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本节导航
模板01 安慰信
模板02 祝贺信
模板03 开放性作文
识
中考·题型解读
善
总结·模板构建
答｜题｜步｜骤
模｜板｜构｜建
模板01 安慰信
Dear收信人，
I learned that (写明来信原因)
(对此事看法).Firstly, (安慰理由一). Secndly,
(安慰理由二).
Yu als need (提出建议) . Yu shuld ,and
(具体做法)
I hpe yu (祝愿与期待).
Yurs,
写信人
『典型例题』
假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
要求：1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Henry,
I learned that yu are feeling srry and upset because f lsing the basketball game.







Li Hua
【高分范文】
Dear Henry,
I learned that yu are feeling srry and upset because f lsing the basketball game. Here I'd like t share with yu my views n this game.
There's n pint blaming yurself. Firstly, Class Tw is such a tp team that it's nt a shame t be beaten by them. Secndly, yu gt thirty pints thugh yu missed the last sht. Yu tried yur best.
Yu als need the understanding f yur teammates. Yu shuld tell yur teammates yu feel srry fr lsing the last sht, and that yu will keep practising hard. If pssible, invite them t dinner.
I hpe yu will smile again, and get well prepared fr the next game.
Yurs,
Li Hua
参考译文
亲爱的亨利:
我知道你因为篮球比赛输了而感到难过和沮丧。在这里,我想和你分享一下我对这场比赛的看法。
没有必要责怪你自己。首先,二班是如此顶级的队伍,被他们打败并不是一件令人惋惜的事。其次,虽然你最后一投没中,但你还是得到了30分。你已经尽力了。
你还需要队友的理解。你应该告诉你的队友,你为失去最后一投而感到抱歉，并且你会继续努力练习。如果可能的话，邀请他们共进晚餐。
我希望你能再次微笑，为下一场比赛作好准备。
你的，
李华
解
真题·思维剖析
一
2019 •湖南长沙
假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。
要求：
（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Henry,
I learned that yu are feeling srry and upset because f lsing the basketball game. ____________________
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【高分范文】
Dear Henry,
I learned that yu are feeling srry and upset because f lsing the basketball game. It's nt easy being in yur situatin, and it's nrmal t have these feelings. Anyway, dn't be t hard n yurself.
Yu knw, basketball is abut team effrt. It's never just ne persn's fault. What matters is that yu shuld learn frm the games as well as yur mistakes. Besides, yu need t think abut hw yu can d better next time.
As a whle, teammates shuld supprt and believe in each ther. Why dn't yu sit dwn and cmmunicate with them? And yu culd prmise that yu will spare n effrts t better yur skills. If all f yu pull tgether, yu're sure t win the next ne.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
二
（2023·浙江温州·三模）
假如你是李华，近日你收到英国笔友Je的来信，他和你一样，也是一名九年级的学生，面对升学感到压力很大。请你给他写封回信，安慰他，参考所给信息，为他提出至少2条减压的建议。
要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：110词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Je,
Happy t receive yur letter, but I’m srry t hear that yu have t face a lt f pressure.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【高分范文】
Dear Je,
Happy t receive yur letter, but I’m srry t hear that yu have t face a lt f pressure. Dn’t wrry t much abut it, and just take it easy. As yur friend, I’d like t ffer yu sme suggestins t help yu relieve yur pressure.
First, yu shuld learn t relax. If yu are feeling stressed ut, yu can talk t thers face t face r by chatting n QQ r WeChat. Ding sme exercise regularly can help yu relax yurself and build up yur bdy as well. Secndly, it’s a gd idea t ask the psychlgy teacher fr help when yu are under pressure. The teacher will give yu helpful advice s that yu can easily find a way ut.
I hpe yu will find my suggestins helpful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
三
（2022·辽宁沈阳·二模）
假定你是李华，通过对话了解到你的好朋友Paul面对过去长时间的网课及将要到来的考试等问题，心理压力很大，请你给他写一封安慰信。
内容包括：
1、表示安慰问候；
2、提供减轻压力的建议或办法；
3、美好祝愿。
要点：
1、词数80—100：开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、作文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名。
Dear Paul,
I knw yur prblems and recent situatin thrugh the last cnversatin.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【高分范文】
Dear Paul,
I knw yur prblems and recent situatin thrugh the last cnversatin. Faced with the lng nline curses in the past and the cming exams, yu felt a lt f pressure. Here are sme suggestins fr yu.
First, yu shuld learn t relax yurself. Yu can listen t sme music r d smething yu feel cmfrtable. Next, yu shuld d sme sprts every day. Sprts can make yu feel relaxed. At last, smile at yurself every day. It helps yu keep happy.
It’s very cmmn that everyne can meet difficulties in the life. I hpe my suggestins can give yu sme help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
四
（2022·重庆·三模）
中考在即，同学们都投入到紧张的初三复习备考中，但也有部分同学心浮气躁，焦虑不安。Lisa正有这样的烦恼，假设你是她的好朋友李华，请写一封信给她，安慰她并给出一些缓解焦虑和压力的建议。
要点如下：
1. 正确看待考试和紧张的学习；
2. 规律作息、健康饮食、积极锻炼有助于保持良好学习状态；
3. 制定合理的复习计划；
4. 必要时可寻求他人帮助……
要求：
1. 包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的校名、班名和人名；
4. 80—120词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Lisa,
I’m srry t hear that yu are feeling a little nervus abut yur study and exams. Dn’t be s wrried. I’m writing t tell yu sme gd ideas t deal with it.
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Dear Lisa,
I’m srry t hear that yu are feeling a little nervus abut yur study and exams. Dn’t be s wrried. I’m writing t tell yu sme gd ideas t deal with it.
First f all, yu shuld treat the examinatin and nervus study prperly. Then, yu had better wrk and rest regularly, have a healthy diet and exercise actively, which can help yu keep a gd state f study. Besides, yu can make a reasnable review plan. If necessary, yu can ask thers fr help.
I hpe these suggestins can help yu. Yu can get gd grades in the next examinatin.
Yurs
Friend
模板02 祝贺信
Dear收信人，
Cngratulatins! Hw glad I am t share yur gd news! (开篇祝语，表示祝贺)
I think and (表达对此事的总体看法).Plus,I am dying t (表明自己的想法). Yu see, (支持想法的理由)
Hping yu will (表达期望)
Yurs,
写信人
『典型例题』
假定你是李华，收到英国笔友Harry的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数80左右。
T: Lihua 2019@163. cm
Frm: Harry@htmail. cm
Dear Li Hua,
I'm glad t tell yu that I've just wn the first place in a rbt-making cmpetitin. I lve rbts! They bring me great fun. What d yu think f rbts? D yu want t have yur wn rbt? Why?
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs,
Harry
参考词汇：cngratulatin祝贺
注意事项：1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,








【高分范文】
Dear Harry,
Cngratulatins! Hw glad I am t share yur gd news!
I think rbts are helpful in many ways, and in the future, they will play mre imprtant rles in ur daily life. Plus, I am dying t have a rbt f my wn. I can have it t take care f my grandparents when we are nt at hme.
Yu see, my grandparents are ld and can't mve easily. It can help them d sme husewrk such as cking, cleaning the huse and s n.
Hping yu will make greater prgress.
Yurs,
Li Hua
参考译文
亲爱的哈利：
恭喜！我很高兴能分享你的好消息！
我认为机器人在很多方面都有帮助，在未来，它们将在我们的日常生活中扮演更重要的角色。另外，我很想拥有一个自己的机器人。当我们不在家时，可以用它来照顾我的祖父母。你看，我的祖父母年纪大了,行动不便。它可以帮助他们做一些家务,比如做饭、打扫房子等等。
希望你能取得更大的进步。
你的，
李华
解
真题·思维剖析
一
（2020·北京·三模）
假如你是李华，在你的帮助和陪伴下交换生 Peter 即将完成为期一年的交换学习生活。请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你真诚的祝贺，回忆你们共度的一年美好时光以及他的学习经历，并谈谈你从他身上学到了什么。
提示词语： Great Wall, museum, culture, prnunce, practice
提示问题：
●Why d yu cngratulate Peter?
●Hw did yu spend the time tgether and his study experience?
●What have yu learnt frm him?
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy that yu will finish yur ne-year exchange study life.
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Best wishes t yu!
Yurs, Li Hua
【高分范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m very happy that yu will finish yur ne-year exchange study life.
First f all, I cngratulate yu because yu have made big prgress in studying Chinese as well in understanding ur Chinese histry and culture. When yu first came here, yu were s shy and afraid t make mistakes in talking with thers. Luckily, we were in the same grup. I helped yu with yur Chinese and yu helped me with my English. In rder t imprve yur Chinese, we climbed the Great Wall and visited many museums tgether. What a great time we had! With the help f the teachers and yurself, yu are much braver and utging nw. Meanwhile, yu wn the first prize in the Chinese speaking cmpetitin. I still remember hw happy yu were at that mment! At the same time, I learn hw t keep fighting t achieve the dreams frm yu.
Best wishes t yu!
Yurs, Li Hua
二
（2018·北京海淀·一模）
假如你是李华，在你的帮助下，交换生Tm在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你的真诚祝贺，回忆他比赛时的表现，以及你从他身上学到了什么。
提示词语：win，prize，speech cmpetitin，prnunce，practice
提示问题：
Why d yu cngratulate Tm?
What made him successful in the cmpetitin?
What can yu learn frm him?
【高分范文】
Dear Tm,
I am very happy t knw that yu wn the first prize in the Chinese speech cmpetitin, s I’m writing t cngratulate yu n yur wnderful perfrmance.
Yu did a gd jb in the Chinese speech cmpetitin. Yu prnunced really well during yur speech and yur vice was beautiful. Yu spke s fluently that we all felt prud f yu. What’s mre, we were surprised at yur rich and meaningful cntents.
As yur best friend, I knw yu tried yur best fr the cmpetitin. Yu kept practicing yur speech every day in rder t make it better. I knw it is imprtant t keep n trying and never t give up. I hpe I can be successful like yu ne day in the future.
Yurs,
Li Hua
模板03 开放性作文
Dear收信人，
I'm glad t receive yur email.
Being yur clse friend, I am extremely willing t share sme ideas abut (沟通事项) with yu. First and fremst, (做法一).In the secnd place, (做法二). Last but by n means least, if I were yu, I wuld (做法三) . In additin, (再次补充做法).
If there is anything mre that I can help with, please let me knw.
Yurs,
写信人
『典型例题』
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。
提示词语： design; safety rule; careful; prtect; picture
提示问题：· When shuld yu hand in the pster?
What wuld yu like t share with Peter abut designing the pster?









【高分范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad t receive yur email.
As it is required, yu are suppsed t hand in the pster befre next Friday.
Being yur clse friend, I am extremely willing t share sme ideas abut designing the pster with yu. First and fremst, the basic safety rules are f great imprtance, which shuld be included in yur pster. In the secnd place, fllwing the safety rules is s meaningful and crucial that yu had better remind yur readers f its significance and advise them t be careful bth in and ut f schl. Last but by n means least, if I were yu, I wuld add a few suggestins abut safety awareness, cnsidering that better safe than srry. In additin, it is a gd idea fr yu t draw a few pictures n yur pster s as t make it mre lively and acceptable.
If there is anything mre that I can help with, please let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
参考译文
亲爱的彼得:
很高兴收到你的邮件。
按照要求，你应该在下周五之前上交海报。
作为你的好朋友,我非常愿意和你分享一些设计海报的想法。首先,基本的安全规则是非常重要的,应该包含在你的海报里。第二,遵循安全规则很有意义也很重要，你最好提醒你的读者它的重要性，并建议他们在学校内外都要小心。最后但绝不是最不重要的，如果我是你，我会补充一些关于安全意识的建议，考虑到安全总比遗憾好。
另外，在你的海报上画一些图片是一个好主意，这样可以使它更生动也更容易被接受。
如果还有什么我能帮忙的,请告诉我。
你的，
李华
解
真题·思维剖析
一
（九年级上·湖南永州·期末）开放性作文
根据要求，写一篇发言稿。将发言稿写在答题卡开放性作文空白处。
班会课上，我们讨论了习近平主席的话：“有梦想，有机会，有奋斗，一切美好的东西都能够创造出来。”先阅读下面的范文，然后模仿范文，请你以 “My Dream” 为题写一篇100词左右的英语发言稿。
注意：1.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.完全照抄范文不给分。
提示如下: 1.我的梦想：有意义的事情或职业（自由确定）
2.梦想产生的原因
3.如何实现梦想
My Dream
Dear teachers and friends
I’m happy t be here t share my dream with yu.









That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr listening.
【高分范文】
Dear teachers and friends
I’m happy t be here t share my dream with yu.
Life is f great value t all f us. We can nly live nce. It’s necessary fr ur lives t have a dream.
My dream is t be a writer when I grw up. My favrite writer is Jane Austen, wh writes Pride and Prejudice. Her bks are s perfect that I read them again and again and never get tired. Hw I want t be a great writer like Jane Austen! I hpe t make my life mre meaningful in this way.
In rder t make my dream cme true, I shuld spend my limited life carefully. It’s imprtant t read a large number f great bks and practice writing frm time t time. I believe I can make my dream cme true ne day. I’m lking frward t the cming f that day!
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu fr listening.
二
（湖南永州·二模）
根据要求，写一篇短文。将短文写在答题卡开放性作文空白处。
快乐轻松的暑假就要来临，尤其是对于即将毕业的初三学生来说，假期更显漫长，大部分学生假期里过多地看电视、玩电脑、睡觉等，让假期过得散漫之极，初中的最后一个暑假，也是高中前的一个休整时期，你打算怎么过得充实又有意义？请以“My summer hliday”为题，根据以下提示介绍下自己的暑假计划。
要求：1．内容应该包括以上提示，可适当发挥。
2．条理清楚，语句通顺, 语法正确，书写规范。
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
4．80词左右,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Summer Vacatin
The summer vacatin is cming. What are yu ging t d during the vacatin? I am ging t …
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I am sure I am ging t have an interesting and meaningful summer vacatin.
【高分范文】
My Summer Vacatin
The summer vacatin is cming. What are yu ging t d during the vacatin? I am ging t plan a healthy liftstyle. I will get up and g t bed early. I will eat healthy fd. Als I will watch TV r play cmputer fr nly an hur. These are gd fr my health.
Then I plan t read fur great bks t imprve myself. After that I am ging t play the guitar because I like it very much.
As fr sprts , I will run , ride a bike r swim and s n . I hpe t be in gd health. And I'll travel t Beijing with my parents fr tw weeks. Als, I want t be a vlunteer t serve in the vlleyball games in Tai'an. Of curse, I wuld like t help my parents d sme cking, washing and s n.
I am sure I am ging t have an interesting and meaningful summer vacatin.
书面表达是中考的必考题型,它应符合以下要求。
1.中心明确
2.连续流畅
3.语言得体
(1)写作时应尽量避免使用冗长、复杂、易犯错误的句子,用简洁、精练的语句表达,做到言简意赅。
(2)写作前把要表达的内容整理归纳,理清思路,做到条理分明,要点齐全,切忌逐词逐句按汉语方式翻译,生编硬造。
(3)能清楚表达文章内容的前提下,尽量措辞,不时出现“闪光点”,这将为你的文章增光添彩。
高分要求
1.写出全部内容要点；
2.语句流畅；基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致；
3.词数达到要求；基本无单词拼写及标点错误。
第一步：
审题，列提纲
第二步：
1.根据提纲撰写文章
2.检查文章，改正错误
第三步：
全文抄写于答题卡，不出现涂改。
参考词句
单词
upset沮丧的；view观点，看法；shame令人惋惜的事；sht射门；
understanding;practise练习
短语
because f 因为； wuld like t d sth.想做某事； share with sb.和某人分享； blame neself责备自己； such…. that…如此..….以至于.….；be beaten by被..打败； try ne's best尽某人最大努力； feel srry fr ding 为做...感到抱歉； keep ding sth.继续做某事； invite . t ..邀请..去...；get well prepared fr为...作好准备
句型
There's n pint ding.…做...是没有意义的。
Firstly,., secndly,.首先...，其次...
Hw d yu relieve pressure?
① talk t thers
② d sme exercise
③ ask the psychlgy teacher fr help
……
参考词句
单词
share分享；helpful有用的；prgress进步
短语
in the future在将来； play imprtant rles in ..在...当中扮演重要角色； be dying t d sth.渴望做某事； such as例如
句型
Hw glad I am t share yur gd news!我很高兴能分享你的好消息！
参考词句
单词
require要求； extremely非常； crucial重要的； significance重要性；awareness意识
短语
be glad t d sth.乐于做某事； be suppsed t d sth.应该做某事；hand in 上交； be willing t d sth.愿意做某事； remind sb. f sth.提醒某人某事； in additin另外
句型
Last but by n means least.…最后但并非最不重要的是.…….
Lifestyle
get up and g t bed early, healthy fd, watch TV r play cmputer fr nly an hur
Study
d sme reading, learn t play the guitar
Sprts
run , ride a bike r swim…
Husewrk
help…d …
Traveling
g t … with …
…
…