专题18应用文写作之建议信（解析版）（考点归纳 易错分析 考点练透）-2025年高考英语二轮复习答题技巧

这是一份专题18应用文写作之建议信（解析版）（考点归纳 易错分析 考点练透）-2025年高考英语二轮复习答题技巧，共39页。试卷主要包含了说明写信目的;，提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;，表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复等内容，欢迎下载使用。
考点归纳
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力，内容通常包括：
1.说明写信目的;
2.提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告;
3.表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
必用短语
1.给某人提建议 _____________________________________
2.向某人征求意见 _____________________________________
3.听从某人的建议 _____________________________________
4.认为……有用 _____________________________________
5.保持身体健康 _______________________________________
6.保持均衡饮食 _______________________________________
7.节食 _____________________________________
8.减肥 _____________________________________
9.增肥 _____________________________________
10.不吃早餐 _____________________________________
11.食品安全 _____________________________________
12.注重食品质量 _____________________________________
13.远离垃圾食品 _____________________________________
14.养成健康的饮食习惯 _____________________________________
15.有害于 _____________________________________
16.有利于 _____________________________________
17.增进健康/增加体力 _____________________________________
18.过着健康的生活 _____________________________________
19.保持乐观的生活态度 _____________________________________
20.导致/引起 _____________________________________
21.遭受粮食短缺_____________________________________
22.发起光盘行动_____________________________________
23.保持对食品安全的危机感_____________________________________
24.打包剩饭菜_____________________________________
答案
1.give sb sme advice (n)
2.ask sb fr advice
3.fllw ne’s advice
4.find…helpful/useful/beneficial
5.keep fit / healthy/ in gd health
6.keep a balanced diet
7.g / be n a diet
8.lse/take ff/reduce weight
9.put n/gain weight
10.skip breakfast
11.fd safety /fd security
12.attach imprtance t fd quality
13.stay away frm junk fd
14.develp / frm healthy eating habits
15.d harm t /be harmful t
16.benefit /be beneficial t /d gd t
17.build up ne’s health／strength
18.live /lead a healthy life
19.keep an ptimistic attitude twards life
20.lead t /result in / bring abut /cause
21.suffer frm fd shrtage
22.launch “Clean Plate Campaign”
23.maintain a sense f crisis abut fd security
24.pack leftvers
必用句式
1.很高兴收到你的来信，征求我对如何保持健康的建议。
___________________________________________________________________
2.为了方便，有些人选择吃快餐而不是均衡的饮食。
___________________________________________________________________
3.只有养成良好的饮食习惯，我们才能享有健康。
___________________________________________________________________
4.是我们远离垃圾食品，过上健康生活的时候了。
___________________________________________________________________
5.当地政府需要加强管理和提高市民关于食品安全的意识。
___________________________________________________________________
6.在餐桌上，等待家里的老人开始用餐是合适的。
___________________________________________________________________
7.我们应该强调节约粮食是很重要的。
___________________________________________________________________
8.小行为有大作用。只有大家共同努力，珍惜每一粒粮食，才能减少粮食浪费。
___________________________________________________________________
答案
1.I’m glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t keep healthy.
2.Fr cnvenience, sme peple chse t have fast fd instead f a balanced diet.
3.Only when we frm a gd eating habit can we enjy gd health.
4.The best way t stay healthy is t take exercise regularly.
5.The lcal gvernment needs t strengthen the management and raise the awareness f fd safety amng all the citizens.
6.At the dinner table, it is apprpriate t wait fr the elderly peple in the family t start eating.
7.It can’t be stressed enugh that saving fd is f vital significance.
8.Small act makes a big difference. Only if we make jint effrts and cherish every grain can we cut fd waste .
建议信模板
Dear ________,
I am srry t hear that yu have truble in________.(面临的困难) I’m writing give yu sme f my suggestins.
Initially, yu’d better _______. (建议一)Besides, it wuld be a great idea t _______, （建议二）because_______.（建议的原因） In additin, if I were yu, I wuld ____. （建议三）I firmly believe that_____.（相信能够克服困难）
I hpe yu will find these suggestins helpful. Feel free t cntact me if yu have any questins.
Yurs,
XX
凤头好句：I am glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n hw t ____(建议的主题). Here are a few suggestins t help yu.
建议句型总汇
It’s better t d sth. 做某事比较好 It’s best t d sth. 做某事最好
Yu’d better (nt) d sth. 你最好(别)做某事
Yu shuld / culd d sth “你应该（可以） 做……”
be suppsed t d sth. 应该做某事
It’s a gd idea t d sth. 做某事是个好主意
It's a gd way t d sth. ...是做某事的好方法
Yu can d sprts with yur friends aftter class, which is a gd way t relax yurself.
suggest v. 建议 （名词：suggestin ）可数名词
Let me give yu sme suggestins.
suggest sth. 建议、、、
He suggested a trip t the cuntryside.
suggest ding sth. 建议做某事
He suggested ging ut fr a walk.
suggest that sb shuld d sth. 建议某人做某事
advise vi./vt. 建议/劝告
1. advise ding sth 建议做某事
2. advise sb t d sth 建议某人做某事
3. advise +that从句，（从句中的谓语动词用“shuld+动词原形”）
建议...
He advised waiting till the right time.
I advise yu t d sme sprts after class.
She advised that he shuld sell the huse.
advice n. (不可数)建议/劝告
a piece f advice 一条建议 tw pieces f advice 两条建议
征求某人的意见ask sb fr advice/turn t sb fr advice
给某人一些意见give sb sme advice / give sme advice t sb
采纳某人的意见accept/take ne’s advice /fllw ne's advice
Let me give yu sme advice.
I hpe yu can take my advice.
考点练透
高考模拟
（一）
（2024·广东江门·二模）假定你是李华，是你们班的英语课代表，班上部分同学向你反馈在听外教 Chris全英授课时存在困难，请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.说明问题；
2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m writing t tell yu abut sme prblems that sme classmates are facing.
Sme f my classmates have difficulty understanding yur lessns because yu speak English thrughut the class. They are nt used t this pure English teaching envirnment and find it hard t catch up with yur pace. They suggest that yu speak a little slwer and explain sme difficult wrds r expressins. Als, it wuld be great if yu culd give mre examples and visual aids t help us better understand the cntent.
Hpe my suggestins will be helpful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给外教Chris写封信，向其说明同学们反馈的Chris全英授课时存在的困难并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做某事有困难：have difficulty (in) ding→ have truble (in) ding
建议：suggest→ advise
极棒的：great→ wnderful
有帮助的：be helpful→ be f help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：They are nt used t this pure English teaching envirnment and find it hard t catch up with yur pace.
拓展句：Since they are nt used t this pure English teaching envirnment, they find it hard t catch up with yur pace.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing t tell yu abut sme prblems that sme classmates are facing.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Sme f my classmates have difficulty understanding yur lessns because yu speak English thrughut the class.（运用了because引导的状语从句）
（二）
（2024·浙江嘉兴·一模）假定你是李华，你校承办的国际夏令营计划开展体育嘉年华活动(SprtsCarnival)，现向学生征集趣味运动项目。请你给负责人 David写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 提议一个项目；
2. 阐述实施方案。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I’d like t prpse rganizing a water balln fight during ur Sprts Carnival. It cmbines fun with physical activity and is refreshing fr the campers t enjy.
T carry it ut, we will divide the participants int teams, ideally cnsisting f 5-10 members each. Each team starts with an equal number f water ballns. Players can nly thrw ballns at ppnents within the designated area. Once a player is hit by a water balln, they must exit the game. The last team with players remaining will be declared the winner.
I believe it will be a highlight f the carnival!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生就学校国际夏令营计划开展的体育嘉年华活动向负责人David提议一个趣味运动项目，并详细阐述实施方案。
【详解】词汇积累
提议：prpse → suggest/recmmend
实施：carry ut → implement/execute
宣布：declare → annunce
组成：cnsist f→be cmpsed f
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T carry it ut, we will divide the participants int teams, ideally cnsisting f 5-10 members each.
拓展句：T carry it ut, we will divide the participants int teams, which ideally cnsist f 5-10 members each.
【点睛】[高分句型1] T carry it ut, we will divide the participants int teams, ideally cnsisting f 5-10 member s each.(运用了不定式作目的状语wuld like t d sth.表示“想要做某事”的句型)
[高分句型2] Once a player is hit by a water balln, they must exit the game.(运用了连词nce引导的时间状语从句状语)
[高分句型3] I believe it will be a highlight f the carnival!(运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
（三）
（2024·江苏南京·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的朋友Daniel被伊利诺伊大学厄巴纳-香槟分校(University f lllinis Urbana-Champaign)录取了，但是他对未来的大学生活感到紧张。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；
2. 表示理解；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Daniel,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Daniel,
I’m s happy t hear that yu’ve been admitted t University f lllinis Urbana-Champaign. Cngratulatins!
I understand yur nervusness abut the upcming cllege life as it’s a new chapter with many unknwns. But dn’t wrry t much. Here are sme suggestins fr yu. Try t get familiar with the campus and its facilities befre yu start. Besides, make a study plan t manage yur time well. And dn’t hesitate t jin varius clubs and activities t make new friends.
I am sure yu will adapt t yur new life sn by fllwing the suggestins abve.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就你的朋友Daniel对未来的大学生活感到紧张这事给他写一封邮件。其内容包括：表达祝贺、表示理解和提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
焦虑：nervusness→anxiety
很多：many→plenty f
建议：suggestin→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Besides, make a study plan t manage yur time well.
拓展句： Besides, it is advisable that yu shuld make a study plan t manage yur time well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m s happy t hear that yu’ve been admitted t University f lllinis Urbana-Champaign.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 I understand yur nervusness abut the upcming cllege life as it’s a new chapter with many unknwns. （运用了as引导原因状语从句）
（四）
（2025·河南安阳·一模）假定你是李华。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请你给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件，内容如下：
1.你对该杂志的看法；
2.提出你的建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editr,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editr,
I’m Li Hua, yur regular reader. Yur magazine is truly wnderful, as it prvides varius valuable learning materials and interesting articles, and helps me a lt with my English study. Fr sme further imprvement, I’d like t share the fllwing suggestins.
Persnally, it wuld get better t cver sme extended readings related t ur textbks, which will surely assist us t be better equipped fr ur English studies. What is equally necessary is t set up a clumn sharing study experience frm tp students and add an interactive sectin t help us cmmunicate mre efficiently.
I d hpe my suggestins will be adpted and yur magazine will becme even mre ppular.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。某英语学习杂志面向全国中学生征求意见，请考生给该杂志编辑部写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供：prvide→ffer
交流：cmmunicate→interact
建议：suggestin→advice
提高：imprvement→prmtin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Fr sme further imprvement, I’d like t share the fllwing suggestins.
拓展句：Fr sme further imprvement, I’d like t share the fllwing suggestins that are f help t yu.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Persnally, it wuld get better t cver sme extended readings related t ur textbks, which will surely assist us t be better equipped fr ur English studies. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] What is equally necessary is t set up a clumn sharing study experience frm tp students and add an interactive sectin t help us cmmunicate mre efficiently. (运用了what引导主语从句)
（五）
（2024·江苏徐州·模拟预测）假如你是李华，你的美国好友Mike在邮件中提到他最近在学校里时常感到自卑，觉得自己没有其他同学酷，请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示理解和鼓励；
2. 给出建议及理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Mike,
I’m srry t hear that yu feel this way. I understand yur feelings.
First f all, yu shuld knw that everyne is unique and has their wn charm. Dn’t cmpare yurself with thers. Fcus n yur strengths and skills. Fr example, if yu are gd at playing basketball, jin the basketball team and shw yur talent. Als, try t make sme psitive changes in yur appearance r behavir that make yu feel cnfident.
I believe yu can vercme this feeling.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国好友Mike回一封邮件，就他现在的问题给一些建议。内容包括：表示理解和鼓励以及给出建议及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先： first f all→ t begin with
应该： shuld→be suppsed t
集中注意力于：fcus n→ cncentrate n
例如：fr example→fr instance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Dn’t cmpare yurself with thers.
拓展句： It is advisable that yu shuld nt cmpare yurself with thers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First f all, yu shuld knw that everyne is unique and has their wn charm. （运用that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Als, try t make sme psitive changes in yur appearance r behavir that make yu feel cnfident.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
（六）
（2024·安徽芜湖·模拟预测）假如你是一名高中生，名叫李华，你的美国同龄朋友Charles一家对中国文化很感兴趣，也与你家结成了友好家庭。最近，他们要搬入一个新房子，Charles也有了自己的房间。应他的请求，请你给他写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
要点：1. 你的建议；
2. 你的祝福。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Charles,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charles,
Hw delighted I am t hear abut yur new remval! Given yur enthusiasm fr Chinese culture, I suggest the design and decratin f yur rm embracing Chinese style with elegance.
Frm my perspective, nt nly can yu hang a Chinese painting r calligraphy t add a cultural atmsphere, but als yu may furnish the rm with wden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure f daily life. Additinally, use clrs f red, gld and black, assciated with Chinese culture, their richness enhancing the warmth f yur space. There is n denying that a prcelain vase can add a unique and cultural tuch t yur space.
Were it pssible, yu culd cmbine these elements t create a rm reflecting yur persnal taste. I am sure yur creatin will be a masterpiece, a perfect blend f China and the freign cuntries.
Eager t see the fruit f yur endeavr!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国同龄朋友Charles写一封信，给他一些关于房间设计的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→jyful
热情：enthusiasm→passin
优雅：elegance→grace
此外：additinally→what’s mre
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hw delighted I am t hear abut yur new remval!
拓展句：Hw delighted I am when I hear abut yur new remval!
【点睛】【高分句型1】Frm my perspective, nt nly can yu hang a Chinese painting r calligraphy t add a cultural atmsphere, but als yu may furnish the rm with wden pieces, their simplicity and dignity relieving the pressure f daily life. (运用了nt nly位于句首的倒装句式和独立主格结构)
【高分句型2】There is n denying that a prcelain vase can add a unique and cultural tuch t yur space. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
（七）
（2024·江苏盐城·模拟预测）假定你是李华，外教Smith准备让学生每周进行一次写作训练，但不得使用网络，你认为这样的做法存在问题。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 1.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 1. I really appreciate yur planning t have us practice writing weekly. Hwever, it’s unwise t stp us frm turning t the Internet.
My reasns are as fllws. The Internet is an inseparable part f ur life. Firstly, we can have quick access t abundant infrmatin, enriching ur relevant knwledge. Secndly, nline innvative ways f writing are there fr ur taking. We shuldn’t give up eating fr fear f chking. Abve all, students can reslve dubts in real time whenever in truble.
My suggestin is t use it wisely and respnsibly. Only in this way can ur writing be facilitated.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给外教Smith写一封邮件，向他反映每周进行一次写作训练，但不得使用网络的做法的问题，并给出个人的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
不明智的：unwise→inadvisable, ill-cnsidered
阻止某人做某事：stp sb frm ding→prevent sb frm ding, keep sb frm ding
放弃：give up→quit, abandn
解决：reslve→wrk ut, slve
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestin is t use it wisely and respnsibly.
拓展句：I suggest that we shuld use it wisely and respnsibly.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, we can have quick access t abundant infrmatin, enriching ur relevant knwledge. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2] Only in this way can ur writing be facilitated. (运用了“nly+介词短语”置于句首引起的部分倒装)
（八）
（2024·安徽·模拟预测）假设你是高三学生李华。你的英国好友Brian给你发邮件，想和你讨论如何处理日常生活中电子垃圾的问题，请你用英语给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 你的建议；
2. 你的做法。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右。
2. 开头和结尾已经给你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：电子垃圾electrnic waste
Dear Brian,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Brian,
Thank yu fr bringing up the imprtant issue f electrnic waste in ur daily lives. In my pinin, ne effective way t handle this prblem is by practicing respnsible cnsumptin. This includes buying durable prducts, repairing them when pssible, and prperly recycling r dispsing f them when they reach the end f their lifespan.
Persnally, I make an effrt t reduce electrnic waste by dnating r selling my ld devices instead f thrwing them away, and I always recycle electrnic items thrugh designated e-waste recycling prgrams. Additinally, I encurage my friends and family t d the same, spread ing awareness abut the imprtance f envirnmental sustainability.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国好友Brian给考生发邮件，想和考生讨论如何处理日常生活中电子垃圾的问题，要求考生按照要求用英语给他写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的：imprtant→ significant
问题：issue→ prblem
有效的：effective→ valid
处理：handle→ deal with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：In my pinin, ne effective way t handle this prblem is by practicing respnsible cnsumptin.
拓展句：In my pinin, practicing respnsible cnsumptin is ne effective way t handle this prblem.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thank yu fr bringing up the imprtant issue f electrnic waste in ur daily lives.（运用了动名词bringing作宾语）
【高分句型2】In my pinin, ne effective way t handle this prblem is by practicing respnsible cnsumptin.（运用了不定式t handle作定语、动名词practicing作宾语）
（九）
（2025·甘肃张掖·模拟预测）假设你是高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Tm对体育健身很感兴趣，他来信询问你如何平衡学业和锻炼以保持健康。请你给他写一封回信，谈谈你的做法和建议。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tm,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tm,
It is imprtant fr us t balance study and exercise t keep healthy. First f all, I think it is imprtant t manage my time well. I can allcate my time prperly and cmbine wrk and rest. Secndly, it is imprtant t chse the right kind f exercise, chse sme mderate exercise and make yu nt t tired, such as badmintn and walking. Thirdly, when I am tired f learning, I will get up and exercise t prvide mre energy fr my brain.
I hpe that my suggestins and experience will be f help t yu.

Yurs, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的英国朋友Tm对体育健身很感兴趣，他来信询问你如何平衡学业和锻炼以保持健康。要求考生给他写一封回信，谈谈平衡学业和锻炼的做法和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
认为：think→figure
选择：chse→select
疲惫的：tired→exhausted
提供：prvide→ffer
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：Secndly, it is imprtant t chse the right kind f exercise, chse sme mderate exercise and make yu nt t tired, such as badmintn and walking.
拓展句：Secndly, it is imprtant that we chse the right kind f exercise, chse sme mderate exercise and make yu nt t tired, such as badmintn and walking.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Thirdly, when I am tired f learning, I will get up and exercise t prvide mre energy fr my brain.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】I hpe that my suggestins and experience will be f help t yu.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
（十）
（2024·福建福州·一模）假定设你是李华，你们班外教Chris要求每位同学针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给他写一封信，发表自己的看法。内容包括：
1. 分析原因；
2. 提出解决办法。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
I am writing t share my thughts n the phenmenn that many f us are hesitant t ask questins and lack f awareness in asking questins during English class.
The reasns are as fllws. Sme students may be afraid f being judged r criticized fr asking questins. Additinally, ur educatin system ften emphasizes memrizatin and test-taking, rather than critical thinking and inquiry.
I think creating a mre supprtive and encuraging learning envirnment culd help bst ur cnfidence in asking questins. Organizing mre interactive activities is als f equal significance. I’m cnfident that we can vercme this challenge under yur guidance.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题，问题意识缺乏”这一现象给Chris写一封信，发表自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
害怕：be afraid f→fear
强调：emphasize→stress
重要：significance→imprtance
克服：vercme→cnquer
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m cnfident that we can vercme this challenge under yur guidance.
拓展句：If yu culd ffer sme guidance, I’m cnfident that we can vercme this challenge.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing t share my thughts n the phenmenn that many f us are hesitant t ask questins and lack f awareness in asking questins during English class. (运用了that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] I think creating a mre supprtive and encuraging learning envirnment culd help bst ur cnfidence in asking questins. (运用了动名词作主语)
（十一）
（2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李华，你校外教Adele计划拍短视频向她的亲友介绍你们的校园生活，为此征求你的建议，请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐拍摄内容：
2. 陈述推荐理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adele,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Adele,
I’m writing t prvide yu with sme suggestins fr filming ur campus life. As a freign teacher, I believe yur vide will be a great way t intrduce ur schl t yur friends.
Firstly, I wuld recmmend that yu film sme f ur classrms and labs, which will give yur viewers a sense f high-quality educatin we ffer here. Secndly, yu shuld capture sme f the beautiful landscaping n campus and give yur friends a sense f the serene envirnment we enjy here. Last but nt least, please film sme f ur students and teachers at wrk r play t shwcase the friendly atmsphere.
Best regards!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Adele写信，就她计划拍短视频的事提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供某人某物：prvide sb. with sth.→ffer sb. sth.
首先：firstly→t begin with
应该：shuld→be suppsed t
展示：shwcase→display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing t prvide yu with sme suggestins fr filming ur campus life.
拓展句：I’m writing t prvide yu with sme suggestins which are related t filming ur campus life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Firstly, I wuld recmmend that yu film sme f ur classrms and labs, which will give yur viewers a sense f high-quality educatin we ffer here.（运用了that引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Last but nt least, please film sme f ur students and teachers at wrk r play t shwcase the friendly atmsphere.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语）
（十二）
（2024·山东聊城·二模）假定你是李华，得知你校的新西兰交换生David打算学习中国传统乐器二胡，但又担心会影响自己其他课程的学习。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示支持；
2.给出建议；
3.表达愿望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I’m thrilled t hear that yu want t learn the erhu, a traditinal Chinese instrument. I fully supprt yur decisin. Learning the erhu nt nly enriches yur cultural experience but als enhances yur musical skills.
T balance yur time, I suggest yu create a schedule that allws adequate practice withut cmprmising yur academic wrk. Yu culd als jin a club r find a tutr wh can help yu learn mre effectively.
I hpe yu enjy learning the erhu and it brings yu clser t Chinese culture.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信，要求考生给新西兰交换生 David 写一封邮件，就他打算学习中国传统乐器二胡表示支持，并给出一些建议，最后表达愿望。
【详解】词汇积累
支持：supprt → in favr f
建议：suggest→ advise
足够的：adequate→enugh
帮助：help→assist
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I fully supprt yur decisin.
拓展句：I firmly stand by yur decisin.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] I’m thrilled t hear that yu want t learn the erhu, a traditinal Chinese instrument. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] T balance yur time, I suggest yu create a schedule that allws adequate practice withut cmprmising yur academic wrk. (运用了不定式作目的状语和以schedule 为先行词、关系代词that引导的定语从句)
（十三）
（2024·湖南怀化·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack正在策划一次“了解中国茶文化”活动，他发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他回复，就活动内容提出建议。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack.
Learning that yu are planning an activity named “Understanding Chinese Tea Culture”, I’m writing t ffer yu sme advice.
As fr the cntent, I highly recmmend a Chinese tea culture exhibitin, where varieties f tea frm different regins f China can be displayed s that visitrs can gain a further insight int the histry f Chinese tea culture. It’s necessary t hld a tea art perfrmance, during which visitrs can be given an pprtunity t experience the tea-making prcess and taste different types f tea. Thus, they are bund t better understand Chinese tea culture.
I hpe these suggestins are helpful. If yu prefer t knw mre, please dn’t hesitate t let me knw. May yur activity be successful!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信，要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Jack回复关于“了解中国茶文化”活动的建议。
【详解】词汇积累
建议：advice→ recmmendatin
举办：hld→ rganize
机会：pprtunity→ chance
成功的：successful→ fruitful
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I hpe these suggestins are helpful.
拓展句：I sincerely hpe that these recmmendatins prve t be beneficial.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Learning that yu are planning an activity named “Understanding Chinese Tea Culture”, I’m writing t ffer yu sme advice.（使用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型 2】As fr the cntent, I highly recmmend a Chinese tea culture exhibitin, where varieties f tea frm different regins f China can be displayed s that visitrs can gain a further insight int the histry f Chinese tea culture.（使用了关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句、s that连接的目的状语从句）
（十四）
（2024·广东东莞·三模）假定你是李华，正在参加一个文化交流营（Cultural Exchange Camp），因生活习惯差异与外国室友产生分歧，如室友经常在晚上举办派对。向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰，内容包括：
1. 描述情况；
2. 个人建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数80词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Cmmittee Office,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Cmmittee Office,
I, Li Hua, am writing due t a challenge I face with my freign rmmate. There are significant lifestyle differences causing sme disagreements. Specifically, my rmmate ften hsts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule.
I kindly request the ffice t mediate and suggest setting party rules r prviding separate accmmdatin ptins fr thse with different lifestyles.
If yu culd take my pinin int accunt, I wuld be grateful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向营地办公室写一封信表达自己的困扰。
【详解】1.词汇积累
明显的：significant→bvius
具体来说：specifically→t be specific
建议：suggest→advise
考虑：take int accunt→take int cnsideratin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Specifically, my rmmate ften hsts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule.
拓展句：Specifically, my rmmate ften hsts late-night parties, which disrupts my sleep and daily schedule.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Specifically, my rmmate ften hsts late-night parties, disrupting my sleep and daily schedule. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I kindly request the ffice t mediate and suggest setting party rules r prviding separate accmmdatin ptins fr thse with different lifestyles. (运用了动名词作宾语)
（十五）
（2024·山西运城·二模）假定你是李华。你的新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，特发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 推荐一种活动形式；
2. 说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad t hear yu plan t rganize an activity with the theme f envirnmental prtectin. And I’m willing t ffer my advice.
I think a bicycle race, which can encurage peple t travel in a green way, fits in well with the theme. Biking is familiar t a majrity f peple, s the race will definitely attract many participants, cntributing t spreading the awareness f envirnmental prtectin. Mrever, it’s such a gd way t keep fit that mre peple will fllw the green practice.
I hpe my idea is helpful and that yur event will be a great success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面属于应用文，新西兰好友Jack计划组织一个以“环保”为主题的活动，要求考生回复一封邮件，向他推荐一种活动形式并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
①环保：envirnmental prtectin → envirnmental cnservatin
②鼓励：encurage → inspire/mtivate
③绿色出行：green travel → ec-friendly transprtatin/sustainable cmmuting
④意识：awareness → cnsciusness
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：And I’m willing t ffer my advice.
拓展句：And I’m willing t ffer my advice which I hpe can be f assistance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I think a bicycle race, which can encurage peple t travel in a green way, fits in well with the theme. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Mrever, it’s such a gd way t keep fit that mre peple will fllw the green practice.(引导的结果状语从句)
高考真题
（一）
（2024·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)建议投稿内容；
(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry. Here are a few suggestins fr yur article.
T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld. In additin, yu can als mentin China’s rle in helping slving glbal issues such as the glbal warming, ffering a mre cmprehensive view.
Lking frward t reading yur article!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Tday栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很好的：great →wnderful
成就：achievement→ accmplishment
建议：suggestin →advice
此外：In additin → what’s mre
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句：It’s great t hear yu’re planning t write abut China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.
拓展句：It’s great t hear what yu’re planning t write abut is China’s achievements n the ccasin f the 75th anniversary f the funding f this cuntry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】T begin with, talk abut China’s ecnmic grwth and technlgical advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Then, prjects like the Belt and Rad Initiative make a gd tpic t discuss because it shwcases China’s determinatin t build a shared future with the wrld.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
（二）
（2023·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”.
Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestin→tip
提供：ffer→prvide
开展：carry ut→cnduct
主题：theme→tpic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
拓展句：Since yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
（三）
（2023·全国·高考真题） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3. I think it’s nt a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, randmly pairing up students may lead t unbalanced language abilities within the grups. This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve. Besides, students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.
My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners. This way, everyne can feel mre cmfrtable practicing and imprving their spken English tgether.
Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：t begin with → first f all
提高：imprve → prgress
建议：suggestin → advice
选择：chse → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
拓展句：My suggestin is that we are suppsed t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.（运用了省略句和wh引导定语从句）
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（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High Schl.
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Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High Schl.It’s ur great pleasure t have yu visit ur schl and give a lecture n western art during the cming summer vacatin.
When it cmes t my suggestins, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that yu culd deliver the lecture n this tpic. Served as a bridge, western music prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities. It als gives us strength and hpe when we are vercming difficulties.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my advice, and I hpe that I can gain mre knwledge thrugh the lecture. Lking frward t yur early reply.
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：prvide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：pprtunity→chance
采纳建议：take ne’s advice→fllw ne’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，prvides us teenagers with the pprtunity t braden ur hrizns and have a better understanding n culture diversities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it cmes t my suggestins, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that yu culd deliver the lecture n this tpic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It als gives us strength and hpe when we are vercming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
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（2012·四川·高考真题）假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1. 对英语学习的认识；
2. 自己目前的英语水平；
3. 自己英语学习存在的主要问题；
4. 对英语教学的两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy t have yu as ur English teacher.
Thank yu!
Li Hua
【答案】One Pssible Versin:
Dear Ms Li,
I am very happy t have yu as ur English teacher.
As the wrld is becming a glbal village, English is getting mre and mre imprtant, s mastering English means we can see the wrld thrugh a new windw.
My English is just OK and the tw main prblems in my study are that I feel it difficult t learn wrds by heart, and that I ften feel nervus when speaking English. I really hpe that yu can give me gd advice n hw t memrize new wrds. Anther suggestin is t give us mre chances t practice speaking. I believe we can make much prgress in English with yur help.
Thank yu!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给英语老师Ms Li写一封信，介绍自己的英语学习情况，并提出教学建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
掌握：master→ grasp
记住：learn by heart→ bear in mind
机会：chance→ pprtunity
给，提供：give→ ffer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Anther suggestin is t give us mre chances t practice speaking.
拓展句：Anther suggestin is that yu can give us mre chances t practice speaking.
【点睛】[高分句型1]My English is just OK and the tw main prblems in my study are that I feel it difficult t learn wrds by heart, and that I ften feel nervus when speaking English.(运用了that连接的表语从句和时间状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2]I really hpe that yu can give me gd advice n hw t memrize new wrds.(运用了that连接的宾语从句和疑问词+不定式作宾语)
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（2013·四川·高考真题）
某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。
1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；
2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；
3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
It's useful and necessary t discuss learning habits. ._________________________________
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【答案】It's useful and necessary t discuss learning habits. As is knwn t us, gd learning habits cntribute t imprving learning efficiency. That is t say, withut gd learning habits, the efficiency cannt be guaranteed. Therefre, in rder t establish a gd learning habit, such as reviewing what we have studied regularly, we shuld revise the curse we have learned and try hard t recite smething imprtant. Only by ding this can we learn all the curses well and achieve better grades. Hwever, ne f my prblems lies in that I cannt stick t reviewing the knwledge regularly, s I ught t make a prper schedule and persist in it.
【分析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】本文探讨学习习惯与学习效率之间的关系，对于学生来说比较熟悉的，但是在写作的过程注意一下几点：①文章的时态，本文应以一般现在时为主或者表示建议的情态动词为主；②注意要点写全，不能写漏其中一点并且注意要点之间的承接；③注意要点的条理性。因此考生应努力把自己掌握的较为复杂的句型和高级表达法运用到写作中去，以增加亮点。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如As is knwn t us, gd learning habits cntribute t imprving learning efficiency. 运用了定语从句；Therefre, in rder t establish a gd learning habit, such as reviewing what we have studied regularly, we shuld revise the curse we have learned and try hard t recite smething imprtant.运用了宾语从句； Only by ding this can we learn all the curses well and achieve better grades. 运用了倒装句；Hwever, ne f my prblems lies in that I cannt stick t reviewing the knwledge regularly, s I ught t make a prper schedule and persist in it.使用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
（七）
（2010·江苏·高考真题） 假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear teacher and schlmates, it’s a great pleasure fr me t be tday and share my experience f learning English with yu.
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Thank yu fr listening.
【答案】Dear teacher and schlmates, it’s a great pleasure fr me t be tday and share my experience f learning English with yu.
I’m interested in English and hpe t be an interpreter in the future. Naturally, it’s very imprtant fr me t learn English well. As everybdy knws, vcabulary is an imprtant part f language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memrize twenty new wrds a day and put them t use whenever pssible. After class, I ften listen t English prgrams n TV and n the radi. Besides, I’ve learned a lt frm the Internet and ther surces.
Nw, I’d like t make sme suggestins n English teaching and learning in ur schl. Firstly, we shuld be given mre pprtunities t use what we’ve learned in rder t have a better grasp f it. Secndly, I hpe ur teachers can recmmend mre interesting bks and magazines and give us mre free time t read them. Finally, I suggest we have mre English activities, such as English cntests and festivals.
Thank yu fr listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→ g in fr
重要的：imprtant→ significant
此外：besides→what's mre
更好地掌握：have a better grasp f→have a better knwledge f
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Naturally, it’s very imprtant fr me t learn English well.
拓展句：Naturally, learning English well is very imprtant fr me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As everybdy knws, vcabulary is an imprtant part f language, just like bricks in a building.（运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Firstly, we shuld be given mre pprtunities t use what we’ve learned in rder t have a better grasp f it. （运用了what引导的宾语从句）
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（2015·四川·高考真题）假如你是李夏，你看到美国留学生Sharn在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。
1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：
1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
Hi Sharn,
This is Li Xia. I learned frm yur pst that yu want t imprve yur Mandarm.
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【答案】Hi Sharn,
This is Li Xia. I learned frm yur pst that yu want t imprve yur Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think I’m fit fr it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin fr many years. In additin, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must fr me t cmmunicate with thers in my daily life. S I’m quite cnfident that I can help yu learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time, s if yu want t learn it well, yu shuld spend much time practicing Mandarin every day. As the saying ges, practice makes perfect. Besides, yu can als read sme bks in Chinese, see sme Chinese films and listen t sme Chinese radi prgrammes. Speaking and listening are very imprtant fr a language learning, by which yu are sure t make great prgress.
In yur pst, yu say yu can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager t imprve my English. S, if yu allw me t help yu learn Mandarin, yu can als help me imprve my English. We can cntact each ther by vide chat every night fr half an hur in English and half an hur in Chinese, s that we can imprve ur ral speaking.
Hpe fr yur early reply!
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Xia
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给希望提高普通话水平的美国留学生Sharn回信，跟她沟通学习汉语的方法和建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
此外：in additin→what’s mre
非常重要的：very imprtant→f great imprtance
帮助某人做某事：help sb. d sth.→assist sb. t d sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, yu can als read sme bks in Chinese, see sme Chinese films and listen t sme Chinese radi prgrammes.
拓展句：Besides, I recmmend that yu als read sme bks in Chinese, see sme Chinese films and listen t sme Chinese radi prgrammes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I think I’m fit fr it. (由省略连词that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In additin, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must fr me t cmmunicate with thers in my daily life. (由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
（九）
（2018·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m s glad t hear yur future educatin plan in Beijing in yur last letter. First I wuld like t express my warmest welcme t yu and I am sure yu will have the mst unfrgettable experience during yur cllege in Beijing.
Learning yur keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest yu apply fr Peking University, ne f the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature majr is perfect fr yu where yu can be cmpletely saked in Chinese prfund histry and rich culture. As fr preparatin, sme reading in advance in needed like The Stry f the Stne while sme nline curses f spken Chinese can be helpful fr yu t adapt int the Chinese language envirnment.
I sincerely hpe yur dream will cme true and it’s my pleasure t shw yu arund in Beijing when that day cmes. If yu have further questins, please feel free t let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。
亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning yur keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。
使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature majr is perfect fr yu where yu can be cmpletely saked in Chinese prfund histry and rich culture. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。
目录
考点归纳
写作模版
考点练透（考点归纳，写作模版，考点练透+真题模拟）
自己英语学习的情况
1.英语学习的目的
2.英语学习的方法
3.课外自学的途径
……….
对学校英语教学的建议
（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）。