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    目录
    邀请信
    【应试秘籍】邀请信思路
    【应试秘籍】邀请信常用词块
    【应试秘籍】邀请信必背句式
    建议信
    【应试秘籍】建议信思路
    【应试秘籍】建议信常用词块
    【应试秘籍】建议信必背句式
    【抢分通关】建议信经典考题
    【抢分通关】建议信经典考题
    邀请信

    秘籍:采用三段式,分为开头段、主体段和结尾段。具体思路如下:
    开头段:开门见山表明写作意图,并向对方发出邀请。
    主体段:详细描述活动的具体内容和要求。
    结尾段:期待对方接受邀请。
    邀请信常用词块
    n behalf f sb.代表某人
    be eager/lng t d sth.渴望做某事
    invite sb. T d sth.邀请某人做某事
    gain sme insight int traditinal Chinese culture 了解中国传统文化
    have a better understanding f traditinal Chinese culture了解中国传统文化
    enrich yur experience 丰富你的经历
    braden yur hrizns/perspective 拓展你的视野
    be scheduled t d...计划做
    shw yur talent and ability 展示天赋和才能
    make sme new friends 交到新朋友
    build up yur bdy 强身健体
    stay healthy and energetic 保持健康和活力
    cultivate the team/sprts spirit 培养团队运动精神
    sharpen yur swimming skills 提高你的游泳技能
    reduce yur stress 减轻压力
    邀请信必背句式
    开头常用句
    It’s my pleasure/a great hnur/a great privilege t invite yu t jin us
    非常荣幸邀请你加入我们。
    On behalf f the Students' Unin,I am writing t invite yu t be the judge f the 10th English Speech Cntest held by ur schl
    我代表学生会,写信邀请您担任我校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛的评委。
    It is a great hnr fr me t invite yu t take part in/jin in/participate in/attend...
    我非常荣幸地邀请您参加··
    We are ging t hld a graduatin ceremny in the schl auditrium next Friday,and we feel it will be wnderful if yu can attend it.
    下周五我们将在学校礼堂举行毕业典礼,如果您能参加就太好了。
    Wuld yu like t g swimming with me?
    你愿意和我一起去游泳吗?
    Learning that yu are enthusiastic abut sth, I'd like t invite yu t jin it.
    知道你喜欢,我想邀请你加入。
    主体常用句
    As scheduled, the activity is t be held frm 9:00 a.m. t 5:00 p.m. in ur schl.
    按照计划,活动将于上午九点至下午五点在我校举行。
    It will begin at 3:00 last tw hurs,during which time 1) well-prepared cntestants will deliver their speeches.比赛将于下午三点钟开始,持续两个小时,在此期间,十位准备充分的参赛者将发表演讲。
    Here are arrangements fr this activity./Sme details as fllws.
    这是活动的安排。/一些关于.···.的细节如下。
    During the perfrmance, we will have lts f activities which yu will be interested in. First..., additin...在演出期间,我们将有很多你会感兴趣的活动。首先,其次,另外
    5.As scheduled,the meeting will be held frm 8:00 t 10:00 Saturday in...
    按计划,会议将在本周六的上午8点到10点在····.召开。
    6.The perfrmance will start with ur schl sng at 10:00 a.m.,fllwed students the activities will finish at 4:00 p.m.演出将在上午10点以校歌开始,紧接着是···.
    然后学生们将······所有的活动将在下午4点结束。
    T begin with,we ,there will be a lt f activities,such as...,which will last fr abut three hurs.首先,我们会···此外,将有很多活动,比如····..,这将持续约三个小时。
    Nt nly can it help yu gain sme insight int traditinal Chinese culture, but als it can enrich yur experience. This is such a glden pprtunity that it can't be missed.
    它不仅能让你更加了解中国传统文化,而且也能丰富你的经历。这种绝佳的机会,不容错过。
    结尾常用句
    Sincerely, We hpe yu can attend it.
    真诚地,我们盼着你能参加。
    We are lking frward t yur cming.
    我们期待着你的到来。
    We wuld feel much hnred if yu cul1 cme.
    如果您能来,我们会感到非常荣幸。
    Please give me a call r drp me a line t let me knw yur decisin.
    请尽快给我打电话或写信让我知道你的决定。
    We wuld appreciate it if yu culd cnfirm yur participatin at yur earliest cnvenience
    如果您能尽早确认参加,我们将不胜感激。
    I'd appreciate it if yu culd cnfirm yur participatin at yur early cnvenience.
    如果你能尽早确认参加,我会不胜感激。
    I d hpe yu can take my invitatin int serius cnsideratin. Eagerly lking frward t yur participatin.
    我希望你能把我的邀请认真考虑一下。热切期待你的参加。
    Eagerly lking frward t yur early reply t cnfirm yur participatin.
    热切期待你尽早确认确认参加。

    建议信

    秘籍:建议信采用三段式,分为开头段、主体段和结尾段。具体思路如下:
    开头段:表明写信目的,并提出建议。
    主体段:陈述建议的具体内容并说明理由。
    结尾段:指出采纳建议的好处并表达愿望。
    建议信常用词块
    ffer/prvide 提供,给予
    imprve 改善,提高
    apprval n.赞成,同意
    cnstructive adj. 建设性的;积极的
    cncerning prep.关于 in/with regard t关于
    relieve stress减轻压力
    cntribute t 有助于
    stick t/persist in坚持
    pur ut ne's truble t sb.向某人倾诉烦恼
    build up yur cnfidence建立你的信心
    present ne's pinins 发表意见
    be f use/benefit t sb.对某人有用/好处
    share sme advice with yu和你分享一些建议
    take my advice int accunt考虑我的建议
    fllw/take/adpt ne’s advice采纳某人的建议
    建议信必背句式
    开头常用句
    I am writing t ffer yu sme advice n hw t imprve yur spken English.
    我写信是想就如何提高英语口语水平给你一些建议。
    Yu asked me fr advice in the letter abut... and here are my suggestins. I think it wuld be a gd idea if yu culd...
    你在信中问了我一些建议,关于……以下是我的建议。如果你能做到的话,我想这将是个好主意
    With regard t the prblem yu mentined in yur last letter, my suggestins are as fllws.
    关于你上一封信中提到的问题,我的建议如下。
    I'm mre than delighted t receive yur letter asking fr my advice n... I'll make sme suggestins here.我非常 高兴收到你的来信,询问我关于……的建议。我在这里提一些建议。
    I have learned that yu have sme truble in 1 wuld like t give/ffer yu the fllwing suggestins.
    我得知你在……方面有些困难,我想给你提如下一些建议。
    主体常用句
    I think it wuld be f great benefit/very beneficial if yu...我认为如果你……将会受益匪浅。 When it cmes t such a situatin, I wuld like t suggest that... Fr ne thing... Fr anther... What's mre...
    当涉及这种情况时,我建议……一方面……另一方面……而且……
    In my pinin/Persnally/As far as I'm cncerned/Frm my pint f view, it is a gd idea t wuld be wise f yu t d... Besides, I strngly advise yu t d... Last but nt least , yu can...
    就我而言/在我看来,做……是个好主意/你做……是明智的。此外,我强烈建议你……最后但同样重要的是,你可以……
    First f all, yu shuld listen t the teacher carefully and take/make/write ntes in class s that yu can g ver yur lessns as sn as yu can after class.
    首先,你应该在课堂上认真听老师讲课并做好笔记,以便下课后可以及时复习。
    Besides, the success stries f wrld-famus peple, which are als attractive t me, help me learn a lt.
    此外,世界名人的成功范例对我也很有吸引力,帮助我学到了很多东西。
    What's mre , try t cmmunicate with yur classmates in English ut f class. Only in this way can yu imprve yur listening and spken English quickly.
    此外,试着在课堂上用英语和你的同学交流。只有这样,你才能快速提高你的英语听力和口语能力。
    结尾常用句
    I hpe yu will find these suggestins/prpsals helpful.
    我希望你现在会发现这些建议/建议会有所帮助。
    Here I am in the hpe that my advice will add a brilliant tuch t the imprved versin f ur schl English Pst.
    在此,我希望我的建议能够为我们学校的《英语报》的改进版增添精彩的一笔。
    I hpe that my suggestins are helpful fr yu anyway. I wuld be mre than happy t see imprvement.
    无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
    Whatever yu decide t d, gd luck with yur studies/wrk !
    无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运!
    邀请信
    (2024·湖南益阳·三模)
    假定你是学生会主席李华,你校计划定于6月 10 日在体育馆举办高三毕业典礼,请写封邮件邀请你校外教 David 参加,内容包括:
    1.典礼时间与地点;
    2.典礼内容;
    3.期待回复。
    注意:1.词数80 左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】
    Dear David,
    Hw is everything ging? With great excitement and delight, I am writing t invite yu t attend ur graduatin ceremny, which is scheduled t be held at 9:00 am n June 10, 2024 in the schl gym.
    There are many significant activities, which will never fail t impress yu. At the beginning, the headmaster will deliver a speech t express his sincere cngratulatins n ur graduatin. After that, t recall ur unfrgettable experiences in high schl, sme elabrate shws will be perfrmed. Besides, dn’t miss the glden mment when we will gather tgether t take phts.
    We wuld be particularly hnred by yur distinguished presence at the ceremny and we are lking frward t yur cming. Please reply t me at yur cnvenience.
    Yurs sincerely,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校外教 David写封邮件,邀请他参加学校于6月10日在体育馆举办的高三毕业典礼。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    喜悦:delight →jy
    表达:express →cnvey
    此外:besides → what’s mre
    特别:particularly →in particular
    2.句式拓展
    句式转换
    原句:With great excitement and delight, I am writing t invite yu t attend ur graduatin ceremny, which is scheduled t be held at 9:00 am n June 10, 2024 in the schl gym.
    拓展句:With great excitement and delight, I am writing t invite yu t attend ur graduatin ceremny, scheduled t be held at 9:00 am n June 10, 2024 in the schl gym.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】There are many significant activities, which will never fail t impress yu.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
    【高分句型2】After that, t recall ur unfrgettable experiences in high schl, sme elabrate shws will be perfrmed.(运用了不定式短语作目的状语)
    (2024·全国·二模)
    假定你是李华,最近你校将举办“校园冰雪文化节(Campus Ice and Snw Culture Festival)”活动。请给你校国际交换生Bb写一封电子邮件,告知此事并邀请他参加,内容包括:
    1. 活动内容;
    2.相关事宜。
    注意
    1. 词数80左右;
    2. 请按如下格式作答。
    Dear Bb,
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】
    Dear Bb,
    I hpe yu are ding well. I am excited t share with yu that ur schl will be hsting a special event called the “Campus Ice and Snw Culture Festival”.
    Varius activities such as ice sculpture exhibitins, snwball fights, ice skating, snw painting, live music perfrmances will be held there. It prmises t be a fun and memrable event fr everyne. By the way, the festival will take place n December 15th at the schl square. It will be held n ur schl playgrund, staring at 2:00 pm, lasting fr abut three hurs.
    I wuld like t extend a warm invitatin t yu t cme and jin us at the festival. It wuld be wnderful t have yu be a part f this celebratin f winter culture. Lking frward t seeing yu there! Warm regards!
    Yurs
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请函。要求考生告知并邀请国际交换生Bb参加学校将举办的“校园冰雪文化节(Campus Ice and Snw Culture Festival)”活动。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    举办:hst→held
    各种各样的:varius→varieties f
    难忘的:memrable→unfrgettable
    渴望:lk frward t→anticipate
    2.词汇积累
    简单句变复合句
    原句:Varius activities such as ice sculpture exhibitins, snwball fights, ice skating, snw painting, live music perfrmances will be held there.
    拓展句:Varius activities which include ice sculpture exhibitins, snwball fights, ice skating, snw painting, live music perfrmances will be held there.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】I am excited t share with yu that ur schl will be hsting a special event called the “Campus Ice and Snw Culture Festival”.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和过去分词作定语)
    【高分句型2】It will be held n ur schl playgrund, staring at 2:00 pm, lasting fr abut three hurs.(运用了现在分词作状语)
    (23-24高三·重庆永川·期中)
    假定你是李华,得知你校的外教Mr Smith很喜欢中国传统文化,想邀请他一起过端午节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:
    1. 时间;
    2. 活动安排(在家包粽子,悬挂艾草,赏龙舟赛);
    3. 再次表达期许。
    注意:
    1. 写作词数应为120左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    参考词汇:端午节: the Dragn Bat Festival 挂艾草:mxa grass 龙舟赛:dragn-bat racing
    Dear Mr Smith,
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】
    Dear Mr Smith,
    I’m Li Hua, a student f yur English class. Knwing that yu are very interested in Chinese traditinal culture, I’m writing t invite yu t cme t my hme t celebrate the Dragn Bat Festival.
    The festival is typically celebrated n May 5, a time fr family reunin. After yur cming, we’ll make zngzi tgether and have a big dinner with my whle family. Then, I’d like t hang the mxa grass n the dr with yu t pray fr disaster relief. Finally, we are ging t appreciate the dragn-bat racing in memry f Qu Yuan, which will surely leave a deep impressin n yu.
    I d hpe yu can accept my invitatin. Please infrm me f yur arrival in advance if pssible s that I culd g and pick yu up at schl. Lking frward t yur early reply.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校的外教Mr Smith很喜欢中国传统文化,考生想邀请他一起过端午节,要求考生按照要求给他写一封信。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    对……感兴趣:be interested in→ g in fr
    欣赏:appreciate→ enjy
    为了纪念:in memry f→ in hnr f
    当然:surely→ certainly
    2.句式拓展
    同义句转换
    原句: Knwing that yu are very interested in Chinese traditinal culture, I’m writing t invite yu t cme t my hme t celebrate the Dragn Bat Festival.
    拓展句:Because I knw that yu are very interested in Chinese traditinal culture, I’m writing t invite yu t cme t my hme t celebrate the Dragn Bat Festival.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】Knwing that yu are very interested in Chinese traditinal culture, I’m writing t invite yu t cme t my hme t celebrate the Dragn Bat Festival.(运用了现在分词Knwing作状语、that引导的宾语从句)
    【高分句型2】Finally, we are ging t appreciate the dragn-bat racing in memry f Qu Yuan, which will surely leave a deep impressin n yu.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
    4.(23-24高三下·河南·阶段练习)
    假定你是李华,得知你的交换生同学Amanda今年将第一次在中国过春节。请你给她发一封电子邮件,邀请她到你家做客。内容包括:
    1. 表示欢迎;
    2. 发出邀请;
    3. 期待回复。
    注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
    2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
    Dear Amanda,
    Hw are yu ding?
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】
    Dear Amanda,
    Hw are yu ding? Knwing that yu will spend the Spring Festival in China, I’d like t extend a warm welcme t yu.
    As far as I knw, yu will celebrate the traditinal Chinese festival here fr the first time, which may leave yu slightly cnfused. Since where yu live is nt far frm my hme, it wuld be a great pleasure fr me t have yu as the distinguished guest f ur family. If yu cme, I can intrduce varius custms abut the festival t yu.
    I’d be mre than glad if yu culd accept my invitatin. Lking frward t yur early reply.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生同学Amanda写封电子邮件,邀请她到你家做客。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    困惑的:cnfused→puzzled
    各种各样的:varius→a variety f
    高兴的:glad→delighted
    据我所知:as far as I knw→t my knwledge
    2.句式拓展
    同义句转换
    原句:If yu cme, I can intrduce varius custms abut the festival t yu.
    拓展句:If yu cme, I can intrduce varius custms which are abut the festival t yu.
    【点睛】[高分句型1] As far as I knw, yu will celebrate the traditinal Chinese festival here fr the first time, which may leave yu slightly cnfused. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
    [高分句型2] Since where yu live is nt far frm my hme, it wuld be a great pleasure fr me t have yu as the distinguished guest f ur family. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句和where引导的主语从句)
    (2024·云南·模拟预测)
    假定你是李华。你的英国交换生朋友Chris对中国少数民族(ethnic minrities)服饰非常感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件,邀请他一同参观中国少数民族服饰展,内容要点如下:
    1.时间地点;
    2.参观内容;
    3. 发出邀请。
    注意:
    1.写作词数应为80左右;
    2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
    Dear Chris,
    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】
    Dear Chris,
    Knwing that yu’re keen n the cstumes f the ethnic minrities f China, I’m writing t invite yu t visit an exhibitin f ethnic cstumes.
    The exhibitin will be held frm March 15 t April 15 in the Prvincial Museum, where varius ethnic cstumes will be n display, each f them featuring the characteristics f a natinality. While admiring the cstumes, yu’ll have a better understanding f the custms, culture as well as the histry f different natinalities living in ur cuntry.
    I’m sure that yu will have fun at the exhibitin. I’m expecting yur arrival.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生朋友Chris写一封邮件,邀请他一同参观中国少数民族服饰展。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    举行:be held→take place
    各种各样的:varius→a variety f
    欣赏:admire→appreciate
    玩得开心:have fun→ enjy neself
    2.句式拓展
    改写同义句
    原句:Knwing that yu’re keen n the cstumes f the ethnic minrities f China, I’m writing t invite yu t visit an exhibitin f ethnic cstumes.
    拓展句:Because I knw that yu’re keen n the cstumes f the ethnic minrities f China, I’m writing t invite yu t visit an exhibitin f ethnic cstumes.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】The exhibitin will be held frm March 15 t April 15 in the Prvincial Museum, where varius ethnic cstumes will be n display, each f them featuring the characteristics f a natinality.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
    【高分句型2】While admiring the cstumes, yu’ll have a better understanding f the custms, culture as well as the histry f different natinalities living in ur cuntry.(运用了while引导的状语从句的省略)
    【高分句型3】I’m sure that yu will have fun at the exhibitin.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
    建议信
    (2024·山东德州·一模)
    假定你是李华,从上学期以来,外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动,你觉得活动很好,但存在不足之处。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
    1.你对活动的评价;
    2.说明问题并提出改进建议。
    注意:
    1.写作词数应为80个左右;
    2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
    Dear Mary,
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】
    Dear Mary,
    I really appreciate the activity “Pre-class 3-minute English Speech”, which bsts ur speaking skills and cnfidence. Hwever, I’ve nticed sme prblems needing t be slved.
    The students crazy abut English are always seizing the pprtunity t present themselves, leaving shy students n chance. S I suggest making sme adjustments. First, students can take turns giving presentatins t guarantee everyne an equal chance t express themselves. Mrever, yu can require students t review each ther’s speeches in grups, which will nt nly greatly reduces the errr rate but als imprves their writing skills.
    I'd appreciate it if my advice culd be cnsidered.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。从上学期以来,外教Mary开展了“课前3分钟演讲”活动,考生觉得活动很好,但存在不足之处,要求考生按照要求给外教写一封邮件。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    欣赏:appreciate→ admire
    提高:bst→ prmte
    解决:slve→ settle
    抓住:seize→ grasp
    2.句式拓展
    简单句变复合句
    原句:Hwever, I’ve nticed sme prblems needing t be slved.
    拓展句:Hwever, I’ve nticed sme prblems, which need t be slved.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】I really appreciate the activity “Pre-class 3-minute English Speech”, which bsts ur speaking skills and cnfidence.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
    【高分句型2】The students crazy abut English are always seizing the pprtunity t present themselves, leaving shy students n chance.(运用了现在分词leaving作状语)
    (2024·全国·模拟预测)
    假定你是李华,你校交换生Gerge给你发来邮件,说他在学习唐诗时遇到了一些困难,希望你能给他提供一些建议。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
    1. 给出建议;2. 表达祝愿。
    注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
    Dear Gerge,
    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Best wishes,
    Li Hua
    【答案】
    Dear Gerge,
    I’m srry t hear that yu’ve experienced sme difficulties while studying Tang petry. I’m happy t ffer sme advice t help yu.
    Firstly, if I were yu, I wuld read translatins f Tang pems t get a better understanding f the pems’ meaning. Secndly, it makes sense t fcus n understanding the histrical and cultural backgrund f the pems t appreciate the petic language and imagery. Thirdly, yu’d better try t read the pems ut lud t better understand the pems’ structure. Finally, why nt jin a study grup that can help yu with yur studies?
    Dn’t be discuraged. With time and effrt, I’m sure yu will be able t achieve yur gals.
    Best wishes,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Gerge回信,给他提供一些学习唐诗的建议。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    首先:firstly→first f all
    集中:fcus n→cncentrate n
    沮丧的:discuraged→upset
    能够:be able t→be capable f
    2.句式拓展
    同义句转换
    原句:With time and effrt, I’m sure yu will be able t achieve yur gals.
    拓展句:As lng as yu try with time and effrt, I’m sure yu will be able t achieve yur gals.
    【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m srry t hear that yu’ve experienced sme difficulties while studying Tang petry. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
    [高分句型2] Firstly, if I were yu, I wuld read translatins f Tang pems t get a better understanding f the pems’ meaning. (运用了虚拟语气)
    3.(23-24高三上·江西南昌·期中)
    假设你是某国际学校的李华,在上个月的体育节中,由于部分赛事安排在中午午休期间,同学们的热情欢呼以及赛场噪音,严重影响了你和其他同学的午间休息,请你向学生会写一份信。
    1. 写信目的; 2. 说明情况;3. 提出建议。
    要求 1. 词数80左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    Dear Student Unin,
    I’m Li Hua.
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】
    Dear Student Unin,
    I’m Li Hua. I’m writing t address a cncern abut the recent sprts day at ur schl.
    While enjyable, it caused disruptins t ur lunch break. Certain events were scheduled during the midday break, resulting in enthusiastic cheering and nise frm the sprts field. This greatly affected ur ability t rest and recharge. I understand the imprtance f prmting an active schl envirnment, but it’s vital t ensure students have a chance t rest.
    I suggest rescheduling these events t afternns r weekends s that all students can enjy withut cmprmising their lunch break. Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。在上个月的体育节中,由于部分赛事安排在中午午休期间,同学们的热情欢呼以及赛场噪音,严重影响了你和其他同学的午间休息。要求考生给学生会写一封信说明情况,并提出建议。
    【详解】1.词汇积累
    处理:address→deal with
    导致:cause → lead t
    影响:affect→ influence
    建议:suggestin→ advice
    2.句式拓展
    简单句变复合句
    原句: I’m writing t address a cncern abut the recent sprts day at ur schl.
    拓展句: I’m writing t address a cncern abut the recent sprts day at ur schl, which has been bthering us.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】Certain events were scheduled during the midday break, resulting in enthusiastic cheering and nise frm the sprts field.(运用了现在分词作状语的结构)
    【高分句型2】I suggest rescheduling these events t afternns r weekends s that all students can enjy withut cmprmising their lunch break. (运用了s that引导状语从句)
    4.(23-24高三下·辽宁大连·阶段练习)
    假定你是李华,你们学校将举办主题为“校园最美,因为有你”(Mst Beautiful Campus, Thanks t Yu)的海报设计大赛,学生作品将在校内展出,你的好朋友Ryan,现就他的参赛作品初稿征求你的意见。请回复邮件,内容包括:
    1. 提出存在的问题;
    2. 给出修改建议。
    注意:
    1. 写作词数应为80左右;
    2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
    Dear Ryan,
    ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【答案】
    Dear Ryan,
    Having reviewed yur initial draft fr the pster design cmpetitin n “Mst Beautiful Campus, Thanks t Yu”, I’m writing t ffer sme suggestins fr imprvement.
    Firstly, yur design seems t lack sme tuching stries, which can vividly shwcase hw students are trying their best t beautify ur campus, frm their wrking hard t civilized behavirs. Additinally, sme f the text n the pster is difficult t read and recgnize due t fnt (字体/字型) chice and size. Therefre, I’d like t prpse selecting a cnvincing example f students keeping the schl envirnment harmnius and refreshing, clean and tidy by starting with small things. And it’s beneficial t chse a clean and easy-t-read fnt, simplifying the layut by remving sme unnecessary elements.
    I hpe my feedback is helpful. Gd luck with yur design. Yur revised wrk is highly expected.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    参考范文 2
    Dear Ryan,
    I hpe this letter finds yu well. S delighted t receive yur first draft fr the pster design cmpetitin themed “Mst Beautiful Campus, Thanks t Yu”, I’m writing t brief yu n the nticeable prblems and ffer sme suggestins fr imprvement.
    Fabulus as yur wrk is, there’s still smething t be imprved. T begin with, the theme f the pster, presented in yur pster, fails t fully raise/aruse/enhance students’ awareness f lving and maintaining ur campus sustainably, which shuld be highlighted, fr it is what the judges lk frward t. In additin, as fr the layut f the pster, which was a little bit chatic, if yu put them in a certain rder r refer t specific display, the verall view wuld be greatly/significantly imprved.
    I hpe my suggestins are f sme help t yur imprvement. Yur revised wrk is highly expected.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给好朋友Ryan写封邮件,就他的参赛作品初稿提出意见。
    【详解】1. 词汇积累
    提供某人某物:ffer sb. sth.→prvide sb. with sth.
    首先:firstly→t begin with
    尽最大努力做某事:try ne’s best t d sth.→spare n effrt t d sth.
    因此:therefre→as a result
    2. 句式拓展
    简单句变复合句
    原句:Additinally, sme f the text n the pster is difficult t read and recgnize due t fnt (字体/字型) chice and size.
    拓展句:Additinally, sme f the text n the pster is difficult t read and recgnize due t fnt (字体/字型) chice and size, which will leave a bad impressin t the judges.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】Having reviewed yur initial draft fr the pster design cmpetitin n “Mst Beautiful Campus, Thanks t Yu”, I’m writing t ffer sme suggestins fr imprvement. (运用了现在分词的完成式作状语)
    【高分句型2】Firstly, yur design seems t lack sme tuching stries, which can vividly shwcase hw students are trying their best t beautify ur campus, frm their wrking hard t civilized behavirs. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
    (23-24高三下·全国·阶段练习)
    假定你是李华,最近收到好友Ben来信,信中说他因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
    1. 对使用人工智能完成作业的看法;
    2. 你的建议。
    注意:
    1. 词数80词左右;
    2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【答案】
    Dear Ben,
    I’m srry t learn abut yur current truble regarding the use f AI tls fr yur assignment. I can fully relate t yur situatin as I nce faced similar temptatins t manage heavy academic wrklads. Hwever, AI shuld never replace ur wn intellectual effrts.
    As a scientist nce said, “Our intelligence is what makes us human, and AI is an extensin f that quality.” While AI can assist in certain areas, ver reliance n it undermines the essence f learning and cmprmise academic integrity. Therefre, I suggest yu imprve yur wrk withut slely depending n AI tls and have an pen cnversatin with yur teacher, clarifying yur intentins and demnstrating yur cmmitment t genuine learning.
    Learning is nt just abut cmpleting tasks but als abut the prcess f acquiring knwledge. Wish yu all the best.
    Yurs,
    Li Hua
    【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为使用人工智能完成作业而受到老师批评的好友Ben写一封回信,阐述对使用人工智能完成作业的看法并提出建议。
    【详解】1. 词汇积累
    理解:relate t→understand
    代替;取代:replace→take the place f
    因此:therefre→thus
    建议:suggest→advise
    2. 句式拓展
    简单句变复合句
    原句:I’m srry t learn abut yur current truble regarding the use f AI tls fr yur assignment.
    拓展句:I’m srry t learn abut yur current truble which is cncerning the use f AI tls fr yur assignment.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】I can fully relate t yur situatin as I nce faced similar temptatins t manage heavy academic wrklads. (运用了as引导的状语从句)
    【高分句型2】While AI can assist in certain areas, ver reliance n it undermines the essence f learning and cmprmise academic integrity. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句)
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