2021届高三英语二轮复习课件：河北省高考英语写作高分策略（共16张PPT）

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Which cmpsitin feels mre attractive, why?
漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点
影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面
Which sentence d yu think attracts the teachers?
1.The character f this gala is that it relates peple’s lives
2.The mst striking feature f this gala is its traditinally clse link with rdinary peple’s lives.
3.Yung peple dn’t want t watch TV ,s they pay attentin t ther frms f celebratin.
4.Yung peple fcus their attentin n ther frms f celebratin instead f immersing themselves in TV.
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影响给分的因素之二：　　　　　　　文中所采用的语言材料
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;
Find sme similar wrds r phrases f the fllwings
gd2. think3.clever
perfect excellent utstanding pleasant wnderful favrable magnificent
in ne's pinin/viewhld the view that … it is widely shared that …
wise bright smart intelligent cute
改变句子结构,与众不同
1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。
A strng/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s.
There was a strng earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.
2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.
I received yur letter which was written n August 15th this mrning.
Yur letter f August 15th reached/gt t me this mrning.
改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化
1.He gt excited when he heard the news.→___ the news, he gt girl went hme, because she was hungry and thirsty.→_________________, the girl went hme.3.I studied Chinese, English and Physics at schl.→______________________________include Chinese, English and Physics was early in the mrning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flwers.→_________________, Mr. Smith was watering _________________.
Hungry and thirsty
The main subjects I studied at schl
Early in the mrning
in the garden
使用强势句式，增强语句表现力
1.We were glad t see crps and vegetables grwing well.→_______we were t see crps and vegetables grwing well!2. Radi bradcasts didn’t begin until 1920.→It never speaks abut his wn family.→Never__________________________________________.4.A ntice is saying ”Please Save Water” n the wall.→On the he is a child, he knws a lt.→___________________________________.
nt until 1920 that radi bradcasts began
des he speak abut his wn family
is a ntice saying ”Please Save Water”
Child thugh/as he is, he knws a lt
影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅
上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词
and,then,als,besides,mrever,what's mre furthermre,in additin,mre than that...
1.表递进２.表转折　３.表因果４.表目的５.表归纳
but,hwever,althugh,thugh,in spite f,despite after all,n the cntrary,n the ther hand...
because,since,therefre,s,hence,thus,cnsequently as a result/cnsequence,n accunt f...
in rder that,s that,fr the purpse f...
in general,in brief,in shrt,in cnclusin,in a wrd,n the whle...
如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？
Many huses and schls were destryed. Mre than five millin peple are living a hard life nw. The students there need help and schls shuld be built. Students can return t classes sn.
　　　　　　William Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达) 　　D yu knw Hamlet? Have yu read The Merchant f Venice? These tw great wrks are bth written by William Shakespeare, my favrite English writer and the man f all ages! 　　Shakespeare, a sn frm a pr family, a man f little educatin, wrte plays and pems that are read all ver the wrld, I like him because his cmedies and tragedies bring me int a fantastic wrld; I lve him because his pems let me enjy the beauty f the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me hw t lead a meaningful life! 　　Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actrs and actresses. On this stage, everyne had his wn rle t play. and I will try my best t play my rle well.
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影响给分的因素之四：文章的思想
小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -----丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -----流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解