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这是一份2021年春人教版英语中考复习第一轮知识点强化课件 26高频话题写作七 环境保护.pptx，共31页。PPT课件主要包含了应用 ，第一人称 ，一般现在 等内容，欢迎下载使用。
1.描述环境污染现象并谈谈你的看法；2.提出环保建议与措施；3.叙述参加环保活动的经历。通常有提示性作文和看图作文等形式，体裁通常为记叙文、议论文等形式。通常要求考生针对环境中出现的问题和现象进行描述，提出建议，阐述自己的观点。2013年山东潍坊中考以Hw t save为题考查如何创建绿色校园。
(2013·山东潍坊中考)当前我国政府正致力于建设“节约型”社会，倡导节约，抵制浪费。作为学生我们也能做些力所能及的事情，如步行或骑自行车上学；随手关水、断电；减少物品的使用和废旧物品的回收、再利用等。请根据要求和提示完成主题为Hw t save的海报，号召更多的人，加入到“节约”的行动中来。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：1.80词左右； 2．文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。提示：tap(水龙头)，uneaten fd/leftvers(剩余饭菜)
Hw t save Our gvernment is aiming t build an “ecnmized sciety”. I think it is every citizen’s duty t wrk hard t achieve this gal.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a wrd, I think ne thing we shuld keep in mind is that n matter what a small effrt we make, it d make a difference.
Hw t save Our gvernment is aiming t build an “ecnmized sciety”. I think it is every citizen’s duty t wrk hard t achieve this gal. As students, we can still d smething t help.
Dn’t waste things. We shuld g t schl n ft r ride a bike. We shuldn’t take a car. Turn ff the lights as sn as we leave the classrm. Remember t turn ff the tap at nce after washing ur hands. When we g ut t eat in a restaurant, we shuld ask fr smaller dishes and take leftver hme. Befre we buy smething new, think whether it is necessary.We shuld use things fr as lng as pssible. When we buy things, make sure that they last a lng time. We shuld nt use a paper cup r a paper bag. Yu shuld use a china cup and a lunch bx because yu can use them again. Finally, cllect what can be recycled in yur classrm r in yur neighbrhd and sell them. We als shuld buy things made frm recycled materials.
In a wrd, I think ne thing we shuld keep in mind is that n matter what a small effrt we make, it d make a difference.
【存在问题】1．使用太多情态动词shuld, 缺少新鲜感，使文章读起来没有吸引力；2．只是对内容的简单罗列，文章缺乏层次性、逻辑性。
【范文升格】Hw t save Our gvernment is aiming t build an “ecnmized sciety”. I think it is every citizen’s duty t wrk hard t achieve this gal. As students, we shuld still d smething t help.
①First, dn’t waste things.②We’d better g t schl n ft r ride a bike instead f taking a car. Turn ff the lights as sn as we leave the classrm. ③Remember t turn ff the tap at nce after washing ur hands. When we g ut t eat in a restaurant, ask fr smaller dishes and take leftver hme. Befre we buy smething new, think whether it is necessary. ①Next, use things fr as lng as pssible.When we buy things, make sure that they last a lng time. ③Dn’t use a paper cup r a paper bag.It’s better t use a china cup and a lunch bx because yu can use them again. ①Finally, cllect what can be recycled in yur classrm r in yur neighbrhd and sell them.We shuld als buy things made frm recycled materials.
In a wrd, I think ne thing we shuld keep in mind is that n matter what a small effrt we make, it d make a difference.
①使用表示先后顺序的序数词first, next, finally让文章脉络清晰，层次更分明，增加提分点；②介词短语instead f的恰当运用，体现出考生丰富的文化底蕴和扎实的语法功底；③肯定祈使句和否定祈使句的使用，一方面提升文章档次，另一方面呼吁人们积极保护环境的情感表达得更充分。
“六步法”突破高分作文一审——审要点：细审题目隐含，不漏要点二列——列提纲：根据题目要点，拟定提纲三扩——扩句子：适当补加语句，充实要点四连——连成文：增加连接词语，丰富细节五美——美文章：使用好词佳句，文质兼美六抄——写工整：重新抄写文章，卷面整洁
(一) (2020·江苏苏州中考)下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来做介绍。
注意：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇： wrkshp n．工作坊
Welcme t ur schl. I’m Lin Ta. I’m glad t intrduce ur Green Planet Club t yu.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All ur club members meet every Friday afternn t d smething meaningful. We have DIY wrkshps. Here, ld clthes can be made int handbags. It’s als fun t use recycled bttles and used wd t make furniture like chairs and desks.
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s wrk tgether fr a green planet. Thank yu!
Wrking as vlunteers is ur task as well. We hand ut leaflets and tell peple the imprtance f living a green life. Smetimes, we teach peple hw t separate waste in cmmunities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we lk after flwers and trees in ur schl.
【思路点拨】1．体裁：本文要求写一篇发言稿，是________文；2．人称：本文介绍“我们”俱乐部的活动，以____________为主；3．时态：介绍“我们”俱乐部的活动用____________时。
(二) (2020·湖南益阳中考)益阳市正在为创建全国文明城市(natinal civilized city)招募志愿者。假设你是李华。想成为一名志愿者，请你用英文给志愿者协会写一封邮件，谈谈你能做的志愿者工作。内容包括：打扫城市公园；到老人之家帮忙：分发传单、张贴通知……
要求：1.80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。参考词汇：vlunteer; clean up; wash; hand ut; put up
Dear Madam， My name is Li Hua. I am a student in N.1 Middle Schl. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I want t be a vlunteer, because helping ther peple makes me feel gd. It’s als a gd chance fr me t imprve myself.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m lking frward t yur reply.Yurs，Li Hua
I can d many things. Fr example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am gd at singing, s I can sing lts f sngs and tell sme stries fr the ld peple at the Old Peple’s Hme. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clthes. I can als hand ut leaflets and put up ntices. I sincerely hpe I can wrk as a vlunteer and d smething helpful.
1.描述环境污染现象并谈谈你的看法；2.提出环保建议与措施；3.叙述参加环保活动的经历。通常有提示性作文和看图作文等形式，体裁通常为记叙文、议论文等形式。通常要求考生针对环境中出现的问题和现象进行描述，提出建议，阐述自己的观点。2013年山东潍坊中考以Hw t save为题考查如何创建绿色校园。
(2013·山东潍坊中考)当前我国政府正致力于建设“节约型”社会，倡导节约，抵制浪费。作为学生我们也能做些力所能及的事情，如步行或骑自行车上学；随手关水、断电；减少物品的使用和废旧物品的回收、再利用等。请根据要求和提示完成主题为Hw t save的海报，号召更多的人，加入到“节约”的行动中来。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：1.80词左右； 2．文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。提示：tap(水龙头)，uneaten fd/leftvers(剩余饭菜)
Hw t save Our gvernment is aiming t build an “ecnmized sciety”. I think it is every citizen’s duty t wrk hard t achieve this gal.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a wrd, I think ne thing we shuld keep in mind is that n matter what a small effrt we make, it d make a difference.
Hw t save Our gvernment is aiming t build an “ecnmized sciety”. I think it is every citizen’s duty t wrk hard t achieve this gal. As students, we can still d smething t help.
Dn’t waste things. We shuld g t schl n ft r ride a bike. We shuldn’t take a car. Turn ff the lights as sn as we leave the classrm. Remember t turn ff the tap at nce after washing ur hands. When we g ut t eat in a restaurant, we shuld ask fr smaller dishes and take leftver hme. Befre we buy smething new, think whether it is necessary.We shuld use things fr as lng as pssible. When we buy things, make sure that they last a lng time. We shuld nt use a paper cup r a paper bag. Yu shuld use a china cup and a lunch bx because yu can use them again. Finally, cllect what can be recycled in yur classrm r in yur neighbrhd and sell them. We als shuld buy things made frm recycled materials.
In a wrd, I think ne thing we shuld keep in mind is that n matter what a small effrt we make, it d make a difference.
【存在问题】1．使用太多情态动词shuld, 缺少新鲜感，使文章读起来没有吸引力；2．只是对内容的简单罗列，文章缺乏层次性、逻辑性。
【范文升格】Hw t save Our gvernment is aiming t build an “ecnmized sciety”. I think it is every citizen’s duty t wrk hard t achieve this gal. As students, we shuld still d smething t help.
①First, dn’t waste things.②We’d better g t schl n ft r ride a bike instead f taking a car. Turn ff the lights as sn as we leave the classrm. ③Remember t turn ff the tap at nce after washing ur hands. When we g ut t eat in a restaurant, ask fr smaller dishes and take leftver hme. Befre we buy smething new, think whether it is necessary. ①Next, use things fr as lng as pssible.When we buy things, make sure that they last a lng time. ③Dn’t use a paper cup r a paper bag.It’s better t use a china cup and a lunch bx because yu can use them again. ①Finally, cllect what can be recycled in yur classrm r in yur neighbrhd and sell them.We shuld als buy things made frm recycled materials.
In a wrd, I think ne thing we shuld keep in mind is that n matter what a small effrt we make, it d make a difference.
①使用表示先后顺序的序数词first, next, finally让文章脉络清晰，层次更分明，增加提分点；②介词短语instead f的恰当运用，体现出考生丰富的文化底蕴和扎实的语法功底；③肯定祈使句和否定祈使句的使用，一方面提升文章档次，另一方面呼吁人们积极保护环境的情感表达得更充分。
“六步法”突破高分作文一审——审要点：细审题目隐含，不漏要点二列——列提纲：根据题目要点，拟定提纲三扩——扩句子：适当补加语句，充实要点四连——连成文：增加连接词语，丰富细节五美——美文章：使用好词佳句，文质兼美六抄——写工整：重新抄写文章，卷面整洁
(一) (2020·江苏苏州中考)下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来做介绍。
注意：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇： wrkshp n．工作坊
Welcme t ur schl. I’m Lin Ta. I’m glad t intrduce ur Green Planet Club t yu.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All ur club members meet every Friday afternn t d smething meaningful. We have DIY wrkshps. Here, ld clthes can be made int handbags. It’s als fun t use recycled bttles and used wd t make furniture like chairs and desks.
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s wrk tgether fr a green planet. Thank yu!
Wrking as vlunteers is ur task as well. We hand ut leaflets and tell peple the imprtance f living a green life. Smetimes, we teach peple hw t separate waste in cmmunities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we lk after flwers and trees in ur schl.
【思路点拨】1．体裁：本文要求写一篇发言稿，是________文；2．人称：本文介绍“我们”俱乐部的活动，以____________为主；3．时态：介绍“我们”俱乐部的活动用____________时。
(二) (2020·湖南益阳中考)益阳市正在为创建全国文明城市(natinal civilized city)招募志愿者。假设你是李华。想成为一名志愿者，请你用英文给志愿者协会写一封邮件，谈谈你能做的志愿者工作。内容包括：打扫城市公园；到老人之家帮忙：分发传单、张贴通知……
要求：1.80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。参考词汇：vlunteer; clean up; wash; hand ut; put up
Dear Madam， My name is Li Hua. I am a student in N.1 Middle Schl. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I want t be a vlunteer, because helping ther peple makes me feel gd. It’s als a gd chance fr me t imprve myself.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m lking frward t yur reply.Yurs，Li Hua
I can d many things. Fr example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am gd at singing, s I can sing lts f sngs and tell sme stries fr the ld peple at the Old Peple’s Hme. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clthes. I can als hand ut leaflets and put up ntices. I sincerely hpe I can wrk as a vlunteer and d smething helpful.
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