专题25 话题写作--2024年中考英语【热点·重点·难点】专练（江苏专用）

这是一份专题25 话题写作--2024年中考英语【热点·重点·难点】专练（江苏专用），共35页。
重点掌握话题写作的写作步骤和内容要点。解答此类试题的关键，是要正确理解中考常考的话题有哪些以及这些话题可以怎么展开论述，适当地运用课本上学过的句式，参考部分内容。
掌握好话题写作这个题型对于中考的综合拿分非常重要。考生需要在平时做题中进行考点的积累和运用。
知识点1：命题式文章
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Persn I Want t Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】
The Persn I Want t Thank
In my junir schl life, many peple have helped me. I thank them very much. But the persn I want t thank mst is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with lng hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lt. She ften helps me with my English. When I am in truble, she always encurages me t face my difficulties and gives me gd advice. I still remember that nce I failed in an imprtant English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and tld me sme gd ways t imprve my English. With her help, I made great prgress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful fr all that she has dne fr me. She has a great influence n me, and her help is very useful fr my future develpment.
【解析】本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。
我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。
要点如下：
1.变化是什么？
2.变化过程是什么？
3.你从中得到了什么启发？
要求：
1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。
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【答案】
We grw up in change. Grwth makes ur life full f meaning. Lking back n the three years f junir high schl, I have experienced many changes in my study, thughts, persnality, life and s n. The biggest persnal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in lve with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjy bks at all. Later, my mther always read stries fr me and bught me bks. Gradually, I began t lve reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is als a fantastic way t enjy my free time.
Bks are my friends. And they will benefit me a lt.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
知识点2：半命题式文章
学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“One Thing I will D fr ________”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛，分享你将为朋友、家人、学校或社会做的一件事。
注意事项：
（1）补全题目，如“my friend, my parents, ur schl”等；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One Thing I will D fr ________
I have made great prgress in the past three years. Nw I want t d ne thing fr_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
One Thing I will D fr My Parents
I have made great prgress in the past three years. Nw I want t d ne thing fr my parents.
I want t make a breakfast fr my parents. I’m ging t the supermarket n Saturday afternn t buy what I need fr breakfast. Then, the next mrning I will get up early s as nt t wake my parents. I will make my mther’s favrite sandwiches and cffee. My father likes t eat tmat beef ndles fr breakfast, I will learn hw t ck n my phne. Make sure they can have a delicius breakfast after getting up.
I have had this idea in my heart fr many years, but I never get the chance t d it. In the past few years, my parents always gt up early t prepare breakfast fr me. It is their lve and supprt that make me better, s I want t return them with the same lve. I lve them.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：根据情景综合运用各种时态，注意主谓保持一致性；
③提示：文章写作要点已给出，注意将作文标题补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己想为谁做一件事；
第二步，具体阐述自己想做什么事，以及怎样做这件事；
第三步，阐述自己为什么想做这件事。
[亮点词汇]
①want t d sth.想要做某事
②get up起床
③make sure确保
④prepare sth. fr sb.为某人准备某物
[高分句型]
①I’m ging t the supermarket n Saturday afternn t buy what I need fr breakfast. （what引导的宾语从句）
②It is their lve and supprt that make me better（It is+被强调部分+that+其他）
书面表达（满分15分）
76.
There must be a hbby that gives yu certain things, such as happiness, cnfidence, creativity, curage, strength, and the list can g n. Pick ne t cmplete the title and write an article abut 80 wrds.
注意:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
________ Give(s) Me ________
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【答案】
Reading gives me happiness
Many students take study as task and they dn’t have much passin abut gaining the knwledge frm bks. As teenagers, they like t hang ut fr fun instead f sitting in the classrm. But I enjy reading s much.
Nwadays, peple always say they want t see the wrld as it is s big. Thugh I can’t travel arund the wrld, fr the lack f mney and the age, I can see arund the wrld thrugh these bks. I get t knw different cultures and see the diversity f the wrld. It’s full f charm and inspires me t searching the amazing nature.
Reading bks brings me great happiness.
【解析】该题目属于材料作文写作，首先根据材料补充题目，然后介绍阅读带给自己的快乐，可适当发挥。
本文应以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍阅读带来的快乐时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
知识点3：观点式文章
疫情期间，同学们不得不在家上网课。针对网课，在学生调查中发现存在两种不同观点，请以 I Prefer t Study at Schl/at Hme（选择你赞同的一方面）为题写一篇短文。
提示词： 网课 nline curse 新冠疫情 crnavirus pandemic
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数 90 词左右；
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I Prefer t Study __________
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【答案】
I Prefer t Study at Schl
T be hnest, I prefer t study at schl.
I used t think hw great it wuld be if we culd study at hme. We wuldn’t have t get up s early and we wuld have mre free time t d ur wn things. Hwever, the truth is nt what I thught. Studying at hme seems t be busier than at schl.
Nw, I enjy studying at schl. First, I think face-t-face cmmunicatin is better fr learning. Secnd, it’s gd fr us t study with classmates. We have lts f things in cmmn and we can share things with each ther and help each ther.
In a wrd, I really hate studying nline again. I guess my classmates wuld prefer t study at schl like me.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目是一篇材料作文。根据“I Prefer t Study at Schl/at Hme”来选择一个自己赞同的一方并以此为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。第一段选择赞同的观点；第二段描述过去的想法；第三段讲述自己为什么选择这种观点的理由；第四段进行总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
英语校刊TEENS 正在进行 “手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Shuld we bring mbile phnes t schl?
A survey n teenage mbile phne use at schl is carried ut by TEENS. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Shuld we bring mbile phnes t schl?
A survey n teenage mbile phne use at schl is carried ut by TEENS. Are middle schl students allwed t bring them t schl?
Sme students think we can bring mbile phnes t schl because it’s cnvenient fr parents t cntact us. When we have difficulty in study, mbile phnes can be ur teacher and help us with ur prblems.
Every cin has tw sides. Sme students use mbile phnes in a wrng way. They spend a lt f time chatting nline, as a result, they can’t fcus n study. And t much time n screens des harm t ur eyes. Mre and mre students have pr eyesight.
In my pinin, I agree t bring smart phnes t schl. Thugh mbile phnes can be used in schl, I think I wn’t turn it n until class is ver. Since there are lts f useful websites fr English learning, I will g there t practice my English.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。分成四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍支持者的看法；第三段介绍反对者的看法；第四段介绍自己的观点。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。
初中生活即将结束，你将迎来新一阶段的学习生活。在新的阶段，是否寄宿成为很多学生面临的问题。请根据以下表格，谈谈你的选择及其优缺点。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数 80 左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
We are ging t graduate frm ur middle schl and we will make a chice between being a day student and a barding student. In my pinin, I prefer t be____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
We are ging t graduate frm ur middle schl and we will make a chice between being a day student and a barding student. In my pinin. I prefer t be a barding student because its advantages verweight its disadvantages.
Althugh I may nt have enugh private space r enugh time t stay with my parents. I can get mre frm living at schl.
Firstly, if I chse t live at schl, there is n need t spend time between my hme and schl s that I can save much time t study. Secndly, it can help me develp a gd habit f study and living. Last but nt the least, it is a gd chance fr me t learn hw t behave prperly and get alng well with thers.
In cnclusin, whether t be a barding student r a day student is a persnal decisin. Hwever, cnsidering the cnvenience, time saving and mre chances f develping friendship, I insist n living at schl.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格提供信息阐述自己是愿意成为一个走读学生，还是寄宿学生，并阐述优缺点。
2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主；首先承接开头，点出自己的选择；其次阐述为什么选择做一个走读生/寄宿生，这样的选择有什么优点；最后进行总结。注意语意连贯，无拼写和语法错误。
（2023年江苏省常州市中考英语试题）
七、书面表达（共1题；满分15分）
57. 当前，有些学生忽视倾听的作用，针对该情况，请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，阐述倾听的重要性。
要点：
1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Listening carefully plays an imprtant rle in ur life.
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【答案】
Listening carefully plays an imprtant rle in ur life.
In class, we shuld listen t teachers carefully. It can nt nly help us have a better understanding f what the teachers say, but als it can imprve learning efficiency. What’s mre, we shuld listen t ur classmates carefully. It can shw that we are listening t ur classmates and we care abut them s that it can strengthen ur relatinship.
We shuld be gd listeners at hme. We shuld listen t ur parents carefully in rder t knw abut ur parents’ ideas and avid arguing with each ther.
In a wrd, listening t thers carefully is imprtant in ur daily life, s we shuld learn t becme gd listeners.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍倾听的重要性。
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
第三步，介绍在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①nt als 不但……而且
②care abut 关心
③in rder t 为了
[高分句型]
①It can shw that we are listening t ur classmates and we care abut them s that it can strengthen ur relatinship. (that引导的宾语从句，以及s that引导的目的状语从句)
②We shuld listen t ur parents carefully in rder t knw abut ur parents’ ideas and avid arguing with each ther. (动词不定式作目的状语)
（2023年江苏省连云港市中考英语试题）
七、书面表达（共1小题；满分25分）
71. 走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“G Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcme t Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。
注意：
（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcme t Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua frm Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like t recmmend my hmetwn t yu.
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【答案】
Welcme t Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua frm Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like t recmmend my hmetwn t yu.
Lianyungang lies in the nrth-east f Jiangsu. It’s famus fr many places f interest. Here yu can visit Huagu Muntain, the hme f the Mnkey King. Yu can als g t the Suma Bay t enjy the beautiful sea. It’s cl in summer.
Mrever, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Lcal peple are friendly enugh t help yu. Remember t try ur lcal fd. I’m sure yu will enjy it.
Dn’t miss Lianyungang when yu attend “G Jiangsu”. Welcme t ur hmetwn. We’re lking frward t meeting yu sn.
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点；
第二步，介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物；
第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。
[亮点词汇]
①be famus fr因……而著名
②mrever而且
③lk frward t ding期待做
[高分句型]
Dn’t miss Lianyungang when yu attend “G Jiangsu”.（when引导的时间状语从句
（2023年江苏省南通市中考英语试题）
七、书面表达（满分25分）
76. 热心公益，积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动，用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。

注意：1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇：respnsibility n. 责任；义务
The summer hliday is cming. In rder t develp my sense f respnsibility, I plan t have a scial practice activity.
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【答案】
The summer hliday is cming. In rder t develp my sense f respnsibility, I plan t have a scial practice activity. I’m ging t take part in a vluntary activity in Old Peple’s Hme.
First, I can talk t the ld abut smething interesting r take a walk with them. Then, I may give them a great perfrmance. Finally, I can d whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrms r flding clthes fr the ld.
I believe these activities will nt nly make the ld happy but als help me learn a lt. Isn’t it meaningful?
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应选择一种社会行为，介绍今年暑假准备做的社会实践活动，要包含要点“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍做什么，为何做；
第二步，介绍怎么做；
第三步，再次点明活动的益处，暗含这么做的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②such as 例如
③fld clthes 叠衣服
④nt nly ... but als ... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Finally, I can d whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrms r flding clthes fr the ld.（whatever引导宾语从句）
②Isn’t it meaningful?（否定疑问句）
（2023年江苏省苏州市中考英语试题）
第七部分书面表达（共1题；满分25分）
57. Happy Hme Club本期的主题是“Hw t make Suzhu mre beautiful”，你打算以“Starting frm me and nw”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 触动你的一件事情；
2. 这件事给你的启示；
3. 你的倡议。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右。
2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Starting frm me and nw
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【答案】
Starting frm me and nw
Last weekend, I went t the city park with my classmates. When we gt there, we were amazed that there were different kinds f rubbish n the grund. We felt very sad abut that. The city is ur hme, s we shuld try ur best t keep the city clean.
First f all, we shuld prtect ur envirnment. Dn’t thrw rubbish arund r spit anywhere. We’d better plant mre trees t make the air clean. Secnd, we are suppsed t be friendly and helpful t thers. Third, we ught t bey the traffic rules. Dn’t ride t fast r play n the street. Last but nt least, remember t save energy. Turn ff the lights and taps in time.
As lng as we try ur best and starting frm me and nw, I believe Suzhu will becme mre and mre beautiful.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；
第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds f 各种各样的
②be suppsed t d sth. 应该做某事
③remember t d sth. 记得做某事
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①When we gt there, we were amazed that there were different kinds f rubbish n the grund.（when引导时间状语从句）
②We’d better plant mre trees t make the air clean. （“sb. had better d sth.”表建议的句型）
③I believe Suzhu will becme mre and mre beautiful.（宾语从句）
（2023年江苏省泰州市中考英语试题）
书面表达（满分25分）
66. 泰州是著名的教育之乡。你的英国朋友想了解泰州的教育，想请你用英语介绍一下，你列出如下提纲：
1. 良好的教育环境（校园美丽，名人众多……写1-2点）；
2. 优秀的老师；
3. 自己的学习表现。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数 100 左右。
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【答案】
I am prud t be a student in Taizhu. There is a gd educatinal envirnment. The campus here is beautiful, and there are many celebrities, such as Hu Yuan, Wang Anshi and s n. There are als many libraries and famus universities.
The teachers here are als excellent. Mst f them are teachers wh graduated frm famus universities, and sme even returned frm studying abrad. They have advanced teaching methds and teaching ideas. They als prduce a large number f excellent students.
In additin t learning cultural knwledge, I als jin many clubs, such as basketball club, chess club, dancing club and s n. Here I nt nly learn cultural knwledge, but als learn a lt f life philsphy.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍泰州的教育，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍泰州良好的教育环境；
第二步，介绍优秀的老师；
第三步，介绍自己的学习表现。
[亮点词汇]
①be prud f为……感到自豪
②graduate frm毕业于
③a large number f许多
[高分句型]
①Mst f them are teachers wh graduated frm famus universities, and sme even returned frm studying abrad.（wh引导的定语从句）
②Here I nt nly learn cultural knwledge, but als learn a lt f life philsphy.（nt als...连接并列结构）
（2023年江苏省盐城市中考英语试题）
(二)书面表达。(满分20分)
66. 在人生的旅程中，亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行，助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with Yu”的征文比赛，请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。
注意事项：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Being with Yu
Yu’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with yu, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Being with Yu
Yu’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with yu, my English teacher, Miss Li. Yu are very kind and hard-wrking. Yu are s helpful that yu are ready t help almst every student in ur class.
Tw years ag, I was afraid t speak English and was pr at English. But yu tried yur best t help me slve my prblem. Thanks t yur help, I made great prgress in my English study. Nw I can speak English in public and dn’t feel nervus any mre.
Yu teach me nt nly t learn but als t be a kind and warm-hearted persn. I hpe I’ll be with yu frever.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品；
第二步，按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因，至少给出两、三个原因，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready t help sb乐于帮助某人
②thanks t多亏，由于
③nt…any mre不再
④nt nly…but als…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Yu are s helpful that yu are ready t help almst every student in ur class.（s…that引导的结果状语从句）
②I hpe I’ll be with yu frever.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
（2023年江苏省扬州市中考英语试题）
B. 写作（计20分）
76. 为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了Getting clse t traditinal Chinese culture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。
要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a histry f abut 2,300 years in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Kites
Kites have a histry f abut 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mzi in the Warring States perid. He made a bird ut f wd. It was the first kite in histry. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamb t make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the inventin f paper, peple began t use paper t make kites. Kites have als begun t take n different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and s n.
The Wrld Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandng Prvince. There are many grand kite cmpetitins held there every year. Peple all ver the wrld want t g there. Flying kites is deeply lved by peple. It is a very ppular utdr activity. Every weekend, I can see many peple flying kites in the park. They play happily. But the kites we fly nw are all bught frm stres. Few peple make their wn kites.
I believe that as a traditinal Chinese handicraft kites shuld cntinue t be passed dwn. We shuld prtect traditinal Chinese handicrafts.
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点；
第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况；
第三步，最后提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① with the inventin f paper随着纸的发明
② take n呈现
③ all ver the wrld全世界
[高分句型]
① I believe that as a traditinal Chinese handicraft, kites shuld cntinue t be passed dwn.（宾语从句）
② But the kites we fly nw are all bught frm stres.（定语从句）
1.（2023年南通市启东市中考一模英语试题）
七、书面表达(本题满分25分)
76. 时光荏苒，光阴似箭。在三年的初中生活里，你肯定遇到过许多良师益友，其中谁会是你最难忘的人呢？请以“The Mst Unfrgettable Persn”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你和他（她）之间的故事。
注意：
1. 内容必须包括所给的提示要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
The Mst Unfrgettable Persn
Hw time flies! I’ll graduate frm my middle schl sn. Over the past three years, I’ve met lts f imprtant persns.
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【答案】
The Mst Unfrgettable Persn
Hw time flies! I’ll graduate frm middle my schl sn. Over the past three years, I’ve met lts f imprtant persns. Amng them, my deskmate Mary is the mst unfrgettable persn fr me.
Her smile is s bright that she wn the heart f mine when I first met her. What’s mre, Mary is always ready t help thers wh get int truble. She has changed me a lt since we became deskmates. I used t be lazy and always made a great mess n my desk. And I was always mad when lking fr my exercise bks and test papers. She ften reminded me t tidy my desk. Smetimes she even helped me lk fr things. Gradually, I frmed the gd habit f putting everything in rder.
T me, Mary is just like the bright light in my life. She has left me many happy memries and I will never frget her.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的关键信息，结合给出的三个问题来介绍自己最难忘的人。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明最难忘的人是谁；
第二步，具体介绍这个人为何是最难忘的；
第三步，介绍自己对这个人的感觉。
[亮点词汇]
①lts f 许多
②be ready t d sth. 准备好做某事
③get int truble 遇见麻烦
④used t be 过去曾经是
⑤lk fr 寻找
⑥frm the gd habit f 养成……的好习惯
[高分句型]
①Her smile is s bright that she wn the heart f mine when I first met her.（that引导结果状语从句；when引导时间状语从句）
②What’s mre, Mary is always ready t help thers wh get int truble.（wh引导定语从句）
2.（2023年无锡市惠山区省锡中中考二模英语试题）
八、书面表达 （本大题共20分）
65. 生活中充满美好的事物，需要品味，更值得分享。相信你也有想和我们一起分享的东西，比如：趣事、美食、电影、电视、旅游……，请你以“________ I’d like t share with yu”为题写一篇短文，来参加我们的征文比赛吧！内容须包括：介绍一个你想分享的东西，说说你分享的理由。
注意事项：1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右；
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
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【答案】
A bk I’d like t share with yu
Bks are the ladder f human prgress. I wuld like t share my favurite bk The Adventures f Tm Sawyer with yu.
The stry is filled with adventures and lve. It is written by Mark Twain. Tm, the her f the stry, is lively and clever. He and his best friend run away t an island. After they adventure n the island, they cme back hme safely. What has impressed me mst is that Tm can vercme fear bravely.
Frm Tm, I have learned bravery and kindness. The bk is s interesting that it is well wrth reading.
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍自己最喜欢的书；
第二步，具体阐述书中的故事；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d想要做某事
②be filled with充满
③run away逃跑
[高分句型]
①The bk is s interesting that it is well wrth reading. (s…that…结构)
3.（2023年无锡市金桥双语实验学校中考一模英语试题）
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
65. 学校英语社团征集作文，标题如下，根据自己真实所感，完成投稿作文
The mst tuching thing I experienced
1. Describe the tuching thing yu experienced.
2. What have yu learned frm it?
3. What will yu d in the future?
要求：1. 内容必须包括所有要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 语言表达准确，语篇连贯；
3. 词数：100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The mst tuching thing I experienced
It happened t me nt lng ag.
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Time passes by, but I will remember her/him/it fr ever.
【答案】
The mst tuching thing I experienced
It happened t me nt lng ag. I wrked hard t prepare an English speech. Hwever, things didn’t g n as smthly as I expected. I fell ill a week befre the speech. I cughed s badly that I culd hardly speak. I felt wrried and helpless. It was my dearest English teacher that helped me get ut f truble. She tld me t calm dwn and lked after me carefully. T me, my English teacher is like my family wh care me and lve me. I feel that a gd teacher is imprtant fr students. Because f the experience, I am ging t be a teacher like my English teacher when I grw up.
Time passes by, but I will remember her fr ever.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，为材料作文；
②时态：时态“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述一下自己所经历的感人的事情。
第二步，表达自己从中学到了什么以及将来会做什么。
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①g n as smthly as I expected进行得和我预期的一样顺利
②get ut f truble从困境中解脱
③calm dwn平静下来
④Because f the experience因为这次经历
[高分句型]
① T me, my English teacher is like my family wh care me and lve me. (wh引导定语从句)
②I am ging t be a teacher like my English teacher when I grw up. (when引导时间状语从句)
4.（2023年苏州市工业园区中考二模英语试题）
八、书面装达（共1题;满分20分）
62. “是角色，有光芒。”小组合作中，你通常会担任什么角色？请从以下情境中任选一个，谈谈你喜欢承担的角色及理由，并描述你承担该角色的经历，写一篇约100词的英语短文，在学校英语公众号We D, We Shw板块分享。
注意：文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
The rle I like t play
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【答案】
The rle I like t play
I prefer t play the rle f leader in grup discussins. As the name suggests, leaders are peple wh can lead the prcess and directin f the discussin. Smetimes the leader shuld slve the prblems between grup members. As fr me, I think being a leader can help me learn hw t arrange things prperly, which means a lt t me.
Last week, we discussed the tpic f hw the internet affected ur life. The teacher asked us t wrk in grups and make presentatins the next day. As the grup leader, I assigned different tasks t different members. We all cmpleted ur wn tasks in an rganized way and did the presentatin successfully.
What a wnderful experience!
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中所给出的提示“喜欢承担的角色及理由，相关经历”，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己喜欢承担的角色及理由；
第二步，阐述承担该角色时的经历；
第三步，表达个人感受。
[亮点词汇]
① prefer t d sth. 更喜欢做某事
② as fr 至于
③ ask sb. t d sth. 要求某人做某事
④ in an rganized way 有组织地，有条理地
[高分句型]
① As fr me, I think being a leader can help me learn hw t arrange things prperly, which means a lt t me.（动名词作主语，which引导非限制性定语从句）
② What a wnderful experience!（what引导感叹句）
5.（2023年苏州市姑苏区中考一模英语试题）
第七部分 书面表达（共1题;满分25分）
57. 在我们成长的过程中，总离不开一些人、一些事，比如父母、老师、学习、爱好等。他们像雨露一样滋润着我们，帮助我们成长，丰富我们的生命。请你以________Help(s) Me Grw为题写一篇文章，谈谈自己成长中的变化，以及这个变化对你的意义。
内容包括：1.你过去的状态；
2.你发生的变化；
3.变化对你的意义。
注意：1.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.需先把标题补充完整，文章内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
________ Help(s) Me Grw
As we prgress thrugh life, a variety f things r peple cntribute t ur persnal grwth and develpment.
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【答案】
Writing Help(s)Me Grw
As we prgress thrugh life, a variety f things r peple cntribute t ur persnal grwth and develpment.
I used t be a shy persn wh never felt cmfrtable speaking in frnt f a crwd and I ften felt like my vice didn’t matter. Grwing up, I was ften verlked and felt like I was nbdy.
But all f this changed when I discvered my true lve fr writing. It helped me find my vice. I started t express my thughts and feelings thrugh my writing freely, which helped me grw mre cnfident. Thrugh writing, I was able t learn mre abut wh I was and what I wanted in life.
My grwth and cnfidence have changed my life fr the better. I have been able t realize my dreams with curage and faith. Writing has pened up many new drs fr me and has made me int the persn I am tday.
【解析】
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和”现在完成时“ ；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注心不要遗漏“信息提示”中帮助我们成长的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点 。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图借用“随着我们在生活中的进步，各种各样的事情或人对我们的个人成长和发展做出了贡献”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“你过去的状态、你发生的变化、变化对你的意义等”几个方面重点介绍写作帮助我成长具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“写作为我打开了许多新的大门，使我成为今天的我”的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
a variety f 各种各样的
cntribute t 贡献
be able t 能够
[高分句型]
①I started t express my thughts and feelings thrugh my writing freely, which helped me grw mre cnfident.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②I have been able t realize my dreams with curage and faith.（现在完成时，表达对现在影响）
6.（2023年徐州市沛县第五中学中考一模英语试题）
七、书面表达（满分20分）
71. 中华文化源远流长，博大精深。外国友人David写信给自己的中国笔友Daming表达对中华文化的感受。Daming 也给David回信，就中华文化的一些其他方面进行了介绍。请你写一篇90词的英语短文，叙述这件事，并谈谈自己的感想。
注意:
1.短文需包括所给提示内容，但不要逐字翻译。
2.短文已给出的部分不计入总词数。
3.短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：旗袍：chengsam；唐装：Tang cstume
Traditinal culture has a lng histry. It has many frms.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Traditinal culture has a lng histry. It has many frms.
David wrte t Daming t express hw surprised he was. Then Daming wrte back t intrduce Chinese culture frm many sides. Chinese dress is famus fr the Tang cstume and chengsam. They are nt nly beautiful but als stand fr Chinese histry and fashin culture. Chinese peple like eating dumplings because dumplings express peple’s hpe fr a better life. Chinese peple celebrate traditinal festivals like the Spring Festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival and they ften get tgether with their family members n these days. Tian’anmen Square and the Great Wall are famus places f interest.
In my pinin, ur cultural sft pwer has greatly influenced the whle wrld. At the same time, I think we shuld learn English well t tell China’s stries better t the wrld.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇夹叙夹议文章；
②时态：本文时态有一般过去时，一般现在时；
③提示：要叙述二人信件往来经过，人称为第三人称，时态为一般过去时。谈自己感想时人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，叙述二人信件往来经过；
第二步，叙述中国文化；
第三步，写出自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①is famus fr 因……而出名
②nt nly als不仅……而且
③At the same time同时
[高分句型]
①At the same time, I think we shuld learn English well t tell China’s stries better t the wrld.（不定式结构表目的）
②Chinese peple like eating dumplings because dumplings express peple’s hpe fr a better life.（原因状语从句）
7.（2023年盐城市滨海县中考一模英语试题）
八、书面表达（计20分）
76. 时光荏苒，三年的初中生活即将结束。你校英语俱乐部邀请九年级学生为即将升入初中的七年级新生提供一些学习和生活上的建议，请你根据以下提示，结合自己的初中生活，写一篇文章投稿。
注意：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2. 词数 100 词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Welcme t ur schl!
In junir high schl, life will be different frm that in primary schl. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe yu will have a wnderful schl life here.
【答案】
Welcme t ur schl!
In junir high schl, life will be different frm that in primary schl. T get used t the middle schl life, I have sme suggestins fr yu.
On the ne hand, yu’ll have mre subjects t learn. S it’s imprtant t have gd study habits. Yu need t listen t the teachers carefully and finish hmewrk n time. In yur free time, reading is a gd chice, which can pen up a new wrld t yu. Remember that exercise is als necessary fr yur study.
On the ther hand, jining sme clubs can make yur schl life mre clrful. Fr example, in the “Buddy Club”, lder students help new students learn mre abut the schl. If yu want t make new friends r get sme help, yu can jin it.
I hpe yu will have a wnderful schl life here.
【解析】
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，给出建议；
第二步，具体阐述能做些什么来提高学习；
第三步，说明怎样才能使学校生活丰富多彩。
[亮点词汇]
①n the ne the ther hand一方面……另一方面
②n time准时
③help sb d sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①In yur free time, reading is a gd chice, which can pen up a new wrld t yu.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②If yu want t make new friends r get sme help, yu can jin it.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8.（2022年江苏省南通市中考英语试题）
八、书面表达（本题满分20分）
81. 华夏大地，人杰地灵；中华文明，源远流长。假如你是李华，你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国，请根据下图提示，选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。
注意：1.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Learning that yu are interested in China, I feel hnred t intrduce my cuntry t yu.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Learning that yu are interested in China, I feel hnred t intrduce my cuntry t yu.
First, there are many great men in ur cuntry, such as Yuan Lngping. Yuan Lngping is knwn as the “father f hybrid rice”. He made a great cntributin t the wrld fd supply. Secnd, there are many famus places f interest in China, such as the Great Wall. It is knwn as ne f the seven Wnders f the Wrld. Third, China als has many traditinal festivals, such as Spring Festival, Dragn Bat Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and s n. Chinese peple attach the mst imprtance t the Spring Festival.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给图示提示，选择至少两个要点，向Andy介绍中国的人物、名胜、节日等。本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。本文介绍时可以根据所给的人物、景点、节日描述，也可以自拟要点介绍。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
1. What will yu d?
2. Hw will yu d it?
3. Why d yu chse t d it?
…
一些学生
认为不用去学校
理由：1. 既节省路上的时间又省了交通费用；
2. 有更多空余时间，可以在薄弱学科多下功夫
另一些学生
认为有必要去学校
理由：1.面对面交流学习效果更佳；
2.和同学相处，乐趣很多
我
……
理由：……（自拟至少 2 点）
A survey n mbile phnes
Shuld we bring mbile phnes t schl?
Chice
YES £
NO £
Reasns
1cntact with parents
2.…
1.use in a wrng way
Advice
Thugh mbile phnes can be used in schl, I think …
Thugh mbile phnes can’t be used in schl, I hpe ..
Chice
Day student（走读学生）
Barding student（寄宿学生）
Advantages
have mre time with family
...
save mre time t study
·…
Disadvantages
be influenced by the Internet
...
have less private space
·…
1. Wh/What d yu always like being with?
2. Why d yu like being with him/her/it?
(Give tw r three reasns)
…
Kites
Histry
Mzi, in the Warring States perid
Characteristics
materials fr making kites:…
shapes f kites:…
Cultural imprtance
kites:
● a traditinal Chinese handicraft
● …
kite flying:
● a ppular utdr activity…
● the Wrld Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandng Prvince…
Yur ideas
…
What can yu d t imprve yur study?
Hw can yu make yur schl life clurful?
…