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2014-2021年高考英语真题分类训练 专题24 书面表达之图画式（教师版含解析）
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这是一份2014-2021年高考英语真题分类训练 专题24 书面表达之图画式（教师版含解析），共19页。
第二节(20分)
52.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：西瓜watermeln
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Last week I tk part in a farmwrk prgramme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, ur teacher tld us abut the prgramme with the theme “Wrking is mst beautiful”. And he stressed the imprtance f wrking with ur wn hands. When I gt hme, I packed up my luggage fr the trip.
On the farm, we helped pick watermelns. While wrking, I realised hw hard it was t wrk in the fields under a ht sun.
When I came back hme, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very prud f me.
【写作指导】
本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。
【详解】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。文章使用了宾语从句 hw hard it was t wrk in the fields under a ht sun.还使用了 At the class meeting, When I gt hme, On the farm, While wrking, When I came back hme等过渡词。
2018年高考题
【2018·北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)
【答案】Last week, we tk the freign students in ur schl t experience the authentic tea culture, which turned ut be t extremely rewarding.
On arriving at the tea huse, the freign students were impressed by the unique tea pts and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and infrmative intrductin f tea culture, including its prfund histry, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship f making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began t teach them hw t make tea.
In rder t deliver a clear presentatin, I slwly explained the traditinal prcedure f making tea in detail. Absrbed in every mve f mine, the freign students were nce again amazed by this unique culture and they culdn’t help taking pictures frm time t time.
Next came the mment when I asked them t have a try themselves. Washing the tea pts, adding tea leaves, and puring water int the cups, they fllwed my instructins and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea huse witnessed a really enjyable time fr all f us.
At the end f the activity, hlding the tea bags in ur hands, we tk a picture t memrize the unfrgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditinal culture like tea culture was f great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride t spread ur wn culture t peple all ver the wrld.
【解析】本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。
3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。
运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。
串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
4. 反复审核，修改错误。
一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。
5. 宜详则详，该略则略。
对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。
如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。
亮点说明：
巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：Last week, we tk the freign students in ur schl t experience the authentic tea culture, which turned ut be t extremely rewarding.
使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：
On arriving at the tea huse…
I gave them a vivid and infrmative intrductin f tea culture, including its prfund histry, its rich variety,
Absrbed in every mve f mine, the freign students were nce again amazed by this unique culture
hlding the tea bags in ur hands, we tk a picture t memrize the unfrgettable day.
使用倒装句突出重点。
Next came the mment when I asked them t have a try themselves.
使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。
It suddenly hit me that traditinal culture like tea culture was f great charm and huge value.
2017年高考题
[2017·江苏卷]
81. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(bxffice incme)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Saturday Afternn.In a Shpping Centre.
Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which mvie shall we see?
Su Hua：Whatever. We've gt s many chices, Kung Fu Yga, Jurney t the West…Each sunds great!
Li Jiang：Yeah！And sme mvie stars are fantastic.
Su Hua: And the hightech！…
Li Jiang：Perfect！Let's get sme fd first. We nly have 20 minutes left.
Su Hua：N hurry. The cinema is n the same flr.
One Day in 2016.At Hme.
Sn：Mum，shall we g and see a film tnight?
Mther：Why bther? We can stay at hme and watch films nline. It's cnvenient with ur new and faster netwrk.
Sn：But it feels gd in a cinema.
Mther：And the price…We have t pay 50 yuan a ticket.
Sn：Only 10 yuan mre than last year.
Mther：But still we cannt get the mney's wrth. Sme films are just bring…
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；
2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；
3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在列举理由时可以用t begin with, what's mre, last but nt least等；还应尽量使用较复杂的句型，如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构；在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装句等。
【参考范文】
The bxffice incme f Chinese mvies witnessed a cnstant increase frm abut 17 billin yuan in 2012 t ver 40 billin in 2015. Hwever, that increase slwed dwn in 2016.
The reasns behind this are varius. The fast ecnmic develpment befre 2016 was prbably the mst pwerful engine driving the cnstant grwth in the bxffice incme. The applicatin f new technlgies and the wide appeal f mvie stars culd als accunt fr the increase. Hwever, China saw a decline in its ecnmic grwth rate last year. And the Internet increased ptins fr mvie lvers. Cnsequently, sme viewers began t turn away frm cinemas, leading t a slwer grwth.
China's ecnmy is expected t grw at a medium speed in the cming years, s an increase is pssible in the investment in the mvie industry and the number f quality mvies. Therefre, its bxffice incme will prbably enjy a slight increase.
[2017·北京卷]
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：视频vide
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【解析】 本文为校园生活类体裁，主题为毕业纪念视频。内容有讨论、拍摄、视频制作和展示等。
参考词汇和句型：
1. In rder t leave sme impressive memries fr all f us befre graduatin, ur class made a special vide t express ur appreciatin t…
2. carried ut a discussin/varius ideas were put frward
3. sht sme wnderful vides in the schl/interviewed ur teachers…
4. Thse wh are talented in cmputer cntributed t the making f the vide.
5. edited the vide/added ur lve t…
6. The shw received a warm welcme amng ur fellw schlmates.
7. Memries f the past flded int ur minds/firm bnd t ur schl…
内容要点：
1. 讨论分工 2. 收集素材 3. 编辑制作 4. 放映视频
One pssible versin：
Graduatin finally came. My classmates and I decided t d smething. After a heated discussin, we agreed n making a vide t recrd ur experiences at schl. Material cllecting tk us a whle week, during which we interviewed ur teachers and tk pictures f every aspect f schl life. The editing part after that was tugh. We debated ver what t put int the vide. Sme cmprmises were unavidable, but the vide turned ut perfect. Several days later, when the vide was played n the graduatin ceremny, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense f achievement.
2016年高考题
【2016·北京】书面表达
第二节 ( 20 分)
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actins fr a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：地球日Earth Day
【答案】
Actins fr a Greener Earth
A week befre Earth Day, psters were put up arund ur schl, calling upn us t jin in the actins fr a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea t make better use f used materials. We brught t ur classrm wrn-ut clthes, pieces f cardbard and empty plastic bttles and turned thse int dlls, handbags, tissue bxes and small vases. That weekend, we went t a nearby neighbrhd and gave them away t the peple there. All were very happy with thse unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly peple. We did s well that we were invited t share ur idea and experience with all the students f ur schl.
We are very prud f urselves and believe we can d mre fr a better wrld.
亮点说明：范文使用了非谓语动词calling upn us t jin in the actins和句型与宾语从句we can d mre fr a better wrld等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call sb t d sth, jin in, cme up with. Make use f, , give away, be prud f等，使作文内容变得丰富。
考点：情景作文
【名师点睛】
话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，多使用一些连接词。
【2016·上海】Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120–150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异(数据如图所示)。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
1.描述调研数据；
2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。
【答案】
(略)
考点：考查图表作文。学科*网
2015年书面表达之图画式
1.【2015·上海】
Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120–150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：
1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
【参考答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Since the Reading Festival is arund the crner, I’m writing t recmmend a picture which can be used in the brchure t remind the students f the pleasure f reading.
In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lt f fun thrugh the discussin. Thugh it is admitted that reading is mstly a persnal activity which needs quietness and cncentratin, as far as I’m cncerned, it can als be a sharing experience when the same bk is being appreciated. Just imagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry with fascinating and intricate plts. Yu are s amazed by the genius f the writer and yu can’t help sharing it with yur classmates r best friends, wh turn ut t have been deeply impressed as well. The mment yu mentin the bk, the passin and enthusiasm abut the stry will explde which can never be gained n yur wn. My ideal atmsphere f reading is just like that, thrugh which yu can nt nly appreciate the cntent by yurself, but als have the pleasure f sharing the plts r pinins with yur peers, which will ultimately enhance yur understanding f the bk. T sum up, the reasn f my recmmendatin is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead f being dull and islating, can be full f participatin and cmmn interest. I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestin int cnsideratin and I’m lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Pan Yang
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。
运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brchure t remind the students f the pleasure f reading.; a persnal activity which needs quietness and cncentratin; yur classmates r best friends, wh turn ut t have been deeply impressed as well；My ideal atmsphere f reading is just like that, thrugh which yu can nt nly appreciate the cntent by yurself, but als have the pleasure f sharing the plts r pinins with yur peers, which will ultimately enhance yur understanding f the bk；
运用连词 Thugh,
运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed
运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read；It seems that they have had a lt f fun thrugh the discussin; Just imagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry; it is admitted that reading is mstly a persnal activity；I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestin int cnsideratin
此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如nt nly …but als; as far as I’m cncerned; T sum up ; share with; 等。
【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。
【名师点睛】
一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。
2.【2015·福建】
书面表达(满分25分)
请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述画面；
2. 概述其含义；
3. 谈谈个人感想。
凿壁偷光
注意：
1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
参考词汇：凿，钻：bre
In the picture,
【答案】
In the picture ,we can see a by in wrn clthes,sitting at a shabby wden table with a pile f bks n it.A weak ray f light came in thrugh a small hle in the wall and he was absrbed in his reading.
This is a well-knwn stry frm ancient Chinese idim.The by, being pr ,culdn’t affrd even a candle,s he bred a hle in the wall t “steal” light frm his neighbur ‘s huse t read at night.The mral f the stry is spare n effrt t acquire knwledge and never get discuraged easily n matter hw difficult the situatin may be
Of curse, things are ttally different tday It is nt the stry itself but what is reflected in the stry that cunts.Hard wrk pays ff.We shuld take pains t imprve urselves thrugh learning and get perpared fr the future.
【亮点分析】
文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with 的复合结构In the picture ,we can see a by in wrn clthes,sitting at a shabby wden table with a pile f bks n it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray f light came in thrugh a small hle in the wall and he was absrbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。
第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-knwn stry frm ancient Chinese idim.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The by, being pr ,culdn’t affrd even a candle,s he bred a hle in the wall t “steal” light frm his neighbur ‘s huse t read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个n matter引导的让步状语从句。The mral f the stry is spare n effrt t accquire knwledge and never get discuraged easily n matter hw difficult the situatin may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。
第三段结束Of curse, things are ttally different tday .当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个nt… but 结构以及宾语从句It is nt the stry itself but what is reflected in the stry that cunts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语：Hard wrk pays ff.功夫不负有心人。We shuld take pains t imprve urselves thrugh learning and get perpared fr the future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。
【考点定位】看图说话写作。
【名师点睛】本文考查看图说话写作，要求学生仔细描述图片并且发表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾以丰富文章的内容。
3.【2015·北京】
假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60.
提示词：一个面团a piece f dugh 面人dugh figurine
【答案】
Last Tuesday, ur class invited an ld craftsman t teach us hw t make dugh figurines.
When the craftsman came int the classrm, we gave him a warm welcme and tw bys helped him with the tl bx. First, he shwed us the basic steps and skills f making dugh figurines. We std arund him and watched attentively. Then we started t have a try urselves. The ld man walked arund and helped us patiently.
Finally, we put the figurines we made n the table and tk pictures with the ld craftsman. Lking at the figurines, we were all very excited.
We hpe we can have mre activities f this kind!
【亮点说明】
范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。
全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Lking at the figurines, we were all very excited.；定语从句we put the figurines we made n the table…；时间状语从句When the craftsman came int the classrm, we gave him a warm welcme and tw bys helped him with the tl bx. 语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰。
【考点定位】图表类记叙文
【名师点睛】本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西，学生认真聆听，是教育学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。 所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的高分会有更大的保障。
2014图画式
1.【2014·北京卷】书面表达(共两节，35 分)
第二节(20 分)
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。
注意：1. 词数不少于 60.
2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There was a prblem with the parking place fr bikes in ur schl.
【答案】
There was a prblem with the parking place fr bikes in ur schl. I nticed the entrance was small and almst blcked. S my classmates and I had a discussin and wrte a reprt. Then we went t meet the schlmaster in his ffice and gave the reprt t him. He accepted ur suggestins. Sn afterwards, a secnd entrance was pened t the parking place. Nw it is easy t park ur bikes there.
【亮点说明】使用了从句：1.I nticed the entrance was small and almst blcked.2.不定式短语及形式主语：Nw it is easy t park ur bikes there.
考点：考查看图写话
2.【2014·辽宁卷】书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”
(Innvatins n Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文
形式用英语写一份书面通知。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯;
3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。
参考词汇: 校园campus创意作品innvatin颁奖prize-giving
【答案】
Ntice
An exciting event “Innvatins n Campus” is arund the crner. Every ne f yu is expected t be part f the event which encurages creative minds and gives full play t yur DIY skills.
Nte that yur innvatins must be schl things. Alng with yur wnderful innvatin, yu need t hand in a reprt, explaining hw the idea ccurs t yu and what materials yu use.
All the cllectins will be n shw frm June 16 t 18 in the gym. Lking frward t the prize-giving ceremny? Sure! It’ll be held frm 15:00 t 17:00 n June 18. S dn’t miss the chance f being the winner. Yur cntributin will certainly make the event a huge success. Fr any questins. Call Li Hua at 44876655.
Cme n, everybdy! It’s yur shw time.
Student Unin
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：arund the crner.即将到来，Alng with连同， hand in上交，ccur t使想起，n shw展览， Lk frward t盼望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如： Every ne f yu is expected t be part f the event which encurages creative minds and gives full play t yur DIY skills.这句话用了定语从句， Nte that yur innvatins must be schl things. 这句话用了宾语从句，Alng with yur wnderful innvatin, yu need t hand in a reprt, explaining hw the idea ccurs t yu and what materials yu use.这句话使用现在分词做状语和宾语从句。
考点：考查图画类书面表达。
第二节(20分)
52.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：西瓜watermeln
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Last week I tk part in a farmwrk prgramme in the suburbs.
At the class meeting, ur teacher tld us abut the prgramme with the theme “Wrking is mst beautiful”. And he stressed the imprtance f wrking with ur wn hands. When I gt hme, I packed up my luggage fr the trip.
On the farm, we helped pick watermelns. While wrking, I realised hw hard it was t wrk in the fields under a ht sun.
When I came back hme, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very prud f me.
【写作指导】
本文属于图画作文，要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。
【详解】假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。图画作文内容要点比较清晰，其中包括：老师宣布活动内容和意义，我为活动准备，在农场的劳动过程，介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分，开头段概括活动，中间段描述图画，结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写，使用一般过去时。
【点睛】本文内容完整，语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。文章使用了宾语从句 hw hard it was t wrk in the fields under a ht sun.还使用了 At the class meeting, When I gt hme, On the farm, While wrking, When I came back hme等过渡词。
2018年高考题
【2018·北京】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)
【答案】Last week, we tk the freign students in ur schl t experience the authentic tea culture, which turned ut be t extremely rewarding.
On arriving at the tea huse, the freign students were impressed by the unique tea pts and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and infrmative intrductin f tea culture, including its prfund histry, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship f making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began t teach them hw t make tea.
In rder t deliver a clear presentatin, I slwly explained the traditinal prcedure f making tea in detail. Absrbed in every mve f mine, the freign students were nce again amazed by this unique culture and they culdn’t help taking pictures frm time t time.
Next came the mment when I asked them t have a try themselves. Washing the tea pts, adding tea leaves, and puring water int the cups, they fllwed my instructins and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea huse witnessed a really enjyable time fr all f us.
At the end f the activity, hlding the tea bags in ur hands, we tk a picture t memrize the unfrgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditinal culture like tea culture was f great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride t spread ur wn culture t peple all ver the wrld.
【解析】本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。
3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。
运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。
串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
4. 反复审核，修改错误。
一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。
5. 宜详则详，该略则略。
对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。
如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。
亮点说明：
巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：Last week, we tk the freign students in ur schl t experience the authentic tea culture, which turned ut be t extremely rewarding.
使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：
On arriving at the tea huse…
I gave them a vivid and infrmative intrductin f tea culture, including its prfund histry, its rich variety,
Absrbed in every mve f mine, the freign students were nce again amazed by this unique culture
hlding the tea bags in ur hands, we tk a picture t memrize the unfrgettable day.
使用倒装句突出重点。
Next came the mment when I asked them t have a try themselves.
使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。
It suddenly hit me that traditinal culture like tea culture was f great charm and huge value.
2017年高考题
[2017·江苏卷]
81. 请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入(bxffice incme)的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Saturday Afternn.In a Shpping Centre.
Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua. Which mvie shall we see?
Su Hua：Whatever. We've gt s many chices, Kung Fu Yga, Jurney t the West…Each sunds great!
Li Jiang：Yeah！And sme mvie stars are fantastic.
Su Hua: And the hightech！…
Li Jiang：Perfect！Let's get sme fd first. We nly have 20 minutes left.
Su Hua：N hurry. The cinema is n the same flr.
One Day in 2016.At Hme.
Sn：Mum，shall we g and see a film tnight?
Mther：Why bther? We can stay at hme and watch films nline. It's cnvenient with ur new and faster netwrk.
Sn：But it feels gd in a cinema.
Mther：And the price…We have t pay 50 yuan a ticket.
Sn：Only 10 yuan mre than last year.
Mther：But still we cannt get the mney's wrth. Sme films are just bring…
【写作内容】
1．用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；
2．我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些，简要谈谈你的看法(上述对话仅供参考，原因不少于两点)；
3．谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
在遣词造句上，应当注意合理使用连接成分，以提高文章的逻辑性，如在列举理由时可以用t begin with, what's mre, last but nt least等；还应尽量使用较复杂的句型，如在总结全文大意时可以用定语从句、分词结构；在其他地方可以用主语从句、倒装句等。
【参考范文】
The bxffice incme f Chinese mvies witnessed a cnstant increase frm abut 17 billin yuan in 2012 t ver 40 billin in 2015. Hwever, that increase slwed dwn in 2016.
The reasns behind this are varius. The fast ecnmic develpment befre 2016 was prbably the mst pwerful engine driving the cnstant grwth in the bxffice incme. The applicatin f new technlgies and the wide appeal f mvie stars culd als accunt fr the increase. Hwever, China saw a decline in its ecnmic grwth rate last year. And the Internet increased ptins fr mvie lvers. Cnsequently, sme viewers began t turn away frm cinemas, leading t a slwer grwth.
China's ecnmy is expected t grw at a medium speed in the cming years, s an increase is pssible in the investment in the mvie industry and the number f quality mvies. Therefre, its bxffice incme will prbably enjy a slight increase.
[2017·北京卷]
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：视频vide
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【解析】 本文为校园生活类体裁，主题为毕业纪念视频。内容有讨论、拍摄、视频制作和展示等。
参考词汇和句型：
1. In rder t leave sme impressive memries fr all f us befre graduatin, ur class made a special vide t express ur appreciatin t…
2. carried ut a discussin/varius ideas were put frward
3. sht sme wnderful vides in the schl/interviewed ur teachers…
4. Thse wh are talented in cmputer cntributed t the making f the vide.
5. edited the vide/added ur lve t…
6. The shw received a warm welcme amng ur fellw schlmates.
7. Memries f the past flded int ur minds/firm bnd t ur schl…
内容要点：
1. 讨论分工 2. 收集素材 3. 编辑制作 4. 放映视频
One pssible versin：
Graduatin finally came. My classmates and I decided t d smething. After a heated discussin, we agreed n making a vide t recrd ur experiences at schl. Material cllecting tk us a whle week, during which we interviewed ur teachers and tk pictures f every aspect f schl life. The editing part after that was tugh. We debated ver what t put int the vide. Sme cmprmises were unavidable, but the vide turned ut perfect. Several days later, when the vide was played n the graduatin ceremny, it was well received. The students and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense f achievement.
2016年高考题
【2016·北京】书面表达
第二节 ( 20 分)
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actins fr a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
提示词：地球日Earth Day
【答案】
Actins fr a Greener Earth
A week befre Earth Day, psters were put up arund ur schl, calling upn us t jin in the actins fr a greener earth.
Our class came up with the idea t make better use f used materials. We brught t ur classrm wrn-ut clthes, pieces f cardbard and empty plastic bttles and turned thse int dlls, handbags, tissue bxes and small vases. That weekend, we went t a nearby neighbrhd and gave them away t the peple there. All were very happy with thse unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly peple. We did s well that we were invited t share ur idea and experience with all the students f ur schl.
We are very prud f urselves and believe we can d mre fr a better wrld.
亮点说明：范文使用了非谓语动词calling upn us t jin in the actins和句型与宾语从句we can d mre fr a better wrld等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call sb t d sth, jin in, cme up with. Make use f, , give away, be prud f等，使作文内容变得丰富。
考点：情景作文
【名师点睛】
话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，多使用一些连接词。
【2016·上海】Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120–150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异(数据如图所示)。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：
1.描述调研数据；
2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。
【答案】
(略)
考点：考查图表作文。学科*网
2015年书面表达之图画式
1.【2015·上海】
Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120–150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：
1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
【参考答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Since the Reading Festival is arund the crner, I’m writing t recmmend a picture which can be used in the brchure t remind the students f the pleasure f reading.
In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lt f fun thrugh the discussin. Thugh it is admitted that reading is mstly a persnal activity which needs quietness and cncentratin, as far as I’m cncerned, it can als be a sharing experience when the same bk is being appreciated. Just imagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry with fascinating and intricate plts. Yu are s amazed by the genius f the writer and yu can’t help sharing it with yur classmates r best friends, wh turn ut t have been deeply impressed as well. The mment yu mentin the bk, the passin and enthusiasm abut the stry will explde which can never be gained n yur wn. My ideal atmsphere f reading is just like that, thrugh which yu can nt nly appreciate the cntent by yurself, but als have the pleasure f sharing the plts r pinins with yur peers, which will ultimately enhance yur understanding f the bk. T sum up, the reasn f my recmmendatin is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead f being dull and islating, can be full f participatin and cmmn interest. I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestin int cnsideratin and I’m lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Pan Yang
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。
运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brchure t remind the students f the pleasure f reading.; a persnal activity which needs quietness and cncentratin; yur classmates r best friends, wh turn ut t have been deeply impressed as well；My ideal atmsphere f reading is just like that, thrugh which yu can nt nly appreciate the cntent by yurself, but als have the pleasure f sharing the plts r pinins with yur peers, which will ultimately enhance yur understanding f the bk；
运用连词 Thugh,
运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed
运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read；It seems that they have had a lt f fun thrugh the discussin; Just imagine that yu have read a terrific detective stry; it is admitted that reading is mstly a persnal activity；I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestin int cnsideratin
此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如nt nly …but als; as far as I’m cncerned; T sum up ; share with; 等。
【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。
【名师点睛】
一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。
2.【2015·福建】
书面表达(满分25分)
请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述画面；
2. 概述其含义；
3. 谈谈个人感想。
凿壁偷光
注意：
1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
参考词汇：凿，钻：bre
In the picture,
【答案】
In the picture ,we can see a by in wrn clthes,sitting at a shabby wden table with a pile f bks n it.A weak ray f light came in thrugh a small hle in the wall and he was absrbed in his reading.
This is a well-knwn stry frm ancient Chinese idim.The by, being pr ,culdn’t affrd even a candle,s he bred a hle in the wall t “steal” light frm his neighbur ‘s huse t read at night.The mral f the stry is spare n effrt t acquire knwledge and never get discuraged easily n matter hw difficult the situatin may be
Of curse, things are ttally different tday It is nt the stry itself but what is reflected in the stry that cunts.Hard wrk pays ff.We shuld take pains t imprve urselves thrugh learning and get perpared fr the future.
【亮点分析】
文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with 的复合结构In the picture ,we can see a by in wrn clthes,sitting at a shabby wden table with a pile f bks n it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray f light came in thrugh a small hle in the wall and he was absrbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。
第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-knwn stry frm ancient Chinese idim.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The by, being pr ,culdn’t affrd even a candle,s he bred a hle in the wall t “steal” light frm his neighbur ‘s huse t read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个n matter引导的让步状语从句。The mral f the stry is spare n effrt t accquire knwledge and never get discuraged easily n matter hw difficult the situatin may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。
第三段结束Of curse, things are ttally different tday .当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个nt… but 结构以及宾语从句It is nt the stry itself but what is reflected in the stry that cunts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语：Hard wrk pays ff.功夫不负有心人。We shuld take pains t imprve urselves thrugh learning and get perpared fr the future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。
【考点定位】看图说话写作。
【名师点睛】本文考查看图说话写作，要求学生仔细描述图片并且发表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾以丰富文章的内容。
3.【2015·北京】
假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60.
提示词：一个面团a piece f dugh 面人dugh figurine
【答案】
Last Tuesday, ur class invited an ld craftsman t teach us hw t make dugh figurines.
When the craftsman came int the classrm, we gave him a warm welcme and tw bys helped him with the tl bx. First, he shwed us the basic steps and skills f making dugh figurines. We std arund him and watched attentively. Then we started t have a try urselves. The ld man walked arund and helped us patiently.
Finally, we put the figurines we made n the table and tk pictures with the ld craftsman. Lking at the figurines, we were all very excited.
We hpe we can have mre activities f this kind!
【亮点说明】
范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。
全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Lking at the figurines, we were all very excited.；定语从句we put the figurines we made n the table…；时间状语从句When the craftsman came int the classrm, we gave him a warm welcme and tw bys helped him with the tl bx. 语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰。
【考点定位】图表类记叙文
【名师点睛】本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西，学生认真聆听，是教育学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。 所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的高分会有更大的保障。
2014图画式
1.【2014·北京卷】书面表达(共两节，35 分)
第二节(20 分)
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。
注意：1. 词数不少于 60.
2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
There was a prblem with the parking place fr bikes in ur schl.
【答案】
There was a prblem with the parking place fr bikes in ur schl. I nticed the entrance was small and almst blcked. S my classmates and I had a discussin and wrte a reprt. Then we went t meet the schlmaster in his ffice and gave the reprt t him. He accepted ur suggestins. Sn afterwards, a secnd entrance was pened t the parking place. Nw it is easy t park ur bikes there.
【亮点说明】使用了从句：1.I nticed the entrance was small and almst blcked.2.不定式短语及形式主语：Nw it is easy t park ur bikes there.
考点：考查看图写话
2.【2014·辽宁卷】书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”
(Innvatins n Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示，以短文
形式用英语写一份书面通知。
注意: 1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯;
3.开头及结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。
参考词汇: 校园campus创意作品innvatin颁奖prize-giving
【答案】
Ntice
An exciting event “Innvatins n Campus” is arund the crner. Every ne f yu is expected t be part f the event which encurages creative minds and gives full play t yur DIY skills.
Nte that yur innvatins must be schl things. Alng with yur wnderful innvatin, yu need t hand in a reprt, explaining hw the idea ccurs t yu and what materials yu use.
All the cllectins will be n shw frm June 16 t 18 in the gym. Lking frward t the prize-giving ceremny? Sure! It’ll be held frm 15:00 t 17:00 n June 18. S dn’t miss the chance f being the winner. Yur cntributin will certainly make the event a huge success. Fr any questins. Call Li Hua at 44876655.
Cme n, everybdy! It’s yur shw time.
Student Unin
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组：arund the crner.即将到来，Alng with连同， hand in上交，ccur t使想起，n shw展览， Lk frward t盼望，句式上体现出多变的特点，如： Every ne f yu is expected t be part f the event which encurages creative minds and gives full play t yur DIY skills.这句话用了定语从句， Nte that yur innvatins must be schl things. 这句话用了宾语从句，Alng with yur wnderful innvatin, yu need t hand in a reprt, explaining hw the idea ccurs t yu and what materials yu use.这句话使用现在分词做状语和宾语从句。
考点：考查图画类书面表达。
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