2022年河南省中考英语复习人物写作示范课课件

这是一份2022年河南省中考英语复习人物写作示范课课件，共19页。PPT课件主要包含了认真审题划出要点，列出提纲想关键词，连词成句连句成段，加首尾句连段成文等内容，欢迎下载使用。
My schl and students
A letter fr yu
Dear friends, I’m Harris, a student f Miss Zhang’s. I hear that she will have a lessn with yu. I’m glad t intrduce her t yu. In my heart, Miss Zhang is the nicest teacher f all. She is an excellent teacher f many talents. In rder t build us up, she leads us t perfrm Tai Ji in ur spare time. When we have prblems, she helps us learn t slve them. Once I gt upset because f my pr prnunciatin. Miss Zhang cheered me up and ffered me sme gd advice. At the same time, she als let me send my English vice t her by WeChat every day. With her help, my prnunciatin has greatly imprved. I must say thanks t Miss Zhang. I wish her a healthy and happy life in the future. I als hpe yu will enjy the lessn with her. Yurs, Harris
Para. 1 Tpic sentence 第一段：提出观点，开门见山
Para. 2 Main bdy 第二段：主题部分，条理清晰
Para. 3 Ending sentences第三段：总结观点，强化主题。
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What is a gd cmpsitin? 优秀档16-20分 完成了试题规定的任务①覆盖所有内容要点。②应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。③语法结构和词汇应用基本正确，些许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂 语法结构和词汇所致。④有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。
Pre-writing
1. 把握主题，内容完整。 (Fcused tpic with details)2. 分段结构，逻辑清晰。 (Separate paragraphs with lgic)3. 语言流畅，语法无误。 (Smth sentences withut mistakes)4. 书写美观，卷面整洁。 (Beautiful handwriting with neatness)
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书面表达： 我们有很多平凡而又伟大的人，他们在平凡或不平凡的工作中，他们为我们国家乃至世界作出巨大的贡献，他们感动了中国，感动了世界。请以A great persn wh has mved us a lt 为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 要点：1）这个人物是谁； 2）他/她的主要经历和贡献是什么； 3）你有什么感悟。要求：词数100左右。
Step One Examine the questin stem carefully. (认真审题)
Circle the key wrds (圈出关键词)
A great persn(smebdy)
Third Persn (第三人称)
Her experiences(经历)Her achievements(成就)My thughts(感想)
Simple Present一般现在时 Simple Past 一般过去时Present Perfect 现在完成时…
Step Tw Draw up the utline. (列出提纲)
stick t teaching
dnate…t…/give t...
start/set up a schl
change ne’s life
Analyse Para. 2(main bdy) (分析段2要点)
kind/helpful/useful...
Step Three ①Make sentences with wrds (连词成句)
Zhang Guimei is a teacher.
She has been ill fr many years.
She sticks t teaching.
She has given much mney away t pr children these years.
She started a free high schl fr girls in 2008 with many peple’s help.
She has helped ver 1800 girls t g t cllege in the past 12 years.
The girls have gt ut f the muntains.
The girls have changed their lives.
She wrks in a small village.
⭐Zhang Guimei is a teacher in a muntain village.⭐She wrks in a small village.⭐She has been ill fr many years. ⭐She sticks t teaching. ⭐She has given much mney t pr children and schls in a small village these years. ⭐With many peple’s help, she started a free high schl fr girls in 2008. ⭐In the past 12 years, she has helped ver 1800 girls t g t cllege.⭐They have gt ut f the muntains. ⭐They have changed their lives.
Step Three ②Make a passage with sentences. (连句成段)
⭐Zhang Guimei is a teacher in a muntain village. Zhuang Guimei is a teacher wh wrks in a muntain village.
⭐She has been ill fr many years, but she still sticks t teaching.
⭐They have gt ut f the muntains and changed their lives.
Add sme cnjuctins r adverbs(添加连词或副词，变句或合句，使逻辑更清晰)
Zhuang Guimei is a teacher wh wrks in a muntain village. She has been ill fr many years, but she still sticks t teaching. She has dnated much mney t pr children and schls in the small village. With many peple’s help, she started a free high schl fr girls in 2008. In the past 12 years, she has helped mre than 1800 girl students g t cllege. They have gt ut f the muntains and changed their lives. (Para. 2 Main bdy)
Step Fur Add beginning sentences and ending nes. (加首尾句)
(Para. 1 Tpic sentences)
(Para. 3 Ending sentences) (My thughts)
Zhang Guimei is a great persn wh has mved us a lt.
She is a wnder in the histry f Chinese educatin. I will try t be a useful and great persn like her.
Step Five Beautify the cmpsitin.
Cpy the cmpstin t the test paper beautifully and neatly.(誊写作文)
2 列 Write the utline
3 连 Make sentences
4 加 Add fre and aft
5 美 Beautify it
1审Examine the tpic
好词对句，美化文章；誊写整洁，字体漂亮。
五步作文法 The five-step way t write a gd passage
Pst-writing
无论哪个年代，哪个行业，都会有驻留人心的英雄。诗人说：“英雄儿女各千秋”。我们心中一定会有一位英雄，他/她也许是保家卫国的战士，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是将运动精神发扬光大的运动员。也许是一位感动大家的普通人 理想之光不灭，信念之光不灭。我们一定要铭记，英雄们的事迹，永志不忘，他们为之奋不顾身，甚至流血牺牲的伟大理想。 请以“I will always remember yu ”为题，并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。1. 要点：1）我要永远记住的“你”是谁； 2）我知道的你的经历和贡献； 3）我想对你说 要求：词数100左右。
Practice仿写训练
Let’s give marks t the cmpsitins!
1. 认真完成仿写作文，然后用美丽英文书写出来！ 2.名言警句，增彩作文： (理解他们的意思，连一连，读一读！)