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专题21话题写作-其他话题-2021高考英语写作复习大全
话题作文|我最喜爱的一本书
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以我最喜爱的一本书为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.该书简介；
2.喜爱的原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好。
My Favourite Book
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1. 在我读过的所有书中，我最喜欢《红楼梦》。
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2. 这是我最喜欢的，不是因为它是清朝著名小说家曹雪芹写的。
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3. 相反，我非常珍惜这本书，我已经读了10多次了，首先是因为贾宝玉和林黛玉之间动人的爱情故事。
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4. 此外，如果给予足够的耐心和投入，这部小说还将向读者揭示一个著名王室的兴衰。
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5. 我还喜欢这本书的是曹雪芹的语言和写作风格，这对他那个时代的作家和后世都产生了深远的影响。
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6. 总的来说，《红楼梦》赢得了我的心，我相信它也值得你的。
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参考答案
1. 在我读过的所有书中，我最喜欢《红楼梦》。
Of all the books I have read, I love A Dream of the Red Mansions most.

2. 这是我最喜欢的，不是因为它是清朝著名小说家曹雪芹写的。
It is my favorite not because it was written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist in Qing Dynasty.

3. 相反，我非常珍惜这本书，我已经读了10多次了，首先是因为贾宝玉和林黛玉之间动人的爱情故事。
Rather, I deeply value the book and have read it over 10 times, firstly, for the moving love story between Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu.

4. 此外，如果给予足够的耐心和投入，这部小说还将向读者揭示一个著名王室的兴衰。
Besides, if given enough patience and devotion, the novel will also reveal the rise and decline of a famous royal family to its readers.

5. 我还喜欢这本书的是曹雪芹的语言和写作风格，这对他那个时代的作家和后世都产生了深远的影响。
What I also enjoy about the book is its language and writing style of Cao Xueqin, which had a profound effect on the writers of his times and later generations.

6. 总的来说，《红楼梦》赢得了我的心，我相信它也值得你的。
All in all, A Dream of the Red Mansions has won my heart and I am convinced that it deserves yours too.

【答案】My Favourite Book
Of all the books I have read, I love A Dream of the Red Mansions most.
It is my favorite not because it was written by Cao Xueqin, a famous novelist in Qing Dynasty. Rather, I deeply value the book and have read it over 10 times, firstly, for the moving love story between Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu. Besides, if given enough patience and devotion, the novel will also reveal the rise and decline of a famous royal family to its readers. What I also enjoy about the book is its language and writing style of Cao Xueqin, which had a profound effect on the writers of his times and later generations.
All in all, A Dream of the Red Mansions has won my heart and I am convinced that it deserves yours too.
【解析】
这篇书面表达是一篇提纲类作文写作。你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以我最喜爱的一本书为题，写一篇短文参赛。
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以我最喜爱的一本书为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.该书简介；2.喜爱的原因。通过审题，可知应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】
这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。What I also enjoy about the book is its language and writing style of Cao Xueqin, which had a profound effect on the writers of his times and later generations.主语从句和定语从句的运用；All in all, A Dream of the Red Mansions has won my heart and I am convinced that it deserves yours too.宾语从句的运用。
话题作文|我梦想的工作
你所在的学校英语俱乐部在组织成员交流各自的职业规划，请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1.你的职业规划以及选择这个职业的理由；
2.你现在做什么准备来实现你的梦想？
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Dream Job
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1. 我的理想工作是当一名抗癌医生。目前，癌症仍然是一种致命的疾病，已经造成了很多人的死亡。
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2. 我决心结束这一切，让人们在享受幸福生活的同时享受健康。
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3. 为了实现我的梦想，我正在广泛阅读以获得尽可能多的医学知识。
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4. 我也在努力学习，以进入我理想的医学院。
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5. 最重要的是，一个成功的医生必须是一个性格坚强的人。这就是我努力想成为的人。
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参考答案
1. 我的理想工作是当一名抗癌医生。目前，癌症仍然是一种致命的疾病，已经造成了很多人的死亡。
My dream job is to be a doctor who fights cancer. Currently, cancer is still a deadly disease which has caused so many deaths.

2. 我决心结束这一切，让人们在享受幸福生活的同时享受健康。
I’m determined to put an end to it and let people enjoy good health as well as a happy life.

3. 为了实现我的梦想，我正在广泛阅读以获得尽可能多的医学知识。
To realize my dream, I’m reading widely to gain as much medical knowledge as possible.

4. 我也在努力学习，以进入我理想的医学院。
I’m also studying hard to enter my ideal medical college.

5. 最重要的是，一个成功的医生必须是一个性格坚强的人。这就是我努力想成为的人。
Above all, a successful doctor must be a person of strong character. This is what I’m trying hard to be.

【答案】My Dream Job
My dream job is to be a doctor who fights cancer. Currently, cancer is still a deadly disease which has caused so many deaths. I’m determined to put an end to it and let people enjoy good health as well as a happy life.
To realize my dream, I’m reading widely to gain as much medical knowledge as possible. I’m also studying hard to enter my ideal medical college. Above all, a successful doctor must be a person of strong character. This is what I’m trying hard to be.
【解析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步：根据提示可知，你所在的学校英语俱乐部在组织成员交流各自的职业规划，请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1.你的职业规划以及选择这个职业的理由；2.你现在做什么准备来实现你的梦想？
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：put an end to (结束)；as well as (而且)；knowledge (知识)；medical college (医学院)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和现在进行时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如My dream job is to be a doctor who fights cancer. Currently, cancer is still a deadly disease which has caused so many deaths.运用定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。









应用文写作|邀请信-邀请参加中华诗词大赛
假定你是李华，你校要举办“中华诗词大赛”，你写封邮件请在你市学习汉语的加拿大朋友Jeck参加比赛，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 活动的时间、地点和内容。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇：中华诗词大赛：Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition
Dear Jeck,
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Yours,
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1. 一切都好吗？我们学校下个月将举办一个名为“中国古诗词比赛”的活动。我知道你一直在学汉语，对中国古诗词很感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加比赛。
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2. 比赛将于7月7日至10日在我校报告厅举行，为期三天。
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3. 它将包括三个部分。首先，参赛者将比赛朗诵一些著名的古诗词。
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4. 第二，参与者应该从诗中写出一些句子。
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5. 第三，将展示一些图片，要求参与者说出这是哪首诗。
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6. 我相信这次比赛对你有好处。期待您的参与。
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参考答案
1. 一切都好吗？我们学校下个月将举办一个名为“中国古诗词比赛”的活动。我知道你一直在学汉语，对中国古诗词很感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加比赛。
How is everything going? Our school will hold an activity called Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition next month. Knowing that you have been learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese ancient poems, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the competition.

2. 比赛将于7月7日至10日在我校报告厅举行，为期三天。
The competition is to be held from July 7th to 10th, lasting three days in the lecture hall of our school.

3. 它将包括三个部分。首先，参赛者将比赛朗诵一些著名的古诗词。
It will include three parts. First, participants will compete to recite some famous ancient poems.

4. 第二，参与者应该从诗中写出一些句子。
Second, participants should write out some sentences from the poems.

5. 第三，将展示一些图片，要求参与者说出这是哪首诗。
Third, some pictures will be shown and participants are required to tell which poem it is.

6. 我相信这次比赛对你有好处。期待您的参与。
I am convinced that the competition will be beneficial to you. Looking forward to your participation.

【答案】Dear Jeck,
How is everything going? Our school will hold an activity called Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition next month. Knowing that you have been learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese ancient poems, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the competition.
The competition is to be held from July 7th to 10th, lasting three days in the lecture hall of our school. It will include three parts. First, participants will compete to recite some famous ancient poems. Second, participants should write out some sentences from the poems. Third, some pictures will be shown and participants are required to tell which poem it is.
I am convinced that the competition will be beneficial to you. Looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封邮件,邀请在你市学习汉语的加拿大朋友Jeck参加你校举办的“中华诗词大赛”。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时，个别表达需要用到一般现在时。
结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段介绍活动的时间、地点和内容；第三段表示期待对方能够参加比赛。
要求：1. 表明写信的目的
2. 介绍活动的时间、地点和内容
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
activity (活动); be interested in… (对……感兴趣); participate in (参加); from…to … (从……到); include (包括); recite (背诵); participant (参与者); write out (写出); convinced (确信的); be beneficial to sb. (对某人有益); look forward to (期待，盼望)
第三步：连词成句
1. Our school will hold an activity called Chinese Ancient Poetry Competition next month.
2. I’m writing to invite you to participate in the competition.
3. The competition is to be held from July 7th to 10th, lasting three days in the lecture hall of our school.
4. Participants will compete to recite some famous ancient poems.
5. Participants should write out some sentences from the poems.
6. Some pictures will be shown and participants are required to tell which poem it is.
7. I am convinced that the competition will be beneficial to you.
8. Looking forward to your participation.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first (本篇文章使用过); secondly/second(本篇文章使用过)… ; and then; finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
The competition will be beneficial to you. 本句用来进一步向对方介绍参加比赛的好处。可以使用宾语从句，加强说话人的语气和态度，确信比赛会让对方受益。润色修改为：I am convinced that the competition will be beneficial to you.
话题写作|让你值得纪念的人或事
某英文报社正在以 “A memorable ___________” 为主题开展征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文投稿，记述让你值得纪念的人或事。
注意：1.请补全标题或自拟标题；
2.词数100左右；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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翻译小练习：
1.上周五，我在社区里看到一则号召人们志愿服务的通知，引起了我极大的兴趣，促使我和家人分享这个消息。
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2. 经过激烈的讨论，我们决定帮忙捡垃圾。
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3. 星期天早上，我们加入邻居的行列，与其他人合作以提高工作效率。
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4. 垃圾很臭，而且数量太令人沮丧了，我一度想退出，但我的队友鼓励我继续下去。
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5. 当我们看到我们的社区终于焕然一新时，我们都感到自豪。
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6. 我精疲力竭，但心满意足，回到了家。
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7. 直到那时，我才意识到，与作为社区一员承担责任的喜悦相比，精疲力尽算不了什么。
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参考答案：
1. 上周五，我在社区里看到一则号召人们志愿服务的通知，引起了我极大的兴趣，促使我和家人分享这个消息。
Last Friday, I saw a notice in our community calling on people to perform voluntary service, which sparked my great interest, urging me to share the news with my family.

2. 经过激烈的讨论，我们决定帮忙捡垃圾。
After a heated discussion, we decided to help with trash picking.

3. 星期天早上，我们加入邻居的行列，与其他人合作以提高工作效率。
On Sunday morning, we joined our neighbors and teamed up with others to work more efficiently.

4. 垃圾很臭，而且数量太令人沮丧了，我一度想退出，但我的队友鼓励我继续下去。
The trash was smelly and the amount was so discouraging that at one point I almost wanted to back out, but my teammates encouraged me to carry on.

5. 当我们看到我们的社区终于焕然一新时，我们都感到自豪。
When we saw our community finally took on a new look, we all felt proud.

6. 我精疲力竭，但心满意足，回到了家。
Exhausted but satisfied, I returned home.

7. 直到那时，我才意识到，与作为社区一员承担责任的喜悦相比，精疲力尽算不了什么。
It is not until then that I realized that exhaustion is nothing compared to the joy of taking on responsibility as a member of the community.

范文赏析：
A memorable community service
Last Friday, I saw a notice in our community calling on people to perform voluntary service, which sparked my great interest, urging me to share the news with my family. After a heated discussion, we decided to help with trash picking.
On Sunday morning, we joined our neighbors and teamed up with others to work more efficiently. The trash was smelly and the amount was so discouraging that at one point I almost wanted to back out, but my teammates encouraged me to carry on. When we saw our community finally took on a new look, we all felt proud.
Exhausted but satisfied, I returned home. It is not until then that I realized that exhaustion is nothing compared to the joy of taking on responsibility as a member of the community.







话题写作|我爱旅行
某英语报正在组织高中英语作文比赛。请以我爱旅行为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.喜爱旅行的原因；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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翻译小练习
1. 每个人都有自己的爱好，比如集邮和钓鱼。
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2. 至于我。我喜欢旅行。我的理由如下。
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3. 首先，生活在一个压力很大的社会环境中，我们需要自己的时间，给自己一个放松的假期，享受生活，发现一个不同的世界。
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4. 此外，旅行使我能吸收世界上不同的风俗习惯。
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5. 俗话说，读千卷书不等于行千里路。
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6. 老实说。旅行使我受益匪浅。
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7. 首先，它不仅培养了我的品味，而且增加了我的知识。
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8. 第二，在旅途中与各种各样的人打交道有助于我的成长。
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参考答案
1. 每个人都有自己的爱好，比如集邮和钓鱼。
Everyone has their own hobbies, such as collecting stamps and fishing.

2. 至于我。我喜欢旅行。我的理由如下。
As for me. I love traveling. My reasons are as follows.

3. 首先，生活在一个压力很大的社会环境中，我们需要自己的时间，给自己一个放松的假期，享受生活，发现一个不同的世界。
First of all, living in a social environment with great pressure, we need our own time, giving ourselves a relaxed holiday, enjoying life and discovering a different world.

4. 此外，旅行使我能吸收世界上不同的风俗习惯。
In addition, traveling allows me to absorb different customs in the world.

5. 俗话说，读千卷书不等于行千里路。
As a saying goes, reading thousands of books is not equal to traveling thousands of miles.

6. 老实说。旅行使我受益匪浅。
Honestly speaking. I benefit a lot by traveling.

7. 首先，它不仅培养了我的品味，而且增加了我的知识。
First it not only cultivates my taste but also increase my knowledge.

8. 第二，在旅途中与各种各样的人打交道有助于我的成长。
Second, dealing with all kinds of people during the journey helps me grow up.

I love traveling
Everyone has their own hobbies, such as collecting stamps and fishing. As for me. I love traveling. My reasons are as follows. First of all, living in a social environment with great pressure, we need our own time, giving ourselves a relaxed holiday, enjoying life and discovering a different world. In addition, traveling allows me to absorb different customs in the world. As a saying goes, reading thousands of books is not equal to traveling thousands of miles. Honestly speaking. I benefit a lot by traveling. First it not only cultivates my taste but also increase my knowledge. Second, dealing with all kinds of people during the journey helps me grow up.






话题写作|我最喜欢的电影
某英语报正在组织高中英语作文比赛。请以我最喜欢的电影为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.喜爱电影的原因；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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翻译小练习
1.我很喜欢看电影。
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2.我有时间的时候，我想做的第一件事就是找一些热门电影，然后买些零食来享受我的电影时光。
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3.在欣赏了那么多电影后,《魔戒》让我印象最深刻。
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4.这部电影有三个系列，每个系列我都喜欢。
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5.虽然这部电影大约在2000年拍摄，但是其技术却不过时。
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6.在电影中，景色是如此美丽，我都无法转移目光。
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7.那是在新西兰拍摄的。我已经下定决心，一定要去那里看一看那美丽的风景。
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8.这部电影给我展示了一个科幻世界，那里有各种各样的生物。
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9. 它开阔了我的视野。
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参考答案：
1.我很喜欢看电影。
I like to see movie so much.

2.我有时间的时候，我想做的第一件事就是找一些热门电影，然后买些零食来享受我的电影时光。
When I have time, the first thing I'd like to do is to find the hot movies and then buy some snacks, enjoying my movie hours. 

3.在欣赏了那么多电影后,《魔戒》让我印象最深刻。
After appreciating so many movies, The Lord of the Rings impresses me the most.

4.这部电影有三个系列，每个系列我都喜欢。
This movie has three series and I like them all.

5.虽然这部电影大约在2000年拍摄，但是其技术却不过时。
Though the movie was made in about 2000, its technology is still not out of date.

6.在电影中，景色是如此美丽，我都无法转移目光。
In the movie, the scenery is so beautiful that I can't move my eyes away.

7.那是在新西兰拍摄的。我已经下定决心，一定要去那里看一看那美丽的风景。
It was shot in New Zealand and I have made up my mind that I must go there someday and have a look at the beautiful scenery. 

8.这部电影给我展示了一个科幻世界，那里有各种各样的生物。
The movie shows me a scientific world with all kinds of creatures.

9. 它开阔了我的视野。
It broadens my vision. 
The Best Movie
I like to see movie so much. When I have time, the first thing I'd like to do is to find the hot movies and then buy some snacks, enjoying my movie hours. 

After appreciating so many movies, The Lord of the Rings impresses me the most. This movie has three series and I like them all. Though the movie was made in about 2000, its technology is still not out of date. In the movie, the scenery is so beautiful that I can't move my eyes away. It was shot in New Zealand and I have made up my mind that I must go there someday and have a look at the beautiful scenery. 

The movie shows me a scientific world with all kinds of creatures. It broadens my vision. 
话题写作|我爱乡村生活
某英语报正在组织高中英语作文比赛。请以我爱乡村生活为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.喜爱的原因；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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翻译小练习
1.我在乡村里出生，在六岁以前，我的家庭住在那里。
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2.然而父母为了工作搬去了市区，我不得不远离家乡，
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3.虽然在城市生活给我带来了很多方便，我可以吃到好吃的食物，但是我仍然一直很想念乡村生活。
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4.我喜欢住在乡村。
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5.生活在乡村，时间似乎过得很慢。
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6.我一大早就起来了，然后去散步。
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7.在吃完早饭后，是八点。
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8.我出去和朋友们一起玩或者帮助爷爷奶奶干活。
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9.做完这些事情，才11点。
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10.但是在城市里，我九点起来，然后吃早餐，剩下的时间就是玩电脑。
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11.时间过得真是快啊。
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12.在乡村里生活，我是如此的接近大自然，找到了很多乐趣。
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13.我总是想要在家乡生活。
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14.当我有时间，我就会回到那里，享受在那里的时间。
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参考答案：
1.我在乡村里出生，在六岁以前，我的家庭住在那里。
I was born in the country, my family lived there before I was 6 years old.
2.然而父母为了工作搬去了市区，我不得不远离家乡，
Then my parents moved to the city for their work, I had to stay away from my hometown.
3.虽然在城市生活给我带来了很多方便，我可以吃到好吃的食物，但是我仍然一直很想念乡村生活。
Though living in the city brings me a lot of convenience, and I eat the good food, I still miss country life all the time.
4.我喜欢住在乡村。
I love to live in the country.
5.生活在乡村，时间似乎过得很慢。
Living in the country, the time seems to be very slow.
6.我一大早就起来了，然后去散步。
I woke up early in the morning and then took a walk.
7.在吃完早饭后，是八点。
After eating the breakfast, it was about 8 o'clock.
8.我出去和朋友们一起玩或者帮助爷爷奶奶干活。
I went out to play with my friends or went to help my grandparents with their work.
9.做完这些事情，才11点。
After doing these, it was just 11 o'clock.
10.但是在城市里，我九点起来，然后吃早餐，剩下的时间就是玩电脑。
But in the city, I woke up at 9 o'clock, and then I ate the breakfast, the rest of the day was to play computer.
11.时间过得真是快啊。
How time flies to me. 
12.在乡村里生活，我是如此的接近大自然，找到了很多乐趣。
I get so close to the nature and I find so much fun in the country life.
13.我总是想要在家乡生活。
I always want to live in my hometown.
14.当我有时间，我就会回到那里，享受在那里的时间。
When I have the time, I will go back there and enjoy the moment. 

I Love Country Life
I was born in the country, my family lived there before I was 6 years old. Then my parents moved to the city for their work, I had to stay away from my hometown. Though living in the city brings me a lot of convenience, and I eat the good food, I still miss country life all the time. I love to live in the country.

Living in the country, the time seems to be very slow. I woke up early in the morning and then took a walk. After eating the breakfast, it was about 8 o'clock. I went out to play with my friends or went to help my grandparents with their work. After doing these, it was just 11 o'clock. But in the city, I woke up at 9 o'clock, and then I ate the breakfast, the rest of the day was to play computer. How time flies to me. 

I get so close to the nature and I find so much fun in the country life. I always want to live in my hometown. When I have the time, I will go back there and enjoy the moment. 







话题写作|家乡的变化
某英语报正在组织高中英语作文比赛。请以家乡的变化为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.如何变化；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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翻译小练习
1. 我的家乡坐落在城市外。
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2.我在那里出生和长大。
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3.它是一个小村庄，有着绿色的山、美丽的河还有可爱的小村庄组成的自然风景。
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4.夏天里，我喜欢去山脚下野炊，到河里游泳。
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5.但是现在我的家乡变了。
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6.群山被炸平用来建工厂，河水被这些工厂里的废水所污染。
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7.再也没有绿色的山，只有冒着烟的工厂。
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8.河里的水变成黑色还散发恶臭，我再也不能在里面游泳了。
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9.还有那些小村庄也消失了，取而代之的是丑陋的带围墙的楼房。
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10.我不喜欢家乡的变化，这是一个被污染了的家乡。
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参考答案：
1. 我的家乡坐落在城市外。
My hometown is located at the outside of the city. 

2.我在那里出生和长大。
I was born and grew up there.

3.它是一个小村庄，有着绿色的山、美丽的河还有可爱的小村庄组成的自然风景。
It was a little village with natural  scenery of green mountains, a beautiful river and lovely village houses.

4.夏天里，我喜欢去山脚下野炊，到河里游泳。
In the summer, I liked to go to picnic under the mountain and swim in the river. 

5.但是现在我的家乡变了。
But now my hometown has changed.

6.群山被炸平用来建工厂，河水被这些工厂里的废水所污染。
The mountains were blown down to build the factories, and the river was polluted by the waste water from those factories.

7.再也没有绿色的山，只有冒着烟的工厂。
There are no more green mountains but the smoking factories.

8.河里的水变成黑色还散发恶臭，我再也不能在里面游泳了。
The water of the river turns black and stinks, and I can never swim in it again.

9.还有那些小村庄也消失了，取而代之的是丑陋的带围墙的楼房。
The village houses are gone too, and the ugly storied houses with walls are there instead. 

10.我不喜欢家乡的变化，这是一个被污染了的家乡。
I don't like the changes of my hometown, it is a polluted hometown.

The Changes of My Hometown
My hometown is located at the outside of the city. 

I was born and grew up there. It was a little village with natural  scenery of green mountains, a beautiful river and lovely village houses. In the summer, I liked to go to picnic under the mountain and swim in the river. 

But now my hometown has changed. The mountains were blown down to build the factories, and the river was polluted by the waste water from those factories. There are no more green mountains but the smoking factories. The water of the river turns black and stinks, and I can never swim in it again. The village houses are gone too, and the ugly storied houses with walls are there instead. 

I don't like the changes of my hometown, it is a polluted hometown.



















话题写作|我的梦想
刚上高三的你，准备参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛。请以“我的梦想”为题，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 梦想的具体内容；
2. 实现梦想的计划。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Dream
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1. 每个人都有一个梦想。有些人希望成为一名医生，帮助别人减轻痛苦，而另一些人则梦想旅行。
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2. 我的梦想是成为一名律师，因为我是一个外向的男孩，关心是非。
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3. 如果我帮助别人，我会有很大的成就感。
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4. 为了实现我的梦想，我打算选修一些基础法律课程，同时多读一些法律方面的书籍。
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5. 大学毕业后，我会成立自己的律师事务所来帮助更多需要帮助的人。
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6. 我知道这很难，但我相信如果梦想足够大，事实就不重要了。
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参考答案
1. 每个人都有一个梦想。有些人希望成为一名医生，帮助别人减轻痛苦，而另一些人则梦想旅行。
Everyone has a dream. Some hope to be a doctor to help others relieve pain while others dream about travelling.

2. 我的梦想是成为一名律师，因为我是一个外向的男孩，关心是非。
My dream is to be a lawyer, for I’m an outgoing boy who cares about right and wrong.

3. 如果我帮助别人，我会有很大的成就感。
I will have a great sense of achievement if I help others.

4. 为了实现我的梦想，我打算选修一些基础法律课程，同时多读一些法律方面的书籍。
To realize my dream, I’m going to take selective courses to get familiar with basic laws, reading more books on law as well.

5. 大学毕业后，我会成立自己的律师事务所来帮助更多需要帮助的人。
After graduation from college, I will set up my own law firm to help more people in need.

6. 我知道这很难，但我相信如果梦想足够大，事实就不重要了。
I know it is tough, but I do believe if the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.

【答案】参考范文：
My Dream
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
Everyone has a dream. Some hope to be a doctor to help others relieve pain while others dream about travelling. My dream is to be a lawyer, for I’m an outgoing boy who cares about right and wrong. I will have a great sense of achievement if I help others.
To realize my dream, I’m going to take selective courses to get familiar with basic laws, reading more books on law as well. After graduation from college, I will set up my own law firm to help more people in need.
I know it is tough, but I do believe if the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
Thank you.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己的梦想。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求： 1. 梦想的具体内容；
2. 实现梦想的计划。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
relieve pain；dream about travelling；care about；right and wrong；a great sense of；to realize my dream；get familiar with；set up；help people in need
第三步：连词成句
1. Some hope to be a doctor to help others relieve pain while others dream about travelling.
2. My dream is to be a lawyer, for I’m an outgoing boy who cares about right and wrong.
3. I will have a great sense of achievement if I help others.
4. To realize my dream, I’m going to take selective courses to get familiar with basic laws, reading more books on law as well.
5. After graduation from college, I will set up my own law firm to help more people in need.
6. I know it is tough, but I do believe if the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改













话题写作|我的老师
某市英语杂志正就“My Teacher”这一话题向全市高中生征稿．假定你是李华．请你根据下列要点写一篇英语短文投稿．
1．简要介绍该教师的基本信息,如姓名,任教科目等;
2．突出描写其1~2个特点,如性格,教学方法等;
3．该教师对你的影响．
注意:1．词数80左右;
2．题目自拟;
3．可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯．
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1. 玛丽，我最喜欢的英语老师，是一位漂亮的女士。我最喜欢她，因为她不仅对我们很友好，而且善于使她的课充满乐趣。
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2. 最重要的是，她对那些不喜欢英语的人特别有耐心。
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3. 我曾经是她班上的一员，当我问她问题时，她总是耐心和细心地让我理解。
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4. 在她的帮助下，我的英语学习进步很快，并开始喜欢上了。
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5. 我很幸运在我的生活中有这么一位好的英语老师。我相信，如果没有她的帮助，我现在的英语学习可能还很困难。
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参考答案
1. 玛丽，我最喜欢的英语老师，是一位漂亮的女士。我最喜欢她，因为她不仅对我们很友好，而且善于使她的课充满乐趣。
Mary, my favorite English teacher, is a pretty lady．I like her best because she is not only friendly to us but also good at making her classes full of fun．

2. 最重要的是，她对那些不喜欢英语的人特别有耐心。
Most important of all, she is especially patient with those who dislike English．

3. 我曾经是她班上的一员，当我问她问题时，她总是耐心和细心地让我理解。
I was once one of them in her class．When I asked her questions, she always tried to make me understand with patience and care．

4. 在她的帮助下，我的英语学习进步很快，并开始喜欢上了。
With her help, I have made rapid progress in my English study and started to love it．

5. 我很幸运在我的生活中有这么一位好的英语老师。我相信，如果没有她的帮助，我现在的英语学习可能还很困难。
l feel very lucky to have such a good English teacher in my life．I'm sure that, without her help, I might be still struggling with my English study now．
【答案】One possible version:
My English Teacher
Mary, my favorite English teacher, is a pretty lady．I like her best because she is not only friendly to us but also good at making her classes full of fun．Most important of all, she is especially patient with those who dislike English．
I was once one of them in her class．When I asked her questions, she always tried to make me understand with patience and care．With her help, I have made rapid progress in my English study and started to love it．
l feel very lucky to have such a good English teacher in my life．I'm sure that, without her help, I might be still struggling with my English study now．
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生给某市的英文杂志投稿，话题是“My Teacher”。
第一步：审题
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 简要介绍该教师的基本信息,如姓名,任教科目等
2. 突出描写其1~2个特点,如性格,教学方法等;
1.老师对自己的耐心和鼓励。
2 .在老师的帮助下，自己的成绩有了很大的进步。
3. 该教师对你的影响．
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
not only… but also…; be patient with; with one’s help; made rapid progress in; struggle with.
第三步：连词成句
1. I like her best because she is not only friendly to us but also good at making her classes full of fun．
2.When I asked her questions, she always tried to make me understand with patience and care．
3.I'm sure that, without her help, I might be still struggling with my English study now．
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：When I asked her questions, she always tried to make me to understand with patience and care．这句话运用了when引导的状语从句;使用了一些固定词组如be patient with; with one’s help; made rapid progress in; struggle with等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。












话题写作|我的职业规划
假定你是李华，你打算参加学校“职业规划演讲比赛”，请根据提示，以“My Career Planning"为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.职业目标；2.理由；3,打算。 注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
3.参考词汇：career planning职业规划
Career Planning
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请翻译：
1. 早上好，女士们先生们！很荣幸今天能和大家分享我的职业规划！
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2. 毕业后我想成为一名工程师，因为我对物理和化学很感兴趣，有时连吃饭都忘了。
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3. 同时，工程是中国最受欢迎的职业之一。
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4. 既然我没有好好规划我的职业生涯，我就没有多余的努力。我相信我会成功的！谢谢您！
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参考答案
1. 早上好，女士们先生们！很荣幸今天能和大家分享我的职业规划！
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It’s my great honor to share with you my career plan today!

2. 毕业后我想成为一名工程师，因为我对物理和化学很感兴趣，有时连吃饭都忘了。
I would like to be an engineer after my graduation because I am so interested in physics and chemistry that I sometimes forget to eat meals.

3. 同时，工程是中国最受欢迎的职业之一。
Meanwhile, engineering is one of the most popular careers in China.

4. 既然我没有好好规划我的职业生涯，我就没有多余的努力。我相信我会成功的！谢谢您！
Since I have planned my career, I would spare no efforts to study all the related courses well. I’m sure I will make it! Thank you!
【答案】(One possible version)
My Career Planning
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It’s my great honor to share with you my career plan today! I would like to be an engineer after my graduation because I am so interested in physics and chemistry that I sometimes forget to eat meals. Meanwhile, engineering is one of the most popular careers in China. Since I have planned my career, I would spare no efforts to study all the related courses well. I’m sure I will make it! Thank you!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的职业规划。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时，偶用其他时态。
写作思路：1.点明主题，职业目标。

2. 理由（reasons）
1） 热爱（love）
2） 重要（importance）
3. 打算（plan）
第二步: 重点词组和句式
my career plan; an engineer; (be) interested in physics and chemistry; the most popular careers; study all the related courses; make it等
第三步：连词成句
1.It’s my great honor to share with you my career plan today!
2.I would like to be an engineer after my graduation.
3.I am so interested in physics and chemistry.
4. Engineering is one of the most popular careers in China.
5.I would spare no efforts to study all the related courses well.
6. I’m sure I will make it!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（文章纽带）
运用一些衔接词语，即文章纽带，将连句成文。常用衔接词如下：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Meanwhile, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。如果没必要运用这类衔接与过渡词语，心中也要有文章纽带贯穿的逻辑。
第五步：润色修改
最后，书写一定要规范。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达方式，如：词组the most popular careers; study all the related courses; make it等。句子I would like to be an engineer after my graduation because I am so interested in physics and chemistry that I sometimes forget to eat meals.（原因状语从句及so…that句型）等。全文中没有中式英语的句式，也没有滥用一些作文套句，英语运用能力较高。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，通顺流畅。