08 Unit 6 书面表达15篇-2023-2024学年九年级英语全一册期末高效专题复习训练（人教新目标）

这是一份08 Unit 6 书面表达15篇-2023-2024学年九年级英语全一册期末高效专题复习训练（人教新目标），共26页。试卷主要包含了发明改变世界，科技创造未来，发明改变世界，并分享自己对环保的想法等内容，欢迎下载使用。

要点：列举以上至少两项发明给你带来的益处。
要求：
1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2.词数100左右。
The New Fur Inventins
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【答案】例文：
The New Fur Inventins
Nwadays, with the develpment and ppularity f the Internet, nline shpping has becme mre and mre cmmn in China.
Shpping nline has many advantages. Just by a click f the muse, yu can buy what yu are interested in withut ging utdrs. Yu can buy anything at anytime. When shpping nline, yu can buy things yu dn’t have lcally. Besides, shared bikes are becming mre and mre ppular. Cmpared with ther kinds f transprtatin, it is very cnvenient and cheap t use shared bikes. After yu finish using it, yu can leave it anywhere within a parking area. Mst imprtantly, using shared bikes is gd fr the envirnment.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据写作要求，适当发挥谈谈它们带来的益处，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题“网购越来越常见”；
第二步，写网购和共享单车带来的益处；
第三步，书写结语，强调它们的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①with the develpment… 随着……的发展
②mre and mre 越来越……
③Cmpared with… 对比……
④is gd fr 对……有好处
[高分句型]
①After yu finish using it, yu can leave it anywhere within a parking area.（after引导的时间状语从句）
2．（2022秋·山东青岛·九年级统考期末）发明改变世界，科技创造未来。电脑和汽车给我们生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventins”为题写一篇英语短文，先介绍电脑和汽车的用途，再发挥想象，谈谈你想发明的东西，并说明其用途或发明的理由。
要求：
1.词数：80—100；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
Inventins
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【答案】例文
Inventins
Inventins have changed ur wrld. We can’t live withut them. Let’s talk abut ur favrite inventins nw.
My favrite inventins are cmputers and cars. Cmputers can prvide us with plenty f infrmatin s that we can knw mre abut the wrld. We can shp nline, watch vides
and chat with ur friends n cmputers. We can relax urselves thrugh a cmputer. Cars are quite useful, t. They can bring us cnvenience. Withut cars, it will take mre time t
take a trip. We can g t ther places by car anytime.
What’s mre, I hpe t invent a sweater which can change its size. If I grw up, I can still wear it. I dn’t need t buy a new ne. This sweater can help me save mre mney.
I hpe that peple in the future can wear this kind f sweaters ne day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干的要求完成这篇作文，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图，向大家介绍你最喜欢的两种发明——电脑和汽车；
第二步：介绍电脑和汽车的用途；
第三步：介绍你想发明的东西：能改变大小的毛衣；
第四部：点题，希望在未来人们能穿上这种毛衣。
[亮点词汇]
①prvide sb. with sth. 为某人提供某物
②plenty f 大量，充足
[高分句型]
①Cmputers can prvide us with plenty f infrmatin s that we can knw mre abut the wrld. (s that引导目的状语从句)
②I hpe t invent a sweater which can change its size. (which引导的定语从句 )
3．（2022秋·福建莆田·九年级统考期末）上周六你和父母一起参观了科技馆，你们对“未来机器人与人类生活”主题展厅的一款居家机器人很感兴趣，你打算在本周的英语口语交流课上向你班上的同学介绍它。请你根据下面的图示信息及要求用英语写一篇短文为交流课做准备。
要求：
1）短文须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Last Saturday, I went t the science and technlgy museum with my parents.
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【答案】例文：
Last Saturday, I went t the science and technlgy museum with my parents. There were all kinds f rbts. My parents and I were very interested in a husehld rbt. It is very tall, with very sensitive hands but n legs. It is mainly made f steel and plastic. It can help us d sme cleaning, clean dishes, ck and s n. In additin, it can even help take care f the children when their parents are busy. I really like it because it is a great learning assistant. When yu meet new wrds r unfamiliar vcabulary, yu can ask it fr help. If yu want t learn smething abut histry r gegraphy, yu just need t ask it directly. Husehld rbts make ur lives mre cnvenient. I think ur life will be better with the help f husehld rbts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时、一般现在时及一般将来时；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我和父母感兴趣的是哪种机器人以及它的具体信息；
第二步，介绍居家机器人都能为我们做些什么；
第三步，表述自己对居家机器人的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds f 各种各样的
②in additin 此外
③with the help f 在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
①I really like it because it is a great learning assistant.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When yu meet new wrds r unfamiliar vcabulary, yu can ask it fr help.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③If yu want t learn smething abut histry, yu just need t ask it directly.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．（2022秋·安徽宿州·九年级统考期中）发明改变世界。请你根据表格，以“The Mst Useful Inventin”为题，写一篇短文介绍手机的发明时间、人物，手机的至少三个用途，并至少谈两点作为青少年的你们如何合理地使用手机，使它真正成为最有用的发明之一。
要求：短文须包含以上内容，可以适当发挥，语意连贯，词数80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
The Mst Useful Inventin
Mbile phnes are ne f the mst useful inventins.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Mst Useful Inventin
Mbile phnes are ne f the mst useful inventins. It was invented by an American called Martin Cper in 1973.
I shuld say that the mbile phnes have really changed ur lives. First, it’s mre cnvenient t cmmunicate with thers by using the mbile phnes. Secnd, peple are used t taking phts with mbile phnes instead f cameras. And we can even g shpping, listen t music and watch mvies n the phne. Third, we can easily learn smething useful by surfing nline. In this way, it helps us study.
In my pinin, we teenagers shuld be allwed t use mbile phnes, but nt n weekdays. And it’s necessary t use them in the right way with the help f ur teachers and parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍手机发明时间及发明者；
第二步，介绍手机的用途；
第三步，谈论如何合理地利用手机。
[亮点词汇]
①be invented by sb由某人发明
②cmmunicate with sb与某人交流
③be used t ding sth习惯做某事
④instead f而不是
⑤be allwed t d sth被允许做某事
⑥with the help f…在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
And it’s necessary t use them in the right way with the help f ur teachers and parents.（It的固定句型）
5．（2022秋·广西贵港·九年级统考期中）你校的英语学习校刊就The Mst Useful Inventin in My Life这一话题正在征文。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，发到你校的英语学习校刊编辑部。
写作要点：
1. 一个发明名称；
2. 此发明的好处（至少三点）；
3. 你对此发明的感想。
写作要求：
1. 将首句补充完整；
2. 包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使结构完整、行文流畅；
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4. 文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5. 词数80左右。
The Mst Useful Inventin in My Life
I think the mst useful inventin in my life is_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Mst Useful Inventin in My Life
I think the mst useful inventin in my life is the Internet. With the Internet, I can d many things. Fr example, I can d sme shpping withut leaving my hme. I bught a pair f shes and sme bks nline last week. I can enjy music n the Internet and learn sme ppular sngs. When I finish my hmewrk, I can play games n the Internet. I can keep in tuch with my pen pal in Japan by using e-mail. It’s faster than writing letters, and it’s cheaper than making a phne call. The Internet makes my life mre clrful and easier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点出一个有用的发明；
第二步，介绍这一发明的三点或更多好处；
第三步，表达自己对这一发明的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①Fr example例如
②d sme shpping购物
③keep in tuch with和……保持联系
④make a phne call打电话
[高分句型]
①When I finish my hmewrk, I can play games n the Internet.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It’s faster than writing letters, and it’s cheaper than making a phne call.（比较级的应用）
6．（2022秋·山东聊城·九年级统考期中）假如你是Steve，请你根据下面的信息介绍一下孔子、莎士比亚、马克吐温三位作家，据可适当发挥，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
Cnfucius 中国；思想家、教育家；睿智；思想影响。
Shakespeare 英国；剧作有意义。
Mark Twain 美国；十九世纪；不如前两者出名。
注意：1.词数：80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实的学校及学生名字。
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【答案】例文
The reasn why writers are famus is that their bks are still being read and their bks deeply affect peple.
Cnfucius is a thinker and educatr in ancient China. He is a man f great wisdm. His thughts have far-reaching influence. Shakespeare is a famus British dramatist. His creatin has influenced many dramatists and made great cntributins t later literature. Mark Twain was a famus American writer in the 19th century. Althugh he was nt as famus as the first tw, he als cntributed t the develpment f wrld literature.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示信息介绍三位作家，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对三位作家的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍孔子、莎士比亚、马克吐温的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①a man f great wisdm一个才智超群的人
②made great cntributins t为……做出了巨大的贡献
③as famus as和……一样有名
④the develpment f……的发展
[高分句型]
①The reasn why writers are famus is that their bks are still being read and their bks deeply affect peple.（定语从句和表语从句）
②Althugh he was nt as famus as the first tw, he als cntributed t the develpment f wrld literature.（状语从句）
7．（2022秋·河南南阳·九年级统考期末）某机器人制造公司正在研发一款辅助师生教与学的机器人。该公司征集客户需求与设计创意，先通过互联网开展题为“Classrm Rbt”的英语征文活动。请按照以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点：
1）Classrm Rbt将对我们的教与学带来巨大的变化；
2）你期待Classrm Rbt能够做些什么；
3）你对Classrm Rbt期待的心情。
要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数100左右。
Classrm Rbt
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【答案】例文
Classrm Rbt
Classrm rbts will cme t ur classrm. What gd news! It will influence ur teaching and learning greatly.
In my pinin, I hpe the classrm rbts can help us in these ways. First, I hpe the classrm rbts can mark ur hmewrk and cllect ur mistakes quickly s that ur teachers can be mre relaxed. Secnd, the classrm rbts are als expected t cllect ur prblems fr ur teachers, because nt every student is brave enugh t cmmunicate with teachers ften. What’s mre, I hpe classrm rbts can play with us between classes.
Hw I hpe classrm rbts can cme t my classrm as sn as pssible. I’m lking frward t that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍Classrm Rbt，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍Classrm Rbt将对我们的教与学带来巨大的变化；
第二步，你期待Classrm Rbt能够做些什么；
第三步，你对Classrm Rbt期待的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①in my pinin 依我看来
②cmmunicate with 和某人交流
③as sn as 一……就
[高分句型]
①What gd news!(感叹句)
②I hpe the classrm rbts can mark ur hmewrk and cllect ur mistakes quickly s that ur teachers can be mre relaxed.(省略that的宾语从句以及s that引导的目的状语从句)
8．（2023秋·北京西城·九年级统考期末）假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动。其公众号计划做关于“发明改变生活”的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号投稿，推荐一个你认为重要的发明，并说明推荐理由。
提示词语：imprtant, change, easy, necessary, develp
提示问题：
● What is the inventin？
● Why is it great？
Many great inventins have changed ur life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Many great inventins have changed ur life. In my pinin, the mbile phne is the mst imprtant inventin. The mbile phne makes it pssible fr us t cmmunicate cnveniently with thers. We can get cmfrt whenever we are upset r we run int truble. What’s mre, with the rapid develpment f electrnic equipment, the mbile phne is getting smaller but mre pwerful. Nwadays, we can als use a mbile phne t search fr infrmatin r even shp nline. Hw cl it is!
In a wrd, I d think that the mbile phne is the mst imprtant inventin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍一个发明；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要写出这个发明是什么，为什么这个发明好。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍你要写的发明是什么，开头已给出；
第二步，介绍这个发明给我们带来了哪些好处。
第三步，书写结语，点名主题。
[亮点词汇]
① run int truble遇到麻烦
②the rapid develpment快速发展
③search fr infrmatin搜寻资料
[高分句型]
① The mbile phne makes it pssible fr us t cmmunicate cnveniently with thers.（本句中it是形式宾语，动词不定式是真正的宾语。）
②We can get cmfrt whenever we are upset r we run int truble.（whenever在此处引导的是让步状语从句。）
9．（2022秋·河南平顶山·九年级统考期末）现在，我们都知道“科学技术是第一生产力”。身处飞速发展的时代，我们的生活无时无刻不在受着科技的影响。那么，在日常生活中，你认为哪项科技发明或产物对我们的生活影响最大？请以“________ Has/Have Influenced Our Life”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇文章。
写作要点：1. 是什么影响了我们的生活？
2. 它（们）是如何影响我们的生活的？
3. 你对这种影响有何感悟？
写作要求：1. 首先写出完善的文章题目；
2. 文章要语句通顺，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意连贯；
3. 短文写100词左右；
4. 文中不得出现自己学校真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
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【答案】One pssible versin:
The Smartphne Has Influenced Our Lives
Nwadays, we live in a mdern wrld which is influenced by high technlgy. Of all the technlgies, I think the smartphne has influenced ur lives mst.
A year ag, I’m crazy abut the smartphne at hme. The games in it were s fantastic that they made me very excited. Because f playing these games n the smartphne fr a lng time, my eyesight was weaker and weaker, and I did very badly in all my subjects. Later, thanks t my head teacher and my parents, I realized the danger f playing games. Since then, I’ve gt rid f the smartphne slwly. As a result, I had gd scres in mst f my subjects.
Thinking back nw, I shuldn’t spend t much time playing games n the smartphne althugh the smartphne can bring us different feelings. After all, we teens need t develp healthy habits f studying and playing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给的问题提示确定主题，并完成写作，可适当添加细节，注意时态和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先确定主题，补充完整题目，点明主题——智能手机影响了我们的生活；
第二步，结合自身的经历介绍它是如何影响我们的生活的；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be influenced by受……的影响
②be crazy abut着迷于
③get rid f 摆脱
④thanks t由于，幸亏
⑤spend t much time ding sth花太多时间做某事
[高分句型]
①Nwadays, we live in a mdern wrld which is influenced by high technlgy. (which引导的定语从句，被动语态)
②Thinking back nw, I shuldn’t spend t much time playing games n the smartphne althugh the smartphne can bring us different feelings.(althugh引导的让步状语从句)
10．（2023·湖南湘西·统考三模）假如你是李华，上周参观了一个“废物利用◆创新环保”主题作品展。变废为宝，低碳生活从我做起。请你根据下面表格信息，以“Make gd use f the waste”为题写一篇短文，在英语角上介绍该展会中你最喜欢的展品（须选择表格内两项展品中的任意一个）并分享自己对环保的想法。
注意：
①考生须选择表格内两项展品中的任意一个进行介绍，可适当发挥；
②词数80左右；
③文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
参考词汇：wrk(s)作品，glue粘贴，fashinable时尚的，pllute污染
Make gd use f the waste
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【答案】例文
Make gd use f the waste
Hell, everyne! I’d like t tell yu smething abut the shw “Make gd use f the waste”.
A number f creative wrks were n shw, including a cat huse, a mdel car, clthes and s n.
Of all the wrks, I was mst interested in a mdel car. It is made f used wd and plastic bttles. They are glued tgether and painted in different clrs s the mdel car lks fashinable. Plastic bttles are made int a chair f the car. I felt amazed at hw waste culd be put t such gd use. It really helps t save energy. It wn’t pllute the envirnment. Besides, it als imprves students’ creativity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章的写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出介绍“废物利用”主题作品展这一话题；
第二步，根据表格内容，选择两项展品中的任意一项介绍该展会中你最喜欢的展品；
第三步，分享自己对环保的想法并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a number f许多，大量
②be interested in对……最感兴趣
[高分句型]
I felt amazed at hw waste culd be put t such gd use.（含有情态动词的被动语态）
11．（2023·福建福州·福建省福州第十九中学校考三模）你校英语报社正在举行以“科技”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，上周末你和你的同学们去福建科技馆参观了机器人展。请你根据以下表格提供的信息并结合这次的参观经历，写一篇英语征文稿。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，字数80词左右；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
The Rbt Shw
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【答案】例文：
The Rbt Shw
Last weekend, I went t Fujian Science and Technlgy Museum with my classmates. We watched a rbt shw. It was very exciting. We als tk part in many activities. I watched vides abut rbts while my classmates danced with the rbts. We saw many different kinds f rbts. Sme are designed t d sprts and thers are designed t shw sme skills. My favurite rbt was the rbt which culd play the pian. I like it very much because it culd play nice music and I culd play the pian with it. Besides, it lks beautiful. I like the rbt shw very much because I can learn a lt frm the rbts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，介绍展览用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接介绍上周看了一场展览；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了活动和机器人；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受和希望。
[亮点词汇]
①exciting令人激动的
②Besides除此以外
③Science and Technlgy Museum科技博物馆
[高分句型]
①I like the rbt shw very much because I learn a lt frm the rbts.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I hpe I can design my wn rbt and it can help me a lt in my daily life.（宾语从句）
12．（2023·江西南昌·统考一模）学校英文报社以“Teens and Inventins”为主题开展征文大赛。请简单介绍你最常使用的发明物和你选择它的理由，给出至少两条如何合理使用该现代发明的建议。
（1）What inventin d yu mst ften use?
（2）Why d yu chse this inventin?
（3）Hw can we make gd use f it? Give yur advice.
要求:
（1）短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
（3）词数80 -120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Teens and Inventins
Nwadays, there are many useful and cl inventins arund us. Amng these inventins, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Teens and Inventins
Nwadays, there are many useful and cl inventins arund us. Amng these inventins, the intelligent mbile phne is my favrite.
As a student, the intelligent mbile phne helps me a lt. With it, I can find lts f infrmatin I need. I can read bks, knw the latest news and watch mvies. I can play games r listen t music when I am tired. It makes it easier fr me t cmmunicate with my friends. I ften chat with them thrugh e-mails and QQ. We cannt rely t much n ur phnes, and at the same time, we als need t take timely breaks. Thugh a lt f peple find sme bad effects the intelligent mbile phne has n us, I think as lng as we use it prperly, the intelligent mbile phne must be beneficial t us.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材: 本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态: 时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示: 写作内容已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表明自己最常使用的发明物是手机；
第二步，阐述选择手机的理由。从手机的功能、作用等方面具体阐述；
第三步，给出建议，不能太依赖手机，要正确使用手机。
[亮点词汇]
① cmmunicate with 与……交流
② chat 聊天
③ rely n 依赖
④ be beneficial t 对……有益
[高分句型]
① I can play games r listen t music when I am tired.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② Thugh a lt f peple find sme bad effects the intelligent mbile phne has n us, I think as lng as we use it prperly, the intelligent mbile phne must be beneficial t us.（Thugh引导的让步状语从句和I think +宾语从句）
13．（2023·吉林长春·统考一模）某软件公司正在开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app，邀请你一起参与设计。假如你是李华，请根据提示，用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
要求：
1.词数不少于40词（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
Dear sir,
Here is my design fr the new app.
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I hpe my ideas will be valuable.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear sir,
Here is my design fr the new app. It is named Smart English Learning. This app includes English news, English mvies, English sngs, English games and s n. With the help f the Internet, it can make it easy fr students t study tgether. Students can enlarge their English vcabularies by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly imprved. They can als practise their spken English by singing English sngs and watching films. In a wrd, students can have fun learning English by using this app.
I hpe my ideas will be valuable.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这款app的名字；
第二步，介绍这款app的内容以及它的优势；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①With the help f在……的帮助下
②in a wrd总之
[高分句型]
①Here is my design fr the new app.（倒装句）
②With the help f the Internet, it can make it easy fr students t study tgether.（动词不定式作宾语）
14．（2023·广东广州·校考三模）上周，你去了科技博物馆参观，你对“未来人类与机器人生活”主题展厅的一款家庭医生机器人Hme Dctr很感兴趣，你打算在本周英语课上向同学们介绍它。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇英语短文，为介绍做准备。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
（2）词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Last week, I went t the Science and Technlgy Museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind f rbt—Hme Dctr. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Last week, I went t the Science and Technlgy Museum. I was greatly interested in a new kind f rbt—Hme Dctr. Hme Dctr was invented tw mnths ag. And it was invented by three yung men. It is red and lks like a lvely girl, and it is abut 1.2 meters tall. It is made frm recycled materials, like glass and plastic. Hme Dctr can nt nly ffer health advice, but als treat diseases at hme. It will save peple a lt f time, because they needn’t g t the hspital whenever they feel sick r get hurt. What’s mre, it can help take gd care f the ld peple and babies at hme. I think it’s a very useful inventin that will be a gd assistant t peple. If its prices can be a little lwer, each family can enjy its service.
I believe Hme Dctr will be very ppular with peple in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏补充对于家庭医生机器人的看法，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍家庭医生机器人，包括“外形、颜色、高度以及制作材料”。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“自己对家庭医生机器人的看法”以及“家庭医生机器人可以做什么”进行展开描写。
第三步，书写结语，“相信家庭医生机器人在未来会受欢迎”。
[亮点词汇]
① is made frm recycled materials由可再生材料制成
② help take gd care f the ld peple and babies帮助照顾老人和宝宝
③ be a gd assistant t peple做一个人们的好助手
④ be very ppular with peple非常受人们欢迎
[高分句型]
① Hme Dctr can nt nly ffer health advice, but als treat diseases at hme.（nt als...连接两个并列动词短语）
② It will save peple a lt f time, because they needn’t g t the hspital whenever they feel sick r get hurt.（because引导原因状语从句，whenever引导时间状语从句）
15．（2023秋·天津和平·九年级统考期末）北京冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；
2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数：80～100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。
Hell, everyne!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great hnr fr me t speak here.
The rapid develpment f science and technlgy has brught great changes t ur life. Smart phnes, rbts, high—speed trains and electric cars are
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【答案】例文
Hell, everyne !
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great hnr fr me t speak here.
The rapid develpment f science and technlgy has brught great changes t ur life. Smart phnes, rbts, high-speed trains and electric cars are fur great inventins. The smart phne brings bth cnvenience and pleasure t ur life. We can shp nline, watch mvies, and have vide chats thrugh it. As fr the rbt, it can help us with husewrk, help ur children with their hmewrk and s n. It saves us a lt f time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly imprved ur travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and cmfrtable. The electric car has als changed ur life. It can nt nly save energy but als prtect the envirnment t a great extent. It is cnvenient and green.
China is taking the lead in sme ways. I’m really prud f my cunty.
That’s all fr my speech. Thank yu!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：本文要点已给出，注意要点衔接顺畅，并适当增加细节描写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己；
第二步，详细介绍身边的科技及其优点；
第三步，结束语，以这些科技感到骄傲。
[亮点词汇]
and s n等等
nt als不仅……而且
[高分句型]
It can nt nly save energy but als prtect the envirnment t a great extent.（并列连词nt als）
What des it lk like:
Lk: tall, tw hand, n legs
Material: steel and plastic
What can it d:
D sme cleaning
Lk after
…
What d yu think f it:
…
The Mst Useful Inventin
Inventin
Mbile Phne
Inventr
American, Martin Cper
Time
1973
Usage（用途）
1. 与他人交流更方便
2. 代替相机拍照
……
Yur pinins abut hw t use them well
1. 允许青少年们使用手机
2. 以正确的方式使用它们
……
What were n shw
What they are made f/frm
Hw they are made
What yu think
A cat huse
mdel car
…
waste paper/clthes
plastic bttles
used wd and glass
…（考生自拟内容）
save energy
…（考生自拟1个观点）
Time
Last weekend
Place
Fujian Science and Technlgy Museum
Activities
1.Watch vides abut… 2. …
My favrite rbt
The reasns at least tw pints.
My feeling and hpe
…
名称
Smart English Learning
内容
英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等
优势
1.可以借助网络和同学们一起学习；
2.帮助学生增加词汇量；
3.有利于提高英语听说能力。
Hme Dctr
What des it lk like?
●appearance
●clur
●height
What material is it made f?
●recycled material
What d yu think f it?
●…
●…
What can it d?
●ffer health advice
●treat (治疗) diseases
●…