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2021年春外研版英语中考复习第一轮知识点强化课件 7高频话题写作三 人物介绍
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这是一份2021年春外研版英语中考复习第一轮知识点强化课件 7高频话题写作三 人物介绍，共24页。PPT课件主要包含了记叙 ，第三人称 ，一般过去 等内容，欢迎下载使用。
此类作文在描写上侧重写人与叙事相结合，突出主题，主要从外貌介绍、性格特点及优秀品质、主要事例三方面展开。通常以要点提示，表格提示等方式来考查，且文体为记叙文。针对这一话题，考生应具备介绍人物基本信息(外貌、性格、爱好等)及其经历的能力。2014年山东潍坊中考以My father为题考查介绍自己的爸爸。
(2014·山东潍坊中考)6月15日是父亲节。请你以My father为题，写一篇短文。从性格、爱好等方面简略介绍一下你的父亲，重点写一个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事，并简要说明你将如何回报这如山的父爱。写作要求：1.短文详略得当，条理清楚，行文连贯，逻辑性强，书写规范； 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3．词数80词左右。参考词汇：感动mve(v.) 回报in return(adv.)
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My father My father is a teacher. He is friendly, utging and energetic. In his spare time, he likes reading and ding exercise every day. He has a healthy life, and he never smkes r drinks. When I was yung, I used t fall ill. Once I was seriusly ill in hspital, he lked after me all day and all night withut any rest. He tk gd care f me. After ten days, I recvered. Hwever, he fell ill. I was mved by his lve. Father’s Day is cming. I hpe he’ll be healthy and happy frever. And I ’ll make greater prgress in return.
【存在问题】1．文章整体比较寡淡，没有趣味， 没有感情色彩；2．句式单一，语言表述没有新意。
【范文升格】My father ①My father is a teacher, my mst respectful persn in the wrld. He is friendly, utging and energetic. In his spare time, he likes reading and ding exercise every day. ②He has a healthy life, and he never smkes r drinks.
When I was yung, I used t fall ill. Once I was seriusly ill in hspital, he lked after me all day and all night withut any rest. ③After 10 days, I recvered thanks t his great care. Hwever, he fell ill. I was mved deeply by his great lve. Father’s Day is cming. I hpe he’ll be healthy and happy frever. And I’ll make greater prgress in return. ④I lve my father.
①添加了my mst respectful persn in the wrld丰富了文章结构，加强了感染力；②准确使用了leads a．短语，体现扎实的语言基础，为文章增色；③用thanks t对文章进行升格，让语言更连贯，表达更通顺；④文末用 I lve my father进行收尾，表达出作者对父亲真挚的感情，拉近了与读者之间的距离。
“六步法”突破高分作文一审——审要点：细审题目隐含，不漏要点二列——列提纲：根据题目要点，拟定提纲三扩——扩句子：适当补加语句，充实要点四连——连成文：增加连接词语，丰富细节五美——美文章：使用好词佳句，文质兼美六抄——写工整：重新抄写文章，卷面整洁
(一) (2020·辽宁抚顺、本溪、辽阳中考)成长是生命的主旋律。在你的生命中一定出现过一个对你帮助很大、影响很深的人。这个人可能是你的父母、你的老师或你的朋友……请用英语写出你和他(她)的故事以及你的感悟。(题目自拟)
内容包括：1．Wh helped/influenced yu a lt?2．What did he/she d?3．Hw have yu changed?4. ...要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。2．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。3．80词左右。
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My English teacher The persn wh helped me a lt is my English teacher. She’s very kind and hardwrking. She’s s helpful that she’s ready t help almst every student in my class. Tw years ag, I used t be afraid t speak English. But she tried her best t help me t slve my prblem. Thanks t her help, I made great prgress in my English study. Nw I can speak in public and dn’t feel nervus. She teaches me nt nly t learn but als t be a gd persn. I’ll remember her frever.
【思路点拨】1．体裁：本文介绍对自己影响最深的人，是________文；2．人称：本文介绍对“我”影响最深的人，以__________为主；3．时态：描述过去的事情要用__________时；描述自己发生的变化用一般现在时。
(二) (2020·河北邯郸永年一模)英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以The nicest teacher in my heart为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词，在班上与同学分享。提示：1.What des he/she lk like? 2．Why d yu think he/she is the nicest teacher?
要求：1.演讲词须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2．演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 3．80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：upset, cheer up, with ne’s help, imprve
Hell, everyne! Junir high schl days will be ver. I have sme special memries. One f them is abut a teacher. In my heart, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Mr.Wang, my English teacher, is the nicest teacher. He is f medium height. And he lks quite handsme. He impresses us because he is a friendly, kind and hardwrking teacher. He is like a father t us because he cares abut nt nly ur study but als ur life. Once I gt upset because f my pr prnunciatin. Mr.Wang cheered me up and ffered me sme gd advice. At the same time, he als gave me every pssible chance t speak in class. With his help, my prnunciatin has greatly imprved.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks fr yur attentin!
I must say thanks t Mr.Wang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.
此类作文在描写上侧重写人与叙事相结合，突出主题，主要从外貌介绍、性格特点及优秀品质、主要事例三方面展开。通常以要点提示，表格提示等方式来考查，且文体为记叙文。针对这一话题，考生应具备介绍人物基本信息(外貌、性格、爱好等)及其经历的能力。2014年山东潍坊中考以My father为题考查介绍自己的爸爸。
(2014·山东潍坊中考)6月15日是父亲节。请你以My father为题，写一篇短文。从性格、爱好等方面简略介绍一下你的父亲，重点写一个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事，并简要说明你将如何回报这如山的父爱。写作要求：1.短文详略得当，条理清楚，行文连贯，逻辑性强，书写规范； 2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3．词数80词左右。参考词汇：感动mve(v.) 回报in return(adv.)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
My father My father is a teacher. He is friendly, utging and energetic. In his spare time, he likes reading and ding exercise every day. He has a healthy life, and he never smkes r drinks. When I was yung, I used t fall ill. Once I was seriusly ill in hspital, he lked after me all day and all night withut any rest. He tk gd care f me. After ten days, I recvered. Hwever, he fell ill. I was mved by his lve. Father’s Day is cming. I hpe he’ll be healthy and happy frever. And I ’ll make greater prgress in return.
【存在问题】1．文章整体比较寡淡，没有趣味， 没有感情色彩；2．句式单一，语言表述没有新意。
【范文升格】My father ①My father is a teacher, my mst respectful persn in the wrld. He is friendly, utging and energetic. In his spare time, he likes reading and ding exercise every day. ②He has a healthy life, and he never smkes r drinks.
When I was yung, I used t fall ill. Once I was seriusly ill in hspital, he lked after me all day and all night withut any rest. ③After 10 days, I recvered thanks t his great care. Hwever, he fell ill. I was mved deeply by his great lve. Father’s Day is cming. I hpe he’ll be healthy and happy frever. And I’ll make greater prgress in return. ④I lve my father.
①添加了my mst respectful persn in the wrld丰富了文章结构，加强了感染力；②准确使用了leads a．短语，体现扎实的语言基础，为文章增色；③用thanks t对文章进行升格，让语言更连贯，表达更通顺；④文末用 I lve my father进行收尾，表达出作者对父亲真挚的感情，拉近了与读者之间的距离。
“六步法”突破高分作文一审——审要点：细审题目隐含，不漏要点二列——列提纲：根据题目要点，拟定提纲三扩——扩句子：适当补加语句，充实要点四连——连成文：增加连接词语，丰富细节五美——美文章：使用好词佳句，文质兼美六抄——写工整：重新抄写文章，卷面整洁
(一) (2020·辽宁抚顺、本溪、辽阳中考)成长是生命的主旋律。在你的生命中一定出现过一个对你帮助很大、影响很深的人。这个人可能是你的父母、你的老师或你的朋友……请用英语写出你和他(她)的故事以及你的感悟。(题目自拟)
内容包括：1．Wh helped/influenced yu a lt?2．What did he/she d?3．Hw have yu changed?4. ...要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。2．语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。3．80词左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
My English teacher The persn wh helped me a lt is my English teacher. She’s very kind and hardwrking. She’s s helpful that she’s ready t help almst every student in my class. Tw years ag, I used t be afraid t speak English. But she tried her best t help me t slve my prblem. Thanks t her help, I made great prgress in my English study. Nw I can speak in public and dn’t feel nervus. She teaches me nt nly t learn but als t be a gd persn. I’ll remember her frever.
【思路点拨】1．体裁：本文介绍对自己影响最深的人，是________文；2．人称：本文介绍对“我”影响最深的人，以__________为主；3．时态：描述过去的事情要用__________时；描述自己发生的变化用一般现在时。
(二) (2020·河北邯郸永年一模)英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以The nicest teacher in my heart为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词，在班上与同学分享。提示：1.What des he/she lk like? 2．Why d yu think he/she is the nicest teacher?
要求：1.演讲词须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。 2．演讲词中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 3．80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：upset, cheer up, with ne’s help, imprve
Hell, everyne! Junir high schl days will be ver. I have sme special memries. One f them is abut a teacher. In my heart, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Mr.Wang, my English teacher, is the nicest teacher. He is f medium height. And he lks quite handsme. He impresses us because he is a friendly, kind and hardwrking teacher. He is like a father t us because he cares abut nt nly ur study but als ur life. Once I gt upset because f my pr prnunciatin. Mr.Wang cheered me up and ffered me sme gd advice. At the same time, he als gave me every pssible chance t speak in class. With his help, my prnunciatin has greatly imprved.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks fr yur attentin!
I must say thanks t Mr.Wang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.
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