乐趣。包括旅行的时间、旅行的方式、旅行的范围、花费的时间和自己的愿望等。现在，请你写一篇80—100词左右的英语发言稿。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。I have been to many places, but my favourite place is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．    假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次学校的旅游活动。请根据下面要点提示，写一篇题为“A Pleasant School Trip”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。要点提示：1. 旅游活动的时间、地点、人物、交通；2. 具体旅游活动；3. 感受。要求：1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2. 词数：60左右。 写作方法指导开头：叙述时间、事件、人物；Last weekend, _________________________________________________________________主体：要点1-2：叙述旅游活动的时间、地点、人物、交通及具体的旅游活动；At 7:30 in the morning,                                                            When we arrived there,                                                            结尾：表达对本次旅游的感受。What a _________________________________________________________________A Pleasant School Trip___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案1．例文：An Exciting TripToday is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago.We went to the Mars by spaceship. On Mars we visited everywhere. We found a lot of things different from our earth, such as big stones which can speak. It’s amazing.After that, we had a party. Many aliens took an active part in the party. Their songs were very nice.Finally, we made phone calls with aliens. We all have a good time on Mars.The trip was very interesting and I will never forget the trip. I hope to travel to the Mars again soon.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。要求以“An Exciting Trip”为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅；内容包括在火星上举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话，以及你的所见所闻等；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。2．例文： It's a good idea to go traveling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit is the Imperial Palace. As we all know, the Imperial Palace, also known as the Forbidden City, is wonderful and famous for its long history in the world. We can see a lot of ancient buildings including palaces, temples and towers. If we want to visit the Imperial Palace, we should pay attention to our safety. We had better go with our friends or our family.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。写一篇有关旅行好去处的短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。先推荐一个旅行的好去处；再介绍这个地方的特点；最后给出自己的建议。写作时要注意保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。3．范文：An Interesting TripMy parents and I travelled to Shanghai by plane this summer holiday. During the first day in Shanghai, we saw the famous Oriental Pearl Tower and we took a lot of photos there. On the second day, we visited Shanghai World Expo Garden. Lots of people visited it. Of all the pavilions, I like China Pavilion best. It looked beautiful and we learned a lot about our country. We really enjoyed ourselves in Shanghai. I’ll never forget the trip. I think travelling is a good way to relax.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应注意要包括提示的内容：旅行经历和对旅行的看法。2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。叙述清晰，行文连贯，观点正确。3.高分亮点：短语：by plane；take photos；a lot of/lots of；learn about；enjoy oneself；a good way。语法：序数词的运用；副词最高级的运用；宾语从句的运用；动名词短语做主语。4．Dear Sir/MadamWe are students of East Senior High School. We’d like to ask your travel agency to arrange  for us to take a two days’ trip. According to our budget, I will give you some requirements which you can take into consideration.In the first place, my classmates are determined to go to Hangzhou .Therefore, please make arrangements for us to visit the West Lake and other famous historic and cultural sites. In addition, it is because some of our members enjoy eating delicious food that we would like to have meals in restaurants which have achieved instant fame. As for the hotel, we don’t have any other special requisition except that the hotel must be clean and tidy. Finally, I want to remind you that because our time is limited, you can arrange for us to go to Hangzhou by advanced passenger train or by airplane.As has been mentioned above, I hope that you can satisfy our demands as much as possible. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Yao Hua【解析】试题分析：本文是一封书信，内容是表达旅游者的意愿和想法，请旅行社对于衣食住行的要求予以安排。2. 时态应用一般现在时态为主，设计打算方面的内容用一般将来时，陈述以第一人称为主。文章结构可按要点划分，分为三段：（1）说出目的。（2）对于旅行社衣食住行安排的具体要求。（3）最后一段总结。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：arrange for sb to do sth.安排某人做某事；look forward to盼望做某事。用了that引导的宾语从句，如：I want to remind you that because our time is limited, you can arrange for us to go to Hangzhou by advanced passenger train or by airplane.用了as引导的定语从句，如：As has been mentioned above, I hope that you can satisfy our demands as much as possible.增加了文章的亮点。点睛：一、 细心审题，明确要求 。搞清题目的要求，以便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，此外，还要注意人称、时态、地点等信息，避免出错。 这里确定句子的时态以一般将来时为主。二、 抓住重点，理顺要点 。草拟提纲，分清各要点之间的内在联系，寻求逻辑次序，分出层次，确定如何下手，使表达内容条理清楚 。根据内容短文分成三部分。三、 遣词造句，表达规范 。写作时，应尽量选出你有把握的词，尽量使用短句（简单句）。如果有的单词不会写，有的思想不会用英语表达，你可以设法绕开，最好找一个同义词、同义句，或近义词、词组短语来代替。 5．范文：My trip to Dali CityI have been to many places, but my favourite place is Dali City. I took a trip to Dali City with my parents last Saturday. We went there by plane and we stayed there for four days.    When we got there, we went to Dali Old Town first. We walked around the old town and saw the old buildings. We also ate the delicious food. We wanted to spend two days there. On the third day, we went to Erhai. The natural scenery was very beautiful there. We went boating in Erhai and enjoyed the beauty of sunrise. We had a wonderful time.Now I am very excited. I am looking forward to visiting Dali City again.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按发言稿格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容写出旅游的时间、方式、范围、花费的时间和自己的愿望等。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍旅游；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍旅游内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。6．例文A Pleasant School TripLast weekend, I went for a school trip with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 pm. We were tired but very happy. What a pleasant trip it was!【详解】1.高分句式: so…that…句型（we were so excited that we sang loudly）；感叹句（What a pleasant trip it was!）2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称来介绍旅行过程，时态采用一般过去时；在介绍旅游内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。