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模板01 满分必备词块
1.gve/ffer sb. sme advice(n)给某人提建议
2.ask sb. fr advice向某人征求意见
3.as fllws如下
4.in my pinin/in my view/frm my pint f view 在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in...参加
7.fllw/take/adpt ne's advice采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. int accunt/cnsideratin 把……考虑在内
9.with regard t关于;就
10. put frward提出
11.in this regard/in this respect在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb.与某人分享某事
13.with time ging n 随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with面临
15.take sth. seriusly重视;认真对待
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
1.I'm very glad t have received yur e-mail. Nw I'm writing t give yu sme advice n hw t learn English well in high schl.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。
Pleased/Delighted t knw that yu are traveling in Beijing,I think it is a gd chice t visit the Great Wall.
很高兴得知你在上海旅游,我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。
I have learned that yu have sme truble in... and wuld like t give/ffer yu the fllwing suggestins.
我知道你在……方面有困难,因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
4. When it cmes t/As fr..., the fllwing are my suggestins./My suggestins are as fllws.
当涉及/关于……,我的建议如下。
5. I'm writing t give yu sme suggestins/give yu a hand.
我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
I'm extremely delighted t receive yur letter, in which yu asked me hw t fit in the new schl life.
很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。
7. I'm srry t hear that yu are having truble fitting in yur new schl. Such prblems are quite nrmal. Perhaps the fllwing suggestins are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
8. I'm writing t yu t present what I think n the further imprvement f ur htel s as t attract mre clients(顾客).
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。
9. Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t hw t learn Chinese , and I will try t make sme suggestins here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
1. The reasn why I recmmend this bk is that it emphasizes the imprtance f gd habits.
我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。
It is a gd way t braden yur mind, thrugh which yu can learn different cultures f the wrld.
这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种方式,你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。
In the first place, yu shuld listen t the teacher carefully and take ntes in class s that yu can g ver yur lessns as sn as yu can after class.
首先,你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记,以便下课后可以及时复习。
I recmmend it mainly fr the fllwing tw reasns.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
As far as I'm cncerned/Persnally, it wuld be wise t take the fllwing actin.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
I think it wuld be f benefit/beneficial if yu...
我认为如果……,将会受益。
a gd/great/better chice.
做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。
It is als a gd idea/als helps t d..., which can...
做……也不错,这能……
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
1. If yu need further infrmatin, dn't hesitate t cntact me.
如果你需要更多信息,请联系我。
2. I'll be mre than happy if yu can take my recmmendatin/ideas int cnsideratin.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。
3.I hpe that my suggestins/advice will be beneficial/f benefit t yu.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
4.I hpe yu will find my suggestins/advice helpful/useful/ practical/beneficial.
我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
Dear________,
Yu have asked me fr my advice with regard t________________, and I will try t make sme cnducive suggestins here.
In my pinin, yu wuld be wise t take the fllwing actins: ________________(建议的内容).
I hpe yu will find these prpsals useful, and I wuld be ready t discuss this matter with yu t further details.
Gd luck with yur________________(祝愿).
Yurs Sincerely,
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
Dear_______,
I’m glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestin(引出作者的建议). First , It is imprtant t ______________. Then, it als helps t ___________. Besides, it shuld be a gd idea t __________. Yu can als ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)
As t __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In additin, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果, 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hpe ____________(表达愿望)。
【三段式满分作文模板三 】
Dear classmates,
Have yu realized Mther's Day is ________________________________________即将到来? And what ideas have yu_________________________________________ t celebrate it?
In my view, hw much yu’ll spend fr yur mther _____________________________并不重要; the essential issue is if it can __________________________________表达我们衷心的爱和感激 t ur mthers. S a bunch f flwers, a pstcard r a hug is all acceptable _______________________________作为回报 their devtin t us. But ding what they d fr us every day, I think, is mre significant in hnr f them. ___________________________________________只有这样will we be verwhelmingly aware f__________________________________母亲给了我们多少. I’ve made a plan t ck a meal fr my mther that day, even thugh I never did it befre.
My dear friends, _________________________________________你做好决定了吗?
Yurs,
Li Hua
【2023▪新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
建议信一般使用第一、二人称,时态以一般现在时为主。学生们在落笔前需要确定好每一段的中心内容,列出提纲,从而避免跑题。
Para1:收到来信,得知……(问题);安慰;写作目的(提建议);
Para2:具体的建议与理由;
Para3:希望采纳并祝福,期待情况改善。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3. I think it’s nt a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, randmly pairing up students may lead t unbalanced language abilities within the grups. This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve. Besides, students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.
My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners. This way, everyne can feel mre cmfrtable practicing and imprving their spken English tgether.
Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;
(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
1、首先,我们需要考虑活动形式。可以建议组织一次绿色环保主题的社区清洁活动,邀请志愿者一起清理公园、街道或者河流等公共场所。可以提供相关的清洁工具和垃圾袋,让参与者亲身体验环保的重要性。
2、其次,关于活动内容,可以提议进行一次绿色生活讲座或者展览,邀请专家学者或者环保组织代表来分享绿色生活的理念和实践。可以涵盖节能减排、垃圾分类、植树造林等方面的内容,让参与者了解和学习如何在日常生活中实践绿色环保。
3、此外,还可以建议组织一次绿色旅游活动,带领参与者去参观北京的自然景点或者生态农场,让他们亲身感受大自然的美丽与脆弱,增强环保意识。
Dear Jim
Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”.
Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestin→tip
【2025届广东省广州市高三上学期12月调研测试】假定你是李华,外教Ryan打算使用AI 技术辅助英语作文批改,并向同学们征询意见。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的看法;
2. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I hpe this email finds yu well.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答题思路】
开头:表明身份,对外教使用 AI 辅助作文批改这一想法表示关注,说明写信目的。
看法:可从积极和消极两方面阐述。积极如批改速度快、指出语法错误精准;消极如可能忽略文章情感表达、写作风格等。
建议:建议 AI 与人工批改结合,利用 AI 先进行基础语法、拼写检查,再由老师针对文章深度和创意点评;或建议优化 AI 算法,使其能更好理解文章内涵。
结尾:表达对这一举措的期待,感谢外教关注学生需求,期待回复。
Dear Ryan,
I hpe this email finds yu well. I think using AI technlgy t assist in crrecting English cmpsitins is a brilliant idea. It can significantly save yur time and ffer prmpt feedback t us students. This enables us t get a clear understanding f ur mistakes and make imprvements in a timely manner.
Hwever, I als have a cuple f suggestins. Firstly, while AI can prvide bjective evaluatins, I still hpe yu can give sme manual cmments frm time t time. Secndly, it wuld be extremely helpful if yu culd explain hw the AI wrks and its limitatins.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
Passage 1
【2025届青海大通朔山中学高三上学期一轮复习第三次阶段检测英语试题(2) 】假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校正准备对课程进行改革以适应AI时代。请你给校长写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 说明当前课程存在的问题;
2. 提出你的建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Principal,
I’ve been reflecting n ur schl’s current curriculum and feel that there are areas we might recnsider in the AI era.
Our current curriculum heavily emphasizes traditinal knwledge, which might nt equip students fr the AI-driven future. I suggest we integrate mre AI-related subjects and activities int ur curriculum. Encuraging hands-n prjects, critical thinking and prblem-slving in an AI cntext culd be invaluable. This wuld nt nly prvide students with the technical skills, but als the ethical and scietal understanding t use AI respnsibly.
Thank yu fr cnsidering my thughts.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,就学校对课程进行改革以适应AI时代的计划提出个人建议,应首先说明当前课程存在的问题,然后依据问题提出改革方面的具体建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
仔细思考:reflect n→meditate n, pnder ver
强调:emphasize→stress, highlight
宝贵的:invaluable→precius
使用:use→emply, explit
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Encuraging hands-n prjects, critical thinking and prblem-slving in an AI cntext culd be invaluable. This wuld nt nly prvide students with the technical skills, but als the ethical and scietal understanding t use AI respnsibly.
拓展句:Encuraging hands-n prjects, critical thinking and prblem-slving in an AI cntext culd be invaluable, which wuld nt nly prvide students with the technical skills, but als the ethical and scietal understanding t use AI respnsibly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve been reflecting n ur schl’s current curriculum and feel that there are areas we might recnsider in the AI era. (运用了that引导宾语从句、关系代词引导限制性定语从句并被省略)
[高分句型2] Our current curriculum heavily emphasizes traditinal knwledge, which might nt equip students fr the AI-driven future. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] I suggest we integrate mre AI-related subjects and activities int ur curriculum. (运用了that引导宾语从句并被省略、虚拟语气)
Passage 2
【新疆乌鲁木齐市第二中学2024-2025学年高三上学期12月联考】假定你是李华,你校英文报决定减少刊登音乐方面的内容,你认为这种做法存在问题。请你给该报主编写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 反馈问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editr-in-chief,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editr-in-chief,
I’m writing t say I’m nt happy abut cutting music cntent in ur schl’s English newspaper. Music is fun and cnnects us all.
I think we shuld keep sme music stries, like abut different kinds f music r student bands. It wuld make the paper mre interesting and shw ur schl’s talent. Plus, it’s a great way fr students t express themselves and share their passins. Many students lve music and lk frward t these articles.
Hpe yu’ll think again.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生就学校英文报决定减少刊登音乐方面的内容给出自己的观点,并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不高兴:nt happy → unhappy/dissatisfied
减少:cut → reduce/lessen
展示:shw → exhibit/demnstrate
热情:passin → enthusiasm
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Many students lve music and lk frward t these articles.
拓展句:Many students, wh lve music, eagerly anticipate these articles.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing t say I’m nt happy abut cutting music cntent in ur schl’s English newspaper. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think we shuld keep sme music stries, like abut different kinds f music r student bands, which wuld make the paper mre interesting and shw ur schl’s talent. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Plus, it’s a great way fr students t express themselves and share their passins, smething that many f us cherish. (运用了关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
Passage 3
【2025届陕西省高考适应性检测(一)英语试题(含听力)】假设你是李华。近期,你的美国朋友Chris给你发邮件阐述了他自己在网络交友过程中遇到的困惑,请你给他写一封邮件,并提出建议。
内容包括:1. 安全上网;
2. 谨慎交友;
3. 甄别网络信息。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 在正确位置作答;
3. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Chris,
Hearing yu are facing sme difficulties with nline friendships, I am writing t ffer sme persnal suggestins.
Firstly, be cautius while surfing the internet and dn’t share t much persnal infrmatin with strangers. Yu can never be t careful when it cmes t yur privacy and security. Additinally, building a friendship nline is just as valid as thse frmed in persn. Dn’t rush int sharing persnal details unless yu feel cnfident in their intentins. Lastly, verify the infrmatin they prvide and dn’t hesitate t end cnversatins if smething isn’t right. Remember t priritize yur safety abve all else.
Hpe the suggestins are helpful t yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给美国朋友Chris写一封邮件,为网络交友过程中遇到困惑的他提出建议,需从安全上网、谨慎交友、甄别网络信息三方面具体说明。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
面临:face→encunter
核实:verify→cnfirm
结束:end→stp, terminate
有帮助的:helpful→useful, cnstructive
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Yu can never be t careful when it cmes t yur privacy and security.
拓展句:Yu shuld be careful enugh when it cmes t yur privacy and security.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing yu are facing sme difficulties with nline friendships, I am writing t ffer sme persnal suggestins.(运用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句并省略that)
[高分句型2] Dn’t rush int sharing persnal details unless yu feel cnfident in their intentins.(运用了unless引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型3] Lastly, verify the infrmatin they prvide and dn’t hesitate t end cnversatins if smething isn’t right. (运用了关系代词引导限制性定语从句并被省略、if引导条件状语从句)
Passage 4
【Z20名校联盟 (浙江省名校新高考研究联盟) 2025届高三第二次联考 英语试题】假设你是李华,你校下周日有两个志愿者活动同时举行,一个在火车站,另一个在市文化博物馆。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加,写信向你寻求建议。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 给出建议;
2. 说明理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数为80左右;
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad t hear that yu want t participate in vlunteer activities! I recmmend yu chse the event at the city cultural museum. This is a great pprtunity t learn abut ur lcal culture and histry while helping thers. What’s mre, yu can cmmunicate with lcal peple there. It’ll be really meaningful. Meanwhile, yu’ll meet interesting peple and gain valuable insights abut ur cmmunity.
On the ther hand, the train statin event might be busier and less rganized. Enjy yur vlunteering experience!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校下周日有两个志愿者活动同时举行,一个在火车站,另一个在市文化博物馆。考生的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加,写信向考生寻求建议。请你写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ delighted
此外:What’s mre→ Besides
参加:participate in→ take part in
获得:gain→ btain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:What’s mre, yu can cmmunicate with lcal peple there. It’ll be really meaningful.
拓展句:What’s mre, yu can cmmunicate with lcal peple there, which will be really meaningful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m glad t hear that yu want t participate in vlunteer activities!(运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】This is a great pprtunity t learn abut ur lcal culture and histry while helping thers.(运用了动词不定式t d作后置定语修饰pprtunity和状语从句的省略。)
Passage 5
【江苏省南菁高中、常州一中、南京二十九中等五校2024-2025学年高三上学期12月月考】假定你是李华,外教 Mr. Smith计划拍摄一部校园微电影,现就电影主题征集同学们的建议。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你认为最好的主题;
2. 你的理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文:
I’m writing t share my pinin n the theme fr yur campus micrfilm.
I strngly believe that “The Pwer f Campus Rle Mdels” wuld be an exceptinal chice. This theme hlds great significance as it emphasizes the prfund impact that rle mdels have n students’ lives. Campus rle mdels serve as a surce f inspiratin, encuraging students t excel academically and develp strng character. By shwcasing their stries, we can encurage students t make every effrt t cntribute t sciety.
I hpe my idea can assist yu in determining the theme.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件,就他计划拍摄的校园微电影,提出你认为最好的主题,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
极好的:exceptinal→excellent/brilliant
强调:emphasize→put/lay/place emphasis n
鼓励:encurage→stimulate/inspire/fuel
帮助:assist→help/give assistance t
2.句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing t share my pinin n the theme fr yur campus micrfilm.
拓展句:Extremely thrilled t knw that yu are asking students fr suggestins n film themes, I’m writing t share my pinin n the theme fr yur campus micrfilm.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This theme hlds great significance as it emphasizes the prfund impact that rle mdels have n students’ lives.(运用了as引导原因状语从句以及that引导定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Campus rle mdels serve as a surce f inspiratin, encuraging students t excel academically and develp strng character.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
Passage 6
【山东省日照市校际联合考试2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假定你是李华,你校外教Susan将组织英语短剧比赛活动,请给她写一封邮件报名参加。内容包括:
(1)表达参加意愿;
(2)对活动提出建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Susan,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Susan,
Learning that yu are rganizing an English shrt play cmpetitin, I am writing t express my enthusiastic interest in participating in it. I believe it is a wnderful pprtunity fr students t imprve their language skills and shwcase their talents.
Regarding the event, I wuld like t suggest that we culd include sme prps and cstumes t make the perfrmance mre engaging and interesting. Additinally, it might be helpful t prvide a list f recmmended plays r themes fr participants t chse frm.
Thank yu s much fr rganizing such an enriching event. I am lking frward t yur respnse and am excited abut the pprtunity t participate and learn frm this experience.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Susan写一封邮件报名参加英语短剧比赛活动,并对活动提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express→cnvey
参加:participate in→take part in
机会:pprtunity→chance
激动:excited→thrilled
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I am lking frward t yur respnse and am excited abut the pprtunity t participate and learn frm this experience.
拓展句:Nt nly am I lking frward t yur respnse, but als I am excited abut the pprtunity t participate and learn frm this experience.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that yu are rganizing an English shrt play cmpetitin, I am writing t express my enthusiastic interest in participating in it. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe it is a wnderful pprtunity fr students t imprve their language skills and shwcase their talents. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
Passage 7
【黑龙江省哈尔滨市师范大学附属中学2024-2025学年高三上学期期中考试】假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Tm给你写信说他所在的学校即将开设中国传统艺术选修课,课程内容包括书法、中国画及篆刻等,并就学习内容的选择向你征求意见。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 你建议选择的学习内容;
2. 做出该选择的具体理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Dear Tm,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tm,
I’m thrilled t hear that yur schl is ffering a curse n traditinal Chinese arts. It must be an excellent pprtunity fr yu t explre the rich cultural heritage f China.
As fr the chice f what t learn, I wuld recmmend Chinese calligraphy. Calligraphy is nt nly an art frm but als a prfund expressin f Chinese culture and philsphy. It invlves the use f brush and ink t create characters that are artistically pleasing and full f meaning. Besides, practicing calligraphy can help yu understand the beauty f Chinese language and the discipline required t master it. Mrever, calligraphy is a skill that can be practiced fr a lifetime, ffering endless pprtunities fr imprvement and persnal expressin.
I am lking frward t hearing abut yur experiences in this curse and seeing yur prgress in calligraphy.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tm写信,针对他所在学校即将开设的中国传统艺术选修课给出学习内容的建议,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled→excited
提供:ffer→prvide
关于:as fr→as t
推荐:recmmend→suggest
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m thrilled t hear that yur schl is ffering a curse n traditinal Chinese arts.
拓展句:I feel thrilled because I hear that yur schl is ffering a curse n traditinal Chinese arts.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Calligraphy is nt nly an art frm but als a prfund expressin f Chinese culture and philsphy.(运用了nt nly…but als…并列结构)
【高分句型2】Practicing calligraphy can help yu understand the beauty f Chinese language and the discipline required t master it.(运用了动名词作主语以及过去分词作后置定语)
Passage 8
【 三省一区名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期毕业班第一次质量检测】假定你是李华,你班英语夏令营时,有人建议取消英语辩论比赛。请给随队外教Smith写封邮件表达你的想法,内容包括:
1.反对取消;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I hpe this email finds yu well. I am writing t express my ppsitin t canceling the English debate cmpetitin in ur summer camp. The cmpetitin enhances ur critical thinking and English prficiency thrugh engaging discussins. Instead f canceling, I suggest incrprating diverse tpics and interactive sessins like team cllabratins t make it mre appealing. These changes can ensure that the activity remains beneficial and enjyable fr everyne. Lking frward t yur understanding.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在班英语夏令营时,有人建议取消英语辩论比赛。请考生给随队外教Smith写封邮件表达自己的想法
【详解】1.词汇积累
取消:cancel→call ff
提高:enhance→prmte
建议:suggest→recmmend
确保:ensure→make sure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing t express my ppsitin t canceling the English debate cmpetitin in ur summer camp.
拓展句:I am writing t express my ppsitin t canceling the English debate cmpetitin that will be held in ur summer camp.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Instead f canceling, I suggest incrprating diverse tpics and interactive sessins like team cllabratins t make it mre appealing. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] These changes can ensure that the activity remains beneficial and enjyable fr everyne. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
Passage 9
【福建省泉州市安溪一中,惠安一中,养正中学,实验中学2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中】假定你是李华,你校广播站就将增加15分钟的英语节目(Special English)征求大家的意见。请你给负责的外教Jnathan写一个邮件,内容包括:
1. 对该举措的看法;
2. 对内容的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jnathan,
I am Li Hua, a Senir Three student.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jnathan,
I am Li Hua, a Senir Three student. I am thrilled t hear the news f the upcming additin f Special English. I believe it will nt nly increase the pprtunities fr ur students t practice English listening, but als enrich ur campus cultural atmsphere.
Given the limited time, I think the cntent shuld nt nly be nvel but als shrt. I suggest the prgram shuld invlve a variety f engaging cntent, such as interviews with native speakers, cultural exchanges, and ppular English sngs. This way, it will stimulate students’ enthusiasm fr learning English and attract mre listeners.
I believe that under yur guidance, this prgram will win ppularity with the students. Lking frward t the launch f the prgram.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jnathan写一封邮件,讲述对校广播站新增的英语节目的看法,并提出内容方面的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的;激动的:thrilled→excited
机会:pprtunities→chances
激励/促进:stimulate→mtivate/activate
热情:enthusiasm→passin
2.句式拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句:I believe it will nt nly increase the pprtunities fr ur students t practice English listening, but als enrich ur campus cultural atmsphere.
拓展句:I believe nt nly will it increase the pprtunities fr ur students t practice English listening, but als enrich ur campus cultural atmsphere.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe it will nt nly increase the pprtunities fr ur students t practice English listening, but als enrich ur campus cultural atmsphere.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I suggest the prgram shuld invlve a variety f engaging cntent, such as interviews with native speakers, cultural exchanges, and ppular English sngs.(运用了虚拟语气)年份
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建议信
【2023▪新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议
考点关键词:
建议
考点揭秘
建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议或忠告的信件。建议信可能写给某个人,就某个问题提出自己的看法和观点。也可以写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
建议信通常是写给家人或朋友,对于对方在生活、工作、求学等过程中遇到的实际问题或困惑提供看法、指导或给予对方所需要的建议,或对于对方不明智的举动进行劝勉、告诫或展开讨论。建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,不是投诉信。观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。
建议信通常简明扼要,目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。
建议信的时态通常以一般现在时或一般将来时为主。
第一段
问题陈述:根据信息点确定举行表达。
第二段
提出建议:使用多种句型,避免单一句型表达。
第三段
愿望或期望:写信的结尾套句。
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