福建高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份福建高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共20页。试卷主要包含了假定你是李华，学生会主席等内容，欢迎下载使用。
邀请信
1．假定你是李华，学生会主席。你校和英国某中学是友好学校。对方学校将举办“中国文化周”，邀请你校派学生参加。请你给负责该项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。内容如下：
1. 活动开始时间；
2. 活动内容；
3. 学生住宿安排。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason,
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2．假定你是李华，你想邀请新同学 Anna 本周六早上一起去爬鼓山( Mount Gu )。请你写一封电子邮件向她发出邀请。内容应包括：
1、简单介绍鼓山：位于福州东部；福州市区第一高山；……
2、行程安排：上午 7:30 在校门口见面，乘坐公交车，爬山、观景、品尝美食。
注意:1、字数 80 词左右。少于 60 词将扣分。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入词数)
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文自然、连贯。
Dear Anna,
How is everything going with you?
Looking forward to your early reply.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，你校将组织一场为贫困地区学生献爱心的捐助活动，请你代表学生会写一封邮件邀请你校外教John出席开幕式，内容包括：
1.时间、地点；
2.活动内容；
3.活动意义。
注意：1.词数80左右：
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校邀请了Dr. Jane Wilson来开讲座，你是主持人， 请准备一篇120词左右的发言稿向听众介绍一下主讲人：
1. 讲座主题：西方绘画简史；
2. 教授游历欧洲各国收集研究资料，并著书立说；
3. 教授本人还是个摄影家，照片将在讲座中呈现。
你还可以增加其他细节以帮助行文流畅。开头结尾已为你写好。
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen;
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5．假如你是李华，好朋友Sarah邀请你去参加他的生日聚会，但由于弟弟突然生病，医生说需要住院5天左右，请写信给Sarah表达未能和老朋友一起给他庆祝生日的歉意，并请Sarah帮忙转达对朋友们的问候。
6．假设你是高二学生李华，请写一封电子邮件给你的外国笔友Tom, 邀请他来厦门旅游，并与你的家人共度中秋节。
参考词汇:博饼 mooncake gambling
骰子:dice
注意事项:1. 词数120左右
2. 可以根据需要适当增加细节
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7．假如你是李华，你市戏剧院响应国家在校园促进传统曲文化的号召，将在12月20日表演传统京剧《霸王别姬》，学生可免费观看，届时会有著名的北京京刷演员出席表演。你的朋友Tom对京剧很感兴趣，因此你想邀请他来观看演出。请你给他写封信内容包括：
1. 演出时间、地点；2. 演出活动安排与期望；
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头已为你写好，不计入总字数。《霸王别姬》 Farewell My Concubine (妃子)
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假如你是光明中学学生会主席李华,学校近期将邀请在北大任教的史蒂夫( Steve)教授发表题为《中英文化差异》演讲。请你代表学生会在学校广播站广播一则通知。
内容包含:
1.活动的时间地点(10月10号周三下午2点至4点,学校礼堂)。
2.活动的环节和要求。
3.门票领取地点学生会办公室。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:礼堂 auditorium

9．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Linda很喜欢中国丝绸。正巧你市于4月20日至26日举行“中国丝绸文化节”，你想邀请她同去，请你给她写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.介绍文化节；
3.约定见面时间、地点。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．假定你是李华，下个月你校将举办“中国文化艺术节”。你校英国友好学校将派代表参加，请你代表学生会发邮件告知英方团长Mr. Smith有关细节，内容包括：
1．自我介绍；
2．活动安排；
3．表达期待。
注意：
1.词数100字左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.参考词汇：代表团delegation
Dear Mr. Smith,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua






1．One possible verion:
Dear Jason,
I'm Li Hua, Chairman of the Students' Union. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided? If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
Thanks again for your kind invitation. It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给负责“中国文化周”项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在进行时,少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.对邀请表示感谢；
2.询问活动开始时间；
3.询问活动内容；
4.询问学生住宿安排。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
On behalf of; express our heartfelt gratitude for; make some inquiries; is scheduled to start; apply for visas and book air tickets in advance; the specific activities; what type of accommodation(s)
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week.
2. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
3. Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.
4. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation.
5. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided?
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly/First, Lastly
4.表因果关系：Because
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1].Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2].If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.（which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3].It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.（it作形式主语）
2．Dear Anna,
How is everything going with you? I’m going to climb Mountain Gu this Saturday.
Would you like to join me?
As the tallest mountain in Fuzhou, Mountain Gu lies in the east of the city. With amazing scenery, fresh air and an ancient temple on it, it is the best destination for sightseeing and exercising. As scheduled, we will gather at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and then take a bus there. While hiking we’ll enjoy the beauty of nature along the way and taste some delicious food on the top. I’m pretty sure we’ll have a great time there.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新同学 Anna写封邮件，邀请她本周六早上一起去爬鼓山。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：并列式
并列式是指文章各部分的内容没有主次轻重之分，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍写邮件的目的；
2. 介绍活动安排；
3. 期待对方回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
lie in; as scheduled; take a bus; have a great time; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. As the tallest mountain in Fuzhou, Mountain Gu lies in the east of the city.
2. As scheduled, we will gather at the school gate at 7:30 a.m. and then take a bus there.
3. While hiking we’ll enjoy the beauty of nature along the way and taste some delicious food on the top.
4. I’m pretty sure we’ll have a great time there.
5. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表并列关系：and
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]：With amazing scenery, fresh air and an ancient temple on it, it is the best destination for sightseeing and exercising.这句话运用了“with + 宾语 +介词短语”的复合结构。
[高分句型2]：While hiking we’ll enjoy the beauty of nature along the way and taste some delicious food on the top.这句话运用了现在分词作状语。
[高分句型3]：I’m pretty sure we’ll have a great time there.这句话运用了宾语从句。
3．Dear John,
I’m Li Hua. On behalf of Student Union, I am extending to you our formal invitation to the opening ceremony of a donation campaign.
Aimed at showing love to the students in poverty-stricken areas, the activity is scheduled to be launched in the stadium next Friday afternoon from 2:00 to 5:00. Firstly, a video about the life of the targeted students will be shown. Then, those present are encouraged to make a donation, ranging from money to books. It not only helps those in need, but also provides a platform for us to deliver our concern.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表学生会写一封邮件，邀请外教John出席开幕式。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明写邮件的目的
      2.介绍相关情况
      1）时间、地点
      2）活动内容
      3) 活动意义
      3.表明希望外教出席开幕式
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
on behalf of; campaign; aim at; be scheduled to; be encouraged to do; make a donation; rang from…to…; not only…but also…; in need; provide…for…; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of Student Union, I am extending to you our formal invitation to the opening ceremony of a donation campaign.
2. Aimed at showing love to the students in poverty-stricken areas, the activity is scheduled to be launched in the stadium next Friday afternoon from 2:00 to 5:00.
3. a video about the life of the targeted students will be shown.
4. those present are encouraged to make a donation, ranging from money to books.
5. It not only helps those in need, but also provides a platform for us to deliver our concern.
6. Looking forward to your arrival.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition,As well as, not only…but (also)…, including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…On the other hand…,Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的分词作状语，如：Aimed at showing love to the students in poverty-stricken areas, the activity is scheduled to be launched in the stadium next Friday afternoon from 2:00 to 5:00.这句话运用了过去分词短语作状语；使用了一些固定词组，如in need，provide…for…，look forward to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．May I have your attention please? I have an announcement to make. In order to help us learn more about the history of western paintings, Dr. Jane Wilson from will give us a lecture. He will talk about the background of the western paintings. Dr. Jane Wilson has traveled to European countries to collect materials to study and has written many books. Besides, he is a photographer as well and his photo will be presented in the lecture.
Anyone who’s interested in the topic is welcome to attend the lecture. Don’t forget to be on time. That’s all. Thanks for your attention.
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文，要求对前来进行演讲的Dr. Jane Wilson做一个简短介绍。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 讲座主题：西方绘画简史；
2. 教授游历欧洲各国收集研究资料，并著书立说；
3. 教授本人还是个摄影家，照片将在讲座中呈现。
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
announcement; background; present; attend
第三步：连词成句
1. I have an announcement to make.
2. He will talk about the background of the western paintings.
3. Besides, he is a photographer as well and his photo will be presented in the lecture.
4. Anyone who’s interested in the topic is welcome to attend the lecture.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+ clause(从句), In spite of+ n/doing
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Anyone who’s interested in the topic is welcome to attend the lecture.用到了who引导的限制性定语从句。此外Besides, he is a photographer as well and his photo will be presented in the lecture.这句话使用了一般将来时的被动语态。此外文章还使用了一些高级表达，如announcement; background; present; attend等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．Dear Sarah,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening. This is owing to the fact that my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning. I have to go there immediately and take care of him. As told by the doctor in charge,it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave.
I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends. I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes. Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party.
Cordially,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，好朋友Sarah邀请你去参加他的生日聚会，但由于弟弟突然生病，医生说需要住院5天左右，请写信给Sarah表达未能和老朋友一起给他庆祝生日的歉意，并请Sarah帮忙转达对朋友们的问候。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be unable to (不能……)；attend(参加)；owing to(因为)；fall ill(生病)；take care of(照顾)；in charge(负责)；recover(恢复)；regret(遗憾)；celebrate(庆祝)；personally(亲自，当面)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.运用宾语从句；This is owing to the fact that my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning.运用同位语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Tom,
How’s it going? Have you heard of the coming Mid-Autumn festival? I’d like to invite you to travel in Xiamen and spend this festival with my family.
On that day, we will get together to have a big meal and then admire the bright and round moon. Besides, it’s necessary for people to eat mooncakes---a kind of special snack in China. Particularly, we people in south Fujian province celebrate the festival with a wonderful game called mooncake gambling. To share happiness, everyone who joins the game is able to win some prizes. It will be an unforgettable experience if you join us!
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以李华的身份邀请笔友Tom来厦门旅游，并与你的家人共度中秋节。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
邀请笔友Tom来厦门旅游，并与你的家人共度中秋节。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
get together；celebrate the festival with；unforgettable experience
第三步：连词成句
1.On that day, we will get together to have a big meal and then admire the bright and round moon.
2.Particularly, we people in south Fujian province celebrate the festival with a wonderful game called mooncake gambling.
3.It will be an unforgettable experience if you join us!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：发出邀请；描述过中秋节的习俗。
2.表示并列补充关系：and；Besides；Particularly
第五步：润色修改
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如非谓语动词：Particularly, we people in south Fujian province celebrate the festival with a wonderful game called mooncake gambling；定语从句：To share happiness, everyone who joins the game is able to win some prizes.…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
7．Dear Tom,
I’m more than delighted to tell you that to promote traditional opera in schools, the city theatre will provide an opera for us students to watch for free. Knowing that you are interested in Peking Opera, I’m writing to invite you to watch it with me.
The traditional opera called Farewell My Concubine will be performed at the hall of the city theatre at 7 p.m. on December 20th. Meanwhile, some famous Peking Opera performers coming from Beijing will join in the performance, which will surely make the audience excited. I’m certain that not only will it be a real feast but can help you have a better understanding of Peking Opera. It is such a good opportunity that you shall never miss it.
I would be more than pleased if you could accept my invitation and come.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。文章主要使写一封邀请信，邀请朋友Tom来观看演出。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.表示问候；
2.演出时间、地点；
3.演出活动安排与期望。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
more than delighted to do；promote traditional opera；for free；be interested in；invite sb. to do sth.；come from；join in the performance；not only…but…；have a better understanding of；more than pleased
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m more than delighted to tell you that to promote traditional opera in schools, the city theatre will provide an opera for us students to watch for free
2. Knowing that you are interested in Peking Opera, I’m writing to invite you to watch it with me.
3. The traditional opera called Farewell My Concubine will be performed at the hall of the city theatre at 7 p.m. on December 20th.
4. Meanwhile, some famous Peking Opera performers coming from Beijing will join in the performance, which will surely make the audience excited.
5. China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades, and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves.
6. I’m certain that not only will it be a real feast but can help you have a better understanding of Peking Opera.
7. It is such a good opportunity that you shall never miss it.
8. I would be more than pleased if you could accept my invitation and come.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：Knowing that you are interested in Peking Opera, I’m writing to invite you to watch it with me.中that引导宾语从句；Meanwhile, some famous Peking Opera performers coming from Beijing will join in the performance, which will surely make the audience excited.中which引导非限制性定语从句；也使用了特殊句式，如：I’m certain that not only will it be a real feast but can help you have a better understanding of Peking Opera.中not only后面使用了部分倒装。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Attention please！
I’m Lihua, president of the students’ union. I have an announcement to make! A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.
The lecture is scheduled to last for 2 hours from 2: 00 pm to 4: 00 pm on Wednesday afternoon of October 10th, and it has been decided to be held in the school auditorium. Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.
If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket. Do remember to set your cells to silent mode and be there on time.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一篇通知，通知学生参加在北大任教的史蒂夫教授发表题为《中英文化差异》的演讲。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
结构：总分法
要求：包含活动的时间地点(10月10号周三下午2点至4点,学校礼堂)；活动的环节和要求；门票领取地点学生会办公室。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
president；students’ union；announcement；theme；deliver；distinguish
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m Lihua, president of the students’ union.
2. I have an announcement to make!
3. A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.
4. The lecture is scheduled to last for 2 hours from 2: 00 pm to 4: 00 pm on Wednesday afternoon of October 10th, and it has been decided to be held in the school auditorium.
5. Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.
6. If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket.
7. Do remember to set your cells to silent mode and be there on time.
8. That’s all. Thank you!
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“whose，where，and”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“president；students’ union；announcement；theme；deliver；distinguish”以及定语从句“A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.”“Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.”、状语从句“If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
9．One possible version:
Dear Linda,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
Its theme is “China surprises the world with splendid silk”. At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.
Would it be convenient for you to come if we meet at 9 am on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall? I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件邀请很喜欢中国丝绸的英国朋友Linda，请她参加你市于4月20日至26日举行“中国丝绸文化节”。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时为主
结构：总分法
    总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 写信目的；
2. 介绍文化节；
3. 约定见面时间、地点。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in sth.；invite sb. to…；Chinese Silk Culture Festival；be convenient for sb. to do sth.；at one’s convenience
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk, I am writing to invite you to a Chinese Silk Culture Festival to be held from April 20th to 26th in the City Hall.
2. Would it be convenient for you to come if we meet at 9 am on April 20th at the entrance of the City Hall?
3. I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your coming at your earliest convenience.
(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择：either…or…，or
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如Knowing that you are interested in Chinese silk这句话中用了that引导的宾语从句，如At the festival, besides the knowledge of silk history, various delicate silk products will be shown, among which are some elegant silk dresses.这句话中用了“介词+关系代词”（ among which）引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如be interested in sth.，invite sb. to…，at one’s convenience等，为文章增色不少。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Li Hua. On behalf of the Student Union of our school, I sincerely invite you and the delegation to participate in the “Chinese Culture and Art Festival”.
The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange. And it will provide you with a stage where you can sample different forms of traditional Chinese  cultures. At the festival, related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which you will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also definitely feel the unique beauty of it. Of course, we also prepare some wonderful activities for our lovely friends, such as making dumplings and glutinous rice balls, making mooncakes, and learning Beijing Opera.
All of us will feel pleased with the presence of you and your students.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件给英国友好学校代表团团长Mr. Smith，告知有关“中国文化艺术节”的细节。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般将来时为主。
结构：三段式结构。第一段自我介绍并表达邀请；第二段介绍活动安排；第三段表达期待。
要求：1. 自我介绍并表达邀请（name; invite）
      2. 介绍活动安排
      1）艺术节目的（carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange）
      2）艺术节活动安排
①展品（related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited）
②体验活动（making dumplings and glutinous rice balls; making mooncakes; learning Beijing Opera）
      3. 表达期待（All of us will feel graced with the presence of you and your students.）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
on behalf of; invite sb. to; participate in; carry forward; provide sb. with sth; be exhibited; not only…but also; experience activities; such as; feel graced
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of the Student Union of our school, I sincerely invite you and the delegation to participate in the “Chinese Culture and Art Festival”.
2. The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange.
3. And it will provide you with a stage where you can sample different forms of traditional Chinese.
4. At the festival, related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which you will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also definitely feel the unique beauty of it.
5. Of course, we also prepare some wonderful activities for our lovely friends, such as making dumplings and glutinous rice balls, making moon cakes, and learning Beijing Opera.
6. All of us will feel pleased with the presence of you and your students.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：
And it will provide you with a stage where you can sample different forms of traditional Chinese.(它将为你提供一个舞台，在那里你可以尝试不同形式的繁体中文。)这句话运用了where引导的定语从句。
At the festival, related books, pictures, videos and objects will be exhibited, through which you will not only understand traditional Chinese culture better but also definitely feel the unique beauty of it.(在文化节上，相关的书籍、图片、视频和物品将会被展出，通过展览，你不仅会更好的了解中国传统文化，而且肯定会感受到它的独特之美。)这句话中使用了“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句，且从句中使用了“not only…but also”句式。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如on behalf of; invite sb. to; participate in; carry forward; provide sb. with sth; be exhibited; not only…but also; wonderful activities; such as; feel graced等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。