新高考英语三轮冲刺易错点26 应用文写作（4大陷阱）（含解析）

这是一份新高考英语三轮冲刺易错点26 应用文写作（4大陷阱）（含解析），共25页。

目 录
01 易错陷阱（4大陷阱）
02 举一反三
【易错点提醒一】审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点
【易错点提醒二】语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【易错点提醒三】句子错误，汉式英语易混易错点
【易错点提醒四】卷面易混易错点
03 易错题通关
易错陷阱1：审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点。
【分析】
应用文中主要以以考查各类书信或电子邮件为主，如建议信、申请信、感谢信等。但近年高考也越来约多的涉及开放式或半开放式作文的考查。即命题人只给出一个话题，而不限制写作内容。有的考生盲目套用所谓写作模板，文不对题，造成扣分降档。因此，考生要想获得高分，需要认真审题，明确写作体裁，避免格式错误，如将图表类作文写成建议信等。
根据写作内容，明确文章结构，做到条理清晰，布局合理。而很多考生没有考虑到结构这一点，只是想到哪，就写到哪，造成文章显得无层次感。或者盲目分段，达到五六段，显得结构混乱，影响得分。一般应用文大都采用“三段式”写作模式，从整体布局先胜一筹。另外，文章开头应当开门见山，直接点题，结尾与开头首尾呼应，使文章整体更加和谐统一。
易错陷阱2：语言平淡或复杂易混易错点。
【分析】
良好的开端就成功了一半。好的开头和结尾是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。考生使用词汇过于笼统、信息指向不明确，句子平淡无奇，全是简单句的堆砌，没有高级句式或经常的词汇和短语，毫无亮点。而有的考生为了追求所谓的长句、高级句式，一篇文章充斥的都是复杂的长难句式，阅读体验较差，也会影响得分。因此，应当运用精彩的开头和结尾，多变的句式和词汇，有了风头、猪肚和豹尾，自然会提升文章的整体档次。
易错陷阱3：句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点。
【分析】
考生因基础词汇和句型掌握不牢，导致无法正确运用正确的语言，把所找出的要点表达清楚。为突出主题，减少错误，除了在平时学习中大量积累词汇、短语和句型外，在造句时还应当使用与话题相关的词语和句型。最后检查单词拼写、语法以及衔接等方面是否存在错误。
易错陷阱4：卷面易混易错点。
【分析】
整洁优美的卷面会成为加分的一个因素。有点考生不注意规范书写，字母大小随意，字迹潦草不清，乱涂乱画，书写马虎等都会给阅卷者留下“脏、乱、差”等印象。

【易错点提醒一】 体裁格式、结构易混易错点
【例1】 （2023·湖南长沙一中阶段练习）假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校图书馆就即将到来的读书节正在展开对 “Favurite Bk Genres fr This Year’s Reading Festival”的调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.调查结果； 2.喜爱理由； 3.相关建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Reprt n Favurite Bk Genres fr This Year’s Reading Festival
Accrding t the survey cnducted by ur library, the fllwing is an analysis f students’ favurite bk genres fr this year’s Reading Festival.
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易错分析：审题不清易错，要求中出现给出建议变单纯按照建议信的模式写容易错。
【答案】
Reprt n Favurite Bk Genres fr This Year’s Reading Festival
Accrding t the survey cnducted by ur library, the fllwing is an analysis f students’ favurite bk genres fr this year’s Reading Festival.
The survey reveals that students have diverse preferences, with apprximately 55% f students favring bigraphies, nearly 58% preferring plitical cmmentaries, and arund 60% fnd f classic literature. It is reprted that bigraphies inspire readers with valuable persnalities f remarkable peple. Plitical cmmentaries prvide critical analysis and multiple perspectives n plitical issues, encuraging students t think critically. The enduring appeal f classic literature transprt readers t diverse settings and evke emtins and reflectins.
As classic literature emerges as the tp favrite, we recmmend an exhibitin shwcasing classic literary wrks, encuraging students t explre the rich strytelling and fster a deep lve fr literature. Let’s celebrate the jy f reading this year by immersing urselves in the timeless beauty f classic literature!
【变式1】（2023·安徽安庆·七中模拟预测）
假定你是李华, 在美国迪士尼乐园 (Disneyland) 游玩时丢了钱包，该园的工作人员Henry帮你找到钱包并设法还给了你。请你写封信向他表示感谢。要点如下：
1. 说明写信原因； 2. 简述事情经过； 3. 表达谢意。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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易错分析：单纯写出感谢信的经典句型，忽略要点要求中的“简述事情经过”。
【答案】
Dear Henry,
I’m Li Hua. With the deepest gratitude, I’m writing t express my heartfelt thanks t yu fr yur help.
When I enjyed my trip in Disneyland yesterday, I discvered my wallet was missing. I was ttally at a lss where I culd have left it. It cntained all the mney, my identity card and passprt, withut which I wuld get int great truble. S I felt extremely wrried and upset. I had n chice but t turn t yu. Yu prmised me that yu wuld manage t find it back. Luckily, yu fund it, and sent it t my htel this mrning. I d appreciate yur kindness.
Thanks again fr yur help. Wish yu all the best.
【变式2】（2023·福建龙岩·高三阶段练习）
假如你是李华，上周你校举办了英语音乐节活动，请你为校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的； 2. 展示内容； 3. 活动反响。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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易错分析：思维固化，总是以书信格式开头或结尾易错，内容要点易忽略。
【答案】
Last week, ur schl held an English Music Festival, aiming t imprve ur English-speaking ability and prmte crss-cultural understanding.
The festival included varius activities such as singing cntests, speech cmpetitins, and band perfrmances. There was als a display f traditinal British fd and a chance t try traditinal Chinese dishes. The respnse t the festival has been verwhelmingly psitive. Students were excited t have the pprtunity t use their English-speaking skills in a fun and relaxed envirnment.
Overall, the festival was a great success, with everyne invlved enjying themselves and taking smething valuable away frm the experience.
【变式3】（2023·广西·统考三模）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris在来信中提到他对中国古代建筑很感兴趣，计划明年暑假来中国参观，希望你帮他推荐一个适合去的城市。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐的城市及原因； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
易错分析：审题不严谨，把推荐信写成单纯的邀请信，忽略“推荐”的要点。
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Knwing yur keen interest in ancient Chinese architecture, I shall recmmend t yu Beijing, a city with precius architectural heritage.
First f all, the Great Wall is particularly prminent. When standing n it, yu cannt help thinking hw the ancient Chinese culd finish the cnstructin withut any advanced technlgy. Additinally, at the heart f Beijing stands the Frbidden City, which is the largest wden palace in the wrld and has a histry f ver 600 years. In Beijing, yu can als experience ther varius styles f Chinese buildings.
Hpe my recmmendatin can be helpful. And eager t meet yu this summer in Beijing!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【易错点提醒二】 语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【例2】
【变式1】因此，我们最好使用某种便宜的东西。
【低分】S, we had better use smething inexpensive.
易错分析：单纯字面翻译，语言平淡无奇，没有任何两点。
【升级】Therefre, we had better make full use f smething inexpensive.
【变式2】要不是Jack的耐心和鼓励，我就不会取得这么大的进步。
【低分】Jack was very patient and he ften encuraged me. Otherwise, I wuldn’t have prgressed s much.
易错分析：句子平铺直叙，语言平淡无亮点。
【升级】Had it nt been fr Jack’s patience and encuragement, I wuldn’t have made such great prgress.
【变式3】当你站在上面，你会情不自禁地想到古代中国人民是如何在没有先进的技术情况下完成它们的。
【低分】When yu stand n it, yu will think hw the ancient Chinese culd finish the cnstructin when they didn’t have advanced technlgy.
【升级】When standing n it, yu cannt help thinking hw the ancient Chinese culd finish the cnstructin withut any advanced technlgy.
【易错点提醒三】 句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点
【例3】He want t cme t China fr a visit.他想要来中国参观。
易错分析：基础知识和词汇掌握不牢。主谓一致不熟悉。
【详解】低级语法错误和单词拼写错误是文章扣分的一大因素。这些基础词汇和语法的熟练运用需要积累大量知识。
【变式1】 I am writting t...我给你写信;
易错分析：单词的变化形式掌握不牢，多由于发音不准造成。
【详解】write过去式wrte; 过去分词written; 现在分词writing。
【变式2】 I am lking frward t see yu again
易错分析：固定短语掌握存在知识漏洞。
【详解】下列短语中，t是介词，后面需要跟动词的ing形式。get dwn t开始认真做；stick t坚持；be addicted t沉溺于；be devted t致力于等。
【变式3】He sat there, with his eyes fcusing n the ceiling.他坐在那儿，眼睛盯着天花板。
易错分析：短语的基本用法掌握不牢出现汉语式英语。
【详解】fcus ne’s eyes/attentin “集中注意力于”。fcus与眼睛之间为动宾关系，应改为：He sat there, with his eyes fcused n the ceiling.
（2023·广东·高三广州市第一中学校联考）
假定你是李华，你校交换生Jhn给你发邮件说练习中国书法(calligraphy)太难，他深受挫败，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 鼓励坚持下去并说明原因；
2. 给出如何学好书法的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Jhn,
Yu said yu had truble in practicing Chinese calligraphy, which made yu upset. I hpe yu dn’t give up halfway. If yu stick it ut, I am sure it will bring yu a peaceful mind and a unique cultural experience.
As t hw t imprve, firstly, yu shuld strictly fllw yur teacher’s instructins and make adjustments whenever necessary. Secndly, always bserve the structure f Chinese characters when practicing. Only when yu’ve understd it can yu write it well. Hpe my advice will be f sme help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给交换生Jhn写一封电子邮件，鼓励他坚持练习中国书法，说明原因，并给出如何学好书法的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定：be sure→be bund t
首先：firstly→t begin with
应该：shuld→be suppsed t
帮助：help→assistance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As t hw t imprve, firstly, yu shuld strictly fllw yur teacher’s instructins and make adjustments whenever necessary.
拓展句：As t hw yu can imprve yur calligraphy, firstly, yu shuld strictly fllw yur teacher’s instructins and make adjustments whenever necessary.
[高分句型1] Yu said yu had truble in practicing Chinese calligraphy, which made yu upset.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Only when yu’ve understd it can yu write it well.（运用了when时间状语从句和部分倒装）
（2023·内蒙古赤峰·高三期中）
假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary来信就如何有效地阅读一本书向你征求意见。请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达期望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
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【答案】
Dear Mary,
It’s great t hear frm yu. Knwing that yu are seeking advice n hw t effectively read a bk, I’m mre than delighted t share sme insights with yu.
Undubtedly, pre-reading cmes the first place. Befre diving int a bk, it is suggested that yu take a few mments t skim thrugh intrductins r summaries available. This will give yu a general idea f the bk’s main idea. In additin, yu are suppsed t highlight key pints and jt dwn any questin that arises while reading, thus staying engaged. Finally, after finishing a bk, it is necessary t reflect n what yu’ve learned t reinfrce yur understanding.
I hpe these tips are f help t yu. If yu have any further questins, please dn’t hesitate t reach ut. Happy reading!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mary回一封邮件，就如何有效地阅读一本书给她提建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →glad
此外：in additin→ what’s mre
建议：advice →suggestin
有帮助的：f help →helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Undubtedly, pre-reading cmes the first place.
拓展句：There is n dubt that pre-reading cmes the first place.
【高分句型1】Befre diving int a bk, it is suggested that yu take a few mments t skim thrugh intrductins r summaries available.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
【高分句型2】In additin, yu are suppsed t highlight key pints and jt dwn any questin that arises while reading, thus staying engaged.（运用了that引导的定语从句和状语从句中的省略以及现在分词短语作状语）
（2023·黑龙江大庆·高三铁人中学校考期中）
第三届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2023年10月在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。假设你是新华中学学生李华，请按以下要求给组委会写一封应聘信。
要求：
（1）热情、有礼
（2）熟悉中国传统文化；
（3）英语口语流利。
生词：“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛 the Belt and Rad Frum fr Internatinal Cperatin
Dear Sir r Madam,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir r Madam
Thank yu fr reading my letter. As the Belt and Rad Frum fr Internatinal Cperatin is cming, I'd like very much t be a vlunteer.
All ur citizens are lking frward t this special event. First f all, I prmise I will, with great passin, try my best t serve ur distinguished guests frm hme and abrad plitely. Besides, I have a rich knwledge f Chinese histry, especially traditinal culture, which enables me t spread ur splendid culture. What's mre, I'm gd at English and Chinese, which will play an imprtant rle in cmmunicatin during the frum.
T sum up, I believe I can be a qualified vlunteer. I will try my best if I'm accepted.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于第三届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2023年10月在中国举办，组委会向社会征集志愿者这一情况，按以下要求给组委会写一封应聘信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情：passin→ enthusiasm
丰富的：rich →abundant
总之：T sum up→ In a wrd
重要的：imprtant→ vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All ur citizens are lking frward t this special event.
拓展句：All ur citizens are lking frward t this special event, which can make us mre cnfident n the wrld stage.
【高分句型1】Besides, I have a rich knwledge f Chinese histry, especially traditinal culture, which enables me t spread ur splendid culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As the Belt and Rad Frum fr Internatinal Cperatin is cming, I'd like very much t be a vlunteer.（运用了As引导的时间状语从句。）
（2023·福建厦门·高三校考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，第4届亚残运会(Asian Para Games)正在火热进行中，你从网上看到组委会正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信，包括下列要点：
1. 介绍你的基本信息；
2. 说明你的优势；
3. 表示你希望被录用。
注意：
1.词数不少于80；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that vlunteers fr 4th Asian Para Games are wanted. I am writing t apply fr this psitin.
I’m a Senir 3 student, and I believe I am qualified fr the psitin. These years, I have been n several exchange prgrams in America, s I am cnfident with my cmmunicatin skills in English. What’s mre, as a super fan f sprts, with my lve and knwledge f sprts as well as Chinese culture and histry, I can fulfill my rle nt nly as a successful crdinatr but als a cultural ambassadr t spread the splendid Chinese culture. In additin, the vluntary service will ffer a precius chance t cntribute t ur sciety, which appeals t me very much.
I wuld be very grateful if yu culd ffer me the pprtunity. Thank yu fr yur cnsideratin.
Faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，第4届亚残运会(Asian Para Games)正在火热进行中，你从网上看到组委会正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
招募：want→recruit
感谢地：grateful→thankful
此外：in additin→besides
宝贵的：precius→valuable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：These years, I have been n several exchange prgrams in America, s I am cnfident with my cmmunicatin skills in English.
拓展句：Having been n several exchange prgrams in America there years, I am cnfident with my cmmunicatin skills in English.
[高分句型1] I have learned that English vlunteers fr 4th Asian Para Games are wanted. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I wuld be very grateful if yu culd ffer me the pprtunity. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
（2023·湖南岳阳·高三校联考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，你班将为美国交换生Barry举行欢迎派对。请你给他写封邮件，内容如下：
1. 举行派对原因；
2. 具体事宜安排。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Barry,
Hw is everything ging?
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Barry,
Hw is everything ging?
On behalf f ur class, I wuld like t extend a warm welcme t yu as ur new classmate! T help yu get t knw the classmates better and t make yu feel at hme in ur schl, we are planning a welcme party fr yu. The party will be held in the schl auditrium at 6:00 p. m. n Friday. We have arranged a variety f activities, including playing games, singing sngs, and sharing fd.
If yu have any questins, please dn’t hesitate t cntact me. Lking frward t meeting yu sn!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国交换生Barry写封邮件，告知他即将为他举行的欢迎派对。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：n behalf f→ in name f
安排：arrange→ schedule
各种各样的：a variety f → varius
联系：cntact→ get in tuch with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We have arranged a variety f activities, including playing games, singing sngs, and sharing fd.
拓展句：We have arranged a variety f activities, which include playing games, singing sngs, and sharing fd.
【高分句型1】T help yu get t knw the classmates better and t make yu feel at hme in ur schl, we are planning a welcme party fr yu.（运用了不定式作目的状语）
【高分句型2】 If yu have any questins, please dn’t hesitate t cntact me.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·全国·高三阶段练习）
近期因疫情，同学们不得不居家上网课，据校学生会发布的相关调查显示，一部分青少年在上网课期间缺乏计划与自律，感到焦虑，甚至会沉迷互联网游戏，熬夜刷短视频，闲聊等，疏忽了学业，并受到父母责骂。请就此现象写一篇英语短文，投稿校报英语专栏。
内容主要包括: 1. 简述调查反馈；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议忠告。
注意: 1. 词数 100-120 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；参考词汇：epidemic 流行病, 疫情
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【答案】
Recently, due t the epidemic, students have t take nline classes at hme.
Accrding t a survey released by the schl student unin, sme teenagers lack planning and self-discipline during nline classes, feel anxius, and even becme addicted t nline games, stay up late t watch shrt vides, chat, and s n. They are neglecting their studies, sclded by their parents.
As teenagers, it is truly regrettable t disappint the great yuth. Addictin t the internet is harmful t physical and mental health.
I think we shuld limit ur internet time. The internet is nly used t slve learning prblems. Cnditins permitting, engage in mre physical exercise. Cmmunicate mre with parents at hme t enhance family relatinships.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。近期因疫情，同学们不得不居家上网课，据校学生会发布的相关调查显示，一部分青少年在上网课期间缺乏计划与自律，感到焦虑，甚至会沉迷互联网游戏，熬夜刷短视频，闲聊等，疏忽了学业，并受到父母责骂。请就此现象写一篇英语短文，投稿校报英语专栏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真正地：truly→authentically
解决：slve→settle
参加：engage in→take part in
改善：enhance→imprve
2.句式拓展
同意句替换
原句：Cnditins permitting, engage in mre physical exercise.
拓展句：If cnditins permit, engage in mre physical exercise.
【高分句型1】As teenagers, it is truly regrettable t disappint the great yuth. (运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语)
【高分句型2】Cnditins permitting, engage in mre physical exercise. (运用了独立主格结构作状语)
（2023·全国·高三校联考期中）
假定你校英语俱乐部将举行一场题为“The Internet, Gd r Bad fr English Learning?”的英语辩论赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛。
内容包括：1. 你的观点；
2. 你的理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 The Internet, Gd r Bad fr English Learning?
There are different pinins amng peple as t learning English n the internet. As far as I am cncerned, I am in favr f it. The reasns are as fllws.
Its advantages are apparent. First and fremst, it’s cnvenient t learn n the internet because we can learn at any time anywhere. Mrever, the internet allws us t learn whatever we like utside the classrm. Finally, we can als absrb all kinds f resurces, which is f great benefit t ur study.
All in all, there is n denying that learning English n the internet has many advantages. Let’s make full use f the internet t learn English.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英语俱乐部将举行一场题为“The Internet, Gd r Bad fr English Learning?”的英语辩论赛，要求考生写一篇发言稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点：pinin → view
在我看来：as far as I am cncerned→in my pinin
明显的：apparent→ bvius
此外：mrever→ besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are different pinins amng peple as t learning English n the internet.
拓展句：There are different pinins amng peple when it cmes t learning English n the internet.
【高分句型1】Mrever, the internet allws us t learn whatever we like utside the classrm.（运用了whatever引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Finally, we can als absrb all kinds f resurces, which is f great benefit t ur study.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
（2023·浙江温州·统考一模）
假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：
1.尝试方法：
2.请求指导。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Marcus,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Marcus,
I hpe this email finds yu well. I am writing t seek yur guidance n a prblem I have been facing while reading freign magazines. Despite trying varius methds, I am unable t cmprehend the articles as effectively as I wuld like t.
I have tried using nline translatin tls and lking up unfamiliar wrds in the dictinary, but these methds have nt yielded the desired results. I believe that with yur expertise and guidance, I can imprve my reading skills and better understand the cntent f these magazines.
Wuld it be pssible fr us t schedule a meeting r a call t discuss this further? I wuld greatly appreciate any advice r tips yu may have.
Thank yu fr yur time and cnsideratin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：1.尝试方法：2.请求指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
方法：methd→means
提高：imprve→enhance
感谢：appreciate→thank
建议：tip→suggestin
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Despite trying varius methds, I am unable t cmprehend the articles as effectively as I wuld like t.
拓展句：Althugh I have tried varius methds, I am unable t cmprehend the articles as effectively as I wuld like t.
[高分句型1] I wuld greatly appreciate any advice r tips yu may have.(运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that with yur expertise and guidance, I can imprve my reading skills and better understand the cntent f these magazines. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
（2023·河南信阳·统考一模）
《中国日报》正在开展以“Shuld We Read Chinese Classics?”为题的讨论，你受托对你校中学生读书类型进行了一次调查。请根据以下调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.名著阅读现状；
2.你的观点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Shuld We Read Chinese Classics
Recently, I cnducted a survey n what bks the students in ur schl like t read. The details are as fllws.
35 percent f the students prefer t read cartns while 30 percent f the students like t read newspapers and magazines. Sme students spend much time in reading nline nvels. Surprisingly, nly ten percent f them are enthusiastic abut Chinese classics.
In fact, reading classics is rewarding. It is beneficial t character develpment and persnal grwth. Additinally, as the cmbinatin f great writing and wisdm, classics shuldn’t be left t gather dust n shelves. Frm my perspective, we shuld read mre classics and spread ur traditinal culture t the wrld.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。《中国日报》正在开展以“Shuld We Read Chinese Classics?”为题的讨论，要求考生根据受委托对考生所在中学的中学生的读书类型进行调查的结果，写一篇短文给《中国日报》投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
进行：cnduct →carry ut
喜欢：be enthusiastic abut →be fnd f
实际上：in fact →actually
此外：additinally →besides
2.句式拓展
用定语从句合并句子
原句：Recently, I cnducted a survey n what bks the students in ur schl like t read. The details are as fllws.
拓展句：Recently, I cnducted a survey n what bks the students in ur schl like t read, whse details are as fllws.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I cnducted a survey n what bks the students in ur schl like t read.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】35 percent f the students prefer t read cartns while 30 percent f the students like t read newspapers and magazines.（运用了while连接两个并列句）
（2023·辽宁大连·大连八中校考三模）
学校英文报正在开展以“Hw t Spend Our Natinal Hliday”为题的讨论。请根据表格中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 调查结果描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Hw t Spend Our Natinal Hliday
The Natinal Hliday is a special time fr us students t have ur wn life. As the frm shws, students chse different ways t spend ur Natinal Hliday.
Surprisingly, students wh spend their hliday in learning accunt fr 60%. 15% f students think the hliday is an ccasin fr them t relax themselves, enjying mvies r playing cmputer games. T ur delight, the percent f the students taking part in scial practice r vluntary activities is 25%. The figures in the frm shw students attach great imprtance t study. Meanwhile mre and mre students have interest in exercising their ability and serving thers.
Frm my perspective, ur Natinal Hliday shuld be a meaningful time fr us students t enjy urselves r learn smething beynd the classrms. Taking part in sme scial activities is a gd chice fr us students t imprve urselves.
【导语】本文是图表作文。要求考生结合表格中的内容写一篇英文短文，包括“如何度过国庆节”的调查结果，并给予相关评论以及建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在我看来：frm my perspective →in my pinin
参加：take part in→participate in
有意义的：meaningful →fulfilling
提升：imprve→prmte
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：T ur delight, the percent f the students taking part in scial practice r vluntary activities is 25%.
拓展句：T ur delight, the percent f the students wh take part in scial practice r vluntary activities is 25%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the frm shws, students chse different ways t spend ur Natinal Hliday.（由as引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The figures in the frm shw students wh spend their hliday in learning accunt fr 60%.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句和wh引导的限定性定语从句）
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