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押全国卷（乙卷）第71题
短文改错

命题规律
命题规律
　解题技法
题目体裁
短文改错的体裁以记叙文和说明文为主，时常会选用书信形式的文章。
解题原则
改动以最少为原则，
虚词以添加或删除为原则，
实词以改变词性为原则，
以保持句子原意为原则。
题目题材
语言材料来自考生熟悉的话题，多涉及他们身边发生的事情。
题目难度
文章篇幅不长，110词左右，一般不超过10个句子。其难易程度符合考生的实际英语写作水平。
解题三核对
核对错项时注意要符合1∶1∶8比例，即多词1个，缺词1个，错词8个。
核对改正的语法项目是否有重复，一般不会出现重复的现象。
核对答题符号的使用是否规范，位置是否准确。
解题注意事项
要注意以下几点∶
（1）注意动词的形态变化;
（2）注意人称代词的一致性和关联词的正确性;
（3）虚词以增删为原则∶历年高考短文改错中增删的
（4）以保持句子原意不变为原则∶改错时不能改变
句中的功能来确定词性，要做到"换词不改意，加词不增意，删词不减意。
（5）以语法项目不重复为原则∶短文改错覆盖的语法面很广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。
（6）注意全文的时态、指代及逻辑是否一致。

解题步骤
1．细读全文，了解全篇
首先要细读全文，弄懂全篇的主旨，背景和素材。记住必须做到一句一句地读，在读的过程中可以把初步确定的错误标出来。
2．分句阅读，逐句纠错
在此过程中，考生一定要细心，要根据上表中的考点方向去发现错误，可以先易后难。
3．重读文章，仔细推敲
最后要将改正后的短文再仔细阅读一遍，看词法、句法及行文逻辑是否合理恰当，如有不适及时纠正。
一、词法类错误

◎考点探究　技能提升◎
考点1 名词和冠词
[典例1]　[2021·全国卷乙]I love doing housework.I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：我喜欢做家务活。饭后， 我总是帮助父母洗碗。
(2)根据语法知识分析：名词单复数误用。短语do the dishes意为“洗碗”。
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：幸运的是，两周后我就要回家过暑假了。
(2)根据语法知识分析：summer vacation“暑假”，是单数概念。
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
自主解答：________________
1．[2021·吉林市第四次调研]Any creative ideas which is about school life is warmly welcomed.________________
2．[2020·全国卷Ⅲ]My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our families. ________________
3．[2019·全国卷Ⅲ]I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.________________
4．[2018·全国卷Ⅱ]When I was little，Friday's night was our family game night.________________
5．[2020·全国卷Ⅲ]For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple.________________
6．[2019·全国卷Ⅲ]Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.________________
7．[2017·全国卷Ⅱ]They live far from the school，and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.________________
8．[2021·江西省质量监测]Only by tasting failure can we enjoy fruit of success.________________
【技法点拨】
1．理清单复数使用情况
(1)单个名词和不可数的名词要用单数。
(2)多个可数的名词要用复数。
2．牢记雷打不动的十大不可数名词
advice，news，information，progress，work，fun，weather，music，health，luck。
3．三类位置后常用名词
(1)冠词后常用名词。
(2)介词后常用名词。
(3)形容词性物主代词后常用名词。
4．关注冠词的考查重点
(1)a和an，表达数量或者泛指任何一个。a用于辅音音素(不是辅音字母)开头的词前，an用于元音音素(不是元音字母)开头的词前。
(2)若对于某个名词有明指或暗示的情况，前面要加the。
(3)若某名词是复数、专有名词或抽象名词、物质名词(没有固定性状)，前面不适合加冠词，应把该位置空下来，形成“零冠词”。
(4)固定搭配中的冠词需要牢记。
考点2 介词和数词
[典例1]　[2021·全国卷乙]In my opinion，students can benefit a lot doing some housework.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：在我看来，学生做一些家务可以受益很多。
(2)考查介词的缺失。benefit from/ by doing sth. 为固定搭配， 意为“得益于(做)某事”。
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：我很高兴知道你已经来到中国， 在我家乡的一所学校学习功夫。
(2)搭配识记：come to＋地点名词，表示“来到某地”。
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
1．[2021·吉林市第四次调研]You can also choose to make changes in famous dramas to enter into the competition.________________
2．[2021·新乡市第三次模拟]There I found many people waiting their orders to be checked out.________________
3．[2019·全国卷Ⅱ]When I studied chemistry high school，I reconsidered my goal and decided to be a doctor.________________
4．[2018·全国卷Ⅱ]They would say to me that playing card games would help my brain.Still I was unwilling to play the game for them sometimes.________________
5．[2021·太原一模]After graduating from high school，I'm going to be a computer programmer，which I think is on great demand in the modern world.________________
6．[2021·吉林市第三次调研]Without hesitation，I，under the help of Tom and Mary，carried her on my back to the clinic.________________
7．[2021·河北省邯郸市高三第二次模拟]I remember clearly that when I was on my eighteen birthday, my father gave me a present—a picture book.________________
8．[2021·赣州市模拟]In order to celebrate the eighty anniversary of the founding of our school, a big celebration was held in our school last Sunday.________________
【技法点拨】
1．关注介词遗漏
①不及物动词后需要加介词才能加宾语。
②作定语的不定式中动词如果是不及物动词，或不定式修饰的名词和代词是不定式动词的地点、工具等，不定式后要有相应的介词。
2．明辨介词多余
①及物动词后无需加介词再加宾语。
②this/that/these/those/last/next/a/every/each等词构成的时间短语，前面不用任何介词。
3．牢记相似介词的区别
in, on, at的区别：表示时间时，in表示在一段时间里(在将来时句子中则表示在一段时间之后)，on表示在具体的某一天或者某天的上下午等，at表示具体的时刻。
4．识别序数词与基数词的混用和错用
“只描述数量多少的”用基数词；“强调顺序性，作第几”讲的时候用序数词。
5．注意年龄、年代的表达法
表达“在某人几十岁时”用“in one's＋逢十的基数词复数”；表达“在几十年代”时，用“in the＋逢十的基数词复数”。
考点3 谓语动词误用
[典例1]　[2021·全国卷乙]Also，it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：此外，这给了父母更多的时间去做他们喜欢的事情，这改善了家庭关系。
(2)谓语动词的误用。分析句子结构可知， what引导宾语从句， 句中的like作动词， 意为“喜欢”，故are多余。
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：实际上，我从七岁就开始学功夫了，但我已经很长时间没练习了。
(2)根据分析可知，本句考查谓语动词时态错误。由“when I was seven years old”可确定该句谓语动词应该为一般过去时态。
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
1．[2021·黑龙江省大庆市5月联考]John went shopping in a store, but he forgot to bring a bag. So he buys a shopping bag.________________
2．[2021·黑龙江省大庆市5月联考]However, one day, I forget to wear one when I was heading for a vital exam.________________
3．[2021·黑龙江省大庆市5月联考]It not only brings us pleasure but reduce waste around us.________________
4．[2021·江西省高三教学质量监测]We have both achieved success and suffer from failure, but different students has different attitudes towards failure.________________
5．[2021·吉林市第四次调研]There is another thing that should be keep in mind.________________
6．[2021·马鞍山第三次监测]After getting our tools, we were dividing into different teams.________________
7．[2021·吉林市第四次调研]An English drama competition would be held in the school art hall next Friday.________________
8．[2021·九江市二模]Usually, sitting around the table, all members of a family has meals together at meal time.________________
【技法点拨】
1．识别时态不一致
文章前后是现在式但却用了过去式，或前后都是过去式却用了现在式，导致时态不一致。
2．判断并列不一致
在平行或并列结构中，动词的形式通常是一致的。关键的问题是看and，or等后的动词与前面的哪个动词并列，一定要理解，辨别清楚。
3．留心语态错误
(1)构成被动语态的过去分词写成了一般过去式或现在分词。
(2)主动语态中却多了be以及be的变形，变成了被动语态。
4．注意主谓不一致情况
主语是单数形式，谓语却采取复数形式；主语是复数形式，谓语却采取单数形式，导致主谓不一致的情况。
5．牢记情态动词用法
(1)情态动词后一定要接动词原形，但却用了过去或其他形式。
(2)情态动词相互间的误用。
考点4
[典例1]　[2021·全国卷甲] Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others.
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2020·全国卷Ⅲ]I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill.
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
1．[2021·吉林市第四次调研]It is rewarding take your time to prepare for the competition.________________
2．[2021·江西省重点中学协作体第二次联考]Please let me to know when you will be free and I will buy the tickets in advance.________________
3．[2021·南昌二模]To solve the problem, I forced myself to reading every paragraph with patience, trying to follow the plot.________________
4．[2021·成都七中热身考试]They watched him with interest, laughed loudly.________________
5．[2021·宿州市质量检测]As far as I'm concerned, the activity gets us to know about the university and inspiring us to work hard.________________
6．[2021·焦作市三模]When I opened the door, my mother seemed to feel a little embarrassing.________________
7．[2021·哈尔滨市第三中学第四次模拟]Felt extremely guilty, I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.________________
8．[2021·江西省高三教学质量监测]They find out the causes so that they will avoid made the same mistake.________________
9．[2021·焦作市第四次模拟]I had a ticket to a show I couldn't attend any longer. I was trying to sell it, but I was having a hard time find someone who would pay the full price.________________
10．[2021·贵州省适应性测试]I think work for a newspaper and reporting from all over the world are really exciting.________________
考点5
[典例1]　[2021·全国卷乙]What's more，doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study.
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]I'm surely you'll have a good time.
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
1．[2021·安徽 “五校联盟”第二次联考]When she had finished, she proud put her cake into the oven to cook.________________
2．[2021·南昌二模]It provides me with knowledge, and convinces me entire that being alone is not lonely.________________
3．[2021·广西4月模拟]Now I've changed a lot. I have become an energy and positive girl.________________
4．[2021·江西省质量监测]What's worse, some even lose heart and no longer study as harder as before.________________
5．[2019·全国卷Ⅱ]One was that I was amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.________________
6．[2021·焦作市三模]The other day, I went home so lately that my mother couldn't afford to wait me any longer.________________
7．[2021·高三“五校联盟”第二次联考]About ten minutes late, we smelt something burning.________________
8．[2021·马鞍山市第三次质量监测]It's a famous park in Ma'anshan. Therefore, some of its visitors leave garbage behind.________________
二、句法类错误
◎考点探究　技法提升◎

考点1 主谓一致的误用
[典例1]　[2021·全国乙卷]And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：并希望这能激发更多关于这个话题的思考！
(2)瞻前顾后析时态：根据从句中can inspire可知主句为一般现在时。
(3)辨清主谓：此句为省略句， 省略了主语we, 故谓语动词应该使用复数。
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2020·全国卷Ⅲ]My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：我爸爸不喜欢汤，我不喜欢吃苹果。
(2)瞻前顾后析时态：根据连词and后的“don't enjoy”可知时态为一般现在时。
(3)辨清主谓：主语“my dad”是第三人称，故谓语应该用第三人称单数。
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
1．[2021·江西省重点中学协作体第二次联考] As a matter of fact, Beijing Opera with a history of nearly 200 years are a form of traditional Chinese theatre play.________________
2．[2021·江西上饶市三模]There were no electricity or water and even no textbooks either！________________
3．[2021·兰州一中高三月考]Each student learn a foreign language, mostly English, from Day One of their compulsory education.________________
4．[2021·陕西省西安中学第九次模拟]Recently, one of my friends have sent me a short message, saying that true friends are one soul in two bodies, which moves me very much and makes me think what true friendship is.________________
5．[2021·长春外国语学校第二次质量检测]You are the most considerate person who know exactly what I need in our class.________________
【技法点拨】
1．判断主谓语是关键
①可数名词单数或不可数名词作主语时谓语动词用单数。
②动词ing形式、不定式或名词性从句作主语时，谓语动词一般用单数。
③就近原则常见的有：either...or..., neither...nor..., not only...but also..., there be等。
④就远原则常见的有：together with，as well as，but，except等。
⑤在倒装句中要找出句子的主语从而判断谓语动词的单复数。
⑥定语从句中的谓语动词要与定语从句所修饰的先行词保持一致。
2．附加成分是难点
对于分隔现象，可利用“减一减”原则：先从整体上把握主干，再去掉句子中的插入语、附加成分等分隔干扰部分，使结构简化。
第二讲　句法类错误
考点2 从句或固定句型误用
[典例1]　[2021·全国乙卷]I also water the flowers in the yard and tidy up my own bedroom whatever necessary.
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2020·全国卷Ⅲ]Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
1．[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy.________________
2．[2020·全国卷Ⅱ]Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together every day.________________
3．[2019·全国卷Ⅲ]In the cafe，customers will enjoy themselves in the historical environment what is created for them.________________
4．[2021·江西省重点中学盟校第二次联考]From them , we students can always seek support and advice , from that we can benefit a lot. ________________
5．[2021·九江市二模]The elders and distinguished guests are often seated in the special seats, what shows great respect for them.________________
6．[2021·黑龙江省佳木斯市第三次模拟]After that, you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.________________
7．[2021·安徽 “五校联盟”第二次联考]I consider myself a competent cook so I usually don't consult a recipe book. I just remember which I did last time.________________
三　逻辑类错误
◎技法探究　素养提升◎

考点1 连接词的误用
[典例1]　[2020·全国卷Ⅲ]In order to make sure all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：为了确保我们所有人的健康，她为我们制定了专门的计划。
(2)结构分析：逗号前为目的状语，逗号后为主句，两者之间不用连词连接。
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2019·全国卷Ⅱ]When I studied chemistry in high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.
考场思维：
(1)语境含义：在高中学化学时，我重新考虑了我的目标并决定当一名医生。
(2)结构分析：reconsidered和decided这两个动作是顺承关系。
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
1．Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.________________
2．[2021·哈尔滨市第六中学5月模拟]He offered to help me and soon my bike was repaired. I thanked him but asked how to reward him.________________
3．[2021·江西联盟3月联考]At night, we usually sit around a campfire, either chatting and just keeping silent.________________
4．[2021·河南安阳市三模]Work hard but I really hope you can get a good score in the tests.________________
5．[2021·焦作市第四次模拟]He was such grateful that he thanked me again and again.________________
6．[2021·宿州市教学质量检测]The instant when we arrived at the USTC, we headed for the teaching zone, which was fairly quiet compared with that of our school.________________
7．[2021·西安中学高三第九次模拟]In my opinion, true friendship doesn't mean that where you need your friends' help, you'll treat them to dinner.________________
8．[2021·全国甲卷]In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust most.________________
【技法点拨】
1．多余：
①because/since与so连用时删除so;
②though/although/as与but连用时，删除but。
2．误用：几个常见的连词误用：
①or与and的误用；
②and与but的误用；
③so与but的误用；
④before与after的误用；
⑤before/after与when/while的误用。
3．固定句式要记清：
①and; both...and...；not only... but (also)...; neither...nor...等表示顺承或递进关系。
②but; yet; while等表示对比或转折关系。
or; either...or ...; not...but...表示选择关系。
③ so/ such...that...
It won't be long before...
not...until...
三　逻辑类错误
考点2 代词的误用
[典例1]　[2020·全国卷Ⅲ]I tell my mom that if we're forced to eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food.
自主解答：________________
[典例2]　[2019·全国卷Ⅲ]In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment that is created for them.
自主解答：________________
【过关检测】
1．[2021·吉林市第四次调研]If you want to prove you, please sign up by this Thursday afternoon.________________
2．[2021·江西省重点中学盟校第二次联考]As a high school student, it is necessary that we build a good relationship with our teachers, for it is the teachers who show love and concern for our students in study and life and they are good listeners.________________
3．[2021·南宁市第一次适应性测试]My mother and me planned to go to Chengdu by high-speed train last Saturday morning.________________
4．[2021·西安中学第八次模拟]You needn't always compare you with others and just make your efforts towards your goal.________________
5．[2021·西安中学第五次模拟]Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Students in our class are under too many pressure.________________
6．[2021·马鞍山市第三次质量监测]Both of us were a bit tired, but we felt happy to clean up the park. The greatest pleasure is that we have made it more beautiful.________________
7．[2021·全国卷Ⅱ高考压轴卷]Every time we get on a plane, we're asked to neither turn off our phones or change it to flight mode — it's for “security reasons”．________________
8．[2021·焦作市三模]I clearly remembered that my mother had taught me not to cause any trouble to other at any time.________________

Passage 1（2021 •全国乙卷•第71题）
I love doing housework. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some housework. Firstly, doing housework was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What's most, doing housework can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That's our view on housework. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
Passage 2（2021 •全国甲卷•第71题）
Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are: Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates because they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choose to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themselves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should seek help from those we trust mostly.
Passage 3（2020 •全国卷Ⅱ•第71题）
　　Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I'm glad to know that you've come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I'm surely you'll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.
Passage 4（2019 •全国卷Ⅱ•第71题）
Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.　
Passage 5（2018 •全国卷Ⅰ•第71题）
During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.　
Passage 6（2017 •全国卷Ⅲ•第71题）
When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.　　　　

Test 1
[2022·贵阳市高三适应性考试二]Some city people think country life are lonely because they're cut off from the outside world. They don't know how peace it is to be away from crowded street and busy shopping centers. They also don't knowing how friendly people in country towns and villages can be. As a matter of the fact, people are more likely to be lonely in a big city. I make more friends in a week in the country than I made during your first three months in London!
So, which is better—the city or the country? It's hard say. I think it isn't about what you live—it's about how you live. Thanks for the island holiday, I'm sure I could be just happy as well living in the country.
Test 2
[2022·太原市二模]My school ends at 2：30 pm. Then we can join in a wide range of activity. In my school, there are many clubs for students to take part in. I used to lie on the couch comfortable eating chips and watching TV until I joined the running club. Now, I would rather running hard for an hour every day. It is running which helps me lose weight, which provide great health benefits. Now I'm much more healthier than before. I am advised to keep going and I will be a couch potato again! Besides, either good grades and involvement in after­school clubs highly valued when we apply for college. Joining clubs is on great significance.
Test 3
[2022·长春市高三质量预测四]
Dear Alice，
How is everything going? I'm so happily to know that you are interesting in Chinese traditional arts. To have a better understanding, you'd better to learn something about the Chinese New Year painting, which is the pretty good choice.
It is known to us Chinese people would like to put up pictures to celebrate the Spring Festival. Chinese New Year paintings cover various subject, such as historical stories, harvests, flowers and birds. Since you are good at painting, I believed you can learn about the art very quick. You will also know more about Chinese culture, and improve my drawing skills.
I'm looking forward to see you soon in China.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 4
[2022·甘肃省第二次高考诊断]
Dear Chris，
I am glad to hear you are interested on Double 11. Now let me to tell you something about them. Double 11 has become a special day in recently years. With four “ 1s” , it is also called Singles' Day. On that day, single young people held parties to show love or simply have funs. In 2009, Double Eleven Shopping Day was held to promoting online shopping, that has become the biggest online shopping day in China now.
In my view, this day is chance of promoting business. People should make purchases wise. What do you think of this day? I am looking forward to your opinion.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 5
[2022·昆明市“三珍一模”高考模拟]I have had the pleasure of meeting a nice neighbor since my family move to the new community. We usual just wave and say hi when we meet. Therefore, an incident changed this. The other day, a heavier rain hit our area. With strong winds blowing throughout the day, a part of his wooden fence, about 6 foot of it, came down. When I was wondering what to get it repaired, he gave me a hand. With his help, the fence was fixed quickly. It was kind act by my neighbor and I was touching by his kindness. I will soon send to him a thank­you note.
Li Hua
答案：
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Test 6
[2021·合肥市高三第二次检测]
I'll never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way to my grandpa, my father drove very carefully or slowly all the way, for it was snowing heavily. When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting me collect snow with our grandpa. We felt not a little excitedly. After a while, in the yard was some snowmen, all look funny. “Look, here's another snowman，” shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his hand. It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I can go back there this year!
Test 7
[2021·成都市高中毕业班第一次诊断]
The person I respect most is my father. Like a doctor, he is always busy with work. After I could remember, he has never spent a whole weekend stay with me. Every day, he went to work before I get up, and comes back home after I go to bed. So to me, it doesn't matter at all, because he is a great hero in his mind. He devotes himself his patients, and many life are saved by him. He always tells me what a man should have dignity, honesty, honor, and that most of all, be helpful to others. This affects me deep, so I am working hard in order to be a man like him in the future.
Test 8
[2021·昆明市高三“三诊一模”]
Sometimes our classmates talk about that we can do for our school before graduation. We have different kinds of advices. Some think it is a good idea donate some reference books but notebooks to the school library. By doing so, the fellow students will be able to read it if necessary. Others thought it good to plant trees next to teaching buildings to make the school more beautiful.
On my opinion, we can do something meaningfully in honor of our school life. For the example, we can do some voluntary work or send the school some pictures drawing by ourselves, which can remind us of the golden memories.
Test 9
[2021·长春市高三质量监测一]
My parents and I paid a visit to my grandparents in last summer. After three hour's drive, we got to the village. We were exciting to see them and chatted for quite a while. And then I go to the backyard to pick some vegetables or fruits without chemical fertilizers. They were so fresh that I couldn't wait to taste it. After dinner, we took walk along the country road lined with trees and crops. The soft wind was blown gently and the surroundings were quietly except for the singing of birds. What peaceful the country life was!
Test 2
[2021·贵阳市四校高三年级联考三]
An English drama competition would be held in the school art hall next Friday. Any creative ideas which is about school life is warm welcomed. You can also choose to make changes in famous dramas to enter to the competition. If you want to prove you, please sign up by this Thursday afternoon. It is rewarding take your time to prepare for the competition. There is another thing that should be keep in mind. The play should be no long than fifteen minutes on a whole. Don't hesitate—come, or be a winner!
Test 10
[2021·洛阳市高三统一考试]
It was Tree Planting Day last Saturday. Our teacher, Mr. Li asked us plant trees on the nearby hill. We arrived here at 8 o'clock in the morning, each with at least a tool. Mr. Li showed us how to plant trees, but then we started digging, planting and watered. I was very excited because I have never planted trees before. Mr. Li set a good example to myself. “I must learn about him，” I said to myself. In the all, we planted over two hundreds trees. We looked happy at the rows of trees, forgetting our tiredness.
Test 11
[2021·绵阳市第一次诊断考试]
We had a school trip on last Sunday. Hundreds of us students took part in it excited.
At 8：00 am, we set out for the top of Jiuhuang Mountain in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful sceneries. When someone fall behind, others would come or offer help. About two hours later, we all reached the top. Seeing from there, the river below looked like a thin belt. We were such happy that we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did we get close to nature, but also we relaxed myself. What wonderful time!

Test 1
[2022·兰州市高三诊断]It's great to hear from you. You ask me about my life in high school. Here is your experience. They are many after­school activities in my school. I am out­going and want to make more friends, because I joined some clubs. However, club activities took too much more of my time and I hard had time to finish homework or review lessons. I felt anxious. To solve this problem, I talked with my teacher. She suggested that I should choose one or two clubs that I liked better and spend more time on study. I took her advices and concentrated on my study when I didn't need go to clubs. Soon, I made progress. Now, I feel confident again and I know what to make good use of my time.
Test 2
[2022·长春市高三质量监测(一)]Our school held thorough cleaning last Friday afternoon. We were divided into several group and I was in the charge of the blackboard. First, I cleaned the lower half 3 times but made sure there was no chalk trace. Then I stood on a chair reach the upper part. Meanwhile, Lucy helped me wash the cloth, for which I feel grateful. I also helped him clean the screen. After finishing our work, I imagined how comfortably our teachers would feel while write on the blackboard!
Our teacher expressed her satisfaction before she checked our job. I love to see a clean and tidy classroom and I am proud with it.
Test 3
[2022·合肥市第三次质量检测]Last week, I paid a visit a newly­opened riverside park, where is located in the southeast of the city. The sky is clear and blue. I took a freely walk in the park，with a gentle wind touch my face. The flowers along the path were impressed me a lot. The beautiful scenery gave me a sense of refresh and life. Along the way, I took such many photos that my cellphone ran out of power in the end. The trip helped us recover from the busy schedule. What amazing the power of nature is! I'm looking forward to one more trip.
Test 4
[2022·东北三校一模]
Dear Lucy，
I'm sorry to learn that your mom read your journal and you felt annoyed. After all, it is up to you if to share what you write.
You'd better have an open discussion about how all of you feel. You should calmly tell her that you expect to have a certain amount privacy. If she feels the best of all way to know about you is to read your journal, and it means there is a lack of communication.
As we get old, we start to want more privacy, but this can lead to parents feel like they are left out of our world. You may as well understand what your mom does. I believe there must be the win­win solution to making your mom feel she is still strongly connecting with you.
Yours，
Li Hua
Test 5
[2022·贵阳市高三适应性考试一]As we all know, most people, especially students, use to go to the library to borrow books, such as reference books and novels. Therefore, with the rapid development of the Internet, nowadays fewer or fewer people will go to the library. That's because they can easy get the information when they need from the Internet. What's the more, mobile phones and computer have played major roles.
Personally, even though we can do reading on the phones or computers, we are not supposed to spend too much time fix our eyes on the electronic screens, which is not beneficial to his eyes. I strongly suggest we should make full use of our spare time go to the library.
Test 6
[2021·合肥市高三第一次教学质量检测]
The other day, when my grandma and I are walking home after shopping, all of sudden, a man fell off his motorbike nearby. Without any hesitate, my grandma rushed to help the man rise to his foot. The man was very grateful and said he didn't got injured. The road was wet after the heavily rain. That was because he lost his balance. My grandma still insisted that she be sent to the nearest hospital. I was greatly inspired by that she had done and I really admired for her because she had set a good example to me.
Test 7
[2021·云南省第一次高中毕业生统一检测]
Last summer, my friend and I went to his hometown in bus to spend the vacation. It was a seaside village, one of the more popular tourist attractions in the area. When we arrived there, I deeply impressed by its beauty. In the morning, we got up early and took a walk on the beach, which a lot of tourists were taking photo. In the afternoon, we often go swimming and played the volleyball with some local kids. In the evening, we always sat on the softly sand, watching waves coming and going. It was quite a relaxed holiday. We enjoyed us very much.
Test 8
[2021·贵阳四校高三联考二]
I was doing a part­time job at a store and a customer was trying to ask me some questions about some of our camera. She had a small boy and he wouldn't calmed down. I could tell she was very embarrassing. And I know how it feels to be looked at by others as the parent which can't control a child. In the fact, you can't always stop a child make trouble no matter how good a parent you are. I wear a bow in my hair and I gave it the boy. He immediately smiled and started playing with it. The customer appreciated what I had done and was very thankfully when I allowed his child to keep the bow.
Test 9
[2021·绵阳市第二次诊断]
Our school offers all kinds of activities with students after school, especially art activities like music festivals. There are lots of music club on campus. To my greatly joy, I have joined the orchestra which I have made lots of new friends. Sometimes, we represent our school in regional competitions and that is worthwhile to join in these contests. Amazingly we also have a robotics club, which wins a national robot contest last week, so it is getting popular at present. In addition, academic clubs are offered as well as, including the written club and the French film club.
Although we have many homework, we still manage to take active part in various activities after school.
Test 10
[2021·长春市高三质量监测二]
Half a year has passed since my last year in the senior high school start. I want to tell you how my life has been so far.
Because the coming final exam, I certainly have a tight schedule. In order to keep health, I set aside thirty minute every day to exercise. Faced with difficulties in my study, I try my best to do how I can do to improve my grades and avoid make mistakes. My goal is to study politics in my dream university, which calls for a plenty of devotion and gives to me the motivation to move on.
Such is my life in Grade 3, toughly but pleasant. It is my dream which pushes me ahead but I'm sure I will eventually realize it.
Test 11
[2021·河南省高考适应性测试]
Among so much proverbs, I like “The early bird catches the worm” best.
This proverb means that to being successful, one needs to start early or before anyone else. It advises us seize the day and take every opportunity. That is why I liked it so much.
Looking back, I have come to realize that success is never goes to those who are lazy! Often the mostly successful people are those who do something before anyone else do. Success takes hard work and time. The early one wakes up, the more work time you will have and the more one will get.
Are you a early bird?
Test 12
[2021·南昌市一模]
Virtues are jewel of great price. I find honesty is most valuable virtue in my heart. And it is always accompany my growth.
As a child, I was constantly told the story naming The Wolf Is Coming, which obviously has a lasting influence. Over time, I've increasing realized the importance of honesty and try to carry it out. Only then I'm honest and reliable, will I be trusted with others.
Actually, being honest, I've found it more easier to make friends. The virtue of honesty will help me open the door to success of our career and life.
Test 4
[2021·贵阳市高三适应性考试一]
As we all know, most people, especially students, use to go to the library to borrow books, such as reference books and novels. Therefore, with the rapid development of the Internet, nowadays fewer or fewer people will go to the library. That's because they can easy get the information when they need from the Internet. What's the more, mobile phones and computer have played major roles.
Personally, even though we can do reading on the phones or computers, we are not supposed to spend too much time fix our eyes on the electronic screens, which is not beneficial to his eyes. I strongly suggest we should make full use of our spare time go to the library.
Test 13
[2021·兰州市高三诊断]
It's great to hear from you. You ask me about my life in high school. Here is your experience. They are many after­school activities in my school. I am outgoing and want to make more friends, because I joined some clubs. However, club activities took too much more of my time and I hard had time to finish homework or review lessons. I felt anxious. To solve this problem, I talked with my teacher. She suggested that I should choose one or two clubs that I liked better and spend more time on study. I took her advices and concentrated on my study when I didn't need go to clubs. Soon, I made progress. Now, I feel confident again and I know what to make good use of my time.
Test 14
[2021·东北三省四市教研体一模]
Dear David，
I was excited to know you like music from your letter，and neither do I. As we all know, music is an important part of our life today. No one will say no to music and everybody has their taste in the music. When I was very young, my parents would encourage me listen to classical music. They wanted to develop their interest and good taste. So as I grow up, I fall in love for rock music, which makes me feel cool. It is said that music can heal people's souls. While listening to some peaceful music, I am surprising calm. When I am not happy, I will listen to music and then dance to it in my bedroom. Music can help me forget something annoyed.
It's great that we share the same hobbies. Music is full of charm. Could you introduce some nice English songs in your next letter?
Yours，
Li Ming
Test 15
[2021·江西六校联考]
Of all the people I have encountered in my life, a person I admire most is my English teacher. Working for our class teacher, she has to work around the clock to take good care of us as well as giving lectures and grade homework. She always walks towards the bus stop, carrying a bag full of notebook or a big folder with assessment reports she makes the night before. She is the one we spend major part of our day and she is the one who constant encourages us to break barriers and to be extraordinary. We owe all of our success to him. I will not forget her instruction but I would like to express my the deepest gratitude to her.
Test 16
[2021·郑州市质量预测]
The other day our school had organized a traditional culture festival. Hearing this news, we were very exciting and decided to make Hanfu with old newspapers. First, we surfed the Internet for the Hanfu's original culture and different style. With the information collected, we started to design their own style. After a couple of attempts, our design was finally created. Immediately, we got down work. We cut the newspapers, stick the pieces together and even colored them. Finally, until our show time came, we walked the runway wear our elegant Hanfu and the audience cheered and applauded wildly. This activity gave us a strongly sense of achievement. More importantly, we gained pride or knowledge about our traditional culture.