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—————求助信
【篇章结构】
1. 自我介绍，点明写作目的
2. 具体陈述所需要哪方面的帮助或者自己遇到的困难
3. 恳请对方帮助并表达谢意
【话题词汇】
challenge 挑战
facing 面临 (常置于句首作状语)
Facing s much pressure she didn't knw what t d
3. faced with面临(常置于句首作状语)
Faced with s much pressure, she culd hardly stand it.
4.beg sb.t d sth. 恳求某人做某事
5.beg sb.f sth.恳求某人提供某物
Can I beg yu f yur help?
6. beg sb.fr sth.向某人恳求某物
7. average一般的
8.fllw ne's advice 采纳某人的建议
I'll fllw yur advice and try t d my wrk well.
make prgress 取得进步
I'm sure with yur help I'll make greater prgress in my English study.
have difficulty in ding sth.做某事有困难
I have much difficulty in my English study.
11 .have truble in ding sth.做某事很费力
12. help sb.ut f difficulty帮助某人摆脱困境
13. wuld like sb.t d sth.请某人做某事
【核心句型】
一 凤头
I’m writing t ask fr yur help.
我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。
I’m writing t ask whether yu culd d me a favr.
我写信想问您是否可以帮我个忙。
I’m writing in the hpe that yu will be kind enugh t d me a favr.
我写信希望您能给我帮助。
I’m writing in the hpe f yur assistance in preparing fr the appraching singing talent shw.
我写信是希望您能帮我为即将到来的唱歌才艺大赛作准备。
二 猪肚
I am pr in vercming the difficulties in the English study n my wn.
我不擅长自行解决英语学习中遇到的困难。
I have sme difficulties in writing the articles abut hw Americans spend their hlidays and festivals.
我在撰写有关美国人如何度过节假日的短文上遇到了一些困难。
I can’t be passinate and energetic in English class s as nt t make every mment meaningful and splendid.
我英语课上没有激情不活跃，这样不能让每一分钟有意义和令人满意。
I have truble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and putting them int use in my speaking and writing, which has been annying me fr a lng time.
我在掌握高级语法方面有困难，而且不能运用到说和写中，这困扰了我很长时间。
I'm nt sure whether I have gt my ideas acrss, s I have n chice but t turn t yu in the hpe that yu can crrect the mistakes as well as give me sme favrable advice n writing.
我不确定我的想法是否已经表达清楚了，所以我只好向您求助，希望您能帮忙纠错，同时针对写作给我一些可行的建议。
As it is getting clse t the end f the semester, we need t find a parttime jb fr scial practice. I intend t apply fr ne psitin in a cmpany.
随着本学期的结束，我们需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算申请一家公司的职位。
Because it is the first time that I have written an applicatin, I wnder if there is anything t pay attentin t. S, I'm writing yu the letter, hping yu can d me a favr.
因为这是我第一次写个人申请，不知道该注意些什么。所以我写信求助，希望您能帮忙。
It is the first time fr me t apply fr a jb, and I'm nt quite familiar with the frmat f the resume and the jb applicatin, which I have prepared. S wuld yu please d me the favr t crrect the mistakes f the wrds and frmat in these materials?
这是我第一次申请工作，我对我准备的个人简历以及工作申请的格式不是很熟悉。所以您能帮我纠正材料中措辞和格式方面的错误吗？
三 豹尾
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give me sme advice n hw t prepare myself fr cllege life.
如果你能给我一些关于如何为大学生活做准备的建议，我将不胜感激。
It wuld be f great help if yu can ffer me sme valuable suggestins n hw t make a wnderful English speech.
如果您能帮我提一些关于英语演讲的建议，那将会是很大的帮助。
I'd be very grateful if yu culd d me a favr.
如果您能帮忙，我将感激不尽。
If pssible, when can I cme t meet yu at yur earliest cnvenience? Will Friday afternn d?
如果可能的话，您什么时候方便我去见您？星期五下午行吗？
【礼貌升华练一练】
Please plish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
It wuld be very nice f yu if yu culd have my draft plished at yur cnvenience.
appreciate
Please plish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
It wuld be greatly appreciated if yu culd have my draft plished at yur cnvenience.
I wuld greatly appreciate it if yu culd have my draft plished at yur cnvenience.
pssible
Please plish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
Is it pssible if yu culd have my draft plished at yur cnvenience?
【话题词汇写一写】
1. 挑战 _______________
2. 面临 (常置于句首作状语) _______________
3. 面临(常置于句首作状语) _______________
4. 恳求某人做某事 _______________
5. 恳求某人提供某物 _______________
6. 向某人恳求某物 _______________
7. 一般的 _______________
8. 采纳某人的建议 _______________
9. 取得进步 _______________
10.做某事有困难 _______________
11 .做某事很费力 _______________
12. 帮助某人摆脱困境 _______________
13. 请某人做某事 _______________
【经典考题】
假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：
1. 行程信息；
2. 钱包特征；
3. 联系方式。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely
Li Hua
【满分作文】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. On 1st Nvember, 2018 I flew business class n yur flight 753 frm China t Lndn.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I barded the plane. Hwever, n arrival in Lndn Heathrw Airprt, I fund it gne. I guess it must have slipped ut f my pcket during the flight. It is a black leather ne . What’s wrse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. Alng with the items mentined abve, the wallet cntains a family pht, my precius memry. As yu can imagine, these matter a lt t me.I’d appreciate it if yu culd help me t get it back.
Has anybdy happened t find it? Please email me at xxx@gglemail.cm
Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【习作点评】
第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. barded the plane, n arrival…, I fund it gne. it must have……Has anybdy happened t find it? Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型1】
What’s wrse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it.
更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。What’s wrse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。
【高分句型2】
I’d appreciate it if yu culd help me t get it back.
如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。
【模板仿写】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
____________________________我写信reprt the lss f my wallet. On 1st Nvember, 2018 I flew business class n yur flight 753 frm China t Lndn.
I clearly remember it was with me____________________________我一登上飞机. Hwever, n arrival in Lndn Heathrw Airprt, I fund it gne. I guess it must have slipped ut f my pcket during the flight. It is a black leather ne . __________________________更糟糕的是, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. ____________________________和上面的东西一起的, the wallet cntains a family pht, my precius memry. As yu can imagine, these matter a lt t me.____________________________我将感激不尽 if yu culd help me t get it back.
____________________________有人偶然发现它了吗？Please email me at xxx@gglemail.cm
Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【即时训练】
假如你叫李华，在光明中学读书,在学习英语的过程中你遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助。现在你给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下:
1.学习英语时遇到的问题生词多，记忆有难度
2.课文长,背诵不可能
3.语法难,理解有障碍
4.向英语老师提出帮助
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teacher.
I am writing this letter t say srry t yu fr my fault that gt yu injured.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear teacher.
My name is Lihua. I'm writing a letter t yu t ask fr sme help. I have met much difficulty in learningEnglish First, I find ur texts full f new wrds that are very difficult fr me t remember.Besides,the texts are t lng fr me t recite.What's mre, grammar is als very difficult t learn.
Faced with s much difficulty, I have t ask yu fr sme help. Wuld yu like t intrduce t us sme gd ways t learn new wrds s that we can remember them mre easily? In the meanwhile,I beg yu t teach the text mre slwly s that the average students can easily fllw yu.Als,I wuld like yu t intrduce sme rules and gd ways t learn grammar.
I’m sure that I can make great prgress in my English study with yur help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
—————求助信
【篇章结构】
1. 自我介绍，点明写作目的
2. 具体陈述所需要哪方面的帮助或者自己遇到的困难
3. 恳请对方帮助并表达谢意
【话题词汇】
challenge 挑战
facing 面临 (常置于句首作状语)
Facing s much pressure she didn't knw what t d
3. faced with面临(常置于句首作状语)
Faced with s much pressure, she culd hardly stand it.
4.beg sb.t d sth. 恳求某人做某事
5.beg sb.f sth.恳求某人提供某物
Can I beg yu f yur help?
6. beg sb.fr sth.向某人恳求某物
7. average一般的
8.fllw ne's advice 采纳某人的建议
I'll fllw yur advice and try t d my wrk well.
make prgress 取得进步
I'm sure with yur help I'll make greater prgress in my English study.
have difficulty in ding sth.做某事有困难
I have much difficulty in my English study.
11 .have truble in ding sth.做某事很费力
12. help sb.ut f difficulty帮助某人摆脱困境
13. wuld like sb.t d sth.请某人做某事
【核心句型】
一 凤头
I’m writing t ask fr yur help.
我写信是为了寻求你的帮助。
I’m writing t ask whether yu culd d me a favr.
我写信想问您是否可以帮我个忙。
I’m writing in the hpe that yu will be kind enugh t d me a favr.
我写信希望您能给我帮助。
I’m writing in the hpe f yur assistance in preparing fr the appraching singing talent shw.
我写信是希望您能帮我为即将到来的唱歌才艺大赛作准备。
二 猪肚
I am pr in vercming the difficulties in the English study n my wn.
我不擅长自行解决英语学习中遇到的困难。
I have sme difficulties in writing the articles abut hw Americans spend their hlidays and festivals.
我在撰写有关美国人如何度过节假日的短文上遇到了一些困难。
I can’t be passinate and energetic in English class s as nt t make every mment meaningful and splendid.
我英语课上没有激情不活跃，这样不能让每一分钟有意义和令人满意。
I have truble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and putting them int use in my speaking and writing, which has been annying me fr a lng time.
我在掌握高级语法方面有困难，而且不能运用到说和写中，这困扰了我很长时间。
I'm nt sure whether I have gt my ideas acrss, s I have n chice but t turn t yu in the hpe that yu can crrect the mistakes as well as give me sme favrable advice n writing.
我不确定我的想法是否已经表达清楚了，所以我只好向您求助，希望您能帮忙纠错，同时针对写作给我一些可行的建议。
As it is getting clse t the end f the semester, we need t find a parttime jb fr scial practice. I intend t apply fr ne psitin in a cmpany.
随着本学期的结束，我们需要找一份社会实践的兼职工作，我打算申请一家公司的职位。
Because it is the first time that I have written an applicatin, I wnder if there is anything t pay attentin t. S, I'm writing yu the letter, hping yu can d me a favr.
因为这是我第一次写个人申请，不知道该注意些什么。所以我写信求助，希望您能帮忙。
It is the first time fr me t apply fr a jb, and I'm nt quite familiar with the frmat f the resume and the jb applicatin, which I have prepared. S wuld yu please d me the favr t crrect the mistakes f the wrds and frmat in these materials?
这是我第一次申请工作，我对我准备的个人简历以及工作申请的格式不是很熟悉。所以您能帮我纠正材料中措辞和格式方面的错误吗？
三 豹尾
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give me sme advice n hw t prepare myself fr cllege life.
如果你能给我一些关于如何为大学生活做准备的建议，我将不胜感激。
It wuld be f great help if yu can ffer me sme valuable suggestins n hw t make a wnderful English speech.
如果您能帮我提一些关于英语演讲的建议，那将会是很大的帮助。
I'd be very grateful if yu culd d me a favr.
如果您能帮忙，我将感激不尽。
If pssible, when can I cme t meet yu at yur earliest cnvenience? Will Friday afternn d?
如果可能的话，您什么时候方便我去见您？星期五下午行吗？
【礼貌升华练一练】
Please plish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
It wuld be very nice f yu if yu culd have my draft plished at yur cnvenience.
appreciate
Please plish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
It wuld be greatly appreciated if yu culd have my draft plished at yur cnvenience.
I wuld greatly appreciate it if yu culd have my draft plished at yur cnvenience.
pssible
Please plish my draft. 请润色一下我的草稿。
Is it pssible if yu culd have my draft plished at yur cnvenience?
【话题词汇写一写】
1. 挑战 _______________
2. 面临 (常置于句首作状语) _______________
3. 面临(常置于句首作状语) _______________
4. 恳求某人做某事 _______________
5. 恳求某人提供某物 _______________
6. 向某人恳求某物 _______________
7. 一般的 _______________
8. 采纳某人的建议 _______________
9. 取得进步 _______________
10.做某事有困难 _______________
11 .做某事很费力 _______________
12. 帮助某人摆脱困境 _______________
13. 请某人做某事 _______________
【经典考题】
假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：
1. 行程信息；
2. 钱包特征；
3. 联系方式。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely
Li Hua
【满分作文】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. On 1st Nvember, 2018 I flew business class n yur flight 753 frm China t Lndn.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I barded the plane. Hwever, n arrival in Lndn Heathrw Airprt, I fund it gne. I guess it must have slipped ut f my pcket during the flight. It is a black leather ne . What’s wrse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. Alng with the items mentined abve, the wallet cntains a family pht, my precius memry. As yu can imagine, these matter a lt t me.I’d appreciate it if yu culd help me t get it back.
Has anybdy happened t find it? Please email me at xxx@gglemail.cm
Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【习作点评】
第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. barded the plane, n arrival…, I fund it gne. it must have……Has anybdy happened t find it? Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型1】
What’s wrse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it.
更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身份证和两张信用卡。What’s wrse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面一个更严重。
【高分句型2】
I’d appreciate it if yu culd help me t get it back.
如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。
【模板仿写】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
____________________________我写信reprt the lss f my wallet. On 1st Nvember, 2018 I flew business class n yur flight 753 frm China t Lndn.
I clearly remember it was with me____________________________我一登上飞机. Hwever, n arrival in Lndn Heathrw Airprt, I fund it gne. I guess it must have slipped ut f my pcket during the flight. It is a black leather ne . __________________________更糟糕的是, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. ____________________________和上面的东西一起的, the wallet cntains a family pht, my precius memry. As yu can imagine, these matter a lt t me.____________________________我将感激不尽 if yu culd help me t get it back.
____________________________有人偶然发现它了吗？Please email me at xxx@gglemail.cm
Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【即时训练】
假如你叫李华，在光明中学读书,在学习英语的过程中你遇到一些问题，想得到老师的帮助。现在你给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下:
1.学习英语时遇到的问题生词多，记忆有难度
2.课文长,背诵不可能
3.语法难,理解有障碍
4.向英语老师提出帮助
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teacher.
I am writing this letter t say srry t yu fr my fault that gt yu injured.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear teacher.
My name is Lihua. I'm writing a letter t yu t ask fr sme help. I have met much difficulty in learningEnglish First, I find ur texts full f new wrds that are very difficult fr me t remember.Besides,the texts are t lng fr me t recite.What's mre, grammar is als very difficult t learn.
Faced with s much difficulty, I have t ask yu fr sme help. Wuld yu like t intrduce t us sme gd ways t learn new wrds s that we can remember them mre easily? In the meanwhile,I beg yu t teach the text mre slwly s that the average students can easily fllw yu.Als,I wuld like yu t intrduce sme rules and gd ways t learn grammar.
I’m sure that I can make great prgress in my English study with yur help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
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