云南高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份云南高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共16页。
建议信1．假定你是李华，得知你的英国网友Peter的生活方式不健康，请写封邮件给他提一些建议，内容包括：1. 写信目的;2. 具体建议;3. 表达希望。注意：1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom将于今年寒假来中国旅游，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，给他一些旅行建议，内容要点包括：1.推荐旅行目的地，并说明理由；2.提醒旅行注意事项（如提前学习一些简单中文等）。注意：1. 词数100词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Tom, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua3．假定你是李华，你的线上外教Wilson打算来中国旅游。请你给他推荐一座城市，内容包括：1.推荐的城市；2.说明推荐理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80 左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Wilson,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua4．假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Mike在阅读中文时速度慢、理解文章有困难，感到很着急。请根据以下要点给Mike回一封邮件，提出建议，帮助他解决困难。内容包括：1. 树立信心，不要担忧；2. 扩大词汇量；3. 提高阅读速度。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Mike,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua5．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Mike计划春节到玉溪旅游两天，希望你给他提供游览建议。请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.景点推荐及理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Mike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua6．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Linda最近在中国学习。她在邮件中向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的学习环境，想家，感到焦虑。请你给她写一封邮件。内容包括：1. 给予安慰；2. 提出建议。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：homesick 想家的Dear Linda,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua7．假定你是李华，正在参加一个英语夏令营。组织者Mr. Green请营员提一些加强营地宿舍安全的建议。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.具体建议；3.你的愿望。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。参考词汇：宿舍dorm/ dormitory    Dear Mr. Green,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua8．假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法，内容包括：1. 好心情的重要性；2. 不良情绪产生的原因；3. 如何调整。注意：1. 词数120；2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear classmates,We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua9．2023年6月，高考英语试题增加了读后续写(Continuation Writing)，这让很多高三学生十分焦虑，并在校园网上发帖求助。作为英语老师Mr. Right，请你跟帖发表你的建议和看法，内容包括：1.深度解读语篇；2.合理构思情节；3.表达生动得体。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假定你是李华，在你校学习的英国交换生Frank想参加中国诗词电视大赛（Chinese Poetry TV Competition），但他不知如何为此做准备，特写信向你寻求建议。请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：1. 乐意帮助；2. 具体建议；3. 表达祝愿。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。提示词：recite v. 背诵    poet n. 诗人Dear Frank,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua             1．Dear Peter,How is it going? Knowing that you are living an unhealthy life, I’m very worried. So I’m writing to share some suggestions with you. First of all, I think it’s a good idea to eat more fruits instead of snacks. Also, you need to get rid of the habit of drinking cola only. Why not drink more water? If you spend less time on your smart phone, you can have more time to get together with friends. What’s more, don’t you think doing sports often makes you look well-built and feel energetic at the same time? All in all, a healthy lifestyle makes us healthy, wealthy and wise in the future. Hopefully you can follow my advice and make a change from now on. Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友彼得不健康的生活方式提建议，内容包括：写信目的、具体建议及表达希望。【详解】1.词汇积累摆脱：get rid of→ cast off此外：what’s more→besides健康的：healthy→fit建议：advice→ suggestion2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Knowing that you are living an unhealthy life, I’m very worried.拓展句：Because I know that you are living an unhealthy life, I’m very worried【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you are living an unhealthy life, I’m very worried.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，做动词know的宾语）【高分句型2】If you spend less time on your smart phone, you can have more time to get together with friends.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）2．Dear Tom,   How’s everything going? Hearing that you will pay a visit to China during the winter holiday, I’m writing to give you some advice.   As far as I’m concerned, it is the capital city Beijing that has got to be on the list of your traveling destinations. The Great Wall, recognized as one of the seven wonders of the world, is a must-go place in Beijing. Besides, taking a walk around the Forbidden city where you can admire the unique architecture is also a suitable choice. What’s more, you’d better book a hotel room in advance since there are lots of tourists in Beijing during the peak season. In the end, I find it necessary to learn to speak some basic Chinese so that you can communicate easily there.   If possible, I’m willing to act as your guide. Hoping you have a safe and pleasant journey!                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours,                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Tom写封信，给他推荐旅行目的地，并说明理由，提醒旅行注意事项（如提前学习一些简单中文等）。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion另外：besides→moreover在我看来：as far as I’m concerned→in my opinion另外：what’s more→in addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The Great Wall, recognized as one of the seven wonders of the world, is a must-go place in Beijing.拓展句：The Great Wall, which is recognized as one of the seven wonders of the world, is a must-go place in Beijing.【点睛】[高分句型1] As far as I’m concerned, it is the capital city Beijing that has got to be in the list of your traveling destinations. (运用了强调句)[高分句型2] Besides, taking a walk around the Forbidden city where you can admire the unique architecture is also a suitable choice. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)3．Dear Wilson,Knowing that you intend to pay a visit to China this winter, I’m more than delighted to recommend you a fascinating city--Dali. Dali, located in southwest of Yunnan province, is widely renowned for its comfortable warm climate, which can make your winter journey a good experience. Besides, its picturesque scenery must impress you profoundly, particularly Cangshan and Erhai. Finally, it is surely advisable for you to experience Dali’s diverse culture and some historical sites in person, from which you can have a better understanding of Bai ethnic group’s tradition. I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourself and if you have any problem, please feel free to contact me. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Wilson写一封信，向他推荐一座中国城市，以供其旅游，并说明推荐理由。【详解】1.词汇积累打算：intend→ plan高兴的：delighted → joyful/pleased/happy有名的：renowned → well-known/famous此外：besides→ in addition/what’s more2.句式拓展句式转换原句：Dali, located in southwest of Yunnan province, is widely renowned for its comfortable warm climate, which can make your winter journey a good experience.拓展句：Dali, which is located in southwest of Yunnan province, is widely renowned for its comfortable warm climate, which can make your winter journey a good experience.【点睛】【高分句型1】Finally, it is surely advisable for you to experience Dali’s diverse culture and some historical sites in person, from which you can have a better understanding of Bai ethnic group’s tradition.（运用了介词from + which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourself and if you have any problem, please feel free to contact me.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）4．Dear Mike,I’m very sorry to learn that you are having trouble in Chinese reading. Now I’d like to offer you some advice.In the first place, don’t be worried and trust yourself. It’s normal for a beginner to have some difficulties. What’s more, I suggest you enlarge your vocabulary. You can grasp the meaning of words in sentences or passages. Last but not least, you’d better improve your reading speed. Slower reading might prevent you from understanding.I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. Looking forward to your earliest reply!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Mike在阅读中文时速度慢、理解文章有困难，感到很着急。请根据以下要点给Mike回一封邮件，提出建议，帮助他解决困难。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→tip/suggestion提高：improve→promote担心的：be worried→be concerned对某人有益：be of benefit to sb→be beneficial to sb2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：In the first place, don’t be worried and trust yourself. It’s normal for a beginner to have some difficulties.拓展句：In the first place, don’t be worried and trust yourself because it’s normal for a beginner to have some difficulties.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m very sorry to learn that you are having trouble in Chinese reading. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)5．Dear Mike,I am delighted to receive your Email telling me that you will visit Yuxi for two days. The following are my suggestions for your trip.On the first day, I highly recommend the Fuxian Lake, which is the most famous attraction in Yuxi. You can finish the day by visiting Yuxi Museum, where you will be impressed by many exhibits. It will be a great delight to climb Ailao Mountain for the second day, where you can get deeper insights into ethnic minorities.I wish you can have a happy journey.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike回一封电子邮件，给他提供春节到玉溪旅游两天的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted →happy参观：visit→ pay a visit to建议：suggestion →advice愉快：delight→ pleasure/joy2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The following are my suggestions for your trip.拓展句：The following are my suggestions which can be helpful for your trip.【点睛】【高分句型1】I am delighted to receive your Email telling me that you will visit Yuxi for two days. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】You can finish the day by visiting Yuxi Museum, where you will be impressed by many exhibits.（运用了where引导非限定性定语从句）6．One possible version:Dear Linda,I’m sorry to learn that you are having a hard time living away from home. Here are a few tips I think can improve your condition.First, try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. You will find Chinese food and traditions wonderful if you give them a try. Second, why not take a step out and make more new friends? What’s more, you can always talk with your family on videophone when you miss them, which will help relieve the homesickness.I hope you will find these ideas useful and feel better soon.Yours sincerely, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生就英国朋友Linda在中国学习时遇到的不适应新学习环境、想家、感到焦虑等问题，写一封电子邮件，给予她安慰并对她遇到的问题提出相应的建议。【详解】1. 词汇积累提升：improve→ promote适应：get used to→ adapt to环境：environment→surrounding困难的：hard→important2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：You will find Chinese food and traditions wonderful if you give them a try. 复合句：What you will find is that Chinese food and traditions are wonderful if you give them a try.【点睛】【高分句型1】try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. （运用了so that引导的结果状语从句）【高分句型2】What’s more, you can always talk with your family on videophone when you miss them, which will help relieve the homesickness.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句）7．Dear Mr. Green,I’m having a wonderful time at the camp. When it comes to safety issues in the camp dorms, I’d like to make some advice.Above all, the moment campers leave the dorms, they should be reminded to turn off electrical appliances and close the door for the sake of safety. Another concern is the bedroom safety. I think some non-slip bath mats are necessary. Besides, in case of an emergency, make sure each dorm is equipped with a first-aid kit.  I do hope my advice might be of some help.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，正在参加一个英语夏令营。组织者Mr. Green请营员提一些加强营地宿舍安全的建议。请你给他写一封邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice→suggestion关闭：turn off→switch off有帮助的：be of some help→helpful此外：besides→in addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides, in case of an emergency, make sure each dorm is equipped with a first-aid kit.拓展句：Besides, make sure each dorm is equipped with a first-aid kit in case there is an emergency.【点睛】[高分句型1] Above all, the moment campers leave the dorms, they should be reminded to turn off electrical appliances and close the door for the sake of safety. (运用了the moment引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2] I think some non-slip bath mats are necessary. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)8．Dear classmates,We’ve all experienced positive and negative moods. The emotions we feel play an important role in how we think and behave. For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others. For another, a bad mood can ruin your day, as well as the day of the people around you.So, what causes a bad mood? There are a variety of reasons for them. For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam. We may feel down after receiving some bad news or quarreling with our parents or friends. At the same time, too much pressure from work can also makes us unhappy.However, there are many things we can do to turn our bad mood into a good one. As far as I’m concerned, exercise is one of the keys to get rid of a bad mood. Meanwhile, the simple act of sharing time with others is a great way to release stress and anxiety. So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是某高中学生李华，你了解到身边同学有情绪状态不佳的情况，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，表达自己的想法。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：important→significant各种各样的：a variety of→various摆脱：get rid of→cast off就个人而言：As far as I’m concerned=Personally speaking2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：For example, we may get into a bad mood because of failing an exam.拓展句：For example, we may get into a bad mood, because we fail an exam.【点睛】[高分句型1] For one thing, people who are often in a positive mood in their everyday life tend to be happier, healthier and get along better with others.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] So the next time you’re feeling blue, call up a friend or visit a neighbor.(运用了the next time引导的时间状语从句)9．参考范文Dear Students,I understand quite well that you are restless with the Continuation Writing in our coming CEE. Below are several pieces of advice that may be of help to you.First, it is strongly recommended that you should have a thorough understanding of the story, including the five “W”s, the plot and the conflict. On top of that, it would be better if you could design your following plot on the basis of the two given sentences and previous part. Only in this will your designed plot be logical and coherent. Following this, you should go to the great length to express yourselves in appropriate and vivid words, which is to impress teachers.Hopefully, all suggestions above will lift all of you out of anxiety.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。2023年6月，高考英语试题增加了读后续写(Continuation Writing)，这让很多高三学生十分焦虑，并在校园网上发帖求助。作为英语老师Mr. Right，请你跟帖发表你的建议和看法。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：advice/suggestion→tip不安：restless→uneasy有帮助的：be of help→helpful表达：express→convey2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Below are several pieces of advice that may be of help to you.拓展句：There are several pieces of advice that can be helpful to you.【点睛】[高分句型1] I understand quite well that you are restless with the Continuation Writing in our coming CEE. (运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2] Only in this will your designed plot be logical and coherent. (运用了部分倒装)10．范文：Dear Frank,It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part in it. I’m more than delighted to offer you some tips.First of all, you should surf the Internet to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to get a better understanding of it. The resources are available on many relevant websites. Additionally, you had better recite as many poems as possible and seek help from teachers, which will enable you to enlarge your knowledge about Chinese poetry. More importantly, watching previous events will make you get familiar and well prepared so that you will not feel stressed or anxious during the fiercely-competitive process.Hope these suggestions will help you get started. Good luck in the competition.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Frank写封信，给他提一些参加中国诗词电视大赛的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→happy提供：offer→provide另外：additionally→moreover参加：take part in→participate in2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：First of all, you should surf the Internet to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to get a better understanding of it.拓展句：First of all, you should surf the Internet, the purpose of which is to learn about the brief history of Chinese poetry to get a better understanding of it.【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s amazing that you’re interested in the popular Chinese Poetry TV Competition and want to take part in it. (运用了that引导的主语从句)[高分句型2] Additionally, you had better recite as many poems as possible and seek help from teachers, which will enable you to enlarge your knowledge about Chinese poetry. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)