专题09++新高考读后续写专用02（育人、成长、助人篇）-2022年新高考英语新题型写作专项解读与训练

这是一份专题09++新高考读后续写专用02（育人、成长、助人篇）-2022年新高考英语新题型写作专项解读与训练，共19页。试卷主要包含了育人篇，成长篇，助人篇等内容，欢迎下载使用。

以下以育人、成长、助人篇为主题的专项练习。
一、育人篇
Passage 01—酸奶
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Yghurt
It was a rugh week. The price f il skyrcketed as the temperature drpped sharply in Maine. We were lking at a high f eight degrees that week, and I had missed three days f wrk s my paycheck was ging t be lwer than nrmal. I was stressed, t say the least. I shpped strategically, lking fr every pssible way t cut pennies s I culd buy grceries and keep the huse warm.
My eight-year-ld sn didn't understand when I tld him we were struggling that week. He wanted a special kind f yghurt, but I didn't have the extra three dllars t buy it fr him. It was the kind f yghurt with a cartn kid riding a skatebard n the frnt f the bx, and a mere tw spnfuls in each cup. It was the kind f prduct that wastes a parent's mney and makes me hate advertising.
I felt guilty as a parent when thse big eyes lked at me with cnfusin, as if t say，“It's just yghurt. What's the big deal?” S I fund a way. I put smething back as single mthers ften d. He gt his yghurt.
On the way driving back frm the grcery stre, I nticed a hmeless man hlding a sign by the side f the rad. My heart hurt, and I tried nt t lk at him. I watched peple stay away frm him n the street and walk by withut even meeting his eyes. My sn didn't seem t care much, either. I lked at the man clsely then — bare hands grasping a piece f cardbard, snt （鼻涕）frzen t his face, a wrn ut jacket. And there I was struggling because I had t buy il and grceries. But I decided t help. I pulled ver t the man and handed him a five-dllar bill.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
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Seeing this, my sn became cnfused and surprised.
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On that day, my sn perfrmed an act that mst adults wuldn’t have dne.
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【写作特训】
1. I felt guilty as a parent ______________________________(当那些大眼睛困惑地看着我时), as if t say，“It's just yghurt. What's the big deal?”
2. On the way driving back frm the grcery stre, ______________________________(我注意到一个无家可归的人在路边举着一个牌子).
3. ______________________________(我看着人们远离他) n the street and walk by withut even meeting his eyes..
4. _____________________________(我把车停在那个人旁边) and handed him a five-dllar bill.
5. I explained that ______________________________(如果我们对这个可怜人的处境视而不见，他会冻僵的).
6. Finally my sn ndded and ______________________________(他的眼睛盯着酸奶).
7. On that day, ______________________________(我儿子做了一个大多数成年人都不会做的动作).
8. He lk his yghurt and _____________________________(把它递给窗外的那个人).
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参考范文：
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Seeing this, my sn became cnfused and surprised. “Mum, why are yu s generus t this stranger while s mean t me when I asked fr a yghurt?” I explained that if we were blind t the pr man’s situatin he wuld be freezing. He didn’t have a hme r fd t eat after all. We culd spare five dllars even if we were financially stressed. Finally my sn ndded and fixed his eyes n his yghurt.
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On that day, my sn perfrmed an act that mst adults wuldn’t have dne. He lk his yghurt and handed it t the man utside his windw. Even if it was just a matter f a few spnfuls f yghurt, it was all he had, and he gave it t smene wh needed it mre than he wanted it. He shwed me that I am ding well as a mther. There are always blessings t cunt if we pen ur eyes, and we always have the pprtunity t be a blessing fr smene else.
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【写作特训答案】
1. I felt guilty as a parent when thse big eyes lked at me with cnfusin, as if t say，“It's just yghurt. What's the big deal?”
2. On the way driving back frm the grcery stre, I nticed a hmeless man hlding a sign by the side f the rad.
3. I watched peple stay away frm him n the street and walk by withut even meeting his eyes.
4. I pulled ver t the man and handed him a five-dllar bill.
5. I explained that if we were blind t the pr man’s situatin he wuld be freezing.
6. Finally my sn ndded and fixed his eyes n his yghurt.
7. On that day, my sn perfrmed an act that mst adults wuldn’t have dne.
8. He lk his yghurt and handed it t the man utside his windw.
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Passage 02 ---打屁股教育
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
My mther was a supprter f physical punishment, but fr all her talking she has never spanked (打屁股) my siblings and me nly nce. Instead, she fund ways f punishment that left a mre lasting memry than giving us a spanking. One f the mst memrable f these ccasins ccurred when I was fr.
In the early 70’s my mther attended cllege during the day and I was in daycare. One day at daycare watched an extremely tired mther attempt t pick up her daughter. The little girl asked, “Mmma, are we ging t McDnald’s fr dinner?” The mther replied, “Hney, nt tnight. Mmma has t run a few errands (差事) and then we have t g hme and ck dinner fr Daddy.” “But I wanna g.” “Susie, I said nt tnight. Maybe, if yu are a gd girl, we can g tmrrw.” Susie immediately drpped t the flr, kicking and screaming, “I want t g t McDnald’s.”
N amunt f pleading (恳求)r sclding her mther tried stpped Susie’s tantrum (发脾气). Finally her mther gave in, “Okay, Susie, let’s g t McDnald’s.” Susie stpped yelling and smiling. She grabbed her mther’s hand and they left. T say I was amazed wuld be inaccurate; I was delighted that anything I wanted culd be had by thrwing a tantrum.
That day my mther picked me up early frm daycare because we were ging t a stre t purchase sme Christmas items. I was excited by the lights and decratins, and as we walked thrugh the ty sectin n the way t the cunter, I saw a ty I had t have. It was a white and red telephne whse bells rang as it was pulled alng n a string. Lking lvingly up at my mther I asked, “Mama, can I have that telephne?”
She replied, “Baby, nt nw, but if yu are a gd girl, maybe Santa will bring it t yu.” “But Mama, I want that telephne right nw.” Her eyes narrwed and her hand tightened n mine. “Becky, yu can’t have that telephne tday, but if yu misbehave, yu can have a spanking.”
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
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By nw we were standing in the lng Hliday line t pay the bill, and I figured it was a gd chance
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“Mama, stp. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded.
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【写作特训】
1. Instead, she fund ways f punishment that______________________________(给我们留下了比打屁股更持久的记忆).
2. One day at daycare watched ______________________________(一位极度疲惫的母亲试图去接她的女儿).
3. Susie ______________________________(立刻倒在地上，又踢又叫), “I want t g t McDnald’s.”
4. She grabbed her mther’s hand _____________________________(她抓住她母亲的手) and they left.
5. ______________________________(她眯起眼睛，紧握着我的手), “Becky, yu can’t have that telephne tday, but if yu misbehave, yu can have a spanking.”
6. “Mama, stp. Mama, get up,” ______________________________(我含泪恳求).
7. At first stunned, ______________________________(排队的其他人开始偶尔鼓掌) and befre I knew it they were cheering and laughing and patting my mther n her back.
8. _____________________________(她脸红了，微微鞠躬) and the next thirty minutes in line was pure misery fr me.
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参考范文：
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By nw we were standing in the lng Hliday line t pay the bill, and I figure it was a gd chance. I lay dwn n the grund and began screaming, “I want that telephne,” ver and ver again. Weary Christmas shppers lked as my mther calmly said, “Becky, yu better get up by the cunt f three r else. ” Nthing. I was still in full tantrum. S then she lay dwn beside me n the flr, and began kicking and screaming, “I want a new car, I want a new huse. I want sme jewelry, I want...” Shcked, I std up.
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“Mama, stp. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded. She std, and brushed herself ff. At first stunned, the thers waiting in line began t spradically clap, and befre I knew it they were cheering and laughing and patting my mther n her back. She blushed and tk a little bw and the next thirty minutes in line was pure misery fr me as varius parents leaving the stre, shake their heads at me and say with a smile, “Yur mm gt yu gd. I bet yu’ll never try that again.” And I didn’t, because it left a lasting mental picture mre effective than any physical mark.
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【写作特训答案】
1. Instead, she fund ways f punishment that left a mre lasting memry than giving us a spanking.
2. One day at daycare watched an extremely tired mther attempt t pick up her daughter.
3. Susie immediately drpped t the flr, kicking and screaming, “I want t g t McDnald’s.”
4. She grabbed her mther’s hand and they left.
5. Her eyes narrwed and her hand tightened n mine, “Becky, yu can’t have that telephne tday, but if yu misbehave, yu can have a spanking.”
6. “Mama, stp. Mama, get up,” I tearfully pleaded.
7. At first stunned, the thers waiting in line began t spradically clap, and befre I knew it they were cheering and laughing and patting my mther n her back.
8. She blushed and tk a little bw and the next thirty minutes in line was pure misery fr me.
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二、成长篇
Passage 01 ---不要嘲笑别人
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mnday started ut great. I wke up n time, ate breakfast and did sme last minute studying fr my first hur math test. I was cnfident f getting gd grades. Then I left my huse. Ten minutes later, I was settled with my friends n the schl bus. We were busy chatting abut hw we spent ur weekend. At ne stp, Fat Ryan gt n hurriedly. He tripped ver smene's ft accidentally and THUMP! He fell flat nt the flr.
Every ne f us n the bus lked n and laughed crazily. Ryan struggled t his feet, dusted the jacket and made his way t an empty seat. He tried t laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest f the mrning flew by. I did well in my math test. I read tw mre chapters f T Kill a Mckingbird in English class. It wasn't lng befre there went the lunch bell. I met my friends frm the cheerleading team in the dining hall. Then I culdn't help but ntice Ryan a few tables away, sitting all alne. He caught me lking. I smiled at him quickly and lked away.
When we finished eating, we headed ut t the curtyard t practice a cheer we wuld d at that night's ftball game. After a little practice, we nailed the cheer, s we decided we nly needed t g thrugh it ne last time. Again, just like the rest f my day s far, the cheer was ging great. I raised my leg fr ne last te tuch. RIIPPP! I felt my jeans split dwn the middle f my backside.
I frze. I had n idea what t d but stand still. Then I heard peple burst ut laughing, and I saw them pinting at my trn jeans. Trying t cver myself with my hands, I tried t laugh t, but I felt tears began t well up in my eyes.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Then I saw Ryan running twards me.
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That night, after the cheer at the ftball game, I fund Ryan.
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【写作特训】
1. ______________________________(他不小心被别人的脚绊倒了) and THUMP! He fell flat nt the flr.
2. He tried t laugh with us, ______________________________(但他的脸因尴尬而火红).
3. After a little practice, ______________________________(我们赢得了欢呼), s we decided we nly needed t g thrugh it ne last time.
4. _____________________________(试图用手捂住自己), I tried t laugh t, but I felt tears began t well up in my eyes.
5. ______________________________(我突然想到了这一幕) where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily.
6. I ______________________________(低下头，尴尬得满脸通红).
7. Instead, he ______________________________(从后面走近我，迅速脱下他的夹克) and ffered it t me, signaling t me t cver my trn jeans.
8. _____________________________(与泪水抗争), I did want t express my gratitude t him but curage failed me.
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【范文赏析】
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Then I saw Ryan running twards me. Suddenly the scene struck me where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily. I thught this wuld be his chance t return the favr. I lwered my head, my face burning with embarrassment. But unexpectedly Ryan didn't laugh. Instead, he apprached me frm behind, tk ff his jacket swiftly and ffered it t me, signaling t me t cver my trn jeans. Withut any delay, I did it. Struggling against my tears, I did want t express my gratitude t him but curage failed me. In ttal silence, I left the curtyard.
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That night, after the cheer at the ftball game, I fund Ryan. I thanked him, giving the jacket back t him and telling him the cheer went great. Then gathering my curage, I sincerely aplgized t him fr my miscnduct n the bus and thanked him again fr his helping me ut f the desperate situatin. Ryan, with a brad smile, patted me n the shulder and tld me t frget abut that, jking he fell like that a lt. Hearing that, I was amused and cnvinced that he was smene I wuld be friends with. Hnestly, Mnday was a great day indeed!
【写作特训答案】
1. He tripped ver smene's ft accidentally and THUMP! He fell flat nt the flr.
2. He tried t laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment.
3. After a little practice, we nailed the cheer, s we decided we nly needed t g thrugh it ne last time.
4. Trying t cver myself with my hands, I tried t laugh t, but I felt tears began t well up in my eyes.
5. Suddenly the scene struck me where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily.
6. I lwered my head, my face burning with embarrassment.
7. Instead, he apprached me frm behind, tk ff his jacket swiftly and ffered it t me, signaling t me t cver my trn jeans.
8. Struggling against my tears, I did want t express my gratitude t him but curage failed me.
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Passage 02---不以貌取人
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Old Man Dnvan was a mean man wh hated children. He threw rcks at them and even sht at them with a shtgun. At least that’s what we had heard.
His small farm brdered ur neighbrhd where my yunger sister, Leigh Ann, and I lived when we were grwing up. His farm was lng, narrw, and quaint. It held tw treasures. One was his beautiful fruit.
There were many varieties f fruit: pears, apples, and lts mre I just can't think f. The fruit naturally drew the children t his land. It made them int thieves. But my sister and I didn't dare t take his fruit because f the hrrible rumrs we had heard abut Old Man Dnvan.
One summer day, we were playing in a nearby field. It was time t head back hme. My sister and I were feeling very daring that day. There was a shrt cut t ur huse that went thrugh the Dnvan farm. We thught he wuldn't be able t see us run acrss his prperty arund the luscius fruit trees. We were almst thrugh the farm when we heard, "Hey, girl!" in a gruff, lw vice. We stpped dead in ur tracks! There we were, face t face with Old Man Dnvan. Our knees were shaking. We had visins f rcks punding ur bdies and bullets piercing ur hearts.
"Cme here," he said, reaching up t ne f his apple trees. Still shaking, we went ver t him. He held ut several ripe, juicy, red apples. "Take these hme,” he cmmanded. We tk the apples with surprised hearts and ran all the way hme. Of curse, Leigh Ann and I ate the apples.
As time went n, we ften went thrugh Old Man Dnvan's farm, and he kept n giving us mre luscius fruit. One day, we stpped by t see him when he was n his frnt prch. We talked t him fr hurs. While he was talking, we realized that we had fund the ther hidden treasure: the sweet, kind heart hidden behind his gruff vice. Sn, he was ne f ur favrite peple t talk t. Unfrtunately, his family never seemed t enjy ur cmpany. They never smiled r welcmed us in.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
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Every summer, we wuld visit Mr. Dnvan and talk t him.
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The next winter, wrd gt arund that Old Man Dnvan had died.
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【写作特训】
1. The fruit naturally ______________________________(把孩子们吸引到他的土地上).
2. There we were, face t face with Old Man Dnvan. ______________________________(我们的膝盖在颤抖).
3. ______________________________(我们看到岩石撞击我们的身体) and bullets piercing ur hearts.
4. _____________________________(还在颤抖), we went ver t him.
5. ______________________________(我们和他分享了我们在学校丰富多彩的经历) while he kept giving ut his luscius fruits t us as usual.
6. As time went by, we seemed t be mre a family than gd friends and ______________________________(他的家人逐渐带着温暖的微笑来迎接我们).
7. But ne summer, we were infrmed that he was seriusly ill and we were anxius and restless, ______________________________(感觉就像坐立不安).
8. _____________________________(我感到喉咙哽咽), tears welling up in my eyes.
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参考范文：
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Every summer, we wuld visit Mr. Dnvan and talk t him. We shared with him ur clrful experience at schl while he kept giving ut his luscius fruits t us as usual. As time went by, we seemed t be mre a family than gd friends and his family gradually came t greet us with a warm smile. But ne summer, we were infrmed that he was seriusly ill and we were anxius and restless, feeling like sitting n pins and needles. The next day, we rushed straight t the hspital t see his health cnditin. Weak as he was, he cmfrted us that it wasn’t a big deal. It was frm his family that we knew the truth. Old Man Dnvan had fell frm a tree while lking after the fruits and his head was seriusly hurt and need an peratin. The peratin might nt succeed and it was a gamble whether he wuld live r die.
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The next winter, wrd gt arund that Old Man Dnvan had died. Hearing the bad news, my sister and I just culdn’t believe it until we went back hme and saw his smiling face n the wall. I felt a lump in my thrat, tears welling up in my eyes. The family apprached and welcmed us. “ I’m srry fr yur lss.” I gave them a big hug. On my way back hme, the wind whistled thrugh the trees, as if murning fr the death f Dnvan. I realized gne were the days when we sat tgether chatting with each ther. I realized gne were the days when we were lucky enugh t have a taste f the luscius fruit grwn by him. Hwever, he left us a hidden treasure-- his kind heart, which shall never die away with the passage f time.
【写作特训答案】
1. The fruit naturally drew the children t his land.
2. There we were, face t face with Old Man Dnvan. Our knees were shaking.
3. We had visins f rcks punding ur bdies and bullets piercing ur hearts.
4. Still shaking, we went ver t him.
5. We shared with him ur clrful experience at schl while he kept giving ut his luscius fruits t us as usual.
6. As time went by, we seemed t be mre a family than gd friends and his family gradually came t greet us with a warm smile.
7. But ne summer, we were infrmed that he was seriusly ill and we were anxius and restless, feeling like sitting n pins and needles.
8. I felt a lump in my thrat, tears welling up in my eyes.
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三、助人篇
Passage 01---开车半路救人
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
A yung and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whse side* dr was dented （凹陷的）. The damage was very nticeable, but the manager never bthered t repair it. He kept the dent there t remind him f ne afternn as well as this message：Dn't g thrugh life s fast that smene has t thrw a brick at yu t get yur attentin!
The manager was traveling dwn a neighbrhd street, ging a bit t fast in his new. Jaguar. He was watching fr kids rushing ut frm between parked cars and slwed dwn when he thught he saw smething. As his car passed, n children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed int the Jag's side dr! He braked sharply and drve the Jag backward t the spt where the brick had been thrwn. The angry driver then jumped ut f the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shuting, “What was that all abut and wh are yu?”
The yung by aplgized. "Please mister ... please, I’m srry. . . I didn't knw what else t d," he begged.
“I threw the brick because n ne else wuld stp. . ." With tears cming dwn his face, the little by pinted t a spt just arund a parked car.
“My elder brther fell ut f his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.
Still crying, the by asked the astnished manager, "Wuld yu please help me get him back int his wheelchair? He's hurt and he's t heavy fr me. ”
Mved beynd wrds, he hurried t the spt with the by. Anther by was lying n the grund bleeding. He tk ut his clean handkerchief and tuched lightly at the fresh scrapes （擦 伤）and cuts. A quick lk tld him that the wund was serius, the disabled must be taken t the hspital at nce.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
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In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hspital.
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【写作特训】
1. Dn't g thrugh life s fast that ______________________________(必须有人向你扔砖头才能引起你的注意)！
2. ______________________________(他泪流满面), the little by pinted t a spt just arund a parked car.
3. ______________________________(他感动得说不出话来), he hurried t the spt with the by.
4. _____________________________(他看了一眼就知道了) that the wund was serius, the disabled must be taken t the hspital at nce.
5. ______________________________(慢慢地，他把残疾人扶上汽车后座), while the yunger brther sating beside t take care f him.
6. Starting the car quickly again, ______________________________(他冲向最近的医院).
7. The manager gt ut the wheelchair and ______________________________(把伤残者抱进车里，急忙把他推到急救中心).
8. At this time, the yunger by and his parents came t him and _____________________________(向他表示衷心的感谢) .
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【范文赏析】
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Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car. Immediately, he tk ut a bandage frm the kit, and lied it lightly arund the wund. Slwly, he gt the disabled int the back seat f the car, while the yunger brther sating beside t take care f him. Then the manager flded the wheelchair and put it int the trunk. Starting the car quickly again, he rushed tward the nearest hspital. On the way, he handed his smart phne t the yunger brther t call their parents, and cnstantly cmfrted the tw brthers t take it easy.
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In fifteen minute, they arrived at the nearest hspital. The manager gt ut the wheelchair and lifted the disabled int it and hurriedly pushed him t the emergency center. When giving the injured by t the medical wrkers, he gt released. At this time, the yunger by and his parents came t him and gave him heartfelt thanks. Finally he drve his car t wrk, with the side dr still dented.
【写作特训答案】
1. Dn't g thrugh life s fast that smene has t thrw a brick at yu t get yur attentin!
2. With tears cming dwn his face, the little by pinted t a spt just arund a parked car.
3. Mved beynd wrds, he hurried t the spt with the by.
4. A quick lk tld him that the wund was serius, the disabled must be taken t the hspital at nce.
5. Slwly, he gt the disabled int the back seat f the car, while the yunger brther sating beside t take care f him.
6. Starting the car quickly again, he rushed tward the nearest hspital.
7. The manager gt ut the wheelchair and lifted the disabled int it and hurriedly pushed him t the emergency center.
8. At this time, the yunger by and his parents came t him and gave him heartfelt thanks.
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Passage 02---马戏团购票
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Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line t buy tickets fr the circus. Finally, there was nly ne family between us and the ticket cunter.
This family made a big impressin n me. There were eight children, all prbably under the age f twelve. Yu culd tell they didn't have a lt f mney.
Their clthes were nt expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all f them standing in line, tw-by-tw behind their parents, hlding hands. They were excitedly talking abut the clwns, elephants, and ther acts they wuld see that night with their brthers r sisters in a lw vice.
One culd sense they had never been t the circus befre. It prmised t be highlight f their yung lives. The father and mther were at the head f the pack, standing prud as culd be. The mther was hlding her husband’s hand, lking up at him as if t say, “Yu are my knight in shining armr.”
He was smiling and respnding in pride, lking back at her as if t say, “Yu gt that right.” The ticket lady asked the father hw many tickets he wanted. He prudly respnded, “Please let me buy eight children's tickets and tw adult tickets s I can take my family t the circus.”
The ticket lady gave the price. The man's wife let g f his hand, her head drpped, and his lips began t shake. The father leaned a little clser and asked, “Hw much did yu say?”
The ticket lady again quted the price. The man didn't have enugh mney.
Hw was he suppsed t turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enugh mney t take them t the circus?
Actually we were nt wealthy in any sense. S I understand hw the kids wuld feel. I felt srry fr them.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
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Seeing what was ging n, my dad put his hand in his pcket, pulled ut a $20 bill and drpped it n the grund.
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That day my father and I went back t ur car and drve hme withut any tickets.
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【写作特训】
1. Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I ______________________________(我们排队买马戏团的票).
2. The father and mther were at the head f the pack, ______________________________(尽可能骄傲地站着).
3. The man's wife let g f his hand, ______________________________(她低下头，他的嘴唇开始颤抖).
4. ______________________________(父亲靠得更近一点问道), while the yunger brther sating beside t take care f him.
5. Then ______________________________(他捡起它，拍了拍那人的肩膀说), “Excuse me, sir, this fell ut f yur pcket.’
6. He knew what was ging n, ______________________________(他直视着我爸爸的眼睛，双手握住我爸爸的手) and squeezed tightly nt the $20 bill..
7. ______________________________(他的嘴唇颤抖着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来), he replied, “Thank yu, thank yu, sir. This really means a lt t me and my family.”
8. _____________________________(他停顿了一会儿), as if wandering in his memry.
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参考范文：
Paragraph 1:
Seeing what was ging n, my dad put his hand in his pcket, pulled ut a $20 bill and drpped it n the grund. Then he picked it up and tapped the man n the shulder and said, “Excuse me, sir, this fell ut f yur pcket.’ The man turned arund and saw the mney. He knew what was ging n, he lked straight int my dad’s eyes, tk my dad’s hand in bth f his, squeezed tightly nt the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running dwn his cheek, he replied, “Thank yu, thank yu, sir. This really means a lt t me and my family.”
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That day my father and I went back t ur car and drve hme withut any tickets. We didn’t g t the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did s, Dad said, “My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situatin fr a father. Surely he wasn’t begging fr a handut, but he reminded me f my father, when I was yung.” He paused fr a while, as if wandering in his memry. “We shuld appreciate what we have btained frm life and seize every pprtunity t help thers. We didn’t g t the circus tnight, but we didn’t g withut. Nw, wh wants an ice cream?”
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【写作特训答案】
1. Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line t buy tickets fr the circus.
2. The father and mther were at the head f the pack, standing prud as culd be.
3. The man's wife let g f his hand, her head drpped, and his lips began t shake.
4. The father leaned a little clser and asked, “Hw much did yu say?”
5. Then he picked it up and tapped the man n the shulder and said, “Excuse me, sir, this fell ut f yur pcket.’
6. He knew what was ging n, he lked straight int my dad’s eyes, tk my dad’s hand in bth f his, and squeezed tightly nt the $20 bill.
7. With his lip shaking and a tear running dwn his cheek, he replied, “Thank yu, thank yu, sir. This really means a lt t me and my family.”
8. He paused fr a while, as if wandering in his memry.
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