学案 专题 19 话题分类写作模板背诵+投诉信（应用文写作）--高考书面表达话题分类背诵范文

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1.（2022年江苏省高三模拟）
假定你是李华，你邻居的女儿每天中午都在家弹钢琴，给你的网课学习和生活带来了很大的困扰。请你给邻居Mrs. Li 写一封投诉信，内容要点包括：
1.说明困扰你的问题； 2. 投诉的原因；3. 解决问题的建议。
注意：
1.词数80字左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs. Li,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Mrs. Li
I'm Li Hua, a neighbr living next t yur huse. I'm writing t express my dissatisfactin abut the nise yur daughter has been making recently.
The reasn fr my dissatisfactin is that it is at nn every day that yur daughter practices playing the pian, which greatly affects bth my life and nline study. Fr ne thing, as a high schl senir, I'm engaged in making preparatins fr Cllege Entrance Examinatin. Therefre, the nise makes it hard fr me t cncentrate n my study. Fr anther, althugh ccasinally the music yur daughter plays sunds wnderful it disturbs me and I find it difficult t get enugh sleep.
I sincerely hpe that yur daughter can adjust the time and place f practicing. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd slve the prblem as sn as pssible.
Yurs faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生给邻居Mrs. Li 写一封投诉信，说明说明困扰自己的问题、投诉的原因以及解决问题的建议。
第一步：词汇积累
影响：affect→influence
忙于做某事：be engaged in ding sth.=be ccupied with
集中注意力：cncentrate n=fcus n
困难的：difficult→hard
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm Li Hua, a neighbr living next t yur huse.
拓展句：I'm Li Hua, a neighbr wh lives next t yur huse.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
The reasn fr my dissatisfactin is that it is at nn every day that yur daughter practices playing the pian, which greatly affects bth my life and nline study.（第一个that引导表语从句；it is…that…引导强调句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
Fr anther, althugh ccasinally the music yur daughter plays sunds wnderful it disturbs me and I find it difficult t get enugh sleep.（althugh引导让步状语从句）
2.（2022年福建·高三福建省德化一中联考）
假如你是中学生李华，最近在某个购物网站上购买了一双运动鞋，但到货后发现了一些问题，请给该网站写一封投诉信，投诉信内容如下表：
要点：1.写信目的；
2. 不满之处；
3. 表达期望（重新邮寄或退款）。
注意:1.书信内容包括以上要点；
2.词数80左右（书信格式已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir r Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Lihua
【答案】
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m writing t cmplain abut the sprts shes which I bught frm yur website. This mrning I received the shes n time, but I regret t say that there’s smething wrng with them.
Firstly, I’m pretty sure I asked yu t send me a white pair. The mment the mail bx arrived, I culdn’t wait t pen it, nly t find a red ne. T make things wrse, I need a 40 size while yu sent me a size 39, which is t small fr me. Were I in it, I wuld get aching feet. And it is f such bad quality — ne f them even gets lse thread.
My cncern is whether yu will return me the mney r have the shes replaced and I wnder wh will pay the pstage.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Lihua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生网站写一封投诉信，投诉信内容如下表：
要点：1.写信目的；2.不满之处；3.表达期望（重新邮寄或退款）。
第一步：词汇积累
购买：buy→purchase
准时：n time→n schedule
担心：cncern→wrry
替换：replace→substitute fr
第二步：句式拓展
同义句
原句：I’m writing t cmplain abut the sprts shes which I bught frm yur website.
拓展句：I’m writing t cmplain abut the sprts shes bught frm yur website.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
This mrning I received the shes n time, but I regret t say that there’s smething wrng with them.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
T make things wrse, I need a 40 size while yu sent me a size 39, which is t small fr me.（运用了while连接并列句，which引导非限制性定语从句）
3.（2022年全国·高三专题练习）
假如你是李华，在一家商店购得一台劣质电脑，然后与营业员交涉，但营业员态度恶劣，不予受理。为此，你向经理写了一封投诉信。内容主要包括：
(1)自我介绍；
(2)投诉的原因
(3)希望换一台新的电视机，否则全额退款。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear manager,
I am Tm, ne f yur custmers. I am writing t ldge a cmplaint abut the pr quality f yur prduct. The experience in yur shp is a bitter disappintment t me.
Fr ne thing, the TV I bught the ther day frm yur cmpany turned ut t be a fake, which ruined yur gd reputatin. Fr anther, when I went t yur shp fr an explanatin, the salespersn behaved in a rude manner, turning a deaf ear t my requirement.
It is required that I shuld get a replacement, r I shuld receive a full refund. Thank yu fr yur attentin and I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Lihua
【导语】本文是一篇投诉信，李华购买了一台劣质电视机，向服务员申请售后，但遭到服务员的粗劣对待，就此事向经理写一封投诉信。
第一步：词汇积累
购买：buy→ purchase
摧毁：ruin→ destry
替换：replacement→ substitutin
回复：reply→ respnse
第二步：句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：The experience in yur shp is a bitter disappintment t me.
拓展句：It is the experience in yur shp that is a bitter disappintment t me.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
Fr ne thing, the TV I bught the ther day frm yur cmpany turned ut t be a fake, which ruined yur gd reputatin. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Fr anther, when I went t yur shp fr an explanatin, the salespersn behaved in a rude manner, turning a deaf ear t my requirement. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
4.（2022年重庆南开中学校考模拟预测）
假如你是李华，周末在书店购买了一本英文小说。回家后你发现书本有质量问题，与店员理论，其服务态度不好，因此你决定给书店经理写一封投诉信。内容包括：
1. 反映存在问题；2. 提出解决方案。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Manager,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter t cmplain abut sme prblems I have cme acrss recently in yur bkstre. Yesterday I bught an English nvel with an elabrately designed cver. But later I fund that several pages f the bk were cracked and befuled. What is wrse, the misprints spread everywhere in the bk and seriusly affected my cmprehensin. I went t yur bkstre t require a replacement. Surprisingly, yur staff turned dwn my request rudely and even denied the pr quality f the bk.
Nw, I'm wndering whether yu can refund r exchange a new ne fr me. In the meantime, I'd like t appeal t better service f yur staff. An early respnse will be appreciated.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，周末在书店购买了一本英文小说。回家后你发现书本有质量问题，与店员理论，其服务态度不好，因此你决定给书店经理写一封投诉信。
第一步：词汇积累
遇到：cme acrss→run int
购买：buy→purchase
严重地：seriusly→severely
拒绝：turn dwn→refuse
第二步：句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Yesterday I bught an English nvel with an elabrately designed cver. But later I fund that several pages f the bk were cracked and befuled.
拓展句：Yesterday I bught an English nvel with an elabrately designed cver, f which later I fund that several pages were cracked and befuled.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
I am writing this letter t cmplain abut sme prblems I have cme acrss recently in yur bkstre. (运用了省略关系词的定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Nw, I'm wndering whether yu can refund r exchange a new ne fr me. (运用了whether引导宾语从句)
5.（2022年重庆一中高三模拟）
假如你叫李华，最近在某个购物网站上购买了一件夹克，但在到货后发现夹克存在一些问题。请给该网站写一封投诉信，内容应包含如下要点：
1. 写信目的；
2. 投诉内容：夹克颜色和尺寸出错等；
3. 期望得到的解决方式。
注意：
1. 书信内容包括以上要点；
2. 词数80左右（书信格式已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir r Madam,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m writing t cmplain abut the jacket which I bught frm yur website. This mrning I received the jacket n time. I regret t say that there’s smething wrng with it.
Firstly, I’m pretty sure I asked yu t send me a purple ne. The mment the mail bx arrived, I culdn’t wait t pen it, nly t find a red ne. T make things wrse, I need a size 170-88A while yu sent me a size 175-92B, which is t large fr me. Were I in it, I wuld be a clwn. And it is f such bad quality—the zipper desn’t wrk at all!
My cncern is whether yu will return me the mney r have the jacket replaced and I wnder wh will pay the pstage.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给某购物网站写一封投诉信，投诉在其网站购买的夹克颜色和尺寸出错并提出期望得到的解决方式。
第一步：词汇积累
遗憾：be srry→regret
非常/相当：quite→pretty
邮寄：pst→send
归还：give back→return
第二步：句式拓展
同义句
原句：I’m writing t cmplain abut the jacket which I bught frm yur website.
拓展句：I’m writing t cmplain abut the jacket bught frm yur website.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
The mment the mail bx arrived, I culdn’t wait t pen it, nly t find a red ne. (邮寄的箱子一到，我就迫不及待地打开，却发现是红色的。)该句中，“The mment”引导时间状语从句，“nly t find a red ne”为动词不定式做结果状语。
[高分句型2]
T make things wrse, I need a size 170-88A while yu sent me a size 175-92B, which is t large fr me. (更糟糕的是，我需要170-88A的，而你给我的是175-92B的，这对我来说太大了。)该句中“while”作为并列连词，连接前后句，表转折关系；“which is t large fr me”为非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型3]
Were I in it, I wuld be a clwn.(如果我穿上，我就会是一个小丑。)该句使用了与将来事实相反的虚拟语气结构，且将虚拟条件句“if I were in it”中“if”省略，“were”置于句首，构成倒装句式。
6.（2022年全国高三专题练习）
假设你是李华，最近跟父母去国外旅行时所居住的旅馆服务不好。请根据以下要点提示给旅馆老板写一封英文投诉信，信中应包括下列内容：
1.空调不能正常运行；
2.浴室不干净；
3.晚上周围噪声很大，且不给更换房间；
4.服务员态度随意，漠不关心。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文须包括所给要点，但不必逐句翻译；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
4.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir r Madam，
I am writing t cmplain abut yur htel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in Rm 512.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs faithfully，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir r Madam，
I am writing t cmplain abut yur htel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in Rm 512.
Firstly, the air cnditiner wuldn't wrk. When I asked the staff fr help, n ne came. Secndly, I fund the bathrm rather dirty. What was wrse, the nise utside was s lud that we were unable t sleep at night. I asked t change rms, but was refused fr the reasn that the htel was full. It was surprising that the htel staff treated us in a very casual and indifferent manner.
Fr the abve reasns, I have t say that the service in yur htel is cmpletely unacceptable at s many levels. Therefre, I hpe yu can aplgize and refund my mney.
Lking frward t hearing frm yu.
Yurs faithfully，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设考生是李华，最近跟父母去国外旅行时所居住的旅馆服务不好。请根据以下要点提示给旅馆老板写一封英文投诉信。
第一步：词汇积累
拒绝：refuse→ decline
希望：wish→ hpe
收到某人来信： receive a letter frm sb → hear frm sb
令人惊讶的：astnishing→ surprising
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Secndly, I fund the bathrm rather dirty.
拓展句：Secndly, What I fund is that the bathrm is rather dirty.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
When I asked the staff fr help, n ne came.（when引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]
What was wrse, the nise utside was s lud that we were unable t sleep at night.（s…that引导的结果状语从句）
7.（2022年河北邯郸高三校考开学考试）
假定你是李华，你8月12日从网上买了一款新手机，结果刚用一天，就发现由于手机电池原因待机时间短且屏幕部分受损。请就此向网店店主Steve写一封投诉信，要点如下：
1.介绍购物情况；
2.反映存在的问题；
3.提出解决方案。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好
Dear steve,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Steve,
I am Li Hua, I feel bad t truble yu but I am afraid that I have t express my dissatisfactin with the cellphne I bught n August 12.
The reasns are as fllws. In the first place, this phne has a shrt battery life, which is nt satisfactry. In additin, sme parts f the screen have been damaged, under these circumstances, I find it hard t use it.
I wuld appreciate it very much if yu culd exchange a new ne fr me. Besides, yu shuld pay the pstage, What’s mre, I wuld like t have this matter settled by next Sunday.
Thank yu fr yur cnsideratin and I will be lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。文章的主要内容是向网店店主Steve写一封投诉信。
第一步：词汇积累
Be afraid that…；express ne’s dissatisfactin with；in the first place；a shrt battery life；under these circumstances；what’s mre；wuld like t d sth.；have sth. dne；lk frward t
第二步：句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： In the first place, this phne has a shrt battery life. It is nt satisfactry.
拓展句： In the first place, this phne has a shrt battery life, which is nt satisfactry.
第三步：高分句式
[高分句型1]
使用了主从复合句，如：I am Li Hua, I feel bad t truble yu but I am afraid that I have t express my dissatisfactin with the cellphne I bught n August 12.中that引导宾语从句。
[高分句型2]
In the first place, this phne has a shrt battery life, which is nt satisfactry.中which引导非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩