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第一部分：中考英语写作精讲
——以“成长故事”为核心，打造高分叙事框架
1.1写作模板:三段式结构
核心公式：
Intrductin（引入）→ Details（展开）→ Reflectin（感悟）
段落详解与步骤指导：
开头段 :
功能定位:点明主题，引发兴趣
具体操作步骤:1. 时间/场景描写 2. 核心事件引入
万能句型示例: • The mment I heard..., my heart raced. • Lking back, the memry f... still shines in my heart.
主体段:
功能定位:细节描写，情感递进
具体操作步骤:按时间顺序展开 2.加入动作/语言/心理描写
万能句型示例: • Just as I was..., suddenly... • "Dn’t give up!" my teacher’s vice eched in my mind.
结尾段
功能定位:升华感悟，呼应主题
具体操作步骤:1.总结收获 2. 关联现实意义 |
万能句型示例 : • This experience taught me that... • Frm then n, I’ve learned t...
思维导图模板：
事件引入 → 细节描写（5W1H） → 情感变化 → 哲理升华
│ │ │ │
↓ ↓ ↓ ↓
When/Where What happened Hw I felt What I learned
(环境渲染) (动作链描写) (心理活动) (价值观体现)
1.2 常用素材包:成长类词汇库
多维素材分类：
| 类别 | 基础表达 | 高级升级版 | 适用场景示例
|--------------|--------------------------|-----------------------------------|----------------------------------|
| 情感描写 | nervus | butterflies in my stmach | 考试/比赛前
| 动作描写 | run fast | dash like a shting star | 体育比赛/紧急情况
| 环境渲染 | It was raining. | Raindrps danced n the windw. | 回忆性开头/情绪烘托
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主题词思维树：
成长类核心词 → Challenge（挑战）
├─ Overcme fear（克服恐惧）
├─ Learn frm failure（从失败中学习）
└─ Gain cnfidence（获得自信）
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万能衔接金句：
• Just when I thught all hpe was lst...
• A warm hand gently patted my shulder...
• Time seemed t freeze at that mment...
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1.3 分类押题范文:实战演练
范文①：A Special Birthday Gift
【结构拆解】
▌开头段（场景式引入）：
"The smell f freshly baked ckies always reminds me f my 13th birthday. It was 2 AM, but sft nises kept cming frm the kitchen..."
▌主体段（多感官描写）：
视觉：My parents’ shadws dancing n the wall
听觉：The gentle clinking f bwls
触觉：Flur-cvered hands hugging me
▌结尾段（双升华技巧）：
"Nw I finally understand: the best gifts aren’t wrapped in paper, but in silent lve. (个人感悟) Maybe this is hw family lve wrks – it’s always there, quietly waiting t be discvered. (社会价值)"
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范文②： My First Stage Perfrmance
【亮点标注】
✦ 比喻修辞：
"My legs felt like jelly as I stepped nt the stage."
"The sptlight lit up the audience’s smiles like summer fireflies."
✦ 情感曲线设计：
Fear（紧张手抖）→ Surprise（观众掌声）→ Cnfidence（挺直腰杆）
✦ 金句模板：
"Thugh my vice shk at first, the warmth in their eyes became my strength."
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范文③： When I Failed the Exam
【错误→成长模型】
事件：数学考砸（58分） → 反应：躲房间哭泣 → 转折：老师留言鼓励 → 行动：制定学习计划 → 结果：期末进步
【哲理表达】
"The red marks were nt an ending, but a cmpass pinting t new beginnings."
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常见误区警示
| 错误类型 | 问题案例 | 修正方案 |
|----------------|-----------------------------------|---------------------------------------|
| 时态混乱 | I am scared that day. | 全篇统一为一般过去时 |
| 主次不分 | 用5句话描写穿什么衣服去考试 | 聚焦核心动作/心理变化 |
| 中式英语 | "My heart very painful." | "My heart ached like being squeezed."|
| 结尾说教 | "We must study hard." | "I realized true prgress starts frm accepting imperfectins." |
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即时训练任务
题目1： 《The Day I Grew Up》
写作导航：
1. 用天气描写暗示心情（例：The heavy cluds mirrred my anxiety...）
2. 包含一个反转情节（例：原以为会批评，却得到拥抱）
3. 使用文末"双升华法"（个人+社会）
题目2： 《A Meaningful Mistake》
分步指导：
Step 1: 列举3个可能场景（做饭失败/迷路/说错话）
Step 2: 选择1个场景，用"5W1H"法扩展细节
Step 3: 用比喻句改写平淡表达（原句：I was sad → My heart felt like brken glass）
学习工具包
自评打分表：
| 评分维度 | 达标要求 | 自评分数（1-5★） |
|----------------|-----------------------------------|------------------|
| 结构清晰度 | 三段式完整，过渡自然 | □□□□□ |
| 细节丰富度 | 包含2种以上感官描写 | □□□□□ |
| 语言准确性 | 无时态/单复数错误 | □□□□□ |
知识卡片：
高分秘诀：
"让故事呼吸"法则 → 每写3句叙述，加入1句心理/环境描写
（例：I pened the dr. → I slwly turned the drknb, its cld metal biting int my palm, wndering what awaited me inside...）
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【24H复习计划】
晨间6:30：朗读范文①，重点模仿场景描写
午间12:00：记忆5个情感动词（tremble, sigh, grin...）
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第二部分：中考英语写作个人经历类范文必背
1．（24-25九年级上·陕西西安·期末）俗话说“生活处处有惊喜”。为了让同学们留意身边的美好，你校英文报以此为主题面向全校学生征文。请根据以下提示和要求，以“My unexpected surprise”为题，用英语写一篇关于自己经历的短文进行投稿。
提示：
1. 你的意外惊喜来自你的父母；
2. 你的父母是如何让你感到惊喜的；
3. 你的感慨。
要求：
1. 短文中应包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 不少于70词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My unexpected surprise
Life is full f surprises, ften frm thse we least expect.
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【满分优秀范文】
My unexpected surprise
Life is full f surprises, ften frm thse we least expect. Nw I will tell yu a stry abut a nice surprise f mine.
That day was my birthday. When schl was ver, I quickly walked hme. But t my surprise, my parents weren’t at hme. I felt very sad. I thught they frgt my birthday. Suddenly, the dr was pened. My parents held a big cake and said “ Happy Birthday!”. I was s surprised that I culdn’t say a wrd. Then we enjyed the cake tgether.
After this, I learn that parents lve their children all the time.
【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，生活处处充满惊喜；
第二步，具体阐述作者的父母如何让作者感到惊喜；
第三步，书写结语，表达作者感受。
[亮点词汇]
①t my surprise令我惊讶的是
②如此……以至于……
③all the time一直
[高分句型]
①When schl was ver, I quickly walked hme. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②After this, I learn that parents lve their children all the time. (that引导的宾语从句)
2．（24-25九年级上·山东青岛·期末）改变是成长的必经之路。学校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“My biggest change”为主题的征稿活动，请根据提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述你学习或生活中的重大改变。
My biggest change
☆What’s the change?
☆Hw did it happen?
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实人名或校名；
2．可适当增加细节使行文流畅；
3．词数80～100。
My biggest change
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【满分优秀范文】
My biggest change
The biggest change in my life was when I mved t a new city and started attending a different schl. I used t be very shy and intrverted, but the mve frced me t step ut f my cmfrt zne. At first, I was scared and felt lnely in the new envirnment. Hwever, jining varius schl clubs and making new friends helped me pen up and becme mre cnfident. My teachers and classmates were supprtive, which made the transitin smther. Nw, I am mre utging and ready t face new challenges.
【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述生活中的重大改变；
第二步，具体介绍在这种改变中的心路历程；
第三步，介绍这个改变给作者带来的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①step ut f踏出
②cmfrt zne舒适区
③be ready t准备好做某事
[高分句型]
①The biggest change in my life was when I mved t a new city and started attending a different schl. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②My teachers and classmates were supprtive, which made the transitin smther. (which引导的定语从句)
3．（24-25九年级上·江苏泰州·期末）亲爱同学们，时光荏苒，九年级上学期的学习生活已悄然落幕，在这个充满挑战与机遇的学期里，你一定经历了许多，也收获了满满的成长；中考的战鼓愈发急促，需要你做好充分准备迎接挑战。假设你是杨林，请根据下面的写作要点写一篇日记，肯定一学期积极努力的自己，也祝愿自己下学期与更多的美好相遇。
写作要点：
1. 本学期的经历和收获：遇到的困难；解决的过程；要感谢的人。
2. 下学期的期许和计划：下学期的目标，预定的计划。
写作要求：
1. 表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，结构完整；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。
Dear Diary,
Time flies! The first term f Grade 9 has nearly cme t an end. Lking back, I’m really prud f what I’ve achieved.
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【满分优秀范文】
Dear Diary,
Time flies! The first term f Grade 9 has nearly cme t an end. Lking back, I’m really prud f what I’ve achieved.
This term, I had difficulties in physics and chemistry. But I didn’t give up. I bravely asked teachers fr advice and discussed with classmates. Thanks t their help, I fund effective learning methds and made great prgress. I am always grateful t yur teachers and classmates fr their patience.
Fr the next term, I have gt a plan. I am ready t study even harder, preview lessns regularly, and read mre bks t gain better grades fr the senir high schl entrance examinatin. Als, I will d mre exercise t keep myself mre energetic and healthier. I will try my best t balance my hbbies and schlwrk better.
I believe that I will have anther wnderful term and successfully enter my dream high schl.
【知识点】个人经历、计划、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态是现在完成时、一般现在时、一般过去时以及一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“本学期的经历和收获”和“下学期的期许和计划”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be prud f以……而自豪
②give up放弃
③ask sb. fr sth向某人寻求某物
[高分句型]
I believe that I will have anther wnderful term and successfully enter my dream high schl. (that引导的宾语从句)
4．（2024·浙江宁波·模拟预测）假如你是李华，请阅读笔友 Peter的邮件，并给他回一封邮件，回答 Peter 提出的问题。
注意：
（1）邮件内容要求完整，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Peter.
Life is full f changes. Dn’t be afraid f them, as sme can help yu grw up. Here is ne f my experiences.
I used t live with my family. My parents lked after me well and I didn’t need t care abut anything except study. Later, I was sent t a barding schl. Living at schl required me t d everything by myself. I felt very nervus at first, but I tried my best t learn new things. My teachers and rmmates ffered me lts f help, and gradually my abilities imprved greatly.
I’m sure yu’ll benefit frm yur new life, t.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件，回答笔友Peter关于生活变化的问题。
② 时态：文章使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”结合，描述过去的经历和对变化的看法。
③ 提示：根据Peter的邮件，简要描述自己曾经历的变化，表达如何应对并适应这些变化，同时鼓励Peter面对即将到来的新生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要回复Peter并表示自己理解他面临的变化；
第二步，讲述自己曾经历的重大变化，特别是转变过程中的挑战和应对方式；
第三步，鼓励Peter相信自己会适应新环境，并表达对他未来的支持。
[亮点词汇]
① be afraid f 害怕
② grw up 成长
③ lk after 照顾
④ at first 首先
⑤ try ne’s best 尽最大努力
[高分句型]
① Dn’t be afraid f them, as sme can help yu grw up. (原因状语从句)
② My parents lked after me well and I didn’t need t care abut anything except study. (并列句)
③ I’m sure yu’ll benefit frm yur new life, t. (宾语从句)
5．（24-25九年级上·湖南长沙·期末）假设你是李华，九年级上学期的学习生活即将结束。你想和你的美国笔友Jack分享你在学校的生活，请你给他写一封信，内容包括：
※温馨提醒：
（1）注意审题和要点；
（2）80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Jack,
Hw time flies! I have been a Grade Nine student fr ne term. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【满分优秀范文】
Dear Jack,
Hw time flies! I have been a Grade Nine student fr ne term. I used t be free n study and had t much spare time. But nw I wrk hard and exercise every day. I used t be able t learn what I was really interested in. Nw I have many kinds f activities, such as playing basketball.
These changes make me feel busy but meaningful. I hpe t be allwed t relax frm time t time and take up an interest.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封写给Jack的信。
②时态：主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时。
③提示：向Jack讲述自己成为九年级学生后的变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头感叹时光飞逝，表明自己已成为九年级学生一学期。
第二步，中间对比过去和现在在学习、兴趣活动方面的不同。
第三步，结尾表示这些变化让自己忙碌但有意义，同时希望能有时间放松和发展兴趣。
[亮点词汇]
①spare空闲的
②meaningful有意义的
③take up开始从事；占据
[高分句型]
①I have been a Grade Nine student fr ne term.（使用现在完成时，表明成为九年级学生的状态持续了一学期。）
②These changes make me feel busy but meaningful.（此句使用“make+宾语+宾语补足语”的结构，生动地表达出变化给自己带来的感受。）
6．（24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期末）初三的学习生活宛如紧张刺激的马拉松比赛，总是充满挑战，在一些艰难时刻，是谁帮助了你？请以My Inspiring Stry为标题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，让我们一同分享在困境中汲取力量、砥砺奋进的故事，传递向上的青春正能量。
要求：1. 讲述一个自己的故事；
2. 你的感悟；
3. 适当增加细节，行文连贯；
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【满分优秀范文】
My Inspiring Stry
The jurney f studying in the third year f junir high is like a thrilling marathn. In sme tugh mments, it was my English teacher wh helped me. She nt nly taught me English but als taught me hw t face adversity. I will never frget the time when I was struggling with my English grades. She encuraged me t keep practicing and never give up. With her help, I finally imprved my English and gained cnfidence. I learned that perseverance is the key t success. N matter hw difficult the situatin is, we shuld never give up and always mve n. This experience has inspired me t face challenges in life with a psitive attitude.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在一些艰难时刻，帮助自己的人是谁；
第二步，讲述一个自己的故事；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①nt nly…but als不仅……而且
②struggle with…与……斗争
③encurage sb. t d sth.鼓励某人做某事
④give up放弃
⑤mve n继续前进
⑥inspire sb. t d sth.激励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①In sme tugh mments, it was my English teacher wh helped me. (强调句)
②I will never frget the time when I was struggling with my English grades. (when引导定语从句)
③N matter hw difficult the situatin is, we shuld never give up and always mve n. (n matter hw引导让步状语从句)
7．（2024·江苏常州·三模）生活学习中充满了很多挑战，也是每个人成长过程中必不可少的经历。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你在生活中是怎样应对挑战的，有哪些收获。
提示词语：vercme, practice, errr, make prgress
提示问题：What kind f challenge did yu ever face in yur life?
Hw did yu face challenges in yur life?
What have yu achieved?
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
It is imprtant fr us t face challenges in ur lives.
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【满分优秀范文】
It is imprtant fr us t face challenges in ur lives. I nce faced a big challenge in learning English. I had great difficulty in remembering new wrds and understanding grammar.
T vercme these prblems, I made a plan. I decided t practice English every day. I read English articles alud in the mrning and wrte diaries in English in the evening. When I made mistakes, I wrte them dwn and analyzed them carefully.
With cntinuus effrts, I have made great prgress. Nw, I can remember wrds mre easily and use grammar crrectly. I als becme mre cnfident in speaking English. Facing challenges makes me strnger and better. It helps me grw bth in study and in life.
【知识点】叙事忆旧、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在生活中曾面临的挑战是什么；
第二步，介绍面对挑战自己是如何做的；
第三步，谈谈自己的收获并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in ding sth. 做某事有困难
②make a plan 做计划
③decide t d sth. 决定做某事
④make mistakes 犯错误
[高分句型]
①When I made mistakes, I wrte them dwn and analyzed them carefully. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Facing challenges makes me strnger and better. (动名词作主语)
8．（2024·江苏常州·二模）心若芬芳，花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜，一杯热茶、一个偶遇、亦或是一次成功……
某英文网站正在开展以“我的小欢喜”为主题的征文活动。请您根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你心生欢喜的经历，为什么心生欢喜，并谈谈你的收获。
要点：
1. What happened?
2. Why were yu happy at that time?
3. What have yu learned frm the experience?
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Happiness is always arund us if we put ur heart int it.
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【满分优秀范文】
Happiness is always arund us if we put ur heart int it. Mst peple can’t realize this pint because they seem t be busy striving t achieve happiness. As fr me, I will never frget what happened in class that day, which changed me cmpletely and helped me find my happiness.
It was a September afternn, we were tld by ur teacher that sme students in ur class failed in the exam. As a shy girl, I was always afraid f failing in the exam. Hwever, n that day, I decided t pluck up my curage t face the terrible result. When the teacher tld me my grades were nt higher than thers, I was very upset. But my teacher then added, “Yur handwriting is the mst beautiful in the class and I feel very prud f yu. I believe it must take yu lts f time t practice yur writing.” All my classmates cheered fr me and what my teacher said made me very happy. Frm then n, I have made up my mind t study better, answer mre questins in class and wrk harder n tests.
I will always remember this experience, because it gives me cnfidence, curage and supprt frm my classmates and teachers.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述幸福无处不在，引出我的经历。
第二步，讲述心生欢喜的具体事情和原因。
第三步，我的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①seem t似乎，好像
②decide t d决定做某事
③make up ne’s mind下定决心
[高分句型]
①Mst peple can’t realize this pint because they seem t be busy striving t achieve happiness.(原因状语从句)
②As fr me, I will never frget what happened in class that day, which changed me cmpletely and helped me find my happiness.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
9．（2024·浙江温州·模拟预测）青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“Hw I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇110词左右短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。
注意：（1）开头已给，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
Hw I’ve Changed!
In the past few years, I’ve changed a lt clth physically and mentally. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】：
Hw I’ve Changed!
In the past few years, I’ve changed a lt bth physically and mentally.
I used t be thin and shrt. But nw I’m tall and strng. I’m a brave and utging student. Hwever, I was a little bit shy befre. My hbby has changed, t. I used t play cmputer games n weekends. But nw I spend much time playing basketball with my friends. Besides, my English has imprved a lt. I used t be afraid f speaking English. Later I tried t listen mre and speak mre. Nw I even dare t make speeches in public in English. The mst imprtant change in my life was becming interested in reading. Last summer, my best friend gave me an interesting bk t read. I enjyed it s much that I started t read ther bks. It was the mst imprtant change because I learned a lt frm reading. What’s mre, reading makes me happy and relaxed.
What great changes! I hpe I can becme better and better.
【知识点】个人经历、爱好、外貌与性格
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”穿插；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“在过去的几年里，我的身体和精神都发生了很大的变化”引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化以及启发；
第三步，总结全文，表明“我希望我能变得越来越好”，进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①used t d sth.过去常常做某事
②spend time ding sth.花时间做某事
③be afraid f害怕
[高分句型]
It was the mst imprtant change because I learned a lt frm reading.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10．（2025·陕西咸阳·一模）假如你是李明，寒假期间，你在咸阳市民文化中心 (Xianyang. City Public Cultural Center) 接待了外国游客，请你根据图片写一篇日记，记录你带领他们参观茶博物馆并体验中国茶文化的过程以及你的感受。
参考词汇：
shw…arund…, tea sets, hw t drink tea, pur…int, teapt, learn t make tea in a Chinese way, take phts tgether
要求：
1、参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
4、词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
January 30th, 2025
Dear Dairy,
Tday sme freign visitrs came t Xianyang City Public Cultural Center. We spent a wnderful day tgether.
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【满分优秀范文】

January 30th, 2025
Dear Dairy,
Tday sme freign visitrs came t Xianyang City Public Cultural Center. We spent a wnderful day tgether.
I was excited t shw them arund the tea museum, where we explred the rich histry and significance f Chinese tea culture. As we entered the museum, I intrduced them t varius tea sets and explained hw t prperly drink tea. We learned t pur the tea int a teapt and appreciate its arma befre tasting it. The visitrs were fascinated by the prcess and eager t learn hw t make tea in a traditinal Chinese way. We als tk phts tgether, capturing the jyful mments f ur cultural exchange.
This experience nt nly allwed me t share my culture but als deepened my appreciatin fr the beauty f tea.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据参考提示语完成写作，注意语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接日记开头；
第二步，根据图片及参考提示语写出带领外国游客参观茶博物馆并体验中国茶文化的过程。
第三步，描述活动感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be excited t d sth对做某事感到兴奋
②prperly正确地；适当地
③appreciate欣赏
④be eager t d sth渴望做某事
⑤deepened加深
[高分句型]
①I was excited t shw them arund the tea museum, where we explred the rich histry and significance f Chinese tea culture. (where引导的非限制性定语从句)
②The visitrs were fascinated by the prcess and eager t learn hw t make tea in a traditinal Chinese way. (被动语态)
11．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）同学们在不断成长，学习技能，体验生活的过程中，一定做过许多突破自我的尝试。我校英语杂志正在开展“I try, I succeed”为主题的征文活动，请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文来投稿。
要求：1.写一次尝试的经历并谈感受；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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【满分优秀范文】
I try, I succeed
As a student f the new era, we shuld have dreams, skills, and respnsibilities. During the prcess f imprving ur skills, we ften try many new things and break thrugh urselves.
Last year, I decided t run fr the psitin f class mnitr, which I had never dne befre. Despite feeling nervus, I prepared my speech and presented my ideas t my classmates cnfidently. Surprisingly, I wn the electin.
This experience taught me the imprtance f stepping ut f my cmfrt zne and trying new things. By trying, I discvered my ptential and gained mre cnfidence.
【知识点】个人经历、叙事忆旧
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，介绍一次尝试的经历；
第三步，分享感受。
[亮点词汇]
①break thrugh突破
②decided t d决定做
③cmfrt zne舒适区
[高分句型]
①Last year, I decided t run fr the psitin f class mnitr, which I had never dne befre.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②This experience taught me the imprtance f stepping ut f my cmfrt zne and trying new things.(并列结构)
12．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）在我们实现目标的过程中，努力是必不可少且关键的因素之一。请以“The harder yu wrk, the better yu will be.”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要点：1．描述一件与努力有关的事件；
2．谈谈你对努力的理解和感悟。
要求：1．不少于80词；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和学习名称。
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【满分优秀范文】
The harder yu wrk, the better yu will be
In the prcess f ur achieving ur gals, hard wrk is ne f the essential and crucial factrs.
One summer, I was determined t imprve my running speed fr an upcming schl sprts event. Every mrning, I wuld wake up early and practice running in the park. Despite the exhaustin and muscle pain, I never gave up. On the day f the cmpetitin, my hard wrk paid ff—I wn the first place.
This experience taught me that effrt is the fundatin f success. The harder yu wrk, the mre prgress yu will make. Challenges may be tugh, but perseverance and dedicatin will always lead t imprvement.
【知识点】哲理感悟、个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
时态：一般过去时，一般现在时。
提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏 “信息提示” 中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，明确努力的重要性；
第二步，描述实例，展示努力的过程；
第三步，书写结语，抒发感悟，强调努力的价值和意义。
[亮点词汇]
ne f ... 其中之一
[高分句型]
This experience taught me that effrt is the fundatin f success. （that引导的宾语从句）
13．（24-25九年级上·湖北恩施·期末）假如你是李明，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“Sme Changes in My Life”为题的征文活动。请你认真阅读以下通知，并按要求用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。
要求：
1. 短文必须包含上述要求提供的所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Sme Changes in My Life
Hell, I’m Li Ming. I have changed a lt in the past tw years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Sme Changes in My Life
Hell, I’m Li Ming. I have changed a lt in the past tw years.
In the past, I used t be very shy and quiet. I didn’t like t talk t thers and always kept t myself. Hwever, nw I am much mre utging and cnfident. I enjy talking t peple and making new friends. I als used t struggle with my studies, but nw I am ding much better in schl. I have learned t manage my time effectively.
T cntinue imprving, I plan t jin mre clubs and activities at schl. This will help me develp new skills and make even mre friends. I als want t fcus n my health by exercising regularly and eating healthier fd.
Overall, these changes have made me a happier and mre successful persn. I lk frward t seeing hw I will cntinue t grw in the future.
【知识点】个人经历、计划
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体介绍自己有什么改变；
第三步，介绍为了变得更好会怎么做；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used t be曾经是
②struggle with在……方面有困难
③fcus n专注于
④lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①T cntinue imprving, I plan t jin mre clubs and activities at schl. (不定式作目的状语)
②I lk frward t seeing hw I will cntinue t grw in the future. (宾语从句)
14．（2024·吉林长春·模拟预测）在我们的成长中总会面对各种各样的麻烦，压力与担忧，良好的处理问题方式能够帮助我们解决问题。某英文网站正在开展以“Prblem-slving”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，讲述一次你成功解决问题的经历，并谈谈你的收获和感悟。
要求：
1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整。
2.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
3.不少于80词。
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【满分优秀范文】
Prblem-slving
In ur grwth, we always face all kinds f trubles, pressures and wrries. Here I’d like t share an experience f slving a prblem successfully.
Last term, I had a big prblem with my math. I failed several tests and felt really stressed. But I didn’t give up. I decided t change the situatin. I spent mre time ding math exercises and asked my teacher and classmates fr help. I als reviewed the knwledge I had learned befre.
Finally, my effrts paid ff. I made great prgress in math and passed the final exam. Thrugh this experience, I learned that when facing prblems, we shuld be brave and take psitive actins. As lng as we keep trying, we can vercme any difficulties.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文。
②时态：以一般过去时为主。
③主题：讲述作者成功解决数学学习问题的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇指出在成长中会面临各种问题，引出分享成功解决问题的经历。
第二步，详细叙述数学学习遇到的问题及解决措施，如花费更多时间做练习、向老师同学求助、复习旧知识。
第三步，结尾总结通过这次经历的收获，即面对问题要勇敢并采取积极行动，只要坚持就能克服困难。
[亮点词汇]
①stress压力；使紧张
②pay ff取得成功；得到回报
③psitive积极的；正面的
[高分句型]
Thrugh this experience, I learned that when facing prblems, we shuld be brave and take psitive actins.（that引导宾语从句）
15．（2024·江苏徐州·三模）你校微信公众号英语栏目组正在组织题为“Learning by ding”的征文活动，请你结合自身经历，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.你参加实践探究活动的原因；
2.你参与实践探究活动的一次经历；
3.你的收获及感受。
注意：
1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；
3.短文中不得泄露个人信息。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用)：practice activity 实践活动
Learning by ding
Learning by ding is a simple idea: we are able t learn mre abut smething when we experience it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分优秀范文】
Learning by ding
Learning by ding is a simple idea: we are able t learn mre abut smething when we experience it.
I jined a practice activity last mnth because I wanted t learn mre abut science in a fun way. During the activity, we were asked t build a small bridge with sticks and glue. At first, I thught it wuld be easy. Hwever, I sn fund that it was nt as simple as I thught. I had t think carefully abut hw t make the bridge strng and stable. I tried different ways and finally succeeded. I was s happy when I saw my bridge standing strng.
Thrugh this experience, I learned a lt abut teamwrk and prblem-slving. I als realized that learning by ding is much mre interesting than just reading bks.
【知识点】个人经历
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍参与实践探究活动的一次经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你参加实践探究活动的原因；
第二步，介绍你参与实践探究活动的一次经历；
第三步，介绍你的收获及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be asked t d sth.被要求做某事
②at first首先
③和……一样
[高分句型]
①I jined a practice activity last mnth because I wanted t learn mre abut science in a fun way. (原因状语从句)
②Hwever, I sn fund that it was nt as simple as I thught. (宾语从句)
③I was s happy when I saw my bridge standing strng. (时间状语从句)
TO: Li Hua
SUBJECT: Great changes
Dear Li Hua,
My family will mve t a new city because my parents have fund new jbs there. I think it will be a great change fr me. I’m lking frward t my new life there, but I’m als a little nervus. What big changes have yu experienced in yur life? Hw did yu deal with them?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Peter
Used t be
Nw
Changes
free n study, can learn what I am really interested in;
many kinds f activities, such as playing basketball…
wrk hard/ exercise every day dn’t have t much spare time get high scres…
Feelings
relaxed/ happy/ clrful/…
busy/ sleepy/ meaningful…
Expectatins
be allwed t relax frm time t time/ be suppsed t take up an interest/…
NticeDear students,
Hw time flies! Yu are in Grade 9 nw. In the past tw years f middle schl life, yu must have changed a lt. Please write a shrt passage abut yur changes.
Here are sme questins t help yu.
◆What did yu use t be like?
◆Hw have yu changed?
◆What will yu d fr better changes?
We are lking frward t yur passage.
Schl English Club