外研版 (2019)Unit 5 Into the wild学案

Section Ⅳ　Writing——有关旅游的电子邮件

技法指导

电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样，也包括信头、正文和结尾部分； 电子邮件写作要简单明了，便于阅读；电子邮件的人称及时态则需根据所写的具体内容来确定。

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①It would be a good idea if you travel a lot in your spare time.

如果在你的业余时间能进行多次的旅游实在是太好了。

②How is everything going with you？/How are you getting on with everything?

你最近一切都好吗？

③I'd like to be your guide and sincerely invite you to come to my house.

我很乐意做你的向导，并诚心地邀请你来我家里做客。

④As a native here, I'd like to give you some recommendations of the scenic spots here.

作为当地人，我很乐意就这儿的景点向你提一些建议。

⑤I'd like to share my travel experience with you.

我很乐意与你分享我的旅游经历。

[电子邮件模板]

Dear ××，

How happy I am to ________________ (表明收到来信). I'm much pleased to inform you ________________ (简述个人的近况)．

Last week, we ________________ (描述具体事情). The landscape was ________________ (描写具体的景物)．I felt ________________ (描写感受)．

By the way, I'm going to ________________ (表明意愿与期望)．

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely，

×××

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[2019·襄阳高一检测]假设你是王涛，暑假期间你和父母一起外出旅游玩得很开心，你想将你的旅游经历用邮件形式与你的英国笔友Tom分享。

注意：词数100个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

[审题谋篇]

第一步：明确要求

该写作属于应用文旅游话题的电子邮件，主要是分享旅游经历，故应该以第一人称为主；介绍旅游经历时用一般过去时；期望和祝福时应该用一般现在时。

第二步：确定段落

第一段：引入话题(暑假旅游)

第二段：旅游的过程及收获

第三段：希望与祝福

第三步：提炼要点

1．originally　　　　　　　　　　原本；起初

2．appreciate  欣赏

3．historical  历史的

4．travel_experience  旅游经历

5．a_collection_of  收集

6．cultural_treasures  文化财富

7．natural_scenery  自然景观

8．have_a_wonderful_time  过得愉快

9．go_on_a_trip  旅行

第四步：句式升级

1．我爸妈和我去了西藏首府拉萨旅行。拉萨也是这个地区政治、经济和文化中心。

(一般表达)My parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lhasa.

Lhasa is also the political, economic and cultural center of the region.

(高级表达)My parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lhasa, which_is_also_the_political,_economic_and_cultural_center_of_the_region.(定语从句)

2．我们都对那儿的自然景观感到震惊， 那儿的自然景观让我们感到平静祥和。

(一般表达)We were all surprised by the natural scenery there.

The natural scenery there made us feel peaceful and quiet.

(高级表达)We were all surprised by the natural scenery there, which_made_us_feel_peaceful_and_quiet.(定语从句)

3．我们首先参观了布达拉宫，它始建于七世纪。

(一般表达)We first visited the Potala Palace which was originally built in the 7th century.

(高级表达)We first visited the Potala Palace originally built_in_the_7th_century.(分词作定语)

[连句成篇]

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参考范文：

Dear Tom，

I'd like to share my travel experience with you. During this summer holiday, my parents and I went on a trip to the capital city of Tibet, Lhasa, which is also the political, economic and cultural center of the region.

We first visited the Potala Palace originally built in the 7th century. And then, we appreciated a rich collection of cultural treasures in Tibet Museum where we learned some useful historical knowledge about Tibet. During those days, we were all surprised by the natural scenery there, which made us feel peaceful and quiet. I strongly suggest that you travel to Tibet with me next time and I'm sure you will have a wonderful time.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Wang Tao