考点26高考英语书面表达之人物介绍

考点26  书面表达之人物介绍类序号内容 1考点解读命题趋势 2考向策略  答题技巧   真题（典例）引领 3考点过关  真题再现  模拟检测【考点解读】 人物介绍类高考英语书面表达分为人物介绍和人物推介，一般是对所要描写的人的基本情况做简单描述，主要篇幅是描写其在某个领域做出的贡献，最后做以简要的评价。  文章体裁一般是记叙文，以特定人物为描写对象，利用相当丰富、细致的材料反映以个人的思想、精神、情感、言行、事迹，并以此来感动、感染、激励或者教育人们。这个“人物”可以是出类拔萃的，也可以是默默无闻的，但他们在一篇成功的特写里应该同样散发着独一无二的个人魅力。【考向策略】答题技巧人物介绍介绍类一般分为三部分、1.简要介绍引入话题；2、具体介绍，尤其是在某方面的成就；3、对其简单的评价。【常用词汇】外貌：good-looking; funny-looking; ordinary-looking; handsome; charming; beautiful; pretty; white-haired; near-sighted; healthy; bearded; leggy(腿长的); bony(瘦的); muscular（肌肉发达的；强壮的）; slim; athletic（体格健壮的）性格：kind-hearted; absent-minded; patient; naughty; smart; intelligent; bad-tempered; attractive; confident; independent; humorous; talkative; modest; serious; friendly; extrovert（外向的）; untidy; shy; fatherly（慈爱的，父亲般的）; motherly; lovely; manly（强壮的 男子气概的）; optimistic; innocent; modest; sensitive; reliable; forgetful; sincere兴趣爱好： be good at; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about; be strict in/with; be absorbed in; be addicted to; focus on; pay attention to; put one’s heart into家庭背景： be born in; spend one’s childhood in; live a happy/hard life教育背景： be admitted into/ to a key university; graduate from; receive a doctor’s degree主要事迹： serve/work as, devote one’s life to; concentrate oneself to; make up one’s mind to do; have a gift/talent for成就：set a good example for; be honored/respected as; make great contributions to【常用句型】I can’t be more excited to hear from you since I learn that we share the same interest in Chinese history. As is known to all, he is one of the greatest thinkers and educators in China. I strongly recommend the works of Confucius to you, which, without question, must be what you like.It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.  In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.He is regarded as......                She has a gift for                真题（典例）引领1  【2020·全国新课标I】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.真题（典例）引领2【2016北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 该人物是谁；2. 该人物的主要贡献；3. 该人物对你的影响。注意：1. 词数不少于502. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【范文】Dear Jim,I am delighted to hear from you. It’s an honor to know you are enthusiastic about Chinese history.When it comes to my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Li Bai of Tang Dynasty. He was renowned as the greatest romantic poet. Over 900 poems of him survived and were widely read by later generations. He expressed his emotions in poems directly every time he was frustrated by his unsuccessful career, which formed his unique style of writing. This really enlightens me.Are you interested in Li Bai? Please tell me and I’ll send you some books.Yours,Li Hua【考点过关】Passage 1（2021·四川成都经开区实验高中高三期末）假定你是红星中学学生李华。你得知成都大运会（the Chengdu 2021 FISU World University Games）网站正在招聘兼职英文记者，请写一封申请邮件，内容包括。1.写信目的；2.申请原因；3.你的优势。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir / Madam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua. Passage 2（2021·陕西高三月考）假定你是李华，正在伦敦某所中学做交换生。你校即将举行的中国古诗朗诵大赛需要一名主持人。请你给该比赛的负责人Mr. Charles写封自荐信，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.你的优势；3.期待回复。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Passage 3（2021·广东高三二模）为迎接国外姐妹学校来访师生, 学校准备选拔“文化交流小使者 (Young Ambassador for Cultural Exchange) ”, 你打算参加。请写一份英语竞选演讲稿, 内容包括：1. 自我介绍；2. 竞选理由。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右：2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Good morning, dear judges. I’m Candidate No.1._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage 1假设你是李华，你校广播站正在招收英文编辑，请你根据以下提示，向负责此事的外教Mr. Mark申请这一职位。要点包括：职位要求1.有很强的英语表达能力；2.关心时事。个人优势1.有做记者的经历，沟通能力强；2.父亲是一位专职编辑,深受其影响；3.……注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Passage 2（2021·吉林白城一中高三一模）假定你是李华，你校英语报社正在征集稿件。请你以“My Story about Jogging”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 事情的经过；2. 此事对你的影响。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Passage 3假如你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，你参加高校招生英语面试，请根据以下提示用英语做自我介绍。1.性格特点；2.兴趣爱好；3.擅长科目；4.未来专业意向。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【考点过关】参考答案Passage 1Dear Sir / Madam,      I’m Li Hua, a senior student from Hongxing Middle School. I noticed that you are recruiting part-time English journalist for the Chengdu 2021 FISU World University Games. So I’m writing to apply for the job.Since the Chengdu 2021 FISU World University Games is a big event for our city, I’m keen to do something for it. I have a good command of English and I can do well in English writing and speaking. In addition, I’m a journalist of the English newspaper in our school now. And I often report some news that is interesting and important both inside and outside the school. Many teachers and students speak highly of my work. So I’m familiar with how to perform my duty well. I believe I am qualified for this job.I would appreciate it if you could give me an opportunity and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of journalists.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua.【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请应聘成都大运会（the Chengdu 2021 FISU World University Games）网站的兼职英文记者。【详解】1.词汇积累想做某事：want to do sth.→be keen to do sth. ……做得好：be good at…→do well in… 机会：chance→opportunity适合……的：be fit for→be qualified for 2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：And I often report some news. The news is interesting and important both inside and outside the school.拓展句：And I often report some news that is interesting and important both inside and outside the school.【点睛】[高分句型1] I noticed that you are recruiting part-time English journalist for the Chengdu 2021 FISU World University Games.（运用了宾语从句）[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of journalists. (运用了固定句型“I would appreciate it if …”，) Passage 2Dear Mr. Charles,I'm Li Hua, an exchange student in our school. Hearing that you're looking for a host for the coming Chinses Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest, I’m writing to recommend myself. I think I'm the right person.To begin with, I'm interested in Chinese ancient poetry and good at recitation, meaning I know how to deal with emergencies. In addition, I’m fluent in both Chinese and English, which enables me to host the competition without language difficulty. More importantly, I’ve had many experiences of being a host, so I need no training for it.Please take my application into careful consideration. I’m expecting your earliest reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给中国古诗朗诵比赛的负责人Mr. Charles写封自荐信。【详解】1.词汇积累比赛：competition→contest处理：handle→deal with认真的：serious→careful此外：moreover=in addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Please take my application into careful consideration.拓展句：I would appreciate it if you could take my application into careful consideration.【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you're looking for a host for the coming Chinses Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest, I’m writing to recommend myself. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] In addition, I’m fluent in both Chinese and English, which enables me to host the competition without language difficulty. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)Passage 3【答案】Good morning, dear judges. I’m Candidate No.1. My name is Li Hua and comes from Class 11, Grade One. I think I am the perfect person for the Young Ambassador for Cultural Exchange.Firstly, I’m fluent in English. It will make the communication between our honored friends and us much easier. Moreover, as a big fan of traditional Chinese culture, I don’t think there is anyone who could be more suitable than me to introduce our culture to foreign friends. In addition, my outgoing and enthusiastic personality makes me get along well with people quickly and easily. So, dear judges, please trust me. I’m the very person you are looking for.【分析】本篇书面表达是演讲稿，要求考生为竞选“文化交流小使者”撰写演讲稿。【详解】1.词汇积累值得尊敬的：honored→ respectable合适的：suitable→proper热情的：enthusiastic→passionate个性：personality→character2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Firstly, I’m fluent in English. It will make the communication between our honored friends and us much easier.拓展句：Firstly, I’m fluent in English, which will make the communication between our honored friends and us much easier.【点睛】[高分句型1] Moreover, as a big fan of traditional Chinese culture, I don’t think there is anyone who could be more suitable than me to introduce our culture to foreign friends. (宾语从句和who引导的限制性定语从句)Passage 1Dear Mr. Mark,I’m writing to apply to be an English editor of the broadcasting station of our school, which I am wild about all the time.I’m qualified for the position based on the following reasons. First, I meet your requirements for the position well. That is, I have a good command of English communication skills. Besides, I am concerned a lot about current affairs and take great interest in journalism. Second, I was a part-time reporter when I was in junior middle school, which developed my communication and interpersonal skills. In addition, my father is a professional editor, by whom I was deeply influenced from an early age and from whom I learned a lot. Therefore, I am eager to get the position and I really hope I will be given the honor to be one of you.Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mr. Mark写封信，申请校广播站英文编辑的职位。【详解】1.词汇积累热爱：be wild about=be crazy about适合：be qualified for=be fit for要求：requirement→request感兴趣：take interest in=be interested in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Therefore, I am eager to get the position and I really hope I will be given the honor to be one of you.拓展句：Therefore, I am eager to get the position, where I will be given the honor to be one of you.【点睛】[高分句型1] Second, I was a part-time reporter when I was in junior middle school, which developed my communication and interpersonal skills. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] In addition, my father is a professional editor, by whom I was deeply influenced from an early age and from whom I learned a lot. (运用了“介词+关系代词”引导定语从句)Passage 2
 My Story about JoggingOnce I resisted doing exercise. I had so much homework that I had no time to exercise, which was usually my best reason. However, in the winter of the second year of high school, I frequently caught a cold, which seriously affected my study.The doctor advised me to start jogging. After I stuck to it for four weeks, I found myself in good shape and had a good sleep every night. In addition, jogging has not only built up my body but also eased my mind. Having set a new goal—signing up for our city's marathon, I will spend more spare time in jogging.【分析】本篇属于记叙文，要求考生请你以“My Story about Jogging”为题，写一篇短文投稿。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时以及现在完成时。结构：对照式结构对照式结构是一正一反，把慢跑前和慢跑后身体状态进行对照写作。要求：1. 事情的经过；2. 此事对你的影响。第二步：列提纲have no time to exercise; in the winter of ; high school; catch a cold; start jogging; good shape; in addition; build up ;sign up; spend more spare time in jogging第三步：连词成句1. I had so much homework that I had no time to exercise, which was usually my best reason. 2.However, in the winter of the second year of high school, I frequently caught a cold, which seriously affected my study.3.Jogging has not only built up my body but also eased my mind. 4.Having set a new goal—signing up for our city's marathon, I will spend more spare time in jogging.第四步：连句成篇1.表文章结构顺序：Once/As2.表转折对比关系：However3.表并列补充关系：In addition, not only...but also连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]. I had so much homework that I had no time to exercise, which was usually my best reason. （由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。）[高分句型2].In addition, jogging has not only built up my body but also eased my mind. （由短语not only...but also衔接的句子。）[高分句型3].Having set a new goal—signing up for our city's marathon, I will spend more spare time in jogging.（由现在分词作状语的非谓语动词结构。）Passage 3Good morning! I'm Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School. I'd like to give a brief introduction about myself. I'm easy going and have various hobbies. I love sports, especially playing basketball with my friends. I'm also keen on listening to music to relax myself in my spare time. Among all the subjects, English is my favorite and I'm good at it. When it comes to my ideal major, I'm quite interested in international business because I like meeting people from different cultures and communicating with them in English. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to improve myself in your university.That's all. Thank you.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生用英语写一篇自我介绍。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.性格特点；2.兴趣爱好；3.擅长科目；4.未来专业意向。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）give a brief introduction about; easy going; be keen on; be good at; when it comes to; international; communicate with; sincerely hope; improve第三步：连词成句1. I'd like to give a brief introduction about myself. 2. I'm easy going and have various hobbies.3. I love sports, especially playing basketball with my friends.4. I'm also keen on listening to music to relax myself in my spare time.5. Among all the subjects, English is my favorite and I'm good at it.6. When it comes to my ideal major, I'm quite interested in international business because I like meeting people from different cultures and communicating with them in English.7. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to improve myself in your university.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, And then, Finally（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition（供参考）3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句)（供参考）4.表因果关系：Because连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1] When it comes to my ideal major, I'm quite interested in international business because I like meeting people from different cultures and communicating with them in English. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2] I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to improve myself in your university. (运用了that引导宾语从句)